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1Character Update Requests Empty Character Update Requests on 27/05/17, 12:53 am

If you want to update anything from small details or an entire character sheet, this is where you should request these changes. This is here so you do not have to resubmit your character sheet every time you wish to make a change. Staff members will edit your character sheet accordingly. Please remember that there are certain things that may not be allowed to be changed. There are also some sections that need a link to provide proof of the change:

  • Country Affiliation
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  • Special Features

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[b]Character Name[/b]: ( List the character that you are updating information for. )
[b]Changes[/b]: [spoiler]( Please include your changes here. )[code]( And here. )[/code][/spoiler]

*To clarify, we will not update vaults. That is something that must be done on your own.



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2Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 02/06/17, 09:51 pm

Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier
Character Name: Ariel Harel
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[img]http://i.imgur.com/kSnyGIq.png[/img]
Tier
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A-Tier [ Royal ]
Class
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Magician [ B-Tier ] | Warrior [ D-Tier ]
Face-Claim
http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t68p50-potion-of-jadid-thal-a-25000-huang#44786
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[i]trump,[/i] Kashin Em Demisleed
Hair Color
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Brown
Eye Color
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Hazel
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Ariel likes to wear for practicality and comfort. Besides the fact that Ariel does not have a particularly high income, fancy clothes do not suit his interests. He could care less about looking even decently nice. True, such clothes were actually worn to show off wealth or nobility, but, a), Ariel wasn't nobility or wealthy, and, b) Ariel very much dislikes the hierarchical system. Him being at the bottom of it saw how unfair and unjust it was.

Albeit grudgingly, Ariel recently bought new and decent clothing. Despite his aversion to the color black, he wears a black coat over a collaboration of a plain gray vest and a simple, white shirt. His pants are also, surprisingly, black, as are his shoes. He wouldn't dare wear such hot clothing in Heliohapt. If he ever happens to travel to Heliohapt, he prefers sandals and a rolled sleeved white shirt.

His hair tends to grow quickly. Despite having only cut it a few months ago, his hair has grown rather long again.


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3Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 05/06/17, 04:10 am

Approved and added to your sheet!


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4Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 06/06/17, 03:00 pm

Amaya

Amaya
β-Tier
β-Tier
Character Name: Amaya
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better backstory idfk
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Amaya was born to a set of parents whose names are not the focus of this tale, nor are they truly remembered by Amaya. Traveling home across the great planes, their caravan was ambushed, and while no casualties were sustained, Amaya’s family found the danger to be too great for a child of her age. After a very long period of arrangements and disheartening rejections from her mother’s side of the family, her uncle took her in as a favor to her father. An honest man who worked hard for his earnings, Gamamori Nishimuraya instructed those who desired to learn in martial arts, ranging from basic self defense to more advanced fighting with weapons. Her interest was piqued through the constant exposure her day to day life provided her, and she began studying in secret, poorly replicating the techniques she had seen her uncle's student's perform.
 
Amaya spent much of her initial time with her uncle cultivating a small garden that she used to help provide traditional herbal remedies to help students who unintentionally injured themselves. It was through this creation and study of medicine that she was introduced to neurotoxins, and discovered that in very very trace amounts that they could function as gentle anesthetics, pain-killers, and various other practical functions. Amaya's pushed herself to learn more of the power that plants held, seeking new combinations that could increase or reduce the potency of effects she already knew, or create new functions entirely,
 
Amaya began to mix her studies of plants and organic poisons with studies of martial arts, Joining her uncle’s school as an entry level student. Initially, she progressed quickly in technique, knowing what mistakes to avoid simply because she had had to treat their ramifications. However, the physical stamina and control required to become truly effective was something she lacked. She put extra effort of her own time into making her body stronger so it could keep up with the high standards her uncle set for his students.
 
Ultimately, her efforts made progress, but not enough. Gamamori decided that his style of martial arts did not suit her physique and stature, and instead recommended she take up the style of a school in another city. Far away from the confines of the small town she had grown up in, Amaya set foot into the world on her own, pressing towards the school her uncle had recommended. Amaya’s studies taught her a new way of fighting, in which the momentum of the opponent was used to strengthen one’s own moves, where tools and weapons were just as commonplace as bare knuckle fighting. A style that capitalized on Amaya’s rather cerebral and analytical nature, she adapted to the change very quickly, and excelled.
 
Amaya’s journey was not without hardship, however. She was poor, and did not have immediate access to food or shelter. She slept where she could, and pushed herself to do what she had to to make sure she could still eat and train. Despite her analytical nature, The most obvious option escaped Amaya, and she turned to theft. This cycle continued for months: The woman would steal what she needed to get by, then disappear until she was required to train. Perhaps it was a stroke of luck, or just simple happenstance, but the cycle ended when another student broke his arm. While Amaya didn’t possess the knowledge of how to set a bone, or perform any sort of procedure to fix the limb, her knowledge of plants and medicines led her to make a painkiller from supplies on hand until a professional could arrive. Amaya then realized the choice she should have made in the first place, and offered her services to the doctor in exchange for room and board. Amaya would only learn the basics of medicine: How to bandage a wound. How to set a bone, and how to draw poison from a bite. Her desire got the better of her, and her practices eventually switched in importance. Amaya believed medicine to be a practical extension of martial arts, rather than its opposite, and sought to study an aspect of her passion she had yet to learn. Amaya’s journey begins as she sets out to learn more of both martial arts, and of medicine.
   
