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Character Name: Diana Corvus
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  • Age | Birth Date
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  • Appearance
  • Personality
  • Likes & Dislikes
  • Aspirations
  • History

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Age | Birth Date:
20 | January 11th
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Character Update Requests - Page 2 PAwiYmk F!Kamui from Fire Emblem
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Appearance:
Diana is confident in herself and her abilities and it shows. Her posture is excellent yet sometimes it may make her seem stiff, almost statue-like. She has a habit of cracking the bones in her fingers which tends to leave her knuckles slightly bruised. In fact, she has plenty of scars on her body caused by the wild animals she works with and the battles she has experienced. There isn't any time where she isn't a little banged up with a few scratches and bruises. She is an attractive woman with long wavy platinum blonde hair and piercing red eyes.

Since she does not like being hot, she tends to not wear heavy clothing unless it's very cold. Diana likes to wear practical clothing that is easy to move around in. Occasionally, she will wear her golden armor from Reim for special occasions, but usually she will wear a light fitting set of armor. She doesn't have a favorite color to wear so she usually wears monochromatic shades of black to white or earthy tones such as green and brown. Rarely, you could see her wearing more colorful outfits.

From being born in a predominantly Fanalis household, she has her lower lip pierced though she does not have the piercing in often, the hole is there. Due to her clan practices, she has a large tattoo on her back in the shape of various flowers. The one that stands out the most is the large lotus across her shoulder blades. Despite her occupation, Diana keeps herself well manicured but does not use make up of any kind.
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Diana is confident in herself and her abilities and it shows. Her posture is excellent yet sometimes it may make her seem stiff, almost statue-like. She has a habit of cracking the bones in her fingers which tends to leave her knuckles slightly bruised. In fact, she has plenty of scars on her body caused by the wild animals she works with and the battles she has experienced. There isn't any time where she isn't a little banged up with a few scratches and bruises. She is an attractive woman with long wavy platinum blonde hair and piercing red eyes.

Since she does not like being hot, she tends to not wear heavy clothing unless it's very cold. Diana likes to wear practical clothing that is easy to move around in. Occasionally, she will wear her golden armor from Reim for special occasions, but usually she will wear a light fitting set of armor. She doesn't have a favorite color to wear so she usually wears monochromatic shades of black to white or earthy tones such as green and brown. Rarely, you could see her wearing more colorful outfits.

From being born in a predominantly Fanalis household, she has her lower lip pierced though she does not have the piercing in often, the hole is there. Due to her clan practices, she has a large tattoo on her back in the shape of various flowers. The one that stands out the most is the large lotus across her shoulder blades. Despite her occupation, Diana keeps herself well manicured but does not use make up of any kind.
Personality:
ICE BOX - Overall, she is pretty stoic and hardy. Diana can handle just about everything life can throw at her and she has been that way since she was a young girl. This causes some people to possibly perceive her as scary, cool, or detached from reality. Though her expressions may be stern she is not so void of emotion than she looks.

ZOOLOGIST - Diana loves nature with a passion and is the go to person if you want to learn about wildlife. She carries a few books around with her which she records the behaviors and other information of anything she happens to study. Around animals is one of places that someone could see her open up her rough exterior.

TUNNEL VISION - She tends to be very straight forward and not very flexible when it comes to beliefs, jobs, or goals. This makes her exceptionally good at taking orders and she usually does not hesitate on a job. Being a bounty hunter she often takes it upon herself to apprehend or kill her target but may refuse to kill animals or a friend.

KEEPING COOL - Due to her sharing a lineage with her father, it makes her slightly more sensitive to becoming irritated than others. Diana is able to keep her cool quite well or at least hide it for a short time. She could be exploding inside yet calm on the outside but it is not always the case. If she lets her aggravations snowball she tends to be more vocal and snippy. In more serious cases, she may lash out with sudden violent acts.

DARK HORSE - Diana tends to not talk much and only speaks when she feels it's needed. Though, if the conversation holds importance she will voice her opinions and statements on the matter. Otherwise, she'll simply respond in short sentences and body language. Diana tends to open herself up more towards friends, being much more talkative and expressive.
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ICE BOX - Overall, she is pretty stoic and hardy. Diana can handle just about everything life can throw at her and she has been that way since she was a young girl. This causes some people to possibly perceive her as scary, cool, or detached from reality. Though her expressions may be stern she is not so void of emotion than she looks.

ZOOLOGIST - Diana loves nature with a passion and is the go to person if you want to learn about wildlife. She carries a few books around with her which she records the behaviors and other information of anything she happens to study. Around animals is one of places that someone could see her open up her rough exterior.

TUNNEL VISION - She tends to be very straight forward and not very flexible when it comes to beliefs, jobs, or goals. This makes her exceptionally good at taking orders and she usually does not hesitate on a job. Being a bounty hunter she often takes it upon herself to apprehend or kill her target but may refuse to kill animals or a friend.

KEEPING COOL - Due to her sharing a lineage with her father, it makes her slightly more sensitive to becoming irritated than others. Diana is able to keep her cool quite well or at least hide it for a short time. She could be exploding inside yet calm on the outside but it is not always the case. If she lets her aggravations snowball she tends to be more vocal and snippy. In more serious cases, she may lash out with sudden violent acts.

DARK HORSE - Diana tends to not talk much and only speaks when she feels it's needed. Though, if the conversation holds importance she will voice her opinions and statements on the matter. Otherwise, she'll simply respond in short sentences and body language. Diana tends to open herself up more towards friends, being much more talkative and expressive.
Likes & Dislikes:
WILDLIFE - Diana enjoys nature in general. Mammals, insects, amphibians; you name it and she would love it. She spends most of her time collecting data and spending time with creatures.

EGGS - There is one food that she absolutely loves-- and it's eggs. She is always trying new eggs to see if they're edible or not but her favorite egg to eat is the classic chicken egg. She'll eat anything from bird eggs to fish eggs, they're all good to her.

HEIGHTS - She loves the feeling of being up high and often climbs mountains for this. One day, she dreams of taming a flying creature to be able to experience flight.

AUTHORITY - Diana has a deep respect for any sort of authority that protects the people from criminals. She has a high admiration of royalty as well. So long as these figures lack any corruption, which is rare to see. It is part of the reason she got into bounty hunting.

RAIN - The harder it rains the happier she is. She simply loves to way rain hits her skin and the sounds it makes as it touches the earth. With the addition of thunderstorms, it gets even more exciting.

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LAWBREAKING - The existence of criminal activity disgusts her and she wishes to purge the world from it. Diana strives to bring those who have wronged others to justice no matter how small the crime. Despite this hatred, she has yet to realize that her actions are not always just either.

HEAT - While it's a minor discomfort, she isn't crazy about being hot. If it's not for the sweating, it's the irritation of sunburn. Diana will often shield herself from the sun as it’s rays and her pale skin do not get along well.

ROUGH WATER - Not being a strong swimmer comes with it's downsides as an adventurer. She would avoid swimming in rough waters as much as possible but would if she had to. Despite her strengths, her inexperience with water and the ocean, makes her a very poor swimmer in general.

DECISION MAKING - Being a quite streamlined thinker she does not like making hard, important decisions that require her to go against her way of doing things. However, if it is in line with her way, she could be trusted to make a swift and just decision.

