Lien's Spells ( Starter )

Name:Pào pào yù ( Jade Bubbles )
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/ 5 Every Post
Element: Poison
Class: Offesnsive/Supplementary
Range: Ten Meters
Duration: One post
Cool-Down: two posts
Description:
Commanding the Rukh Lien is able to create bubbles of a green color. Once the bubbles pop they leave a mist behind for one post that keep the properties of the bubble. The can be directed at the opponent until out of Lien's range where they will dissolve. The bubbles travels at speeds of 10m/s and are 1 meter diameter in scale, and she can create a maximum of five bubbles. The bubbles, once contacted with the skin or once popped and inhaled, slowly begins to attach to the red blood cells in the body. Slow they suck the oxygen from them Causing a person to become tired much more quickly, as the oxygen fails to get through to all the needed body parts. This is very minuscule as the poison will not attach to all the RBC and quickly pass over. The bubbles sting the skin upon contact and can cause minor nosebleeds when inhaled through the nose, as it harms the mucus membrane. The Bubbles do a D rank tier of damage.
( While the poison is in the body of the opponent, they cannot sprint because of the needed oxygen that the poison takes away. )

Name: Zǐ shuǐjīng pàomò ( Amethyst Bubbles )
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/
Element: Poison
Class: Offensive
Range: Ten Meters
Duration: One post
Cool-Down: two Posts
Description:
Commanding the Rukh Lien is able to create bubbles of a purple color. Once the bubbles pop they leave a mist behind for one post that keep the properties of the bubble. The can be directed at the opponent until out of Lien's range where they will dissolve. The bubbles travels at speeds of 10m/s and are 1 meter diameter in scale, and she can create a maximum of five bubbles. When these purple bubbles come into contact with a person's skin they cause first degree burns upon them, dealing a D rank tier of damage.

Name: Shénjīng duàn kāi: Yù
( Neuron Disconnect: Jade  )
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Poison
Class: Supplementary
Range: ten meter radius
Duration: One post
Cool-Down: Two Posts
Description:
Above Lien a magic circle forms, commanding the Rukh into a fine mist that leaves only a green tinge within it. Lien creates a Neruotoxin that paralyzes the legs. Since the poison is not strong it only paralyzes on leg, the paralysis Lasts for 2 Posts and renders the person unable to use it. This Is potentially dangerous to allies if they get caught in the mist. The mist is around Lien and is  five meters in diameter and expands from Lien at a rate of 10 m/s. The mist moves away from Lien in a 1 meter diameter circle around where she walks, And continues to move outward at a rate of 10m/s until it is out of her range and dissipates.


Name: Lien Jiě yào ( Lotus Antidote )
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/ !0
Element: Poison
Class: Supplemtary
Range: ten meter radius
Duration: two post ( sustained )
Cool-Down: three Post
Description:
Injecting a small amount of poison made to directly combat poisons, it acts as an antidote for her allies ( and whoever else needs it ). The poison searches for and neutralizes any other poison with Lien's magoi. Once the poison has done it's job it will die, leaving those feeling just a tad queasy that passes within the next post. This spell may be administered before the effects of a poison, and actively fights any poisons that enter or are inside of the body for up to C tier damage. this spell may be sustained to continue its effects in the next post. When this spell is in place it leaves a magic circle with a ten meter radius, administering the poison to a maximum of three people.

Pào pào yù ( Jade Bubbles )
-For scale, 5 meter diameter is the maximum total scale. If you are going to break it up into separate abilities, it would have to be divided amongst them. On a positive note, most people are only 1.3-1.7 meters tall, so the bubbles are pretty darn big even at just 1 meter diameter a piece.
-If it does deal damage, don't forget to put that in the post that it deals D tier damage.
-Don't forget to put in what it does upon sustain. Do you create additional bubbles, or does the poison already in them continue their effects, dealing another D tier damage and preventing them from sprinting?


Zǐ shuǐjīng pàomò ( Amethyst Bubbles )
-If it is a spell that lasts for more than two posts, you have to sustain it and attach a sustain cost to the spell. That is, unless the first degree burns continue to burn, but that's reserved for B tier burns and up.
-Same scale thing as before.
-Same with damage amount as before as well ^_^

Shénjīng duàn kāi: Yù ( Neuron Disconnect: Jade  )
-The mist here should be a 5 meter diameter mist within a 10 meter range from yourself. If you prefer to not allow yourself to be able to use it within 10 meters, however, that is up to you.
-If you can move it, please be sure to put its movement speed in. Please also add in the rate at which it gathers (which could potentially be 10 m/s).