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phobias update
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[list][*]Failure: Losses, withdrawals, and other forms of forfeit weigh very heavy on a woman who bases her self worth on continual performance at increasingly higher levels. She often isolates herself in the wake of issues like these, pouring over mental records and texts to analyze in excruciating detail every single thing she did wrong in a manic attempt to make sure it never happens again.
[*]Intimacy: Amaya has always known that people you are intimate with can disappear in an instant. It is a simple fact of life. An extension of Amaya's hatred of failure, she fears true emotional connection with another individual, afraid that she will become attached enough to lose herself when she loses them.[/list]

note: I can add these to my vault myself if they're approved. I realize its a fair bit of coding to slog through, and I'd rather not make extra work for you guys.



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5Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 06/06/17, 04:17 pm

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6Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 07/06/17, 03:12 pm

Amaya

Amaya
β-Tier
β-Tier
Character Name: Amaya
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Tier
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B-Tier (General)


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7Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 07/06/17, 03:42 pm

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8Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 07/06/17, 05:20 pm

Character Name: Sara Mcdonald
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(Changing Dominance to Body Manipulation)
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( Changing Dominance to body Manipulation. )

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9Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 07/06/17, 05:31 pm

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10Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 08/06/17, 01:44 pm

Character Name: Sara Mcdonald
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C-Tier [Veteran]
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C-Tier [Veteran]

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11Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 08/06/17, 02:57 pm

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12Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 18/07/17, 12:21 pm

Character Name: Jingyi Hou
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Character Update Requests 4064b8d4de9c01486cf9170039dc8e03
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Tier: A-tier
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Tier:[/b] A-tier

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Class: Warrior (A-tier), Beast-Tamer (B-tier)
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[b]Class:[/b] Warrior (A-tier), Beast-Tamer (B-tier)

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Age + Birthday: 20; July 23rd
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[b]Age + Birthday:[/b] 20; July 23rd

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Personality:
Jingyi is an individual who, at her core, is a hard worker. She dedicates herself to her aspirations, and she won’t let anyone or anything hold her back from accomplishing them. It’s cruel to say, but she’s not scared of fighting others in order to achieve her goal and she won’t hold herself back if her dreams are in danger of being crushed. It’s in this sense that someone can say that she’s word-driven, but others can spin it as a taste for more power. Both aren’t entirely wrong, but they’re not entirely right. Jingyi does want some weight behind her name to throw around, and she certainly wants to be a well known soldier respected for her prowess in combat. And unfortunately for the red-haired warrior, her time spent fighting and training hasn’t only furthered her capabilities, but it’s groomed her ego. While Jingyi is very confident in herself, she tends to be arrogant and egotistical about it. One part that certainly does not help Jingyi with her arrogant and egotistical side is the fact that she’s an adrenaline junkie who enjoys the thrill of a fight. It doesn’t matter if it’s a mock brawl between allies or a full-blown fight between her and another enemy. However, Jingyi still has a heart and will draw a line between fighting for a cause and fighting to kill.

Other than that that, Jingyi is actually quite the nice person to those she calls her allies. Sure, she’s stubborn enough to the point it draws tears, and she is a bit too fearless for her own good, but the woman tries to do her best to help those around her. Jingyi is actually known for being rather zealous, though she doesn’t try to be overbearing. She just wants to come off as an energetic person (something she is), and become a person that others would want to be friends with.

While Jingyi is known for her work ethic due to her strive to take every action she can take to reach her goals (be them short term or long term), that isn’t to say that she is a patient woman. She’s hasty and rushes more than she should, which often results in mistakes that calls for Jingyi to redo her work. But, she doesn’t mind and usually goes back to fix her problems. Though, she still struggles with improving her hurried nature.

When there isn’t something big enough to bough her down (an occurrence that doesn’t happen often), Jingyi is almost always wearing a grand smile on her face. She’s extremely optimistic and hopeful, and it’s hard for someone to say that she’s not naturally charismatic and affable. She can also be mistaken for being silly or goofy, and while Jingyi tries to make others around her happy, she isn't necessarily the jokester in a group. But, these traits go hand in hand with her naivety and too-trusting personality. It’s not that hard for a “friend” to take advantage or trick Jingyi as long as she doesn’t suspect them of standing in the way of her goals. It certainly doesn’t help that she lacks some foresight and prefers to believe in others, that people will do the good thing despite any situation they’re in. Another trait that makes it easy to manipulate Jingyi is the fact that she has blonde-levels of airhead moments. She forgets to think or use her brain before her mouth, which can put herself in trouble.

One final thing to say about Jingyi is that, due to a rather secluded childhood, she’s rather ignorant of the outside world. She tends to be naturally biased against certain things, especially those that are liberal and oppose the conservative lifestyle of her clan. But, Jingyi does try to learn about new subjects and she keeps an open mind to new ideas. She tries to use her natural curiosity and benevolence to help others stay unaware of the fact that she’s quite ignorant and biased.

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[b]Personality:[/b]
Jingyi is an individual who, at her core, is a hard worker. She dedicates herself to her aspirations, and she won’t let anyone or anything hold her back from accomplishing them. It’s cruel to say, but she’s not scared of fighting others in order to achieve her goal and she won’t hold herself back if her dreams are in danger of being crushed. It’s in this sense that someone can say that she’s word-driven, but others can spin it as a taste for more power. Both aren’t entirely wrong, but they’re not entirely right. Jingyi does want some weight behind her name to throw around, and she certainly wants to be a well known soldier respected for her prowess in combat. And unfortunately for the red-haired warrior, her time spent fighting and training hasn’t only furthered her capabilities, but it’s groomed her ego. While Jingyi is very confident in herself, she tends to be arrogant and egotistical about it. One part that certainly does not help Jingyi with her arrogant and egotistical side is the fact that she’s an adrenaline junkie who enjoys the thrill of a fight. It doesn’t matter if it’s a mock brawl between allies or a full-blown fight between her and another enemy. However, Jingyi still has a heart and will draw a line between fighting for a cause and fighting to kill.