SWEETS - Foods such as candies and pastries definitely aren't her favorite. Unlike other people she doesn't have much of a sweet tooth and prefers bitter and sour flavors.
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WILDLIFE - Diana enjoys nature in general. Mammals, insects, amphibians; you name it and she would love it. She spends most of her time collecting data and spending time with creatures.

EGGS - There is one food that she absolutely loves-- and it's eggs. She is always trying new eggs to see if they're edible or not but her favorite egg to eat is the classic chicken egg. She'll eat anything from bird eggs to fish eggs, they're all good to her.

HEIGHTS - She loves the feeling of being up high and often climbs mountains for this. One day, she dreams of taming a flying creature to be able to experience flight.

AUTHORITY - Diana has a deep respect for any sort of authority that protects the people from criminals. She has a high admiration of royalty as well. So long as these figures lack any corruption, which is rare to see. It is part of the reason she got into bounty hunting.

RAIN - The harder it rains the happier she is. She simply loves to way rain hits her skin and the sounds it makes as it touches the earth. With the addition of thunderstorms, it gets even more exciting.

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LAWBREAKING - The existence of criminal activity disgusts her and she wishes to purge the world from it. Diana strives to bring those who have wronged others to justice no matter how small the crime. Despite this hatred, she has yet to realize that her actions are not always just either.

HEAT - While it's a minor discomfort, she isn't crazy about being hot. If it's not for the sweating, it's the irritation of sunburn. Diana will often shield herself from the sun as it’s rays and her pale skin do not get along well.

ROUGH WATER - Not being a strong swimmer comes with it's downsides as an adventurer. She would avoid swimming in rough waters as much as possible but would if she had to. Despite her strengths, her inexperience with water and the ocean, makes her a very poor swimmer in general.

DECISION MAKING - Being a quite streamlined thinker she does not like making hard, important decisions that require her to go against her way of doing things. However, if it is in line with her way, she could be trusted to make a swift and just decision.

SWEETS - Foods such as candies and pastries definitely aren't her favorite. Unlike other people she doesn't have much of a sweet tooth and prefers bitter and sour flavors.
Aspirations:
ABSOLUTE JUSTICE - Realistically, no one can get rid of all the people who break the law in the world. But that is something that Diana wishes to change in her lifetime. She keeps a tally on how many criminals she has jailed or killed in one of her books. Her line of work calls for the capturing and eradication of criminals. Her dream is to rid the world of all of its evils as this was her masters dream.

As she was traveling about the world after leaving Reim to further her studies and explore; she noticed how there were a lot of non-law abiding citizens and there was a lot of trouble apprehending them. This made her vow herself to the removal of these people of any territories in order to protect the innocent public.

A downside to her goals is that she will apprehend any criminal no matter how small the crime and sometimes condemn them to death if it is ordered. Although she will not kill if it is not needed, she feels time in a jail is worse than dying. However, she tends to go easier on children as she would rather educate and help them, rather than lock them away.

ENCYCLOPEDIA - One dream Diana has is to discover and record data of all the living creatures she can find. She is constantly setting goals for herself in this way and plans to pass on her knowledge to whomever is deemed worthy before she dies. Even though she does not plan on finding everything she hopes that someone that is as passionate as she is may continue her research. So far she has filled up two of her books with information and is working on the third one.
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ABSOLUTE JUSTICE - Realistically, no one can get rid of all the people who break the law in the world. But that is something that Diana wishes to change in her lifetime. She keeps a tally on how many criminals she has jailed or killed in one of her books. Her line of work calls for the capturing and eradication of criminals. Her dream is to rid the world of all of its evils as this was her masters dream.

As she was traveling about the world after leaving Reim to further her studies and explore; she noticed how there were a lot of non-law abiding citizens and there was a lot of trouble apprehending them. This made her vow herself to the removal of these people of any territories in order to protect the innocent public.

A downside to her goals is that she will apprehend any criminal no matter how small the crime and sometimes condemn them to death if it is ordered. Although she will not kill if it is not needed, she feels time in a jail is worse than dying. However, she tends to go easier on children as she would rather educate and help them, rather than lock them away.

ENCYCLOPEDIA - One dream Diana has is to discover and record data of all the living creatures she can find. She is constantly setting goals for herself in this way and plans to pass on her knowledge to whomever is deemed worthy before she dies. Even though she does not plan on finding everything she hopes that someone that is as passionate as she is may continue her research. So far she has filled up two of her books with information and is working on the third one.
History:
Diana and her brother Apollo were born on a chilly day in winter-- on a calm, clear night. She was the first and eldest child of her family, her brother coming only minutes after her. They were a blessing to their parents and their clan. Her mother was a human who worked in a bathhouse and her father was a gladiator of Reim and the leader of a proud clan of Fanalis. Diana’s upbringing was quite average. However, her father had a horrid temper and would take it out on the family. He would throw and destroy various objects, shout, and handle them roughly. She had a twin brother and the youngest was her sister who she spent most of her time with. Despite his outbursts, she was very close with her father.

Being a gladiator, her father wasn't around much during the day and her mother worked long hours at the bathhouse so she was tasked with helping take care of her younger siblings. She would try to educate them the best she could but she was not that educated herself. Unlike her siblings, she wasn't quite interested in watching her father in the coliseum. The sight of her father being injured or the possibility of the worst terrified her. Instead, she was more interested in her studies of plants and animals. She started small, observing the domestic farm animals or pets throughout the empire. With the specialty of their clan, it was easier to begin studying larger, more mysterious creatures with the help of her aunt, Minerva.

It was inevitable that her father would live for long, being a gladiator had a price that it placed upon the soul. All it took was a thumb facing down or the condemning chants of the crowd. The events that ended his life, left a deep scar in their household that made sure their lives were never the same. It was one of the hottest days that Diana could remember. Her father was about to fight one of the top fighters for a sum that would allow their family to live comfortably for the rest of their days. Her mother tried to stop him as earlier that morning, she had spilled a cup of milk. That was a bad omen for her people and it struck terror into her heart. Due to his stubbornness, Marx pushed her concerns aside. Fate had already played it’s hand and there was no turning back.

Diana was excited for her father and decided to attend with the rest of the family for just that day. As the fight went on, it seemed Marx had finally met his match. The man was extremely tall and muscular. However, he looked more like a monster than he did a human. There was a certain aura that the man had about him that made the whole coliseum uneasy. He was announced as Otho the Soul Ripper; a name they would never forget. However, he was a fairly new fighter who had climbed the ranks in record time. His methods of killing were grotesque and lived up to his name. At the sight of the man, her mother grew increasingly more nervous. His fight against their father seemed like it lasted an eternity and it only got the crowd more excited as it drew on.

Marx fought alongside his companion, Cerberus, who was a three headed dog who was said to have guarded the gates of the afterlife. It was even more stubborn and prideful than Marx was. However, he was the first in that battle to fall. They cried as they saw the man rip the dog to pieces right in front of them. His yelps and screams would etch into their minds forever. Otho was a formidable opponent who seemed more and more monstrous as the fight dragged on. Marx, in his grief, lost control of his emotions and unleashed his full strength. It seemed he had the upper hand until they kicked up so much dust and debris that it was too hard to see. The crowd grew quiet and so did the men inside the arena. Diana and her brother ran down to the edge to get a closer look. As the smoke cleared, Otho had the near lifeless body of Marx within his hands.

