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Trever Winnett

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Name: Trever Winnett
Tier: D
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Age + Birthdate: age=19 birthdate=11/16
Nationality: Reim[/b]
Race: Fanalis
Specialization: Dexterity

Personality: Trever was always a smart guy. When it came down to thinking of a plan to do something or just regular work he would find the easiest way of getting it done. Sometimes he would find the easiest way of getting it done just because he was lazy and did not want to work on it any longer or just wanted to get it over quickly so he could move on to something else. He may seem lazy to everyone but when he does get a mission or a something to do he puts himself fully into it. He can't really stand unfinished work and will sometimes correct others about something they are doing wrong or will give advice so it gets done correctly. When it comes to his friends he puts them on top priority. If a friend does really need his help he will overcome his lazy personality and go and help them. He can't stand to see anybody lonely so he is always making friends, or at least tries to make friends. He does like to play prank on his friends also, whether it is scaring some one of just messing with them in general, but he will never do something to hurt them. He does not like to see others in pain and will always go to help those he sees in need.

Likes: Trever likes to play chess, or shogi. He likes to do this because it challenges his brain and he can think of new strategies each time he plays. He also likes to relax, most of the time he has to have really high motivation to get into doing something. Lastly he likes to hang out with his friends and have a good time. He doesn't like to be lonely so he always finds friends to be around.

Dislikes: He dislikes being late for places. He feels like if he is late to something he is letting others down, or feels like he will have to stay longer to make up for lost time. He dislikes being lonely as well. He feels like everyone should have a friend that is with them to help out. He also doesn't like if something doesn't challenge him. He wants to be challenge or he feels its not worth his time.


Phobias: He is afraid of being alone, it's not like he will go crazy with just being by himself but that lasting effect of it starts getting to him. Second he is afraid to let those around him down. He feels like he should always be doing his part and if he can't he starts to freak out. Lastly he is afraid of making others around him mad. He wants to see everyone in the best mood so sometimes he has to watch what he will say so others will feel happy.

Aspirations: Trever is driven by his want to meet others and make friends. He likes to make friends where ever he goes. He doesn't really care if its some random guy, as long as he makes friends. Another thing is he wants to get stronger. He wants to be strong enough to defend those around him. He wants to protect those who can not protect themselves basically. Lastly he wants to see the world. He knows that some parts of the world require him to be stronger to get to, so this helps with him trying to be stronger to defend others

Face-Claim: Natsu Dragneel - Fairy Tail
Weight: 150 pounds
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Hazel
Height: 6 ft
Rukh Alignment: White
Special Traits: Not really
Appearance: Trever is a well built guy. He is at a medium tall height, mostly taller than a lot of his friends but not to tall to be called a giant. He can eat a lot of food but somehow never gains weight, this puts him in about a skinny size. He doesn't really work out or anything but somehow manages to gain some muscle and is somehow stronger than those of his own age who also do not work out. He like to wear a black jacket with just a casual set of pants and shirt. He doesn't always have a preference to the color of the shirt or pants, mostly grabbing whatever he sees first out of his clean clothes.


History: Trever was born in Reim. He didn't really have anything special to his family except the fact that he was a twin. Trever has two brothers, his twin brother and an older brother. When he was at the age of six his mom died from some unknown reason to him, as he got older he just didn't really care how she died. Now Trever was the younger twin and I guess what seemed like easy practice to be picked on. His older brother had a lot of fun doing that and Trever never really got help from his twin who basically was "happy it wasn't him." But Trever was still happy. He always tends to find the best in a situation. Its funny from these experiences with his brother that seemed to never really make him cry again. He used to cry at every little thing his brother did to him and would run to his dad for help. Eventually his brother stopped messing with him but it seemed Trever changed from it, for the better.

Now Trever was always one of the smartest in his class. When they would learn something new he would be one of the first to get it down so he kind of became lazy because of that. The work would soon stop challenging him and he would stop doing some of it. The only time he really did it was if he did it in class or if he got in trouble for not doing it and was grounded. When he completed it he would then be ungrounded but kept on a short leash it seemed. But most of the time he didn't care.

Now Trever was never shy with talking to people. He kind of made friends anywhere he went. Now it seems people have different opinions on when you become someones friend. Trever always considered you his friend basically if he knew your name and has actually met you. But as he considered everyone his friend he made higher standards of those he would call his "best" friends. These became people he could trust no matter what and seemed like friends he would never lose.