Other than that that, Jingyi is actually quite the nice person to those she calls her allies. Sure, she’s stubborn enough to the point it draws tears, and she is a bit too fearless for her own good, but the woman tries to do her best to help those around her. Jingyi is actually known for being rather zealous, though she doesn’t try to be overbearing. She just wants to come off as an energetic person (something she is), and become a person that others would want to be friends with.

While Jingyi is known for her work ethic due to her strive to take every action she can take to reach her goals (be them short term or long term), that isn’t to say that she is a patient woman. She’s hasty and rushes more than she should, which often results in mistakes that calls for Jingyi to redo her work. But, she doesn’t mind and usually goes back to fix her problems. Though, she still struggles with improving her hurried nature.

When there isn’t something big enough to bough her down (an occurrence that doesn’t happen often), Jingyi is almost always wearing a grand smile on her face. She’s extremely optimistic and hopeful, and it’s hard for someone to say that she’s not naturally charismatic and affable. She can also be mistaken for being silly or goofy, and while Jingyi tries to make others around her happy, she isn't necessarily the jokester in a group. But, these traits go hand in hand with her naivety and too-trusting personality. It’s not that hard for a “friend” to take advantage or trick Jingyi as long as she doesn’t suspect them of standing in the way of her goals. It certainly doesn’t help that she lacks some foresight and prefers to believe in others, that people will do the good thing despite any situation they’re in. Another trait that makes it easy to manipulate Jingyi is the fact that she has blonde-levels of airhead moments. She forgets to think or use her brain before her mouth, which can put herself in trouble.

One final thing to say about Jingyi is that, due to a rather secluded childhood, she’s rather ignorant of the outside world. She tends to be naturally biased against certain things, especially those that are liberal and oppose the conservative lifestyle of her clan. But, Jingyi does try to learn about new subjects and she keeps an open mind to new ideas. She tries to use her natural curiosity and benevolence to help others stay unaware of the fact that she’s quite ignorant and biased.

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Face-Claim: Cordelia; Fire Emblem Awakening
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Red
Height: 168 cm (5’5)
Weight: 61 kg (136 lbs)
Appearance:
Jingyi is a woman of average height and long hair that reaches just past her hips. A fringe covers most of her forehead while long bangs frame her face and hide her ears. Despite not being of Fanalis descent, she has bright scarlet hair and striking red eyes that often gets her mistaken for one. When it comes to hairstyles, the girl has several that often fall in line with military regulations. When she doesn’t simply allow it down, Jingyi either keeps her hair up in a ponytail or a single, long braid. Though, despite her best attempts, her bangs always come loose. She has a rather athletic body, toned and muscled from years of training and exercising. She’s not exactly lanky or buff, but Jingyi is certainly far from petite.

When she’s not dressed in something “casual”, Jingyi will dress in armor reminiscent of samurai, though she doesn’t wear all of their plates. The bottom layer is an off-black kobakama with a gray accent that cut off at her knees paired with a white hitatare with black accents that has a white kote armor sleeve protecting the arms of the hitatare robe. Along with this, she wears a gray and white kyahan leggings that tuck into white tabi socks. The next layer is her armor; all parts of it match together as a part of a set, with each of them black in color. Protecting her arms is a pair of light kusari-sode (kusari chain armor on her right arm, sode soldier armor on her left) and tekko hand guards. Next, she has a Do breastplate with matching kusazuri thigh covers, suneate shin guards, hiza yoroi knee armor, and a tare throat guard. The final note about her armor is the red rope used to tie together the armor and a white sash-like belt. When Jingyi is trying something that’s more of a casual look, she’ll keep her kobakama, hitatare, kote, belt, kyahan, tabi, geta, and suneate.

Jingyi has a rather open body language; it’s easy to read her through her movements. She tends to act on instinct, and her body language can be rather simple and straight forwards, as she is with her words. Her emotions are clearly displayed from her body language, from sadness to pure excitement. If she’s about to cry, it’s easy to see her face scrunch up as her eyebrows furrow before the dams open.

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[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Cordelia; Fire Emblem Awakening
[b]Hair Color:[/b] Red
[b]Eye Color:[/b] Red
[b]Height:[/b] 168 cm (5’5)
[b]Weight:[/b] 61 kg (136 lbs)
[b]Appearance:[/b]
Jingyi is a woman of average height and long hair that reaches just past her hips. A fringe covers most of her forehead while long bangs frame her face and hide her ears. Despite not being of Fanalis descent, she has bright scarlet hair and striking red eyes that often gets her mistaken for one. When it comes to hairstyles, the girl has several that often fall in line with military regulations. When she doesn’t simply allow it down, Jingyi either keeps her hair up in a ponytail or a single, long braid. Though, despite her best attempts, her bangs always come loose. She has a rather athletic body, toned and muscled from years of training and exercising. She’s not exactly lanky or buff, but Jingyi is certainly far from petite.