Diana locked eyes with her father in that moment and her heart sank as he slowly closed them. She called out to him but to no avail. Otho slammed him into the cracked earth and let out a sickening laugh. As the crowd cheered, their family was struck with overwhelming grief. Otho had a chariot brought out and before he climbed into it, he tied Marx’s ankles to a rope attached to the back. After noticing what was going on, Marx tried to lift himself up to undo the ties. However, his body was too weak to do so. With a whip from the reigns, Otho and his chariot dragged Marx around the arena until his body was nothing but mangled pieces that barely held onto each other. The scene lasted for hours and to this day, they never received his body from his Otho, who kept the remains as a trophy.

The days passed and the family, with no source of sustainable income, fell quickly into poverty. They were robbed of all of their belongings and they were forced to move out of the protection of the clan. As their mother grew ill and spiraled into madness, their aunt Minerva helped take care of Diana and her siblings. The clan elders spoke of who would be their next leader and landed their attention on Diana. From a young age, she had shown promise. However, she was too young to lead. Minerva led for a short time before Diana had come of age at thirteen. During this brief time, Diana had many mentors. One in particular was a man who was outside of their clan. He was old and his mind wasn’t quite in the right place. But for a little girl, seeking guidance from anyone who would take her, he welcomed her as a pupil.

He had many names and those of which never really stuck to her. But she remembered his face as clear as day. His philosophies were nonsensical and others ridiculed him. However, in this man, Diana felt pity yet she was inspired by his words. He taught her that there is evil in this world and laws are in place for a reason. Without them, people will turn into monsters that go against fate. That their hearts would turn black and they would never find peace. However, if there were enough of them, the evil would consume the world. Therefore, it was her duty to stop them since it was the goodness in her heart that brought her to his aid. Diana had experienced this evil first hand. Through those who disgraced their ancestors to profit off of her family’s misfortune. She followed him until the she could no longer. Diana had a duty to her clan and had to fulfill it. But she would not forget her master. As his words was what she lived by.

She had a childhood friend by the name of Mars. A boy that was adopted into their clan at a young age. Despite him being human, he completed their trials. Throughout the years, his love and loyalty for Diana was unmatched. He shared her views and followed in her shadow, waiting for her to call upon him. She had left Reim for a time after reaching her 19th birthday and he had begun developing a guild for bounty hunters in her stead. So, no matter where she may go, there will always be allies for her. As small as it is, he began to spread various hunters throughout the world to assist Diana in achieving her goals of a utopia. When she left Reim, there were challenges that she knew she would have to face and she was ready for them.
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Diana and her brother Apollo were born on a chilly day in winter-- on a calm, clear night. She was the first and eldest child of her family, her brother coming only minutes after her. They were a blessing to their parents and their clan. Her mother was a human who worked in a bathhouse and her father was a gladiator of Reim and the leader of a proud clan of Fanalis. Diana’s upbringing was quite average. However, her father had a horrid temper and would take it out on the family. He would throw and destroy various objects, shout, and handle them roughly. She had a twin brother and the youngest was her sister who she spent most of her time with. Despite his outbursts, she was very close with her father.

Being a gladiator, her father wasn't around much during the day and her mother worked long hours at the bathhouse so she was tasked with helping take care of her younger siblings. She would try to educate them the best she could but she was not that educated herself. Unlike her siblings, she wasn't quite interested in watching her father in the coliseum. The sight of her father being injured or the possibility of the worst terrified her. Instead, she was more interested in her studies of plants and animals. She started small, observing the domestic farm animals or pets throughout the empire. With the specialty of their clan, it was easier to begin studying larger, more mysterious creatures with the help of her aunt, Minerva.

It was inevitable that her father would live for long, being a gladiator had a price that it placed upon the soul. All it took was a thumb facing down or the condemning chants of the crowd. The events that ended his life, left a deep scar in their household that made sure their lives were never the same. It was one of the hottest days that Diana could remember. Her father was about to fight one of the top fighters for a sum that would allow their family to live comfortably for the rest of their days. Her mother tried to stop him as earlier that morning, she had spilled a cup of milk. That was a bad omen for her people and it struck terror into her heart. Due to his stubbornness, Marx pushed her concerns aside. Fate had already played it’s hand and there was no turning back.

Diana was excited for her father and decided to attend with the rest of the family for just that day. As the fight went on, it seemed Marx had finally met his match. The man was extremely tall and muscular. However, he looked more like a monster than he did a human. There was a certain aura that the man had about him that made the whole coliseum uneasy. He was announced as Otho the Soul Ripper; a name they would never forget. However, he was a fairly new fighter who had climbed the ranks in record time. His methods of killing were grotesque and lived up to his name. At the sight of the man, her mother grew increasingly more nervous. His fight against their father seemed like it lasted an eternity and it only got the crowd more excited as it drew on.

Marx fought alongside his companion, Cerberus, who was a three headed dog who was said to have guarded the gates of the afterlife. It was even more stubborn and prideful than Marx was. However, he was the first in that battle to fall. They cried as they saw the man rip the dog to pieces right in front of them. His yelps and screams would etch into their minds forever. Otho was a formidable opponent who seemed more and more monstrous as the fight dragged on. Marx, in his grief, lost control of his emotions and unleashed his full strength. It seemed he had the upper hand until they kicked up so much dust and debris that it was too hard to see. The crowd grew quiet and so did the men inside the arena. Diana and her brother ran down to the edge to get a closer look. As the smoke cleared, Otho had the near lifeless body of Marx within his hands.

Diana locked eyes with her father in that moment and her heart sank as he slowly closed them. She called out to him but to no avail. Otho slammed him into the cracked earth and let out a sickening laugh. As the crowd cheered, their family was struck with overwhelming grief. Otho had a chariot brought out and before he climbed into it, he tied Marx’s ankles to a rope attached to the back. After noticing what was going on, Marx tried to lift himself up to undo the ties. However, his body was too weak to do so. With a whip from the reigns, Otho and his chariot dragged Marx around the arena until his body was nothing but mangled pieces that barely held onto each other. The scene lasted for hours and to this day, they never received his body from his Otho, who kept the remains as a trophy.

The days passed and the family, with no source of sustainable income, fell quickly into poverty. They were robbed of all of their belongings and they were forced to move out of the protection of the clan. As their mother grew ill and spiraled into madness, their aunt Minerva helped take care of Diana and her siblings. The clan elders spoke of who would be their next leader and landed their attention on Diana. From a young age, she had shown promise. However, she was too young to lead. Minerva led for a short time before Diana had come of age at thirteen. During this brief time, Diana had many mentors. One in particular was a man who was outside of their clan. He was old and his mind wasn’t quite in the right place. But for a little girl, seeking guidance from anyone who would take her, he welcomed her as a pupil.

