Jahingirs C rank Skill set

Emperor JaJa · 1 Jahingirs C rank Skill set 19/10/14, 07:35 pm

Emperor JaJa

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(410/410)

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Name: Descending Dragon
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type:Sword
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2 posts or sustain+1
Description: Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp that can cause a small shock-wave starting .5 meters away from him, knocking down his opponents in a 5 meter diameter area, following up with a downward sword slash at 15 m/s, dealing D-Tier damage. He can sustain to follow up with another powerful stomp and sword slash, repeating the action.

Name:Eye of the Tiger
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The user deflects an attack with his sword that would deal C-Tier or less damage at 10m/s. Jahingirs C rank Skill set Tumblr_nctgwtPj4z1sksz96o1_500

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Name: Flare
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: He performs a break dancing "flare" (spinning on his hands,back or head) while retaining use of his sword and attacking with a downward spinning sword strike at 15m/s, dealing C-Tier damage.

Name: Flare Dodge
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description:Jahangir is highly trained in using acrobatic maneuvers in battle. In this case Break dancing. He spins on his back hands, bursting up to 5 times in any direction at 10m/s by .5meters or less, allowing him to dodge incoming attacks.

Name: Blink if you dare
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Fist
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Jahan bursts forward 1-5 meters at 15 m/s. Moving his fist forward at the same time as an attack, a collision with the opponent and his fist delivers D-Tier damage.

Last edited by Jahangir Nikator on 19/10/14, 09:39 pm; edited 1 time in total

Vardreth · 2 Re: Jahingirs C rank Skill set 19/10/14, 08:51 pm

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

Alrighty, here we go~

Descending Dragon:

Original:

Name: Descending Dragon
Tier: C
Cost:20
Weapon Type:Sword
Class: Offense
Range: 10m
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: During a descent Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp that can cause a small shock-wave stunning his opponents or deal C rank damage. He can sustain to follow up with a powerful downward sword strike that Deals D rank damage. The initial attack stomp moves at 20 m/s and the downward strike at 15 m/s.

Changed to:

Offensive--v

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Descending Dragon [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1 [b]Description:[/b] Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp at 15m/s that can cause a small shock-wave in a 10 meter diameter area around him, sending rocks outward dealing C-Tier damage to anything they hit. He can sustain to follow up with another stomp that, if it lands directly on the opponent, deals C-Tier damage to their body.

Supplementary--v

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Descending Dragon [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body [b]Class:[/b] Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1 [b]Description:[/b] Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp that can cause a small shock-wave starting .5 meters away from him, making it impossible for his opponents in a 10 meter diameter to move while the ground is rippling. He can sustain to follow up with another shock-wave stomp.

Or Offensive/Supplementary--v

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Descending Dragon [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body [b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1 [b]Description:[/b] Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp at 15 m/s that can cause a small shock-wave starting .5 meters away from him, knocking down his opponents in a 5 meter diameter area and dealing D-Tier damage. He can sustain to follow up with another powerful stomp, repeating the action.

OR, IF you want both the stomp AND the sword attack:

Offensive/Supplementary--v

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Descending Dragon [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b]Sword [b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1 [b]Description:[/b] Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp that can cause a small shock-wave starting .5 meters away from him, knocking down his opponents in a 5 meter diameter area, following up with a downward sword slash at 15 m/s, dealing D-Tier damage. He can sustain to follow up with another powerful stomp and sword slash, repeating the action.

-You can't have 2 or more ways that an attack deals damage. If you're going to be dealing damage through rocks and stuff, then you shouldn't also have a sword attack in it.
-C-Tier strength abilities have a movement speed of 15 m/s
-When you have 2 classes in 1 ability, each effect suffers a 1 Tier decrease to its effectiveness.
-I removed the image from my coding, but feel free to add the image back in your vault (albeit under spoilers, please).

Eye of the Tiger:

-The above technique, since it is defending against an attack, would be considered 'defensive'.
-Unless you are throwing a weapon, the range is 'close'
-We discussed it briefly in the CBox, but your reaction speed is .215, and you cannot train that to be better in the systems. While it's true that you can train your reflexes to a certain extent in real life, that is not the case in the systems here. The Reaction Timing information can be found at this link. All abilities follow the Clashing guidelines for determining whether or not they are able to block against something else.
-D-Tier abilities have a 2 post cooldown. Sustained D-Tier abilities have a 2 post cooldown or sustain+1

Flare:

-Range for strength users is Close unless you are throwing something.
-Before, you had the technique with a speed of a B-Tier technique, but it's listed as a C-Tier. Changed the speed down to C-Tier.
-You had it so that it was an Offensive/Supplementary when you mentioned that he break-dances. You don't have to have an ability for break-dancing to break dance, so its fine to leave that part out of it. If you want to use the burst speed to stand up quickly or hit the ground quickly, then it would take a supplementary part of the ability and there will be a decrease in effectiveness as mentioned earlier.

