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1 Aseo Small update. on 07/08/17, 03:06 am

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Medis Sienų
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Defensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must jab the item used for casting in the ground, and recite the name of ability.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Life, Aseo creates countless wooden branches 2.5 meters in width. Intertwining the branches forming a wide, thick net like web, blocking up to C-Tier damage. The branches would be weak against fire/blunt attacks higher than the skill.


Kurčiųjų Kūno
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Sound]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must tap the person there place the spell effect on.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Voicing to the sound, Aseo silences the area around himself. Ranging up to 15 meters, cancelling out noise making him and anything he touches unheard to others. The effect lasts for 2 post after activation.


Nuplyšęs Galūnių
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must run the item used for casting across the ground.
Scaling: Spread: The spread of the vine through the body, 10 Magoi/stamina the tier of damage increase by one.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 Magoi: 10 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Life, Aseo brings forth rose vines from beneath the ground 8m, away from himself. Coiling around target's limbs, digging through the skin dealing C-Tier damage.


Rūkas
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo hovering his cane in front of himself.
Scaling:  Duration
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, changing the water droplets in the atmosphere into a thick fog that spreads 5 meters all around. The fog impairs the vision of anyone stand, walking, etc... through it .The fog lasting for two post after being activated.


Aptikimas
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Pointing his cane in multiple directions.
Scaling:  
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, pointing his cane in front of himself like a cone. Anything living up to 5 meters ahead is effected and have a golden outline to them.  


Grybelis: obuolių pyragas
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must point and make a star.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, summons forth Fungus on his opponent's body 10 meters away. If they don't spot the Fungus infection, they rapidly grow and turn into large apples (29.5in in circumference), weighing down the person moderately cutting their speed in-half for two post. The fungus apple's have C-tier item durability, and last for 2 post.


Žemės ieškantys spinčiai
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must draw a circle in the ground with his cane. If not possible because of the type of ground beneath him, Aseo draws a arrow at his opponent.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, summons forth a shock wave of earth specifically stone, rocks, and dirt from the surrounding area. Molding the stone, rocks, and dirt into the shape of a large spine (548.64 cm) that whips out 10 meters from the ground in front of the caster. If anyone gets hit, D-tier damage is applied with 5 meters knock back.  


Medžio lagaminai
Tier: C-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must wave and point his staff at the person.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, has two spears(5.08 cm in length) shaped like tree trunks appear off his shoulders. Projecting them towards his opponent in the range of 8m, each one leaving a black smoke trial. If any of the tree trunks hit D-tier minor piercing happens.


Žiema: šokis stebuklo
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must chant the name of the spell.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Magoi ; 15 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, has a crystal blue mist radiant from his body. Swarming around Aseo, going from head to toe, a set of lightweight ice armor covers, Aseo. The armor having B-tier item durability. The armor lasts three post, unless broken by another's strength tier, or melted away by B-tier Fire Magic.


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Žydintys Rožių
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Reciting the name of the ability over the wound.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Commanding Life, Aseo channels a faint glow of turquoise color from his wand. Hovering it in the direct of the wound healing internal to minor of C-Tier damage.


Žydintys Rožių
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician [Life]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must chant the name.
Scaling: Damage  
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, hovers his cane directly over the wound or towards it. The green rukh rotates around while healing internal, to external C-Tier damage. Having the blood re-enter the body, and skin repair back to the way it was leaving no scars



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2 Re: Aseo Small update. on 07/08/17, 06:23 pm

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I’m not going to approve the abilities you’re removing until we fully grade all of this, so you’re not left ability-less. XD After everything is graded, they will be considered removed and you’ll need to take them out of your vault.

Rūkas - Knock the radius down to 5-meters, but change the base duration to 2 posts. We’re allowing more “weaker/utility-based” effects like this have more than just one post at D-Tier. ^^ As for the rest of the ability, I’d suggest adding a bit of detail to what this fog even does. Does it impair anyone caught within its vision a bit? Kind of like some kind of smoke-bomb?

Aptikimas - I’d lower the effects of this down to 5-meters again. However, you should put either range/duration on the scaling for it + a base duration of 2 posts.  Also, a bit of advice for you. I’m assuming you’re trying to combo this with Rukus, making a sort of shroud that’ll make it harder for enemies to spot you. Then, by using this ability you’ll be able to see them. However, the way it’s set up now EVERYTHING, including you will be detected by it (aka giving even you a “golden glow”) I’d suggest wording it so the effect applies to either where aseo points his staff, or this magic “spreads” outwards from him. Or something along those lines.