He had many names and those of which never really stuck to her. But she remembered his face as clear as day. His philosophies were nonsensical and others ridiculed him. However, in this man, Diana felt pity yet she was inspired by his words. He taught her that there is evil in this world and laws are in place for a reason. Without them, people will turn into monsters that go against fate. That their hearts would turn black and they would never find peace. However, if there were enough of them, the evil would consume the world. Therefore, it was her duty to stop them since it was the goodness in her heart that brought her to his aid. Diana had experienced this evil first hand. Through those who disgraced their ancestors to profit off of her family’s misfortune. She followed him until the she could no longer. Diana had a duty to her clan and had to fulfill it. But she would not forget her master. As his words was what she lived by.

She had a childhood friend by the name of Mars. A boy that was adopted into their clan at a young age. Despite him being human, he completed their trials. Throughout the years, his love and loyalty for Diana was unmatched. He shared her views and followed in her shadow, waiting for her to call upon him. She had left Reim for a time after reaching her 19th birthday and he had begun developing a guild for bounty hunters in her stead. So, no matter where she may go, there will always be allies for her. As small as it is, he began to spread various hunters throughout the world to assist Diana in achieving her goals of a utopia. When she left Reim, there were challenges that she knew she would have to face and she was ready for them.


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Character Name: Hector
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Character Name: Amatus Laertes
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  • [ Heights: ]
    Something about not having anything below him is too scary of a thought for the Fanalis. Stairs, cliffs, just looking out windows can make Amatus feel queasy. Whenever he thinks of heights, he imagines himself falling from some high place and becoming a pink splat on the land far below. Even stories about falling makes him feel uncomfortable.
  • [ Yan: ]
    While Amatus isn’t outright scared of his mother, he’s scared of why she disappeared and what happened to her. While he wants to find her, he doesn’t want to if it means finding a body. And even if he did find the human, he’s not all too sure if he wants to find out why she abandoned her family or to see her dead.
  • [ The Letter: ]
    It’s true that Amatus wants to discover the contents of the mysterious letter his mother wrote to him before she disappeared, but at the same time he’s scared of it. It scared his gentle father, and as with the reason why Yan disappeared, Amatus can’t know for sure if it would be beneficial if he did read the letter. Its mystery is both drawing and scary.

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[list][*][b][ Heights: ][/b]
Something about not having anything below him is too scary of a thought for the Fanalis. Stairs, cliffs, just looking out windows can make Amatus feel queasy. Whenever he thinks of heights, he imagines himself falling from some high place and becoming a pink splat on the land far below. Even stories about falling makes him feel uncomfortable.
[*][b][ Yan: ][/b]
While Amatus isn’t outright scared of his mother, he’s scared of why she disappeared and what happened to her. While he wants to find her, he doesn’t want to if it means finding a body. And even if he did find the human, he’s not all too sure if he wants to find out why she abandoned her family or to see her dead.
[*][b][ The Letter: ][/b]
It’s true that Amatus wants to discover the contents of the mysterious letter his mother wrote to him before she disappeared, but at the same time he’s scared of it. It scared his gentle father, and as with the reason why Yan disappeared, Amatus can’t know for sure if it would be beneficial if he did read the letter. Its mystery is both drawing and scary.[/list]

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Face-Claim: [ Touken Ranbu ] [ Souza Samonji ]
Hair Color: [ Pink ]
Eye Color: [ Red ]
Height: [ 195 cm ] [ (6’5 ft) ]
Weight: [ 105 kg ] [ (231 lbs) ]
Appearance:
Amatus is a man of rather tall stature, and he has quite the muscular body that he likes to show off. Like the rest of his race, Amatus has the long and unique Fanalis eyelashes and red eyes. However, they're somewhat mismatched. One eye is a darker shade of red while the other is much lighter in color.  Unlike other Fanalis, Amatus has pink hair that’s long enough to nearly reach his hips. Amatus usually keeps his hair tied back in a ponytail, with a small braid woven into the tail along with a bang-like fringe that covers a part of the left side of his face. Many people describe him as handsome due to his well-sculptured body and the care he puts into his appearance.
If one were to undress Amatus, they would find soft skin, marred only by faint scars along with a black-inked tattoo. The tattoo is a profile view of a butterfly, with language-like markings, an eye and a skull within the tattoo of the butterfly. The tattoo is on his left pectoral, heading up his neck and facing his midsection.

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As for clothes, he mostly wears attire that matches a gladiator of Reim, along with some hints of his mother’s homeland. Amatus wears the regular Reim armor of a steel cuirass protecting his torso, shoulder plates, a metal skirt, gold ankle cuffs, and geta-esq sandals. He also wears a white obi-like sash, and a trio of blue beads: two worn around his neck and the other wrapped around his left hand. Like other Fanalis, Amatus has a silver-stud piercing under his lower lip, and he has a single, peach-colored tassel earring on his left ear that’s hidden by his hair.
When it comes to his body language, Amatus almost always carries himself with a sense of swagger and confidence. It’s easy to tell that he’s proud of himself, and there’s an air of humor around him. While one can say that he walks with a certain arrogance with him, others say that Amatus is a clear extrovert who likes to exert himself into whatever situation he’s in.
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[b]Face-Claim:[/b] [ Touken Ranbu ] [ Souza Samonji ]
[b]Hair Color:[/b] [ Pink ]
[b]Eye Color:[/b] [ Red ]
[b]Height:[/b] [ 195 cm ] [ (6’5 ft) ]
[b]Weight:[/b] [ 105 kg ] [ (231 lbs) ]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
Amatus is a man of rather tall stature, and he has quite the muscular body that he likes to show off. Like the rest of his race, Amatus has the long and unique Fanalis eyelashes and red eyes. However, they're somewhat mismatched. One eye is a darker shade of red while the other is much lighter in color.  Unlike other Fanalis, Amatus has pink hair that’s long enough to nearly reach his hips. Amatus usually keeps his hair tied back in a ponytail, with a small braid woven into the tail along with a bang-like fringe that covers a part of the left side of his face. Many people describe him as handsome due to his well-sculptured body and the care he puts into his appearance.
If one were to undress Amatus, they would find soft skin, marred only by faint scars along with a black-inked tattoo. The tattoo is of a profile view of a butterfly, with language-like markings, an eye and a skull within the tattoo of the butterfly. The tattoo is on his left pectoral, heading up his neck and facing his midsection.

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As for clothes, he mostly wears attire that matches a gladiator of Reim, along with some hints of his mother’s homeland. Amatus wears the regular Reim armor of a steel cuirass protecting his torso, shoulder plates, a metal skirt, gold ankle cuffs, and geta-esq sandals. He also wears a white obi-like sash, and a trio of blue beads: two worn around his neck and the other wrapped around his left hand. Like other Fanalis, Amatus has a silver-stud piercing under his lower lip, and he has a single, peach-colored tassel earring on his left ear that’s hidden by his hair.
When it comes to his body language, Amatus almost always carries himself with a sense of swagger and confidence. It’s easy to tell that he’s proud of himself, and there’s an air of humor around him. While one can say that he walks with a certain arrogance with him, others say that Amatus is a clear extrovert who likes to exert himself into whatever situation he’s in.

