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1Burning Homes (Chain, Private, Plot) Empty Burning Homes (Chain, Private, Plot) on 19/06/20, 05:05 pm

Gilles

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Job Name: Burning Homes Part 1
Job Rank:D
Job Location:Kou
Job Reward:3,000 huang, 50xp
Job Prereq:none
Job Overview: Gilles has decided to start her spree of terror by setting fire to a few houses in kou. Her goal is to burn those that live inside of these homes. The purpose of this is to serve her god. Those who survive the fire are chosen by her god and she will take them with her to serve her god and those who aren't chosen will be sacrifices for her god.

Enemy:
Enemy Name: Angry Homeowner x5
Rank:D
Description:Just simple men and women who are trying to protect their homes and families. They are armed with kitchen knives or pans.
Abilities: Reckless Charge: They run at the target wildly swinging their weapon to deal d tier damage.

Job Name: Burning Homes Part 2
Job Rank:D
Job Location:Kou
Job Reward:3,000 huang, 50xp
Job Prereq: Burning Homes 1
Job Overview:After Burning some homes several angry citizens have decided to try to capture the arsonist which gives her the oppurtunity for some more fun. She Will take this chance to burn the attackers which is a service for her god and her own twisted desires of burning poor souls.

Enemy:
Enemy Name: Angry citizens x6
Rank:D
Description:Just simple men and women who are trying to protect their homes and families. They are armed with kitchen knives or pans.
Abilities: Reckless Charge: They run at the target wildly swinging their weapon to deal d tier damage.

Job Name: Burning Homes Part 3
Job Rank:D
Job Location:Kou
Job Reward:3,000 huang, 50xp
Job Prereq:Burning Homes Part 2
Job Overview: Guards have come for gilles who must rather escape or defeat them. She will take this chance to try to figure out more about the guards and their headquarters.

Enemy:
Enemy Name: Guards x5
Rank:D
Description:Simple guards in guard attire and armed with spears.
Abilities: Spear throw:Throws the spear 5 meters to deal d tier damage
drill spear: Thrust the spear while twisting it to deal d tier damage.

Enemy:
Enemy Name: Guard Captain
Rank:C
Description:Slighty better guard with a sword and shield.
Abilities: Perfect block: thrusts out shield to block c tier or below damage.
Cross Slash: The user slices twice in a cross formation dealing c tier damage.



Last edited by Gilles on 22/06/20, 06:01 pm; edited 1 time in total

Merrze

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You've shared Gillies goal essentially but you've failed to convey how to actually complete a few of the jobs. Yes, she's spontaneous and going out to burn things down but that should be the goal. Is the goal just to burn a certain amount of houses or places down? Or is the goal to incite the angry homeowners out to hurt them, please clarify on this.

The second job is a bit better but once again clarify the exact point of the job, there are angry homeowners yes but whats the goal of the fun, terrorization or actual death.

This job is simple and explains the goal but maybe add some flair saying how it might've reached that point. With those few edits should be good to approve.


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[b]Job Name:[/b] Burning Homes Part 1
[b]Job Rank:[/b]D
[b]Job Location:[/b]Kou
[b]Job Reward:[/b]3,000 huang, 50xp
[b]Job Prereq:[/b]none
[b]Job Overview:[/b] Gilles has decided to start her spree of terror by setting fire to a few houses in kou. Her goal is to burn those that live inside of these homes. The purpose of this is to serve her god. Those who survive the fire are chosen by her god and she will take them with her to serve her god and those who aren't chosen will be sacrifices for her god.

[spoiler="Enemy"]Enemy Name: Angry Homeowner x5
Rank:D
Description:Just simple men and women who are trying to protect their homes and families. They are armed with kitchen knives or pans.
Abilities: Reckless Charge: They run at the target wildly swinging their weapon to deal d tier damage.[/spoiler]

[b]Job Name:[/b] Burning Homes Part 2
[b]Job Rank:[/b]D
[b]Job Location:[/b]Kou
[b]Job Reward:[/b]3,000 huang, 50xp
[b]Job Prereq:[/b] Burning Homes 1
[b]Job Overview:[/b]After Burning some homes several angry citizens have decided to try to capture the arsonist which gives her the oppurtunity for some more fun. She Will take this chance to burn the attackers which is a service for her god and her own twisted desires of burning poor souls.

[spoiler="Enemy"]Enemy Name: Angry citizens x6
Rank:D
Description:Just simple men and women who are trying to protect their homes and families. They are armed with kitchen knives or pans.
Abilities: Reckless Charge: They run at the target wildly swinging their weapon to deal d tier damage.[/spoiler]

[b]Job Name:[/b] Burning Homes Part 3
[b]Job Rank:[/b]D
[b]Job Location:[/b]Kou
[b]Job Reward:[/b]3,000 huang, 50xp
[b]Job Prereq:[/b]Burning Homes Part 2
[b]Job Overview:[/b] Guards have come for gilles who must rather escape or defeat them. She will take this chance to try to figure out more about the guards and their headquarters.

[spoiler="Enemy"]Enemy Name: Guards x5
Rank:D
Description:Simple guards in guard attire and armed with spears.
Abilities: Spear throw:Throws the spear 5 meters to deal d tier damage
drill spear: Thrust the spear while twisting it to deal d tier damage.[/spoiler]

[spoiler="Enemy"]Enemy Name: Guard Captain
Rank:C
Description:Slighty better guard with a sword and shield.
Abilities: Perfect block: thrusts out shield to block c tier or below damage.
Cross Slash: The user slices twice in a cross formation dealing c tier damage.[/spoiler]


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