Nergui

Trait Name: Forest Watcher Physiology
Trait Tier: -
Trait Requirement: Forest Watcher Race
Trait Description: Wielding a powerful weapon and hiding the power of life within them this race of winged humans looks spritely with young features soaring with grace.
Trait Effect:

[*]Has a pair of wings which allows them to soar through the air with A-tier speeds, soaring like a falcon.

[*]Starts with a free half cost A-tier life magic ability, cannot be scaled.

[*]Gets a free A-tier life magic weapon.

[*]Has Human magoi and stamina pools
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Name: Nergui Sumyra
Country Affiliation: Wanderer
Race: Human (Forest Watcher)
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Age + Birthdate: 65?
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: Nergui for the most part is very Nonchalant in his way of doing things. He'll assist if it benefits him in someway and simply won't if the opportunity isn't interesting enough. He likes to play tiny Pranks on people making them fall or generally being a nuisance. With his incredibly young appearance people tend to Mistake him for a young adult which he uses to his advantage during... "self indulgence". However when it comes down to it, Nergui can get whatever job he needs to get finished done. He's excellent at following directions but will do so reluctantly.

In combat however, Nergui is a wild card. He tends to fight hand to hand and will do whatever it takes to win, he has no honor, no morals mainly because he doesn't understand the human, Immuchakk, or  Fanalis Psyche at all. He will attack with no regard to the devastation he could cause because he knows not what he is capable of.
Likes:
Nature: he tends to enjoy insects. Though he knows not as to why Butterflies are his favorites. He would talk your ear off about various species of butterflies.
Long Walks (or flights): These flights help him get his mind in order after a long argument or whenever something annoying happens.
Money and Drinking: These two are intertwined because you can't drink without money and you can't attract girls (or guys for that matter) without a couple drinks.
Lazing about: He doesn't really like to work hard at anything, he's like a cat in that regard. He wants to sleep and do whatever he wants all day.
Freedom: The freedom to Indulge, the freedom to choose, he revels in this. If there were a Djinn of Freedom it'd be him. He believes that everyone should be free of the shackles that bind them, whether it be a job, or slavery. Freedom is the most important thing to him.
Dislikes: Working: He hates working and finds it to be a waste of time. Who wants to spend hours at a time toiling away for a measly pittance.
Being annoyed: this speaks for itself no one likes being annoyed.
Being blindsided with more responsibilities: He HATES having responsibilities pushed onto him without good reason. Such as watching children that aren't his. Or taking care of Pets that aren't his. Really and truly if he didn't cause the problem he wants no responsibility for it.
Drama: Drama tends to spiral and cause annoyances, and said drama interrupts his daily routines. Routines he has put in place to avoid being annoyed. Routines that prevent the annoyances making him angry and hurting people physically or emotionally. It's best to steer Drama he (did or) didn't cause clear of him.
Aspirations: Nergui has no memory of his own birth nor how he came to be. He wants to learn of his past or where he came from. He works tirelessly to that end and will try and figure it out by any means necessary.

Additionally he aims to free the humanoids he sees everyday, shackled by their short meaningless lives. He wants them to understand the true freedom he feels. A freedom where being lazy won't get you yelled at. Freedom from enslavement, or trafficking. Freedom to choose how you live and what you do. He wants to free the whole world. Some might see this as a blessing but in truth it's his most toxic trait that he doesn't understand. Freedom in excess. He believes one should be free to overindulge and live their lives. No work, rules and laws were just shackles to keep people in line. He wants to let everyone run wild and Truly Live.
Phobias/fears: Nergui is afraid of dying, and will take EVERY avenue to avoid it. No matter how dishonorable. However he also fears hurting those close to him.
Face-Claim: Keigo Takami(Hawks)-My Hero Academia
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Gold
Height: 1.8288 Meters
Weight: 117.934 Kg
Appearance: Nergui is a fairly tall being with red wings that span 23 feet or 7.01 meters when fully extended. His eyes shine Gold with his build being fairly muscular. He has a scar on his right shoulder that he has no idea where it originated from. The scar is large and noticeable that wraps around his right shoulder blade. Lastly he has a soul patch as a beard.
Rukh Alignment: White
Special Features: A brand in the shape of a flower he is not familiar with.
History: Nergui has absolutely no idea where he came from or where he originated. However what he did know was he had red wings, and was laying face first within the desert. Naked no less. He would mug traveling merchants traveling through the desert that thought he was a bird. He would find clothes and thankfully to his wings, a city where he would soon find food, and water. Through his many years of living there he would come to learn the peoples mannerisms, their lifestyles, and their ethics, as well as their language. The one thing he could never truly grasp, was their morals. He never understood why being kind to everyone mattered. After all he kind of just took what he wanted when he needed it to survive. The people here eventually just started to give him things. More things than he knew what to do with.

