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1Rufus' traits Empty Rufus' traits 05/06/17, 03:34 pm

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Trait Name: Nimble Fingers


Trait Tier: D tier


Trait Requirement: -  


Trait Description: Through years of training, the character has obtained deft hand and finger work allowing them a speed and accuracy with fine motor skills a cut above the average person.

Trait Name: Sharpshooter

Trait Tier: D tier

Trait Requirement: Ranger class

Trait Description: Years of hunting have improved their senses, allowing them to feel the presence of their prey from distances of 5m.



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2Rufus' traits Empty Re: Rufus' traits 05/06/17, 04:23 pm

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You're gonna need to add more description to that second trait. You need to set some perimeters. For example, what is the max distance which this trait allows one to sense their prey?

3Rufus' traits Empty Re: Rufus' traits 06/06/17, 12:44 pm

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Is 15m to big or too small?

4Rufus' traits Empty Re: Rufus' traits 06/06/17, 04:25 pm

Diana Corvus

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Without any inhuman sensory augmentations, I'm a bit on the fence the way this is worded.

Perhaps you could word it like you can detect the presence of living things around you but you are unable to pinpoint the exact location. It's kind of like in real life where you get a feeling someone or something is there but you don't know where it is.

15m might be a bit much for a D tier trait. I would start off at 5m and grow it from there.

5Rufus' traits Empty Re: Rufus' traits 06/06/17, 04:52 pm

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Changed it. Thanks for the help!

6Rufus' traits Empty Re: Rufus' traits 06/06/17, 05:48 pm

Diana Corvus

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Approved.

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[b]Trait Name:[/b] Nimble Fingers


[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D tier


[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] - 


[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through years of training, the character has obtained deft hand and finger work allowing them a speed and accuracy with fine motor skills a cut above the average person.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Sharpshooter

[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D tier

[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Ranger class

[b]Trait Description:[/b] Years of hunting have improved their senses, allowing them to feel the presence of their prey from distances of 5m.

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