Grybelis: obuolių pyragas - Just for ocds sake, feel free to change 8-meters to 10. It is a C-Tier ability after all. Also, I’d suggest changing the fungus into something more...planty? Idk it’s just a bit weird that FUNGUS is turning into apples. XD

Žemės ieškantys spinčiai
- This might just be me being picky, but in the requirements i noticed you added a sort of “what if” scenario if you can’t touch the ground. Just by chanting the name, it wouldn’t really change anything. You’d still need some form of wand/staff interaction.

Also, “stone molded spines from a skeleton”? O-o wut. Life magic isn’t something that can manipulate earth and what not. We’ve discussed that in the chat before, though idk if you were there.

Medžio lagaminai
- You simply can’t have 4 projectiles, each dealing C-Tier damage on a single C-Tier ability.

Žiema: šokis stebuklo - “Aseo, must take one post for preparation by dancing. “ excuse me what, I am so confused on the requirement alone.. Other than that, I think the concept is generally fine..

Žydintys Rožių - what are you changing on this? O-o I’m just confused since there wasn’t a like, previous version. Or at least, I couldn’t find it.


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3 Re: Aseo Small update. on 12/08/17, 08:22 pm

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4 Re: Aseo Small update. on 14/08/17, 04:15 am

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Rūkas - This is just my personal recommendation, but i’d actually suggest changing the scaling to range on this sucker. Since it already lasts for two posts, I think some kind of range increase could benefit you greatly. However, that’s just a suggestion, you don’t gotta listen. ^^

Aptikimas - I’m actually a bit confused on how this effect is applied. You create a magic circle, which you then can move around freely to apply such effect? O.o

Grybelis: obuolių pyragas - Still bothered that these apples are being grown via fungus..not the point. Um, I think the ability is fine as is, but perhaps you could try describing how much these things weigh them down?

Žemės ieškantys spinčiai - You still need to note somewhere the it REQUIRES rocks/earth like this, and it’s not just creating it from thin air. Also, you’re not going to be able to have a knock back + C-Tier damage on a C-Tier ability.

Medžio lagaminai - Note, strength magic is only invisible to the human/fanalis/imuchakk eye. Anyone of that’s a magician can see that it’s looks like some kind of black matter. Also, just another suggestion, but I think scaling with hits on this ability would work wonders. ;)

Žiema: šokis stebuklo - Again, I really think it’s an incredibly bad idea to have the requirement be a dance number. Especially one that takes an entire post to prepare..tbh if you tried to use this against just about ANYONE you’d end up dead. XD


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5 Re: Aseo Small update. on 14/08/17, 11:56 pm

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6 Re: Aseo Small update. on 20/08/17, 09:48 pm

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Aptikimas - Requirements/Drawbacks seems to only be what you’re doing DURING the spell, I think you should specify that you need to point your cane as well. Not just in the ability description, if you know what I mean. As for the ability itself, I think you should also make sure you write down that this would effect things 5-meters in front of where he’s pointing the cane, not sure around him. Almost like a flashlight.

Grybelis: obuolių pyragas - I think this should be fine now, but still...fungus apples…*shakes fist*

Žemės ieškantys spinčiai - Alright, so I’m still super confused by this ability. Is this spine hitting EVERYTHING within 10-meters of the caster? Or…

Medžio lagaminai - I get what you’re trying to do with this, but I don’t think a D-Tier damage “trunk” is going to be able to impale someone completely. D-Tier is more like...scratching/bruising/minor piercing.

Žiema: šokis stebuklo - Again...I just want to warn you how hard this is going to be to pull off. Taking an ENTIRE post, just to dance is literally suicide in any event/pvp instance.


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7 Re: Aseo Small update. on 03/09/17, 02:22 pm

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8 Re: Aseo Small update. on 03/09/17, 07:30 pm

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Aptikimas - Okay, I know I said that the effect is going to be like a flashlight, but you can’t put that in the description XD. While you’re not really going to be talking about flashlights icly, it’s still weird to put it in the ability. (Since obviously flashlights didn’t exist yet in this universe.) A better way to describe it, would be to say that it’s spreading out like a cone. Or something along those lines, anyways.