When she’s not dressed in something “casual”, Jingyi will dress in armor reminiscent of samurai, though she doesn’t wear all of their plates. The bottom layer is an off-black kobakama with a gray accent that cut off at her knees paired with a white hitatare with black accents that has a white kote armor sleeve protecting the arms of the hitatare robe. Along with this, she wears a gray and white kyahan leggings that tuck into white tabi socks. The next layer is her armor; all parts of it match together as a part of a set, with each of them black in color. Protecting her arms is a pair of light kusari-sode (kusari chain armor on her right arm, sode soldier armor on her left) and tekko hand guards. Next, she has a Do breastplate with matching kusazuri thigh covers, suneate shin guards, hiza yoroi knee armor, and a tare throat guard. The final note about her armor is the red rope used to tie together the armor and a white sash-like belt. When Jingyi is trying something that’s more of a casual look, she’ll keep her kobakama, hitatare, kote, belt, kyahan, tabi, geta, and suneate.

Jingyi has a rather open body language; it’s easy to read her through her movements. She tends to act on instinct, and her body language can be rather simple and straight forwards, as she is with her words. Her emotions are clearly displayed from her body language, from sadness to pure excitement. If she’s about to cry, it’s easy to see her face scrunch up as her eyebrows furrow before the dams open.

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History:
Jingyi is the eldest daughter of a former Navy sailor of Kou who is also the son of the head of the Hou Clan, a rather obscure military family that has served Kou through all of its generations. The clan has stayed hidden throughout most of its existence, nestled away in a small village in the small peninsula on the gulf of Kou that’s hidden by forests and mountains. Children of the clan often found careers that supported their country’s military, producing anything from soldiers, assassins, and beast tamers to even war beast breeders and blacksmiths.

Jingyi’s mother, Xinyi, is from her own military family, but it’s even less known that the Hou’s. She used to practice her way around making weapons as a smith, but now she is simply an excellent housewife and mother. Jingyi’s father is a man by the name of Cheng, a man who had served under Kou’s navy as a sailor. Other members of Jingyi’s family include her two older brothers, twins by the name of Guiying and Jianhong.

Growing up, it wasn't uncommon that Cheng, with Xinyi's permission, would take their children on small sailing incidents. The young girl idolized her father, and would often beg him to tell her stories of the different things he had experienced over his lifetime. Cheng was happy that at least one child showed signs of wanting to follow in his footsteps, and the girl's desire to learn how to sail like a true sailor and how to wield a sword properly often made the man chuckle.

And soon the time came when Xinyi finally agreed to let Jinyi accompany her father and brothers on their seasonal sailing trips. Though, unfortunately for the young girl, it wouldn't be a pleasant trip for her. Jinyi, much too eager about the forthcoming trip, hadn't listened to her father's rules and warnings. This lead to her incident, one where she leaned far too much over the rails of her father's simple sailing boat when a wave knocked against the ship and sent her tumbling into the water. Her brother was quick to notice, and it wasn't long before Cheng jumped in and rescued his daughter from a watery grave. But, the accident forever colored her view of sailing with fear; an irrational fear that if she ever went close to open water she could once more fall in, though she would drown this time. However, the girl was still excited to follow her father down a military path, instead choosing to head down one as a soldier of the Kou Empire's army.

Her childhood was otherwise mundane for the daughter of a military family; her days were spent either outside in the sun with a wooden sword or inside helping her mother with different chores. Occasionally, Xinyi would take her down to Cheng’s smith to show her some techniques when the girl had worn her down enough. It was once Jingyi was ten that her parents finally agreed that it would be safe for her to properly learn how to wield a blade. At fifteen, Jingyi got her first sword: Fujin, a blade handed down in the Hou Clan and forged by her forefather. It wasn’t long from that point in Jingyi’s life did she finally leave her village to the capitol. From there she found her way into a recruitment office for her empire’s military and officially became a Kou soldier. After then, Jingyi began to jump from town to town that held a military base, doing the odd jobs to earn money while working as a soldier.

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[b]History:[/b]
Jingyi is the eldest daughter of a former Navy sailor of Kou who is also the son of the head of the Hou Clan, a rather obscure military family that has served Kou through all of its generations. The clan has stayed hidden throughout most of its existence, nestled away in a small village in the small peninsula on the gulf of Kou that’s hidden by forests and mountains. Children of the clan often found careers that supported their country’s military, producing anything from soldiers, assassins, and beast tamers to even war beast breeders and blacksmiths.

Jingyi’s mother, Xinyi, is from her own military family, but it’s even less known that the Hou’s. She used to practice her way around making weapons as a smith, but now she is simply an excellent housewife and mother. Jingyi’s father is a man by the name of Cheng, a man who had served under Kou’s navy as a sailor. Other members of Jingyi’s family include her two older brothers, twins by the name of Guiying and Jianhong.

Growing up, it wasn't uncommon that Cheng, with Xinyi's permission, would take their children on small sailing incidents. The young girl idolized her father, and would often beg him to tell her stories of the different things he had experienced over his lifetime. Cheng was happy that at least one child showed signs of wanting to follow in his footsteps, and the girl's desire to learn how to sail like a true sailor and how to wield a sword properly often made the man chuckle.

And soon the time came when Xinyi finally agreed to let Jinyi accompany her father and brothers on their seasonal sailing trips. Though, unfortunately for the young girl, it wouldn't be a pleasant trip for her. Jinyi, much too eager about the forthcoming trip, hadn't listened to her father's rules and warnings. This lead to her incident, one where she leaned far too much over the rails of her father's simple sailing boat when a wave knocked against the ship and sent her tumbling into the water. Her brother was quick to notice, and it wasn't long before Cheng jumped in and rescued his daughter from a watery grave. But, the accident forever colored her view of sailing with fear; an irrational fear that if she ever went close to open water she could once more fall in, though she would drown this time. However, the girl was still excited to follow her father down a military path, instead choosing to head down one as a soldier of the Kou Empire's army.