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History

  • [ The Family ]
    Amatus was born to a pair of loving but troubled parents: a Human woman by the name of Yan and a Fanalis man named Leo. Yan was originally from Kou, one of the middle daughters of a prosperous family. Leo was a gladiator of the Riem coliseum who fought to support his family.
    Yan was nothing more than a pawn by her father, sent to Riem in order to marry a businessman and gain his money for her own family. In the new country, she was the enemy for her ties to Kou and simply a girl by her fiance. She was trapped between a rock and a hard place; the man she was to marry abused her for his own drunkard satisfaction, but she couldn't leave and risk the wrath of her family in Kou. It was a morose life, and Yan had nightly nightmares that tormented her. Eventually, the snapping moment came and Yan disappeared from the household and her family's repercussions. They would not hear of her for years to come. Unfortunately for Yan, her life would not improve for she would need to take on jobs to keep herself afloat.
    Meanwhile, Leo came from a poor family with parents with even poorer morals. They cared not for their brood of children, and being the oldest Leo was stuck with taking care of them. Days with their parents out of the house were better than those when the pair were home. Unsurprisingly, during Leo’s puberty, the parents took off to find a “better life without their brats”. The children, who at that point mostly saw their eldest brother as some sort of father, didn’t mind so much. It meant fewer problems, but it also meant more work for Leo. He became a gladiator when he was old enough, and it wasn't hard for the Fanalis to win due to his heritage. There were some close matches, but over the years he managed to keep his head and keep his family afloat. As his siblings aged, they all begun to leave the nest and head in their separate directions to find their way, save but for his youngest sister, Carina.
    Yan and Leo's meeting was one of coincidence, and for Amatus, luck. They met in a bar where Yan was working as a barista, but it was only after Amatus saved her from a drunkard did they begin to talk. Afterwards, they would find themselves running into each other time and time again, and eventually, Yan found herself falling for the Fanalis. Leo would never find out about the woman's past, but he knew of her haunted mind, however it wouldn't stop him from marrying her. It wasn't long after until Yan became pregnant with their first and final child. Long before he was due, the parents had decided on which name they would use depending on the name of their child: Amatus Haku if he was a boy, or just Matrona if she was a girl.
  • [ The Early Years ]
    Amatus was considered a blessing to the both of his parents; his birth brought untold joy to Yan and Leo, and they couldn’t have been happier with the jubilant child. But, it wouldn’t last long for the new mother. Her already frail mind became worse after the birth, and despite her attempts to remain positive, the dark thoughts in her mind continued to spiral worse and worse. With each passing year, she seemed to crack further under stress and trauma. She became paranoid, terrified for her family and for herself. Amatus’ 9th summer was beginning to pass when Yan disappeared, leaving behind all of her possessions and two letters. Leo struggled with coping afterward, and the only things that kept him grounded to the earth were his son. After reading the letter addressed to him, Leo locked both away under lock and key, forbidding his son from reading the second letter that was written specifically to Yan’s child.
  • [ The Rest ]
    Amatus struggled for a long time after his mother disappeared; it impacted him deeply, and even now he still remembers almost everything about Yan. From the small details of her face to the crinkle of her eyes and the morose smile she always wore. His aunt, Carina, became more frequent in his life, taking care of him and raising him when Leo was supporting his now smaller family. Carina was a loving aunt who took good care of Amatus while never replacing his mother. Despite her busy work as a blacksmith within the town, she babied the Halfling and did her best to raise him when Leo was busy. One of the things that she had handed down to the boy was the art of smithing, something that Amatus still remembers.
    Due to the absence of his mother in his life, Amatus grew to love and idolize his father. He yearned for his attention and approval, and Amatus wanted to become a gladiator like him. But the want to discover what happened to Yan, to see if she really did abanon him, never left. For years, the Halfling would train out of sight of his family so he could become stronger, not only so he could find his mother but so he could become a fighter who rivaled even his father.

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[list][*][ The Family ]
Amatus was born to a pair of loving but troubled parents: a Human woman by the name of Yan and a Fanalis man named Leo. Yan was originally from Kou, one of the middle daughters of a prosperous family. Leo was a gladiator of the Riem coliseum who fought to support his family.
Yan was nothing more than a pawn by her father, sent to Riem in order to marry a businessman and gain his money for her own family. In the new country, she was the enemy for her ties to Kou and simply a girl by her fiance. She was trapped between a rock and a hard place; the man she was to marry abused her for his own drunkard satisfaction, but she couldn't leave and risk the wrath of her family in Kou. It was a morose life, and Yan had nightly nightmares that tormented her. Eventually, the snapping moment came and Yan disappeared from the household and her family's repercussions. They would not hear of her for years to come. Unfortunately for Yan, her life would not improve for she would need to take on jobs to keep herself afloat.
Meanwhile, Leo came from a poor family with parents with even poorer morals. They cared not for their brood of children, and being the oldest Leo was stuck with taking care of them. Days with their parents out of the house were better than those when the pair were home. Unsurprisingly, during Leo’s puberty, the parents took off to find a “better life without their brats”. The children, who at that point mostly saw their eldest brother as some sort of father, didn’t mind so much. It meant fewer problems, but it also meant more work for Leo. He became a gladiator when he was old enough, and it wasn't hard for the Fanalis to win due to his heritage. There were some close matches, but over the years he managed to keep his head and keep his family afloat. As his siblings aged, they all begun to leave the nest and head in their separate directions to find their way, save but for his youngest sister, Carina.
Yan and Leo's meeting was one of coincidence, and for Amatus, luck. They met in a bar where Yan was working as a barista, but it was only after Amatus saved her from a drunkard did they begin to talk. Afterwards, they would find themselves running into each other time and time again, and eventually, Yan found herself falling for the Fanalis. Leo would never find out about the woman's past, but he knew of her haunted mind, however it wouldn't stop him from marrying her. It wasn't long after until Yan became pregnant with their first and final child. Long before he was due, the parents had decided on which name they would use depending on the name of their child: Amatus Haku if he was a boy, or just Matrona if she was a girl.
[*][ The Early Years ]
Amatus was considered a blessing to the both of his parents; his birth brought untold joy to Yan and Leo, and they couldn’t have been happier with the jubilant child. But, it wouldn’t last long for the new mother. Her already frail mind became worse after the birth, and despite her attempts to remain positive, the dark thoughts in her mind continued to spiral worse and worse. With each passing year, she seemed to crack further under stress and trauma. She became paranoid, terrified for her family and for herself. Amatus’ 9th summer was beginning to pass when Yan disappeared, leaving behind all of her possessions and two letters. Leo struggled with coping afterwards, and the only things that kept him grounded to the earth was his son. After reading the letter addressed to him, Leo locked both away under lock and key, forbidding his son from reading the second letter that was written specifically to Yan’s child.
[*][ The Rest ]
Amatus struggled for a long time after his mother disappeared; it impacted him deeply, and even now he still remembers almost everything about Yan. From the small details of her face to the crinkle of her eyes and the morose smile she always wore. His aunt, Carina, became more frequent in his life, taking care of him and raising him when Leo was supporting his now smaller family. Carina was a loving aunt who took good care of Amatus while never replacing his mother. Despite her busy work as a blacksmith within the town, she babied the Halfling and did her best to raise him when Leo was busy. One of the things that she had handed down to the boy was the art of smithing, something that Amatus still remembers.
Due to the absence of his mother in his life, Amatus grew to love and idolize his father. He yearned for his attention and approval, and Amatus wanted to become a gladiator like him. But the want to discover what happened to Yan, to see if she really did abanon him, never left. For years, the Halfling would train out of sight of his family so he could become stronger, not only so he could find his mother but so he could become a fighter who rivaled even his father.
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Sesshomaru

Sesshomaru
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Character Name: Sesshomaru
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History:
Unlike most of his people, the Fanalis, Sesshomaru was lucky enough to be spared the life of a slave, he did not have to bear that hardship unlike many others. Instead Sesshomaru grew up and a small, nomadic group of close to ten Fanalis which varied throughout their travels across various kingdoms. The nomadic group thought it was safer for them to be in numbers and decided it was best not to stay in one location for long. Since they were often in wild or lawless lands Hector and the other children quickly learned how to defend themselves and the group which was about when Hector began to discover his love for combat and fighting.