Now when he was little he was actually bullied at school. It sometimes would be basically nothing and sometimes it got serious. When he got bullied he started to actually bully others just to make himself seem cooler and then not get bullied. He never really liked it but he just didn't like be bullied. As he got older though he stopped really caring what other people thought of him and stopped bullying others even when he was bullied himself.

Now because he was always so smart he started finding himself thinking of weird ideas he could do to get things done. I mean there were times when his idea would get him no where but it was a learning experience for him.

Role-Play Sample: It was yet again another regular day in Era. The sun was shining overhead and it seemed pretty peaceful. Trever heard several rumors that there was snow outside of town. He thought that it seemed pretty weird considering it was still summer and Era didn't seem like a type of place to snow except in winter. It seemed really weird but Trever decided for the moment he would shrug it off. He decided that today seemed like a request day for him. He walked over to a request board he found. Some looked pretty easy and some a lot harder than he could probably take. After a while he settled on one that seemed to be about right for him. Right before he could start reading on the details of the request a man came seemed to run into him. It was pretty funny to see the man fall to the floor and Trever be unharmed from it. His shoes made it where he couldn't slip. Trever helped the man to his feet and the man quickly apologized. The man was heading on his way and Trever noticed a piece of paper in the man hand. Trever quickly thought it was the request he was going to take but noticed that his was still in his hand. With a sigh of relieve he looked back to the request. He read the title of it and something seemed off. He was sure the request of the one he grabbed wasn't named this. After a while of thinking about it he shrugged it off and went back to the details of the request. He was supposed to report to somebody named Zeras Hyperion in the Magic Council headquarters.

Trever started to head that way immediately so he could finish his request. The last request he did didn't fair to well on his nose. He had to go inside a sewer and defeat some rats. The rats where a piece of cake for him. There leader thought he was tough, but Trever soon showed him he wasn't. Trever soon arrived at the Magic Council Headquarters. He walked up to the front and asked to see Zeras Hyperion. The person behind the counter didn't seem that interested in Trever and ignored him at first. Trever waited a couple seconds before repeating what he said earlier. The person behind the desk looked up with an annoyed face and started to go back to his work. Trever told the person that he was hear about the request and the person finally looked up to him with some importance. They pointed him toward the left wing and apologized like a million times. Guess they thought he was here to use the bathroom or something. Trever didn't fully mind about it but something still bothered him with it. He decided to ignore it and continue toward the left wing.

As Trever walked toward the West Wing he thought about what he would have to do for the request. He decided that since he had the paper on him he would look it over as he walked. He looked at it and it didn't have much detail to it. It seemed to just tell him where to go. He never noticed it at first but it really didn't say anything actually. It was just a jumble of words. All it really told him was to meet with Zeras Hyperion at the Magic Council Headquarters. Trever felt really dumb for not seeing this the first time. He decided he would do the request anyway, but he would have to ask about this. He continued walking until he finally seemed to arrive. He asked around for Zeras Hyperion and someone pointed him out. Trever walked over to the man and introduced himself. The man seemed really kind, but something major seemed to be bothering him. Trever was about the ask about the request, but the man cut him off. He seemed to notice that Trever was the mage that was going to do the job. Zeras Hyperion seemed to start explaining what had happened. It seemed he confirmed the rumors Trever had earlier saying about snow in the outside of town. They walked over to a window and Zeras Hyperion pointed out the area he was talking about. It seemed from this high up Trever could clearly see that there was snow outside of Era. Zeras Hyperion then started to explain what the thing was that was making the storm. It seemed to be a giant ice golem. Trever wasn't sure how it was created, but he knew he need to take it down.


Trever seemed to hear all that he needed. He soon left the Magic Council Headquarters and started walking to where the snow was coming from. He instantly remembered he forgot to ask how this request had come into his possession and why it didn't seem complete. He thought about this but shrugged it off after a while. He decided that since he was already on this request there was no need to complain. He continued through Era and it seemed pretty peaceful so far. It seemed that a lot of them didn't know what was happening out side and as far as Trever knew none should. He would take care of this problem quickly so as to not scare everyone. He continued through the streets until he made it to the gate. He quickly crossed it and wasn't all surprised at how many people entered and exited. Once he was out of town he continued to walk towards the direction of the snow. A lot of the hills seemed to cover it up so it didn't seem like a lot of people could see it. That seemed like a good thing.

