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1Treasury of Ur Empty Treasury of Ur 21/03/21, 04:32 pm

Belit Astarte

Belit Astarte
D-Tier
D-Tier

D-Tier Abilities

Slash:

Impale:


Heft Strike:

Sweep:

C-Tire Abilties

Neith's Arrow:

Fanalis Roar:



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2Treasury of Ur Empty Re: Treasury of Ur 21/03/21, 05:23 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Slash

This would be a close ranged ability regardless of the length of the weapon.

The scaling type on this doesn't make sense since it has no post duration in the ability. I'd suggest something like... damage to increase the power or hits to increase the amount of times you can strike at once.



Impale

This would be a close ranged ability regardless of the length of the weapon.

The sustain should be changed to '0', you have it as 8 right now.



Heft Strike

This would be a close ranged ability regardless of the length of the weapon.

Include how far she moves backward. A suitable distance would be around 3 meters if you didn't have the stagger effect. But with it, I'd just say she takes a step back or around 1 meter.

Please change 'short amount of time' to specify that it's a one post duration. I'd keep it to just a stagger.



Sweep

Please keep the range to a single length. I'd assume this would be roughly about a medium ranged ability.

Include the diameter around her that this covers. You could gauge it off the general length of her weapon give or take.

Also, specify the movement(s) she makes in the description, not just the requirements.



Neith's Arrow

Same as above, please keep the range to a single length.

Abilities should only have one type of scaling. You can choose between distance or damage.

The sustain should be changed to '0', you have it as 8 right now.

Please specify how far the spear is thrown in meters.


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3Treasury of Ur Empty Re: Treasury of Ur 11/04/21, 06:18 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Heft Strike

I believe I missed it the first time but to get the effect you desire while keeping it within the ability guidelines,

I would recommend dropping out the post duration and just say it staggers them. Since it isn't such a strong status effect, I think it'd be fine.



Other than that, I think these are simple enough and should be relatively fine.


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