Slay the Jackals

Name: Jakkaru o korosu (Slay the Jackals)
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina
Weapon Type: Rod
Class: Offensive
Range: Melee
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: A wicked series of four attacks that targets the joints and can crush bones, cause internal bleeding, and is great for dealing with crowds.  Deals B tier Damage to a single opponent, C tier damage to two opponents, or D tier damage to four opponents.  the speed of the attack is 15m/s.

What does the attack do? o.o

thought i had written that, but i guess it wanted to stay in my head. the attack targets the joints, in a combination of strikes.

Range wouldn't be melee, it should be the amount of meters your attack may reach

Actually the ability guidelines states that range for close range attacks can simply be listed as "Close" which I think is what Altair was going for. Still, stating the actual range in meters would help.

You also need to list the Amount of attacks being made here. Seems like four based off the damage description, but please make sure to note the number.

Yep four was the number. Bump for completion.

Seems good to me :D Ready to be trained!

Training Completed: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t1111-never-bet-on-a-pair-of-3-s-solo-training-job#4808

Unfortunately this training can't be approved for the following reasons:
-No where in the thread do you ever actually train for this new ability.
-The thread contains a major fight throughout most of the posts which means you couldn't be training any abilities as per the rules I pm'd you.
-You merged the word counts into one giant word count when I told you they would need to be separate in pms.

If you are going to train an ability inside of a job thread again in the future, be sure to separate the job and the training from each other and to do said training before, after, or between the job's main battles.

Completed for real this time: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t1122-how-to-kill-a-jackal#4846

Training approved!