Her childhood was otherwise mundane for the daughter of a military family; her days were spent either outside in the sun with a wooden sword or inside helping her mother with different chores. Occasionally, Xinyi would take her down to Cheng’s smith to show her some techniques when the girl had worn her down enough. It was once Jingyi was ten that her parents finally agreed that it would be safe for her to properly learn how to wield a blade. At fifteen, Jingyi got her first sword: Fujin, a blade handed down in the Hou Clan and forged by her forefather. It wasn’t long from that point in Jingyi’s life did she finally leave her village to the capitol. From there she found her way into a recruitment office for her empire’s military and officially became a Kou soldier. After then, Jingyi began to jump from town to town that held a military base, doing the odd jobs to earn money while working as a soldier.


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13Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 19/07/17, 03:38 pm

Merari

Merari
C-Tier
C-Tier
Character Name: Merari
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Spoiler:
Character Update Requests Superthumb
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Tier: [ C - Tier ] [ Veteran ]
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[b]Tier:[/b] [ C - Tier ] [ Veteran ]

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Class: [ Magician ] [ Sound + Wind ]
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[b]Class:[/b] [ Magician ] [ Sound + Wind ]

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Personality:

  • [ Manipulative ] Merari is a deceptive, two-faced liar who will use others to achieve what he wants in life. He isn’t afraid to hurt those around him, strangers or acquaintances if it means that he can get what he wants. In order to do this, he uses different faces when confronting others, using a front that would help him most in a situation. He can be described as sly, and he does his best to weave half-truths and lies into his words. He’s always thinking of ways to continue with his lies while attempting to never reveal himself.
  • [ Strategic ] Merari is always planning, always thinking of possibilities and what he should do to move him in front of others. He rarely does something without consulting about the possible consequences and resulting events. This ties in straight with how manipulative he can be.
  • [ Secretive ] Merari never directly tells something about him, and when he is forced to, he doesn’t completely reveal himself. He has a thousand secrets and never breathes a word of them. He uses half truths and lies to protect himself and his thoughts, and he does his best to deceive other into thinking a certain way of himself. But, he’s still not the best with it, and he tries his best to be sly.
  • [ Envious ] Merari tends to feel green whenever he sees other people. He can’t help but think about their lives, and how they may be better than his. How they may have families, or how they may have things that he can’t possess. It makes his skin crawl, and he always feels disgusted.
  • [ Ill-tempered ] While Merari is able to hide his true emotions, Merari typically feels ill-tempered. Like a pot of water with a top that’s about to boil over and explode. The feeling irritates him, which only serves to make him even angrier. On his worse days, it’s harder for him to keep u the persona, and he often worries that someone might see.
  • [ Thirsting for Knowledge ] Merari, for all his faults, is a curious person. He hasn’t seen most of the world, and he’s interested in what’s out there. Maybe if he wasn’t so bent on revenge his life purpose would be discovering more about magic, such as more about how it could be used along with more types of combination magics. A topic, or rather type of item, that has gained his attention during his studies in Magnostadt, are Magic Items. He wants to figure out how they work, where they come from, and if he can create one.
  • [ Vengeful ] Arguably his biggest trait, Merari is a vengeful person. If you do something wrong to him, he’ll never forget or forgive. He won’t care what you did to him, and if he ever finds himself with the time, he’ll repay the favor. It’s this trait that drives him to hunger for the deaths of the Kuraba.
  • [ Possessive ] Ever since losing so much at such an early age, Merari has grown to become possessive of his things, even if they’re people he’s grown close to. He won’t let them leave, even if it’s of their own according, and if they try he often ends up losing his temper.
  • [ Vain ] Merari is obsessed with his looks and how he presents himself. Everything is meticulous and well kept when it comes to his appearance, and he never comes out of his room without ensuring that he is beautiful. The “prettiest” part of Merari is his hair: it’s the most stand-out part about the boy and it’s easily the most well kept.


Merari is a finicky young man who can be described as both paranoid and crazed. A devastating event in his youth has twisted him into something worse than what a child his age should be, and if one were to enter his mind, they could see it. He’s filled with dark thoughts, and he spends each moment of his day worrying about his plans. He’s nothing short of sly, manipulative, and gluttonous. He despises others for anything they have that is better than what he has, and he grows attached and possessive of any possessions he gains. Even humans can be “his” in his mind. It’s either that, or they’re stepping stones to be used in his plans. As he grows, nothing will be crossing the line for him, especially if it means that he can accomplish his goals.

But that isn’t to say that there’s some good in the boy. Despite his ill-temperance and vengeful nature, Merari can actually have moments where he’s a curious teenager. In reality, Merari is just the worst version of a child, something that could be changed if someone caught his descent. But it’s unlikely that he would let anyone get in his way, even if they are his loved ones.