The people of the village revered Nergui as a protector of sorts, despite his overly free spirit and frequent pilfering of goods from the merchants that visited. He had suddenly procured a various amount trinkets and items that the people of this village called, "offerings". He was given a shrine, food, and even various items from the people he watched over. He liked the attention, and the aggreement he had here. It wasn't until he had met a woman, by the name of Telezia who treated the man more like, an ungrateful grandchild that he'd learn even more of the world outside of this small village. She taught him a lot. How it felt to lose, to indulge, mainly a lot of bad habits, but mostly how to survive. She would promise the boy to find more about his past if he came with her. He would agree seeing as how it piqued his interest. He would travel the world for years then on, afterward.

He assisted Telezia in gathering allies. Met her father, an incredibly powerful strength magician, her daughter who was frankly not as impressive as her family members. Him and Lestacia seemed to get along. She thought his wings were pretty and he loved the innocence she gave. It wasn't until one day they had raided a "bandit camp" he ran into a man from his old village. Apparently after leaving, Telezia had their village burned, every one had scattered, most were taken as slaves, others died, some became bandits to feed their children. EVERYONE was missing. One thing was for certain though the woman he was following ruined their lives. Nergui would confront Telezia about this, and when she told him yes it was her who burned the village to the ground it was then, that Nergui had decided to leave. He didn't want to be related to a murderer or simple raider. She even admitted amidst the argument that the bandit camp they were raiding were simply refugees trying to survive. Telezia wouldn't let him leave easily however. He fought hard and wouldn't leave unscathed, however, he would eventually be able to fly away to a nearby city and recuperate, hoping to one day discover how many people were missing and how to return them to their rightful homes.

You need weight in kilograms, height in cms, so fwr your aspirations and fears both seem short of 75 worfs so please more details on those. We need a feel for what motivates this character. I WOULD DOUBLE CHECK TO MAKE SURE ALL OF YOUR WORDCOUNTS MATCHUP.

Here is the updated version of the forest watcher dungeon beast by the way

Forest Watcher:

Nergui has been approved! Note, I've removed 'Human' from primary race because he is technically Forest Watcher, i.e. a Dungeon Beast, and does not receive the Human racial bonuses!

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[b]Name:[/b] Nergui Sumyra
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Wanderer
[b]Race:[/b] Forest Watcher (Human)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 65?
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Bisexual
[b]Personality:[/b] Nergui for the most part is very Nonchalant in his way of doing things. He'll assist if it benefits him in someway and simply won't if the opportunity isn't interesting enough. He likes to play tiny Pranks on people making them fall or generally being a nuisance. With his incredibly young appearance people tend to Mistake him for a young adult which he uses to his advantage during... "self indulgence". However when it comes down to it, Nergui can get whatever job he needs to get finished done. He's excellent at following directions but will do so reluctantly.

In combat however, Nergui is a wild card. He tends to fight hand to hand and will do whatever it takes to win, he has no honor, no morals mainly because he doesn't understand the human, Immuchakk, or  Fanalis Psyche at all. He will attack with no regard to the devastation he could cause because he knows not what he is capable of.
[b]Likes:[/b]
Nature: he tends to enjoy insects. Though he knows not as to why Butterflies are his favorites. He would talk your ear off about various species of butterflies.
Long Walks (or flights): These flights help him get his mind in order after a long argument or whenever something annoying happens.
Money and Drinking: These two are intertwined because you can't drink without money and you can't attract girls (or guys for that matter) without a couple drinks.
Lazing about: He doesn't really like to work hard at anything, he's like a cat in that regard. He wants to sleep and do whatever he wants all day.
Freedom: The freedom to Indulge, the freedom to choose, he revels in this. If there were a Djinn of Freedom it'd be him. He believes that everyone should be free of the shackles that bind them, whether it be a job, or slavery. Freedom is the most important thing to him.
[b]Dislikes:[/b] Working: He hates working and finds it to be a waste of time. Who wants to spend hours at a time toiling away for a measly pittance.
Being annoyed: this speaks for itself no one likes being annoyed.
Being blindsided with more responsibilities: He HATES having responsibilities pushed onto him without good reason. Such as watching children that aren't his. Or taking care of Pets that aren't his. Really and truly if he didn't cause the problem he wants no responsibility for it.
Drama: Drama tends to spiral and cause annoyances, and said drama interrupts his daily routines. Routines he has put in place to avoid being annoyed. Routines that prevent the annoyances making him angry and hurting people physically or emotionally. It's best to steer Drama he (did or) didn't cause clear of him.
[b]Aspirations:[/b] Nergui has no memory of his own birth nor how he came to be. He wants to learn of his past or where he came from. He works tirelessly to that end and will try and figure it out by any means necessary.

