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1 Aseo Small Update 3. on 07/08/17, 02:48 pm

Aseo Asehi

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Mistikas
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician [Ice]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must draw an imaginary circle invoking the ability.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi : 5 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, creates a small blue magic circle. Shooting a miniature collection of  ice needles grouped together like a orb, 8m away in a scatter towards his opponents. If the ice needles hit, they deal D-Tier damage and don't melt until after 1 post after activation.


Nakties Ašarojimas
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Magician [Gravity]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must draw an imaginary circle in the air invoking the ability.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi : 5 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, creates a medium sized black magic circle in front of himself. Twisting the magic circle, causing atoms to pull and stench around his opponent, from 5m away. Doing so to cause a small scale explosion that deals D-tier damage.





Žmonijos Trauktis
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Magician[Strength]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must draw an imaginary circle and whisper the name to himself. Being able to see the person in his line of sight.  
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, has small hand sized black magic circle appear. Invisible hands emerge from the center.  Directing the hand at himself or other(s) targeting limbs, items, or buildings in front, around, or near himself 6 meters in his range. Decreasing the length, 38.1 cm (15 in ) shrinking the targeted. Using sustain to decrease the mass further by 3.1 cm each translucent hands hitting the target. The Shrinking Effect Last 2 Posts.


Žmonijos Augimo
Tier:C-Tier
Class: Magician[Strength]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, must chant the name to himself, and have visual sight of the person/place/item.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi ; 10 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, has small hand sized black magic circle appear. Invisible hands emerge from the center. Directing the hand at himself or other(s) targeting limbs, items, or buildings in front, around, or close in his range of 6 meters. Increasing the length, and width to 200.66 cm x 175.26 cm (79 in x 69 in) enlarging the targeted thing. Using sustain to increase the mass further by 5.08 cm, and number of hands to grow limbs, items, or buildings.The Growth Effect Last 2 Posts.  






Tūkstantis Vytimo
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, taps the bottom of his cane against the ground
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Magoi ; 15 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, creates a light blue magic circle at the bottom of his feet. Summoning forth a 1 meter petal themed vortex from the ground. Controlling it 10 meters away from himself. If his opponent(s) get caught, or sucked into the vortex they receive B-tier damage around there body, and frostbite on their limbs leaving a numbing effect for 1 post.


Kopijavimas Šnabždesys
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Magician [Sound]
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Aseo, knocks on the air from top to bottom in the direction of the person.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 Posts
Cost: 30 Magoi : 15 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, making five ashen color magic circles. They lined up together like the five on a dice. Low humming emits from the circle, as five dolphins emerge from the circle. Shooting themselves at his opponent from 8 meters away. If they make contact on the body, they deal B-tier damage internally to the body part, and explode making large dolphin noises harmful to everyone present.


Įsipainiojęs Gleives Rūkas
Tier:  B-Tier
Class: Magician[Slime]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user stabs his staff/stave/item through the ground surface, and chants the name. Positioning his palm over the top of the staff.
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Magoi ; 15 Sustain
Description:

    Aseo, creates a lime green magic circle above the ground. Releasing a gaseous smile, that spreads 6m from the area, Aseo’s staff position. The gaseous smile spreads past his opponent(s), changing its physical structure to a thick substance growing along the body to secure the body to sect by slowing. If anyone including, Aseo lightly scratches the thick slime, it causes an explosion dealing B-tier damage to anyone caught in it. The fog last 2 posts after activation, entombing lasts 2 post unless broken out with strength equal to the spell.


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2 Re: Aseo Small Update 3. on 03/10/17, 07:46 pm

Amaya

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Mistikas: You get one projectile at d tier, not a collection of smaller ones. You can claim that the projectile is a small group for fluff, but note that it is, mechanically, a singular projectile.

Nakties Ašarojimas: You can't cause an explosion with gravity magic by ripping atomic bonds apart, and absolutely not at D-tier. If you'd like to blow something up, find a more appropriate way or type of magic.

Žmonijos Trauktis: What does this ability do? The way it's worded I can't understand the effect at all, with the exception of making "hands" of strength magic. Please also use proper metric units. Decimals are very unwieldy. I understand your attachment to the imperial system, but we use metric units on the site.

Žmonijos Augimo: Again, What does this ability do? The way it's worded I can't understand the effect at all, with the exception of making "hands" of strength magic. Please also use proper metric units. Decimals are very unwieldy. I understand your attachment to the imperial system, but we use metric units on the site. The drawback on this skill is not severe enough for a C tier spell.

Tūkstantis Vytimo: This ability doesn't have a required magic type, Please add one. You'll also want to rework where this spawns, as if it appears under your feet, you will take B tier damage and be frostbitten. The drawback on this skill is not severe enough for a B tier spell.

Kopijavimas Šnabždesys: Note that you aren't shooting a literal dolphin (as amazing as a dolphin canon sounds), but a dolphin shaped sound wave. In addition, you cannot deal B tier to the opponent, and then have splash damage. Either remove the splash damage, or specify the amount of splash damage, and reduce the damage the dolphin deals. Also note that, once again, these 5 dolphins function as 1 projectile.

Įsipainiojęs Gleives Rūkas: You can't change the secondary effect of slime magic. Please remove the scratch effect, as slime magic already has it's own qualifications for detonation and damage (heat).


In the future, it is in the systems, and a site rule that you can't post more than 5 abilities for a grade at a time. We'll grade all 7 this time, but please keep that in mind for your next submission.


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