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[*][ Manipulative ] Merari is a deceptive, two-faced liar who will use others to achieve what he wants in life. He isn’t afraid to hurt those around him, strangers or acquaintances if it means that he can get what he wants. In order to do this, he uses different faces when confronting others, using a front that would help him most in a situation. He can be described as sly, and he does his best to weave half-truths and lies into his words. He’s always thinking of ways to continue with his lies while attempting to never reveal himself.
[*][ Strategic ] Merari is always planning, always thinking of possibilities and what he should do to move him in front of others. He rarely does something without consulting about the possible consequences and resulting events. This ties in straight with how manipulative he can be.
[*][ Secretive ] Merari never directly tells something about him, and when he is forced to, he doesn’t completely reveal himself. He has a thousand secrets and never breathes a word of them. He uses half truths and lies to protect himself and his thoughts, and he does his best to deceive other into thinking a certain way of himself. But, he’s still not the best with it, and he tries his best to be sly.
[*][ Envious ] Merari tends to feel green whenever he sees other people. He can’t help but think about their lives, and how they may be better than his. How they may have families, or how they may have things that he can’t possess. It makes his skin crawl, and he always feels disgusted.
[*][ Ill-tempered ] While Merari is able to hide his true emotions, Merari typically feels ill-tempered. Like a pot of water with a top that’s about to boil over and explode. The feeling irritates him, which only serves to make him even angrier. On his worse days, it’s harder for him to keep u the persona, and he often worries that someone might see.
[*][ Thirsting for Knowledge ] Merari, for all his faults, is a curious person. He hasn’t seen most of the world, and he’s interested in what’s out there. Maybe if he wasn’t so bent on revenge his life purpose would be discovering more about magic, such as more about how it could be used along with more types of combination magics. A topic, or rather type of item, that has gained his attention during his studies in Magnostadt, are Magic Items. He wants to figure out how they work, where they come from, and if he can create one.
[*][ Vengeful ] Arguably his biggest trait, Merari is a vengeful person. If you do something wrong to him, he’ll never forget or forgive. He won’t care what you did to him, and if he ever finds himself with the time, he’ll repay the favor. It’s this trait that drives him to hunger for the deaths of the Kuraba.
[*][ Possessive ] Ever since losing so much at such an early age, Merari has grown to become possessive of his things, even if they’re people he’s grown close to. He won’t let them leave, even if it’s of their own according, and if they try he often ends up losing his temper.
[*][ Vain ] Merari is obsessed with his looks and how he presents himself. Everything is meticulous and well kept when it comes to his appearance, and he never comes out of his room without ensuring that he is beautiful. The “prettiest” part of Merari is his hair: it’s the most stand-out part about the boy and it’s easily the most well kept.
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Merari is a finicky young man who can be described as both paranoid and crazed. A devastating event in his youth has twisted him into something worse than what a child his age should be, and if one were to enter his mind, they could see it. He’s filled with dark thoughts, and he spends each moment of his day worrying about his plans. He’s nothing short of sly, manipulative, and gluttonous. He despises others for anything they have that is better than what he has, and he grows attached and possessive of any possessions he gains. Even humans can be “[i]his[/i]” in his mind. It’s either that, or they’re stepping stones to be used in his plans. As he grows, nothing will be crossing the line for him, especially if it means that he can accomplish his goals.

But that isn’t to say that there’s [i]some[/i] good in the boy. Despite his ill-temperance and vengeful nature, Merari can actually have moments where he’s a curious teenager. In reality, Merari is just the worst version of a child, something that could be changed if someone caught his descent. But it’s unlikely that he would let anyone get in his way, even if they are his loved ones.

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Aspirations:
The first goal is something that Merari knows that he will need for his other goals, and it’s also a silent pleasure. His interest has always laid in magic, and Magic Items have always been a topic of interest to the lad. While he lives in Magnostad he wishes to reach the highest level of Magical education he can reach. This is mostly in part so he can widen his arcane capabilities to later use against the Kuraba, and to satisfy his own curiosity in the arts. Another reason in this goal is to discover the secrets behind Magic Items/Weapons and figure out a way to create them. It would allow him to put them on the backburner on his mind while creating useful weapons and items for his goals.

The thing that Merari hungers for is the death of the Kuraba. His days can be spent planning over each moment of how he is to get his revenge; each decision he makes is most likely a step towards his goal. He doesn’t care if someone else slaughters them as long as they did so because of his own hand. Anything else would be unacceptable for the young man. He won’t stop until each of them had gotten their punishment for what they had done to his own clan. It’s unlikely that he would offer them mercy, especially considering that they hadn’t extended the same hand to Merari’s clan.

Another goal that Merari has is to revive the Hashishins and recover their arts. He doesn’t doubt that many of the clan’s techniques died with their death, but he’s certain he can bring some of them back. One step of this goal is to create a group that would replace the clan, and another is to travel to Kou to see if he can dig up any of his clan’s secrets. While he’s out of Magnostadt, he also plans to begin his revenge against the Kuraba.
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[b]Aspirations:[/b]
The first goal is something that Merari knows that he will need for his other goals, and it’s also a silent pleasure. His interest has always laid in magic, and Magic Items have always been a topic of interest to the lad. While he lives in Magnostad he wishes to reach the highest level of Magical education he can reach. This is mostly in part so he can widen his arcane capabilities to later use against the Kuraba, and to satisfy his own curiosity in the arts. Another reason in this goal is to discover the secrets behind Magic Items/Weapons and figure out a way to create them. It would allow him to put them on the backburner on his mind while creating useful weapons and items for his goals.

The thing that Merari hungers for is the death of the Kuraba. His days can be spent planning over each moment of how he is to get his revenge; each decision he makes is most likely a step towards his goal. He doesn’t care if someone else slaughters them as long as they did so because of his own hand. Anything else would be unacceptable for the young man. He won’t stop until each of them had gotten their punishment for what they had done to his own clan. It’s unlikely that he would offer them mercy, especially considering that they hadn’t extended the same hand to Merari’s clan.

Another goal that Merari has is to revive the Hashishins and recover their arts. He doesn’t doubt that many of the clan’s techniques died with their death, but he’s certain he can bring some of them back. One step of this goal is to create a group that would replace the clan, and another is to travel to Kou to see if he can dig up any of his clan’s secrets. While he’s out of Magnostadt, he also plans to begin his revenge against the Kuraba.

