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1Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] Empty Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] on 04/11/19, 12:44 pm

Duban

Duban
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D-Tier
Kiss of Unrequited Love
Tier: D
Class: Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Cannot have eaten in the last two rounds. Must swallow before using. Any damage done to tongue during the ability causes the user to be unable to speak for two more posts.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

    The user's tongue stretches to 3 meters in length and an average of 1 meter in diameter. The user's tongue contracts and extends to strike for D-tier damage


Tickle of Creeping Madness
Tier: D
Class: Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Doesn't affect anyone sees the user mouth moving during the ability.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

    The user obscures and projects his voice 3 to 10 meters away. Using an ominous tone and partially audible words, it is likely to remind anyone who hears it about their phobia if it is an idea and not tangible, otherwise they believe there is an unfriendly person or animal (Afflicteds choice) coming from the source of the ability.


Accent of Deafening Conversation
Tier: D
Class: Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Affects user. Once used, when this ability end, the user must rest throat from speaking, or using abilities for one post.
Scaling:
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

    The user reverberates his throat producing a static-like high-pitched sound, covering the frequency of the human voice, blocking any talking, whispering or shouting from being understood, at a radius of 10 meters. Can only deafen up to D-tier sound abilities.


Mockery of Blind Archers
Tier: D
Class: Manipulator
Type: Supplementary.
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Affects user.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10
Description:

    The user whistles at a pitch inaudible to normal hearing at a radius of 10 meters. Those in range becoming disoriented, causing their next D-tier ability or basic attack to miss by 1 meter.


Dance of Ravenous Hippos
Tier: C
Class: Manipulator
Type:  Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Unable to take a step the post before, and during use.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description:

    The user prepares his throat and lets out a subsonic hum that rumbles the floor, making it impossible to traverse safely. Any steps faster than a walk within a 10 meter radius of the user results in a fall dealing C-tier damage.



Last edited by Duban on 06/11/19, 04:14 am; edited 2 times in total

2Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] Empty Re: Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] on 04/11/19, 09:56 pm

Trently

Trently
A-Tier
A-Tier

  • Accent of Deafening Conversation - Please add in Drawbacks that sound Abilities higher than D-Tier can overcome your Ability.

  • Mockery of Weeping Wolves - You may only have one type and one effect sadly for D-Tier Abilities. Also, please add that the Ability will only miss if it is another D-Tier Ability.


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3Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] Empty Re: Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] on 05/11/19, 12:40 am

Duban

Duban
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D-Tier
I made my changes in accordance with your edits.
" Please add in Drawbacks that sound Abilities higher than D-Tier can overcome your Ability." An equivalent was added to the description.

"You may only have one type and one effect sadly for D-Tier Abilities. Also, please add that the Ability will only miss if it is another D-Tier Ability."
Changed name and removed damage, added "Next d-tier ability or basic attack"

4Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] Empty Re: Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] on 05/11/19, 07:54 pm

Trently

Trently
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A-Tier
Everything is good to me, but one last edit.

Please add a better Drawback or Requirement for Accent of Deafening Conversation. I would suggest either the user having to stand still, or the user having to put his hands in a certain position in front of his mouth.


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5Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] Empty Re: Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] on 06/11/19, 02:03 pm

Duban

Duban
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D-Tier
Edited.

6Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] Empty Re: Keys of Llamaha's Nocturne [I] on 06/11/19, 02:10 pm

Trently

Trently
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Approved!

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[center][b]Kiss of Unrequited Love[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Cannot have eaten in the last two rounds. Must swallow before using. Any damage done to tongue during the ability causes the user to be unable to speak for two more posts.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user's tongue stretches to 3 meters in length and an average of 1 meter in diameter. The user's tongue contracts and extends to strike for D-tier damage [/list]

[center][b]Tickle of Creeping Madness[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Doesn't affect anyone sees the user mouth moving during the ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user obscures and projects his voice 3 to 10 meters away. Using an ominous tone and partially audible words, it is likely to remind anyone who hears it about their phobia if it is an idea and not tangible, otherwise they believe there is an unfriendly person or animal (Afflicteds choice) coming from the source of the ability. [/list]

[center][b]Accent of Deafening Conversation[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Affects user. Once used, when this ability end, the user must rest throat from speaking, or using abilities for one post.
[b]Scaling:[/b]
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user reverberates his throat producing a static-like high-pitched sound, covering the frequency of the human voice, blocking any talking, whispering or shouting from being understood, at a radius of 10 meters. Can only deafen up to D-tier sound abilities. [/list]

[center][b]Mockery of Blind Archers[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary.
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Affects user.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user whistles at a pitch inaudible to normal hearing at a radius of 10 meters. Those in range becoming disoriented, causing their next D-tier ability or basic attack to miss by 1 meter. [/list]

[center][b]Dance of Ravenous Hippos[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b]  Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Unable to take a step the post before, and during use.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user prepares his throat and lets out a subsonic hum that rumbles the floor, making it impossible to traverse safely. Any steps faster than a walk within a 10 meter radius of the user results in a fall dealing C-tier damage.[/list]


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