As Trever finally got over the hill he noticed just how much snow there was around. He also noticed that there was candy every where. If there was a strong creature around here Trever needed to stop him before kids started to figure out this place and went to get candy. Most likely the kids would get hurt, or if it was a golem maybe he would eat them. As Trever continued through this place he noticed how cold it was getting. He wasn't one who enjoyed the cold so this place was starting to stink. As Trever wandered around he could smell creatures moving around. It seemed that some where smell and others were big. Trever decided to just wander around though. He wasn't fully sure how to track ice, so he figured that if it was getting colder the the more he walked in a direction he was going the right way. As Trever walked he started to smell something that didn't seem good. Something big, by the sound of the footsteps, was running towards him. Trever noticed it and it was huge. This thing to either want to eat Trever or tackle him. Trever was on guard and was ready, but something seemed off about this creature. It didn't look hungry, it looked scared. It seemed to be running from something. Soon it ran around Trever and it seemed Trever was too distracted by the creature to notice the other foot prints he was hearing.

Trever watched as a giant creature made of ice can stomping towards him. He needed to act fast so he quickly activated both his speed and his damage buff. He also made sure to summon his scales to his body. This would help him defend against an attack. Trever quickly ran toward the giant and ducked under the lance that he used to stab at Trever. As soon as Trever was under he punched the creature dealing a good amount of damage. Next, while still in its zone he dealt another punch before the creature could turn and try to attack him out. Trever wanted to stay in its blind spot and with something this huge it seemed it had one. Trever was sure that this was going to be an easy fight when suddenly the creature stabbed his lance into the ground and Trever was sent flying away. It dealt enough damage to make his scales melt away. Crap, Trever thought. He would have to be more careful to take this thing down. Trever ran back up to the creature and launched his roar at it. The knight brought up his shield and blocked it easily. Trever either had to attack close or attack on the opposite side of the shield. He ran back towards the creature to land more hits. It seemed the creature was ready this time and wouldn't let Trever get close. He kept him at bay with his lance. Trever knew that it had to be dealt with so he summoned his tendrils. He would move them towards the lance and grab onto it. He knew it wouldn't do much, but it would by him time to get in. Right before he got to the knight, it brought up a gaint wall. Trever quickly delivered four punches to it that destroyed it instantly. By the time this happened his tendrils were gone and the knight was ready again. Trever then summoned shadows to his hands and spun knocking the creature back and off balance. Trever used this to run up to the creature and get back in its blind spot. He delivered four more punches before the creature would turn and slam his shield down, hopefully crushing Trever. Trever was ready for something like this and dodged to the side. He then delivered two more punches that brought the creature down. Trever made sure it was down by punching its body a couple more times, but it seemed down. Trever looked up to the sky and noticed it was clearing. This was a good sign he had defeated the knight.

Trever soon was on his way back to Era. He made sure to keep his speed buff on so to get there quicker. He just wanted to go and rest after this. He soon arrive at the magic council building and ran towards the left wing. He would find Zeras Hyperion and let his buffs down. "Hey, I beat the creature, look over there for proof," he said pointing to where the storm used to by. By the time he got back it seemed the clouds overhead from that part were gone. Zeras Hyperion would look at Trever and thank him, also handing him the reward.



Last edited by dragonkingtw on 15/09/14, 06:42 pm; edited 4 times in total

2Trever Winnett (Done) Empty Re: Trever Winnett (Done) on 15/09/14, 12:24 am

Trever Winnett

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3Trever Winnett (Done) Empty Re: Trever Winnett (Done) on 15/09/14, 12:59 am

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-Missing weight here.

-Your aspirations right now are motivations. They are very, very similar, so it's hard to critique appropriately. An aspiration should be a goal, such as 'Make friends who are comfortable in relying on him for help.' What you have here right now is closer to personality.

-If you are going to be Fanalis and have a black hair Face Claim, you're going to have to put in special traits that your hair is black for some reason (Please type what type of reason. Twist of genetics, magical experiment gone wrong, etc.). All Fanalis have a red-haired face-claim, so this would certainly be 'special'.


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4Trever Winnett (Done) Empty Re: Trever Winnett (Done) on 15/09/14, 01:19 am

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5Trever Winnett (Done) Empty Re: Trever Winnett (Done) on 15/09/14, 07:50 am

Ariella Negri

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you need to change your hair color under the appearance. Also, keep in mind the time period, I don't believe they had denim, so jeans would not work. Maybe change this to "casual pants and shirt"

Aside from that, looks good! Make those minor changes and I will be able to approve you ^_^


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6Trever Winnett (Done) Empty Re: Trever Winnett (Done) on 15/09/14, 06:42 pm

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7Trever Winnett (Done) Empty Re: Trever Winnett (Done) on 15/09/14, 06:47 pm

Ariella Negri

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approved~


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