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Appearance:
Merari is a pale-skinned boy of average height who looks a bit young for his age. He has ruby eyes that are, while not too big for his face, give him a rather childlike look. His button nose and signature frail Magician appearance don't go far to help change it for him.
The most stand-out trait about Merari is his hair. He keeps meticulous care of his ash locks, which now reach past his hips. On the left side of his face are bangs that tend to fall in front of his eyes, with the tips of the bang that frame the side of his face reaching his shoulder. Meanwhile, on the other side of his head, he keeps a part of his hair in a bun and loop. The rest of his hair is kept in a low ponytail that keeps everything neat and tidy. It’s easy to tell that he keeps great care of his hair; it’s soft to the touch and easily shines, it also helps that he easily brushes it two hundred times a day to keep it as such.

Like everything else about him, Merari is posh and dresses as such. His outfits are smart and elegant, and like his hair, he’s painstakingly careful to ensure that he’s presentable. Button down shirts, dress shorts, slacks, boots, and the Magnostadt robes are all part of his look. His wardrobe is filled with clothes that are shades of royal purple, golden, and black, along with some monochromatic colors. There are even some outfits that are reminiscent of his former homeland in Kou, but it’s not often that he’s seen out in such clothes.

Merari’s most common outfit is as such: a purple dress shirt with short sleeves, long collar, and buttons down the front. The shirt has floral patterns of a paler purple with golden accents, along with a long neck collar that is just shy of his chin. The sleeves are a darker purple that ends at the elbow. Around the stomach, there is a dark colored “sash” part of the shirt. Paired with the shirt is a pair of dark purple shorts and matching black boots. Finally, he wears his Magnostadt robes with the 3rd Kodor badge pinned on.

When it comes to body language, he tries to keep mindful of what he's doing with his posture and hands. It’s sometimes a hit or miss with him, either coming off as too opened or a bit closed. But he’s getting better with controlling what his body is saying and using it too to deceive his true intentions.
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Merari is a pale-skinned boy of average height who looks a bit young for his age. He has ruby eyes that are, while not too big for his face, give him a rather childlike look. His button nose and signature frail Magician appearance don't go far to help change it for him.
 The most stand-out trait about Merari is his hair. He keeps meticulous care of his ash locks, which now reach past his hips. On the left side of his face are bangs that tend to fall in front of his eyes, with the tips of the bang that frame the side of his face reaching his shoulder. Meanwhile, on the other side of his head, he keeps a part of his hair in a bun and loop. The rest of his hair is kept in a low ponytail that keeps everything neat and tidy. It’s easy to tell that he keeps great care of his hair; it’s soft to the touch and easily shines, it also helps that he easily brushes it two hundred times a day to keep it as such.

 Like everything else about him, Merari is posh and dresses as such. His outfits are smart and elegant, and like his hair, he’s painstakingly careful to ensure that he’s presentable. Button down shirts, dress shorts, slacks, boots, and the Magnostadt robes are all part of his look. His wardrobe is filled with clothes that are shades of royal purple, golden, and black, along with some monochromatic colors. There are even some outfits that are reminiscent of his former homeland in Kou, but it’s not often that he’s seen out in such clothes.

 Merari’s most common outfit is as such: a purple dress shirt with short sleeves, long collar, and buttons down the front. The shirt has floral patterns of a paler purple with golden accents, along with a long neck collar that is just shy of his chin. The sleeves are a darker purple that ends at the elbow. Around the stomach, there is a dark colored “sash” part of the shirt. Paired with the shirt is a pair of dark purple shorts and matching black boots. Finally, he wears his Magnostadt robes with the 3rd Kodor badge pinned on.

When it comes to body language, he tries to keep mindful of what he's doing with his posture and hands. It’s sometimes a hit or miss with him, either coming off as too opened or a bit closed. But he’s getting better with controlling what his body is saying and using it too to deceive his true intentions.

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History:
The Hashishin Clan, a small clan of nobles that resided within one of the captured territories of Kou, had a rather tame front. Their lands weren’t far from Magnostadt, and many members of their ranks were Half-Magicians. But beneath their innocent covers of a merchant clan, was a family of trained assassins. Throughout the underground world, they were rather known for their mastery of the arts, from their extensive studies in magic to their techniques revolving around the use of poisons and gasses. They were known to use smoke bombs laced with hallucinogenic smog that would hamper their enemies to poisons that would cripple their limbs.

But any enemy of the strong clan was the Kuraba, a military clan that grounded out soldiers for the Kou Military. They were long-time rivals of the Hashishin, and often took each chance they had to fight against them. But over the recent years, the aggression between the two families began to boil over with simple words leading to blows.

Meanwhile, Merari was the son of one of the head’s daughters, Anisha, and a Magician named Levi who was from a different clan. They were a loving family, but the boy doesn’t remember much of them. Levi and Anisha did their best to raise their son the right way while passing down their family techniques. His mother taught her some of the basic Hashishin arts while his father taught him magic. A pastime that the entire family enjoyed was music: something that would forever be important to Merari. It was the best life that the young child could have imagined, and it was a very happy life. He had many friends within the close-knit clan, and occasionally family from Levi’s clan would visit their family.

But one day, the relationship between the Hashishin and the Kuraba completely snapped and the two exploded into full-blown fighting. It only lasted a single day, but it was one that completely changed Merari and his life forever. He would never forgive the other clan for what they had done to the Hashishin, and most importantly, his family.

The last time Merari would see his mother was when she hid him in a closet room, giving him a concoction that would put him into a temporary state of comatose. While he was passed out, Anisha tried to fight alongside her family in dire attempts to protect their clan, but she was one of the many casualties in the brutal fight. Merari could do nothing due to the drink, but it was the saving grace that kept him alive. Due to the effects of the potion, his body was in a state that was similar to death, close enough that he was left for dead by the Kuraba during their search for survivors.