Additionally he aims to free the humanoids he sees everyday, shackled by their short meaningless lives. He wants them to understand the true freedom he feels. A freedom where being lazy won't get you yelled at. Freedom from enslavement, or trafficking. Freedom to choose how you live and what you do. He wants to free the whole world. Some might see this as a blessing but in truth it's his most toxic trait that he doesn't understand. Freedom in excess. He believes one should be free to overindulge and live their lives. No work, rules and laws were just shackles to keep people in line. He wants to let everyone run wild and Truly Live.
[b]Phobias/fears:[/b] Nergui is afraid of dying, and will take EVERY avenue to avoid it. No matter how dishonorable. However he also fears hurting those close to him.
[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Keigo Takami(Hawks)-My Hero Academia
[b]Hair Color:[/b] Blonde
[b]Eye Color:[/b] Gold
[b]Height:[/b] 1.8288 Meters
[b]Weight:[/b] 117.934 Kg
[b]Appearance:[/b] Nergui is a fairly tall being with red wings that span 23 feet or 7.01 meters when fully extended. His eyes shine Gold with his build being fairly muscular. He has a scar on his right shoulder that he has no idea where it originated from. The scar is large and noticeable that wraps around his right shoulder blade. Lastly he has a soul patch as a beard.
[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White
[b]Special Features:[/b] A brand in the shape of a flower he is not familiar with.
[b]History:[/b] Nergui has absolutely no idea where he came from or where he originated. However what he did know was he had red wings, and was laying face first within the desert. Naked no less. He would mug traveling merchants traveling through the desert that thought he was a bird. He would find clothes and thankfully to his wings, a city where he would soon find food, and water. Through his many years of living there he would come to learn the peoples mannerisms, their lifestyles, and their ethics, as well as their language. The one thing he could never truly grasp, was their morals. He never understood why being kind to everyone mattered. After all he kind of just took what he wanted when he needed it to survive. The people here eventually just started to give him things. More things than he knew what to do with.

The people of the village revered Nergui as a protector of sorts, despite his overly free spirit and frequent pilfering of goods from the merchants that visited. He had suddenly procured a various amount trinkets and items that the people of this village called, "offerings". He was given a shrine, food, and even various items from the people he watched over. He liked the attention, and the aggreement he had here. It wasn't until he had met a woman, by the name of Telezia who treated the man more like, an ungrateful grandchild that he'd learn even more of the world outside of this small village. She taught him a lot. How it felt to lose, to indulge, mainly a lot of bad habits, but mostly how to survive. She would promise the boy to find more about his past if he came with her. He would agree seeing as how it piqued his interest. He would travel the world for years then on, afterward.

He assisted Telezia in gathering allies. Met her father, an incredibly powerful strength magician, her daughter who was frankly not as impressive as her family members. Him and Lestacia seemed to get along. She thought his wings were pretty and he loved the innocence she gave. It wasn't until one day they had raided a "bandit camp" he ran into a man from his old village. Apparently after leaving, Telezia had their village burned, every one had scattered, most were taken as slaves, others died, some became bandits to feed their children. EVERYONE was missing. One thing was for certain though the woman he was following ruined their lives. Nergui would confront Telezia about this, and when she told him yes it was her who burned the village to the ground it was then, that Nergui had decided to leave. He didn't want to be related to a murderer or simple raider. She even admitted amidst the argument that the bandit camp they were raiding were simply refugees trying to survive. Telezia wouldn't let him leave easily however. He fought hard and wouldn't leave unscathed, however, he would eventually be able to fly away to a nearby city and recuperate, hoping to one day discover how many people were missing and how to return them to their rightful homes.

As you know, the next steps are vault creation plus weapon, ability and trait creation, but I'm sure you don't need me to tell you! By the way, when you make your vault, please remember to add Forest Watcher Physiology to your traits:

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[spoiler=Forest Watcher Physiology]
[b]Trait Name:[/b] Forest Watcher Physiology
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] -
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Forest Watcher Race
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Wielding a powerful weapon and hiding the power of life within them this race of winged humans looks spritely with young features soaring with grace.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]
[list][*]Has a pair of wings which allows them to soar through the air with A-tier speeds, soaring like a falcon.

[*]Starts with a free half cost A-tier life magic ability, cannot be scaled.

[*]Gets a free A-tier life magic weapon.

[*]Has Human magoi and stamina pools[/list][/spoiler]