Growing up with a group of Fanalis Sesshomaru had heard countless tales about the great warriors of the Fanalis tribe. He heard how they had once been great warriors and hunters that had some of the greatest physical strength in the world. The more he heard about his people and ancestors the more he wanted to hear about them. Eventually he began to realize that the stories only ever to reach back to a certain point and no further, that and that all of the stories took place in this part of the world and not of the Dark Continent where he was told the Fana came from. None of the elders in the group could answers his questions about the origins of the Fanalis or why their strength was on a whole other level from the others races, including the colossal ice giants known as the Imuchukk. With this unknown history of the Fanalis nawing away at his mind he had decided that he was going to travel the world trying to find out what ever he can on the true history of the Fanalis.

So once he turned eighteen he had left his little tribe on his own adventure so that he can become strong while trying to find out about his tribe. He ended up moving to Reim and became a citizen there so that he could find more Fanalis since that was the most common place for them.
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[b]History:[/b]
Unlike most of his people, the Fanalis, Sesshomaru was lucky enough to be spared the life of a slave, he did not have to bear that hardship unlike many others. Instead Sesshomaru grew up and a small, nomadic group of close to ten Fanalis which varied throughout their travels across various kingdoms. The nomadic group thought it was safer for them to be in numbers and decided it was best not to stay in one location for long. Since they were often in wild or lawless lands Hector and the other children quickly learned how to defend themselves and the group which was about when Hector began to discover his love for combat and fighting.

Growing up with a group of Fanalis Sesshomaru had heard countless tales about the great warriors of the Fanalis tribe. He heard how they had once been great warriors and hunters that had some of the greatest physical strength in the world. The more he heard about his people and ancestors the more he wanted to hear about them. Eventually he began to realize that the stories only ever to reach back to a certain point and no further, that and that all of the stories took place in this part of the world and not of the Dark Continent where he was told the Fana came from. None of the elders in the group could answers his questions about the origins of the Fanalis or why their strength was on a whole other level from the others races, including the colossal ice giants known as the Imuchukk. With this unknown history of the Fanalis nawing away at his mind he had decided that he was going to travel the world trying to find out what ever he can on the true history of the Fanalis.

So once he turned eighteen he had left his little tribe on his own adventure so that he can become strong while trying to find out about his tribe. He ended up moving to Reim and became a citizen there so that he could find more Fanalis since that was the most common place for them.

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Aspiration: Growing up with a group of Fanalis Sesshomaru had heard countless tales about the great warriors of the Fanalis tribe. He heard how they had once been great warriors and hunters that had some of the greatest physical strength in the world. The more he heard about his people and ancestors the more he wanted to hear about them. Eventually he began to realize that the stories only ever to reach back to a certain point and no further, that and that all of the stories took place in this part of the world and not of the Dark Continent where he was told the Fana came from. None of the elders in the group could answers his questions about the origins of the Fanalis or why their strength was on a whole other level from the others races, including the colossal ice giants known as the Imuchukk. With this unknown history of the Fanalis nawing away at his mind he had decided that he was going to travel the world trying to find out what ever he can on the true history of the Fanalis.
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Growing up with a group of Fanalis Sesshomaru had heard countless tales about the great warriors of the Fanalis tribe. He heard how they had once been great warriors and hunters that had some of the greatest physical strength in the world. The more he heard about his people and ancestors the more he wanted to hear about them. Eventually he began to realize that the stories only ever to reach back to a certain point and no further, that and that all of the stories took place in this part of the world and not of the Dark Continent where he was told the Fana came from. None of the elders in the group could answers his questions about the origins of the Fanalis or why their strength was on a whole other level from the others races, including the colossal ice giants known as the Imuchukk. With this unknown history of the Fanalis nawing away at his mind he had decided that he was going to travel the world trying to find out what ever he can on the true history of the Fanalis.

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Rain

Rain
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C-Tier
Character Name: Rain Eveque
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C-Tier [ veteran ]

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Sexuality
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Asexual
I originally put Pansexual, but after thinking over Rain's character, I decided to change. He doesn't really show any interest in others other than to cause him pain and he's not a masochist, just desperate to feel something.

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Faceclaim
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[i]inazuma eleven,[/i] Kirino Ranmaru

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Hair color
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Pink

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Eye color
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Teal

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Height
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one hundred sixty centimeters [ sixty-three inches ]
Um, so yeah - I miscalculated some things. I never intended him to be 5'7/5'6 lol.

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Weight
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fifty kilograms [ one hundred ten pounds ]
Again, a miscalculation - I'm bad at math, okay >.< In this instance I had relied on his height to determine his weight, but since I got the conversions wrong... haha...

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Appearance
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[*][ red ] It is something of a red, anyway. Perhaps not so red, now that he thinks about it. Quite pink, if he is being completely honest. Pink isn't a very fanalis-y color. His hair disappoints him in that manner. But at least pink is but a saturated version of red. Whereas his teal eyes don't even match with the typical blood red fanalis eyes.

[*][ cute ] One adjective can describe his wardrobe (and him overall) - cute. He purposefully dresses cute to attract the attention and eyes of others. He has been known to wear clothing normally fit for younger girls - his small size forces him to wear clothing fit for younger children - because of how cute he looks in them. This does often create confusion. Not only is his gender mistaken, so is his age. He doesn't particularly mind though.

[*][ soft ] Most people find it almost chilling. His manner of speech - soft yet somehow it conveys subtle threats nicely. It isn't his original voice though. He purposefully softens and raises it, adding a feminine touch. To be fair, his real voice sounds feminine as well, but it does not possess the childish flair which he usually sprinkles on it. It is the tone of a more mature young woman, although strangely enough, softening and raising the pitch makes it sounds more androgynous and less feminine? His voice is weird, he decided early on.[/list]

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Rukh Alignment
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Black
Like, I'm not even sure why I made it white in the first place. His behavior and thoughts definitely hint at black rukh. I mean, so does his app lol. Aka, he is constantly tempting death - but he kinda has this mentality where he refuses to die? He seems to have this obsession with not dying honestly.

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Name: Julius Virgil
Country Affiliation: Wanderer
Race: Human
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Age + Birthdate: 39, April 15th
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Sexual Pirate
Personality: Julius is a greedy and ambitious man. He would rather further his own goals then further the one’s of others. It is why he hates being stuck as an underling. If there’s something that he wants, he will put the blood and sweat into it and eventually claim his reward. As outright awful as pirate’s are said to be, Virgil isn’t a shoot first, think second kind of man. He will play his cards and will minimize conflict when he can, diplomacy is a virtue at times. Although his actions shoot him down as dumb and dramatic at times, the pirate has a mind that can be compared to a genius or military strategist. What makes him even smarter is that he won’t tell you that.