Žemės ieškantys spinčiai - Alright, I think I get what this does finally. However, you still need to specify the size of the spine.


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9 Re: Aseo Small update. on 04/09/17, 11:50 pm

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10 Re: Aseo Small update. on 06/09/17, 10:05 am

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There’s just a couple more things you should need to fix.

Grybelis: obuolių pyragas - How large are the apples that grow on your target?

Žemės ieškantys spinčiai - How large is the spine? You give the length, but I still need to know how big the spine actually is.

Medžio lagaminai - Above applies to this one as well. I simply need you to specify the size of said “spears”.


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11 Re: Aseo Small update. on 01/10/17, 12:49 pm

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12 Re: Aseo Small update. on 01/10/17, 05:36 pm

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Grybelis: obuolių pyragas - This needs to be in centimeters, not inches.

Žemės ieškantys spinčiai - Again, you should know by now that we use the metric system for measurements.


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13 Re: Aseo Small update. on 02/10/17, 09:01 am

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14 Re: Aseo Small update. on 24/11/17, 02:59 pm

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Alright, I think these should be good! As per usual, if another member of staff can find something wrong with these, they have the right to request a change. Don't forget to remove the abilities you're removing from your vault! Approved for training!

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[center][b]Rūkas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Aseo hovering his cane in front of himself.
[b]Scaling:[/b]  Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo, changing the water droplets in the atmosphere into a thick fog that spreads 5 meters all around. The fog impairs the vision of anyone stand, walking, etc... through it .The fog lasting for two post after being activated. [/list]

[center][b]Aptikimas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Pointing his cane in multiple directions.
[b]Scaling:[/b]  
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo,  pointing his cane in front of himself like a cone. Anything living up to 5 meters ahead is effected and have a golden outline to them.  [/list]

[center][b]Grybelis: obuolių pyragas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Aseo, must point and make a star.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo, summons forth Fungus on his opponent's body 10 meters away. If they don't spot the Fungus infection, they rapidly grow and turn into large apples (29.5in in circumference), weighing down the person moderately cutting their speed in-half for two post. The fungus apple's have C-tier item durability, and last for 2 post. [/list]

[center][b]Žemės ieškantys spinčiai[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Aseo, must draw a circle in the ground with his cane. If not possible because of the type of ground beneath him, Aseo draws a arrow at his opponent.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo, summons forth a shock wave of earth specifically stone, rocks, and dirt from the surrounding area. Molding the stone, rocks, and dirt into the shape of a large spine (548.64 cm) that whips out 10 meters from the ground in front of the caster. If anyone gets hit, D-tier damage is applied with 5 meters knock back.  [/list]

[center][b]Medžio lagaminai[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Aseo, must wave and point his staff at the person.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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Aseo, has two spears(5.08 cm in length) shaped like tree trunks appear off his shoulders. Projecting them towards his opponent in the range of 8m, each one leaving a black smoke trial. If any of the tree trunks hit D-tier minor piercing happens. [/list]

[center][b]Žiema: šokis stebuklo[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Aseo, must chant the name of the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi ; 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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Aseo, has a crystal blue mist radiant from his body. Swarming around Aseo, going from head to toe, a set of lightweight ice armor covers, Aseo. The armor having B-tier item durability. The armor lasts three post, unless broken by another's strength tier, or melted away by B-tier Fire Magic. [/list]

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[center][b]Žydintys Rožių[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Life]
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Reciting the name of the ability over the wound.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi : 10 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Commanding Life, Aseo channels a faint glow of turquoise color from his wand. Hovering it in the direct of the wound healing internal to minor of C-Tier damage. [/list]


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15 Re: Aseo Small update. Yesterday at 10:11 pm

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http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p275-ability-vouchers#49999

I want to get the two D-tier spells vounched


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16 Re: Aseo Small update. Yesterday at 11:51 pm

approved.

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[center][b]Rūkas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Aseo hovering his cane in front of himself.
[b]Scaling:[/b]  Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo, changing the water droplets in the atmosphere into a thick fog that spreads 5 meters all around. The fog impairs the vision of anyone stand, walking, etc... through it .The fog lasting for two post after being activated. [/list]

[center][b]Aptikimas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Pointing his cane in multiple directions.
[b]Scaling:[/b] 
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi ; 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo,  pointing his cane in front of himself like a cone. Anything living up to 5 meters ahead is effected and have a golden outline to them.[/list]


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