Lien Jiě yào ( Lotus Antidote )
-I think you meant to have this spell not say 'that has Lien's magoi', and instead say 'with Lien's magoi' but I'm not sure.
-It should also say 'and actively fights any poisons that enter or are inside of the body for up to C tier damage'.
-The spell's magoi/rukh should leave from a designated point near you and move towards your target if this is a single target spell. Please put in the movement speed. C tier is maximum of 15 m/s.

I know you have 1 more spell available, but you wanted to refrain from starting with it. So, without further needs for edit:

Approved~!


P.s. Here's the code for it:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b]Pào pào yù ( Jade Bubbles )
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/ 5 Every Post
[b]Element:[/b] Poison
[b]Class:[/b] Offesnsive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Ten Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] One post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] two posts
[b]Description:[/b]
Commanding the Rukh Lien is able to create bubbles of a green color. Once the bubbles pop they leave a mist behind for one post that keep the properties of the bubble. The can be directed at the opponent until out of Lien's range where they will dissolve. The bubbles travels at speeds of 10m/s and are 1 meter diameter in scale, and she can create a maximum of five bubbles. The bubbles, once contacted with the skin or once popped and inhaled, slowly begins to attach to the red blood cells in the body. Slow they suck the oxygen from them Causing a person to become tired much more quickly, as the oxygen fails to get through to all the needed body parts. This is very minuscule as the poison will not attach to all the RBC and quickly pass over. The bubbles sting the skin upon contact and can cause minor nosebleeds when inhaled through the nose, as it harms the mucus membrane. The Bubbles do a D rank tier of damage.
( While the poison is in the body of the opponent, they cannot sprint because of the needed oxygen that the poison takes away. )

[b]Name:[/b] Zǐ shuǐjīng pàomò ( Amethyst Bubbles )
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/
[b]Element:[/b] Poison
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Ten Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] One post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] two Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
Commanding the Rukh Lien is able to create bubbles of a purple color. Once the bubbles pop they leave a mist behind for one post that keep the properties of the bubble. The can be directed at the opponent until out of Lien's range where they will dissolve. The bubbles travels at speeds of 10m/s and are 1 meter diameter in scale, and she can create a maximum of five bubbles. When these purple bubbles come into contact with a person's skin they cause first degree burns upon them, dealing a D rank tier of damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Shénjīng duàn kāi: Yù
( Neuron Disconnect: Jade  )
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Poison
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] ten meter radius
[b]Duration:[/b] One post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] Two Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
Above Lien a magic circle forms, commanding the Rukh into a fine mist that leaves only a green tinge within it. Lien creates a Neruotoxin that paralyzes the legs. Since the poison is not strong it only paralyzes on leg, the paralysis Lasts for 2 Posts and renders the person unable to use it. This Is potentially dangerous to allies if they get caught in the mist. The mist is around Lien and is  five meters in diameter and expands from Lien at a rate of 10 m/s. The mist moves away from Lien in a 1 meter diameter circle around where she walks, And continues to move outward at a rate of 10m/s until it is out of her range and dissipates.


[b]Name:[/b] Lien Jiě yào ( Lotus Antidote )
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/ !0
[b]Element:[/b] Poison
[b]Class:[/b] Supplemtary
[b]Range:[/b] ten meter radius
[b]Duration:[/b] two post ( sustained )
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] three Post
[b]Description:[/b]
Injecting a small amount of poison made to directly combat poisons, it acts as an antidote for her allies ( and whoever else needs it ). The poison searches for and neutralizes any other poison with Lien's magoi. Once the poison has done it's job it will die, leaving those feeling just a tad queasy that passes within the next post. This spell may be administered before the effects of a poison, and actively fights any poisons that enter or are inside of the body for up to C tier damage. this spell may be sustained to continue its effects in the next post. When this spell is in place it leaves a magic circle with a ten meter radius, administering the poison to a maximum of three people.

Pào pào yù ( Jade Bubbles ): You can no longer have offensive/supplementary at D-tier, so you will need to choose either the poison status effect or the damage. Also, if this is a sustained spell, change duration to "sustained" and cool down to "2 posts or sustain+1". You would also need to mention in the description if you are reforming the bubbles or if you are just able to direct them for longer.

Zǐ shuǐjīng pàomò ( Amethyst Bubbles ): This spell is fine

Shénjīng duàn kāi: Yù( Neuron Disconnect: Jade): This needs to say "numbs the leg for one post" as it is D-tier

Lien Jiě yào ( Lotus Antidote): Change duration to "sustained" and cool down to "3 posts or sustain+1"