In day to day life, Julius can be described as a kind-hearted working man. If one were to walk up in order to talk with him, he’d probably reply with a smile. Being angry and/or being an asshole to random people just isn’t in his best interests. Although sarcasm and snarky remarks are in his dictionary at times, he comes off as a genuinely sympathetic gentleman. However, don’t take the face-value of him and expect it makes him some kind of white knight. He’s not afraid to be a feared, and sure as hell isn’t afraid to commit crimes. When he does, he’s not an idiot about it like most thugs. It’s why he’s superior to the riff raff you see in the streets and the slums.
Likes:
Oranges - Julius has developed an addiction of sorts to oranges. They were his solstice at the sea and became somewhat of a drug to him over the years of constantly eating them.

The Ocean - Sailing the great tides for so many years has made him grow fond of the salty waters that cover the Earth. He always feels more comfortable when he’s on the ocean rather than on land.

Reading - Surprising but true.

Family and Friends - Julius loves having both friends and family. It always warms his heart to see someone he cares about.

Fire - He has some kind of strange addiction to fire, unexplanatory.

Dislikes:
Being On Fire - This is true.

Riding Atop Animals - He’s never liked the feeling of some living creature under his backside.

Being Ordered Around - He enjoys being the leader more than thrown around like a flower sack.

Aspirations: Neptune - Julius aspires to be a mighty king, but not just any kind of king, a king who owns the grand expanse that is the ocean. He wishes to own it as if it were a marvel plot of land. It is well known throughout the world that he who controls the trade within the sea, controls the world. So he will hold out his large crusty hands and have the world eat from his palms!
Phobias/fears: Long Nights - Julius is absolutely mortified by his dreams. People that he loves or loved being skinned alive, people Julius has killed in the past coming back in order to scream his accursed name, and his face being pressed down into the coals of a fire are just some examples. His visions plague his mind; it is enough to the point to drive any normal man mad. His body calls for rest, yet his mind resents it. He’s stayed up periods as long as 48 hours just to avoid his inevitable slumber. Sometimes, alcohol and oranges smooth things over..
Face-Claim: Henry Heartgold - Sharandula
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 213 cm
Weight: 112 Kg
Appearance: Julius is a mammoth in terms of regular men. His extraordinarily large muscles look like they could tear a rock in half if they had wanted to. Amongst a crowd of mature men and women, you could pick him out like a giant in human’s clothing. His body is absolutely covered in different types of patching for wounds, and scars that will never heal. His face is usually covered in a thick black scruff as he neglects shaving at times. A large healed scar crosses over his nose and spans from cheek to cheek. He dresses himself within the normal standard of a sailor, a plain white cotton shirt and brown baggy pants.
Rukh Alignment: White/Conflicting
Special Features: Scars litter Julius’ body, without some of his clothes on, he looks like a monster. The pirate also has no sense of pain and has somewhat of an immunity to drugs. His left eye is made of glass and contains the ashes of Gengis.
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History:
Julius Virgil was born a bastard to a royal family within Reim. His mother was a whore who slept with a washed-up prince. She had the boy under a bridge that was almost never crossed in the middle of bandit-infested woods. She would never be able to tell who’s son she had as she had died shortly after birth. Noone being around to help her through the process of giving birth to a child, she fell to sleep and did not wake up.

The boy was without food or water for few days before the bridge was finally crossed. Some miracle happened as white rukh guided an old salty sailor named, “Gengis Virgil,” to Julius. Although reluctant at first, Gengis would take the child in and claim him as his own. He was just short of retiring anyway and had no person to continue his legacy, so he let fate be his guide.

For seventeen years, Gengis raised Julius to be one of his own. Julius was taught discipline and responsibility. The old sailor had also taught the orphan everything he knew: how to talk, how to wield a sword, and how to sail. The boy was curious however, and took everything a step further than need be. Julius was incredibly smart for his time and went further. He taught himself how to read and it quickly became a passtime for him. His hobby led to him teaching Gengis as well. He learned so much within the words written on pages. He quickly learned a little bit of everything and it formed who he is, and was the baseline for who he wanted to become. All of this learning didn’t stop him from doing hard labor although; he grew up to be very athletic and strong. The old man worked him hard.

Julius had enlisted in the military at the age of seventeen. He was put down by a recruiter as a sailor, same as Gengis despite having no sailorship experience. He was in bootcamp when he was given a letter. It was from Gengis and stated that he was very sick and was on the brink of death. He requested leave and went straight home. Seven days of sitting next to his old man’s bed, clutching his hand, Julius would keep him company until his inevitable passing.

Julius used the wood-ax that he’s been using for years to chop the firewood for the burial. Gengis was cremated into ashes. Julius had slowly become determined to carry on the Virgil legacy to a higher standard.

Over the years, Julius was promoted multiple times for taking command when commanders had fallen in battle. Some were won in the hands of Julius alone, yet his records were never kept. Julius slowly developed a fault within his stars. In his sleep, nightmares of those he’d killed began to plague his mind. He reported the dreams to his officers a couple weeks after experiencing the first. He was shipped to an asylum shortly after. Inside of it, Julius was left in solitude for days on end. It slowly drove him mad to the point of him knocking down the steel door with pure brute strength in order to gain some sort of social contact.

It took eight men to restrain his hulking form while another four had to tie him down. He was sometimes sedated with drugs, but it only made things so much worse. His outbursts continued to the point where when he managed to free himself, he would kill. The doctors quickly became scared of treating him and diagnosed his illness as incurable. The reports were sent to his officers in command and he was pronounced KIA.

He was a marvelous test subject to the doctors in the asylum. It went from Julius trying to hurt others to Julius trying to run away. They stopped trying to drug him as his body was not accepting pain-killers or sedatives. They carved him to pieces and he still holds the scars to present day. He held it together by will alone.

Julius overheard a conversation in the hall outside of his confinement that he was to be soon put to death. Pictures of Gengis flashed in his head and he came back to his senses. He remembered who he wanted to be and what he wanted to do. He used this new-found hope in order to devise an escape.

The doctors never switched Julius’ bandages or chains, so he used his finger nails to slowly etch away at the steel. He did it until the tips of his fingers bled. About a quarter of a slice through one of the links was all he needed to break the wretched chains to pieces. He made it out in the night and without a second trace, he was gone.

The pirate lived on. He used all of his acquired skills and knowledge to aspire a life plan. A plan that was fueled by newly found hope and vengeance. The dreams and the scars would remain though, but he would not fall to his knees for anyone ever again.

Role-Play Sample:
The pirate couldn't help but cover his mouth with his hand and stifle a small chuckle at what the Balbadd guard had told him. They were going to fine him for tying his boat to a wooden post on their docks. The funny thing was that the only boat that was currently in his possession was a dinghy, the dock was also completely abandoned which added a little more into his laughter.
"Wait, wait, let me get this straight," he replied, continuing to giggle like a fool between breaths, "you're going to fine me for tying my ship; that ship," he continued, weakly pointing in the direction of his parked vessel, "to the empty docking station?" In reality, he'd just wanted to slide out of this debt and maybe embarrass the stuck up guards. If they hadn't want anyone to park there in the first place, maybe they shoulda done a better job guarding it.