Flare Dodge:

-Defensive techniques are either techniques that directly block damage or that deflect damage. Only shields can be used to block damage head on, otherwise you must deflect an attack in order for it to be a defensive ability.
-Since a constant burst of speed is Magoi Manipulation, it had to be changed to a total of 5 times (going by the numbers rule in the Ability Guidelines for D-Tier).
-A long duration kind of technique that lasts more than a single moment is 1 post long. A sword strike is Instant, break-dancing is 1 post or sustained.
-All D-Tier abilities have a minimum of 2 posts for cooldowns.

Blink if you dare:

-C-Tier speed is 15 m/s for Strength users.
-Range is Close unless you are throwing something.
-Just moving fast would be considered Magoi Manipulation, so you have to use the scale and speed descriptors to show how far you move.
-Since this is possibly a split ability for a movement and an attack, that means that it will have a decrease in the effects that they provide.
-Martial arts/bare handed ability techniques have a weapon type of 'Body'.

Duquin · 3 Re: Jahingirs C rank Skill set 19/10/14, 09:01 pm

Duquin

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Please make sure you are using the ability guidelines of the new forum. You can find a link in the stickied global announcements at the top of every forum board. But I'll provide you with a link this time.

http://magiworldofmagic.jcink.net/index.php?showtopic=68

Emperor JaJa · 4 Re: Jahingirs C rank Skill set 19/10/14, 09:41 pm

Emperor JaJa

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(150/150)
Stamina:

(410/410)

Alright All edits made

Vardreth · 5 Re: Jahingirs C rank Skill set 19/10/14, 09:52 pm

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

Approved (For training)~

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Vardreth · 6 Re: Jahingirs C rank Skill set 25/10/14, 04:32 pm

Vardreth

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(390/390)
Stamina:

(440/440)

Training Approved

Code:: [center][img]http://i1160.photobucket.com/albums/q483/xCuttieLawliet/xAnimeGifs/tumblr_m7c5ghdZMq1qgr62uo1_500_large.gif[/img][/center] [b]Name:[/b] Descending Dragon [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b]Sword [b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Sustain [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1 [b]Description:[/b] Jahangir focuses his massive strength to create a powerful stomp that can cause a small shock-wave starting .2 meters away from him, knocking down his opponents in a 5 meter diameter area, following up with a downward sword slash at 15 m/s, dealing D-Tier damage. He can sustain to follow up with another powerful stomp and sword slash, repeating the action. [center][img]https://38.media.tumblr.com/b1daecf3767ad003c86935617f9c98e3/tumblr_nctgwtPj4z1sksz96o1_500.gif[/img][/center] [b]Name:[/b] Flare [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword [b]Class:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] 1 post [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b] He performs a break dancing "flare" (spinning on his hands,back or head) while retaining use of his sword and attacking with a downward spinning sword strike at 15m/s, dealing C-Tier damage.

Ariella Negri · 7 Re: Jahingirs C rank Skill set 26/11/14, 02:56 pm

Ariella Negri

Ω-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(600/600)
Stamina:

(100/100)

training approved for the rest

Code:: [b]Name:[/b] Flare Dodge [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Cost:[/b] 10 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Body [b]Class:[/b] Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] 1 post [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b]Jahangir is highly trained in using acrobatic maneuvers in battle. In this case Break dancing. He spins on his back hands, bursting up to 5 times in any direction at 10m/s by .5meters or less, allowing him to dodge incoming attacks. [b]Name:[/b] Blink if you dare [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Cost:[/b] 20 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist [b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] 1 post [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b] Jahan bursts forward 1-5 meters at 15 m/s. Moving his fist forward at the same time as an attack, a collision with the opponent and his fist delivers D-Tier damage. [b]Name:[/b]Eye of the Tiger [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Cost:[/b] 10 [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword [b]Class:[/b] Defensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Duration:[/b] Instant [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts [b]Description:[/b] The user deflects an attack with his sword that would deal C-Tier or less damage at 10m/s.