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1Danger Zone Skill List Empty Danger Zone Skill List 07/11/20, 09:21 am

Ghost

Ghost
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A-Tier

Twilight: Signs Of Eden Moon
Tier: B-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must hold their staff with both hands while chanting the name of the spell like a prayer.
Scaling:AOE increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Magoi | 15 Magoi
Description: Holding their staff in a prayer with both hands the user commands to the rukh creating a great Moon of light 10m frame by frame in height and width which appears anywhere from up to 20m away, the construct then strikes  by crashing into the target burning those hit with B-tier light damage to those within range.


Solomon Beam
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: offensive/supplementary
Range:  Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must point his staff at the target.
Scaling: The area of effect may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    By channeling the rukh in his staff. The user will command it to fire off light magic at his target in the form of a solar beam. The beam will be 3x3 frame by frame in meters. Getting hit will indeed cause C tier light damage and knock anyone C tier or below back by 20 meters.



Recovery Room
Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must say a Chant as he holds his staff to his chest.
Scaling: hits / projectiles (target one additional ally per)
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30/15
Description:

    By channeling the rukh inside his staff. The user will say a chant of pure hearts of gold, hearts of new hearts of old. Causing holy magic to appear. The holy magic will heal him or heal one selective person up to B Tier damage within 5 meters of him that he deems an ally via a holy aura which will burst out like a 4x4 frame by frame meter size ball.



Last edited by Ghost on 10/02/21, 05:23 pm; edited 17 times in total


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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2Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 08/11/20, 08:00 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

Scaling is still wrong, again use the base scaling since you are having so much of an issue coming up with your own. Furthermore, I can't make out the first ability at all, I have no idea what you are trying to do or relay.


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3Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 08/11/20, 09:47 am

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

Alright fixed it up.


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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4Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 11/11/20, 09:30 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

Denied, you have no profession listed in ur vault


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5Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 11/11/20, 10:07 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

What do you mean I need a profession to cast spells


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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6Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 13/11/20, 08:51 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

The first spell has too many effects.
The second one has two B tier effects which would be an A tier spell. Lower damage and effect to C and should be fine.
In the third ability, you added a scaling feature to the spell description, which is a no-no.


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7Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 13/11/20, 09:56 am

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

that should do it... Cut one of the abilities out of my Evo borg. Changed the second one to C tier effects and just dropped the third one scaling


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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8Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 15/11/20, 08:54 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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A-Tier

Borg has too many functions


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9Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 16/11/20, 01:33 am

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

Alright changed them up so Borg so it reflects only hazards


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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10Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 18/11/20, 06:23 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

What do u mean by Hazard?


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11Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 20/11/20, 10:42 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

As in ill statues to be placed upon my hero. Such as burns frost bites paralyze etc.


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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12Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 23/11/20, 04:57 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

Reword it to fit that then, and change it to supplementary/Defensive


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13Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 03/01/21, 10:50 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

This should do it


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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14Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 18/01/21, 07:47 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

You can't make a borg till A tier.

For the recovery room either you emit a healing wave that heals 5m from you or heals you. If you make it purely AoE heal you heal ur self anyway. The way you worded it waste your Functions options.


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15Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 18/01/21, 06:49 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

I opted for a power up to my knight and it's ready


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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16Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 19/01/21, 07:51 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

It would be B tier construct, dealing B tier dmg. Added that it's destruction comes from B tier or higher damage received. And add scaling...


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17Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 19/01/21, 06:34 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

Updated that should do it


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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18Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 27/01/21, 08:00 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

Bump been a week and some day's


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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19Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 02/02/21, 10:17 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Solomon Beam

Include the length of the beam. You have it listed as long-ranged but you said the size is 3 by 3 meters.

The type should be offensive/supplementary.

Recovery Room

This ability needs scaling, you can't have an ability without scaling.

Other than that, these seem passable. :o


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20Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 02/02/21, 11:17 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

I edited it up....


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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21Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 10/02/21, 02:44 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

I just caught one more tiny thing!

Recovery Room

If you want this ability to be selective of allies, it needs to specify that he can only heal one ally at a time. Otherwise, it can't apply to only those he views as allies.

However, you may change the scaling to hits / projectiles in order to keep the selectiveness of the ability. Just make sure it states that he can only heal one ally at a time.

After that, they all should be fine.


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22Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 10/02/21, 05:25 pm

Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

that should fix it up


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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23Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 10/02/21, 05:47 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

I'll edit it in for you just to save a bit of time. But the people you can heal includes you. So if you're only healing yourself, you'd need to scale in order to heal each additional person.

Otherwise, you would have to drop the healing to C Tier since you'd be healing yourself and another person guaranteed.

If that's not fine with you, let me know and we can work something out that is fair. But with that said, I can give this my 1/2. 😊


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24Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 11/02/21, 11:52 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

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[center][b]Twilight: Signs Of Eden Moon[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must hold their staff with both hands while chanting the name of the spell like a prayer.
[b]Scaling:[/b]AOE increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi | 15 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Holding their staff in a prayer with both hands the user commands to the rukh creating a great Moon of light 10m frame by frame in height and width which appears anywhere from up to 20m away, the construct then strikes  by crashing into the target burning those hit with B-tier light damage to those within range.


[center][b]Solomon Beam[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] offensive/supplementary
[b]Range:[/b]  Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must point his staff at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] The area of effect may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By channeling the rukh in his staff. The user will command it to fire off light magic at his target in the form of a solar beam. The beam will be 3x3 frame by frame in meters. Getting hit will indeed cause C tier light damage and knock anyone C tier or below back by 20 meters.[/list]


[center][b]Recovery Room[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must say a Chant as he holds his staff to his chest.
[b]Scaling:[/b] hits / projectiles (target one additional ally per)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By channeling the rukh inside his staff. The user will say a chant of pure hearts of gold, hearts of new hearts of old. Causing holy magic to appear. The holy magic will heal him or heal one selective person up to B Tier damage within 5 meters of him that he deems an ally via a holy aura which will burst out like a 4x4 frame by frame meter size ball.[/list]


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25Danger Zone Skill List Empty Re: Danger Zone Skill List 11/02/21, 11:52 am

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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A-Tier

2/2


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