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Amaya

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Julius Vergil:

Oranges - You mean "a liking for," not "a likeness to"

History - As grisly as getting tortured and recovering from the brink of death can be, there are some pretty glaring issues here.

1. You have zero medical knowledge. You wouldn't have been able to prevent yourself from bleeding out from a severe wound.

2. Your heart was punctured. It would take you roughly 1 minute to die from blood loss, at which point you would be dead. You wouldn't have been able to murder a group of people while unconscious, and then return to life and heal a wound you have no ability to even assess.

You're going to need to re-write this portion of your history so that is in line with what your character understands and can perform.


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38Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 05/01/18, 10:27 pm

Ariel

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A-a-approved!
Make sure you change your own vault.


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39Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 15/02/18, 03:25 pm

So this may be a little late, but I did all the necessary changes.

" http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8570p25-character-update-requests#50099 "

TLDCorrect: No magic mirror gengis, no heart stabby, better use of grammar, easier to stroll through and read, makes more sense.


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40Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 15/02/18, 05:01 pm

Ariel

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A p p r o v e d ~


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41Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 09/04/18, 04:26 am

Nahvi

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Character Name: Nahvi Elumine Delos Corvus
Changes: I'm changing the following

[1] Nahvi's keeping her name however she is going under an alias due to plot reasons and so i'm changing her displayable name to Lunera. However those who know Nahvi can call her by that name.

[2]Her Rukh Alignment was changed to black. The cause for her Descent into Depravity is caused by abandonment, or the feeling of being abandoned.

[3] She has been exiled from the Corvus family by Diana and is currently on the run thanks to the mercy she was shown. So just editing that part into the history.


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42Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 09/04/18, 03:36 pm

Ariel

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Please use the template with the exact information filled out.


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43Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 11/05/18, 02:15 pm

Character Name: Xion Zio Chi
Changes:

  • Appearance
    Age
    Face Claim X

Spoiler:
Xion appears to be a tanned-skinned youth with white hair like silver and with dark ageless eyes.  He wears the vestments of a priest and a golden cross around his neck. His vestment is a type of a red holy shroud and he wore a red stole over his cassock. He has an pretty, boyish face showing that he has yet to have aged past twenty years of age. He wears a jinbaori style haori with Christianity crosses decorated on them. He wears a tradition umanori hakama with Shin guards which had cloth straps that were used to tie the Shin guards to the lower leg. He wears a collar shirt underneath his Kimono and a Cravat tied around his collar
Code:
23 years old

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44Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 12/05/18, 11:12 am

Edits done


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45Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 11/09/18, 03:21 pm

Character Name: New Sylvia
Changes: I changed the layout and spelling it's the same character, but I just reworded it, because I did the first one two years ago and just came back today.
Old App First Sylvia

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46Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 11/09/18, 08:19 pm

Merrze

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Make sure to include your roleplay sample in the edited template and then you're good to add it to your vault.


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47Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 11/09/18, 10:00 pm

Done, but I wanted this to be my main app?


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48Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 23/09/18, 12:02 pm

Character Name: Kara Satel Bane
Changes:
Spoiler:
Face Claim to Kallen from Code Geass using potion i got yesterday.
Code:
(Face Claim to Kallen from Code Geass, using potion i got yesterday)


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49Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 23/09/18, 12:49 pm

Merrze

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Approved!


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50Character Update Requests - Page 2 Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 05/10/18, 07:42 pm

Character Name: Amatus Laertes
Changes:
image:
Image:
Code:
[img]https://78.media.tumblr.com/c75c034123d9c02bd537294ae2b31dbd/tumblr_p288qi6j6m1wl3hajo1_500.png[/img]

race:
Race: Crystal Kin (Dungeon Beast)
Code:
[b]Race:[/b] [ Crystal Kin ] [ Dungeon Beast ]

Sexuality:
Sexuality: Bisexual
Code:
[b]Sexuality:[/b] [ Bisexual ]

face claim:
Changing my face claim to Padparadscha from Houseki no Kuni (or Land of the Lustrous) because of the Dungeon Beast Transformation. He received it from Merr's Grand Auction.
Code:
[b]Face Claim:[/b] [ Padparadscha ] [ Houseki no Kuni ]

Eye & Hair Color:
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Red
Code:
[b]Hair Color:[/b] [ Red ]
[b]Eye Color:[/b] [ Red ]

Appearance:
Appearance:
Amatus is now a being known as a Crystal Kin. His body is entirely made from a type of gem called Padparadscha. It's a beautiful red-pink color and glitters beautifully in the light. Despite the change, Amatus is still that tall, flirty Amatus. His body language has done little to change

As to appear more human (and to not blind others with his crystal body), Amatus paints on a special type of powder to color his body pale peach to appear as if he has skin.  The exceptions are: his eyes (obviously), his nails, his hair, and the several depressions in his chest. While the powder won't chip away in water, heat, snow, or wind, harsh enough friction can rub it away. Likewise, blows that crack his body will reveal the crystal his body is made from.

From afar, his hair seems silky and smooth. But upon coming close, it's easy to see that that's far from the case. Like the rest of his body, his hair is made from the very same Padparadscha. It reflects the light, glittering and shining like any other crystal. It's wild and untamed, reaching well past his waist. A fringe covers his forehead while bangs frame a sculpted face, giving Amatus the look of a man who lives on the edge.

Finally, the way Amatus dresses. As always, he wears traditional gladiator armor. A  chest plate, Pteruges, and sandals. Beyond his frivolous attitude, there's another reason for his choice in armor: his crystal body takes blows better than human skin. While out of the ring, he fancies to dressing in fine cloth that matches well with his bright red color.
Code:
[b]Appearance:[/b]
Amatus is now a being known as a [b]Crystal Kin[/b]. His body is entirely made from a type of gem called Padparadscha. It's a beautiful red-pink color and glitters beautifully in the light. Despite the change, Amatus is still that tall, flirty Amatus. His body language has done little to change

As to appear more human (and to not blind others with his crystal body), Amatus paints on a special type of powder to color his body pale peach to appear as if he has skin.  The exceptions are: his eyes (obviously), his nails, his hair, and the several depressions in his chest. While the powder won't chip away in water, heat, snow, or wind, harsh enough friction can rub it away. Likewise, blows that crack his body will reveal the crystal his body is made from.

From afar, his hair seems silky and smooth. But upon coming close, it's easy to see that that's far from the case. Like the rest of his body, his hair is made from the very same Padparadscha. It reflects the light, glittering and shining like any other crystal. It's wild and untamed, reaching well past his waist. A fringe covers his forehead while bangs frame a sculpted face, giving Amatus the look of a man who lives on the edge.

Finally, the way Amatus dresses. As always, he wears traditional gladiator armor. A  chest plate, Pteruges, and sandals. Beyond his frivolous attitude, there's another reason for his choice in armor: his crystal body takes blows better than human skin. While out of the ring, he fancies to dressing in fine cloth that matches well with his bright red color.

special features:
Special Features: Dungeon Beast Transformation
Code:
[b]Special Features:[/b] [ Crystal Kin ] [ Amatus is now part of a race of humanoids with crystal bodies. ]


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