When Merari woke up, a day or two had passed, and all he could find was carnage. The Hashishin were far from strong enough to survive such a direct battle, and he found himself all alone. He had no clue who else had survived or if he was the last member of his clan. The weight of the entire calamity was too much for the young boy, who was left with nothing at the tender age of nine. His family was long gone, and so was his home. There was nothing, and Merari was the only one left in the wreckage, left to mourn by himself. He was bubbled over with sorrow, grief, and confusion as he lingered in the torn remains of the clan compound. Sadness transformed into anger the longer he stayed, and it was during that time did Merari change from an optimistic if slightly mischievous boy to the beginnings of the person he is today. The pain was too much for his fragile heart and mind, and Merari grew bitter of everything. Of the time with his family stolen, of how the Kuraba had destroyed everything he had, and how fate allowed everything to be ripped away from him.

Who knew what would have happened to the young boy if it weren’t for Levi’s brothers, Alec and Seth, who came to the ruined house. Their visit was to be a surprise, to announce to their baby brother that their sister had found a husband and to invite Merari and Levi to the wedding in Magnostadt. But, all they found was Merari, crying and trembling. Seeing how the young boy had nothing left for him in Kou, the brothers took him back to the city of Magnostadt in an attempts to help him pick up the remains of his life.

From that point in his life, Merari grew up with the small Ersatz clan whose surname he was forced to adopt. Alec and his wife tried to create a new home for the young boy, but nothing they did could console the boy. They tried to have him talk to professionals, but all he would say was “I wasn’t awake to see it” and that, “it’ll heal”. And it seemed to be that way. Over time, Merari pretended to overcome the horrors that befell his actual family. He was careful to always show a smiling facade, and that while he was quiet, he was “happy”. He eventually convinced his surrogate parents to stop with the doctoral visits that he would be fine on his own. They had agreed in hopes of doing him some right and due to the fact of the progress he seemed to make. But over the past years, Merari’s rage and wrath for the Kuraba only grew and grew. Deep down he continued to change, his inner personality and mind continued to rot.

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[b]History:[/b]
The Hashishin Clan, a small clan of nobles that resided within one of the captured territories of Kou, had a rather tame front. Their lands weren’t far from Magnostadt, and many members of their ranks were Half-Magicians. But beneath their innocent covers of a merchant clan, was a family of trained assassins. Throughout the underground world, they were rather known for their mastery of the arts, from their extensive studies in magic to their techniques revolving around the use of poisons and gasses. They were known to use smoke bombs laced with hallucinogenic smog that would hamper their enemies to poisons that would cripple their limbs.

But any enemy of the strong clan was the Kuraba, a military clan that grounded out soldiers for the Kou Military. They were long-time rivals of the Hashishin, and often took each chance they had to fight against them. But over the recent years, the aggression between the two families began to boil over with simple words leading to blows.

Meanwhile, Merari was the son of one of the head’s daughters, Anisha, and a Magician named Levi who was from a different clan. They were a loving family, but the boy doesn’t remember much of them. Levi and Anisha did their best to raise their son the right way while passing down their family techniques. His mother taught her some of the basic Hashishin arts while his father taught him magic. A pastime that the entire family enjoyed was music: something that would forever be important to Merari. It was the best life that the young child could have imagined, and it was a very happy life. He had many friends within the close-knit clan, and occasionally family from Levi’s clan would visit their family.

But one day, the relationship between the Hashishin and the Kuraba completely snapped and the two exploded into full-blown fighting. It only lasted a single day, but it was one that completely changed Merari and his life forever. He would never forgive the other clan for what they had done to the Hashishin, and most importantly, his family.

The last time Merari would see his mother was when she hid him in a closet room, giving him a concoction that would put him into a temporary state of comatose. While he was passed out, Anisha tried to fight alongside her family in dire attempts to protect their clan, but she was one of the many casualties in the brutal fight. Merari could do nothing due to the drink, but it was the saving grace that kept him alive. Due to the effects of the potion, his body was in a state that was similar to death, close enough that he was left for dead by the Kuraba during their search for survivors.

When Merari woke up, a day or two had passed, and all he could find was carnage. The Hashishin were far from strong enough to survive such a direct battle, and he found himself all alone. He had no clue who else had survived or if he was the last member of his clan. The weight of the entire calamity was too much for the young boy, who was left with nothing at the tender age of nine. His family was long gone, and so was his home. There was nothing, and Merari was the only one left in the wreckage, left to mourn by himself. He was bubbled over with sorrow, grief, and confusion as he lingered in the torn remains of the clan compound. Sadness transformed into anger the longer he stayed, and it was during that time did Merari change from an optimistic if slightly mischievous boy to the beginnings of the person he is today. The pain was too much for his fragile heart and mind, and Merari grew bitter of everything. Of the time with his family stolen, of how the Kuraba had destroyed everything he had, and how fate allowed everything to be ripped away from him.

Who knew what would have happened to the young boy if it weren’t for Levi’s brothers, Alec and Seth, who came to the ruined house. Their visit was to be a surprise, to announce to their baby brother that their sister had found a husband and to invite Merari and Levi to the wedding in Magnostadt. But, all they found was Merari, crying and trembling. Seeing how the young boy had nothing left for him in Kou, the brothers took him back to the city of Magnostadt in an attempts to help him pick up the remains of his life.

From that point in his life, Merari grew up with the small Ersatz clan whose surname he was forced to adopt. Alec and his wife tried to create a new home for the young boy, but nothing they did could console the boy. They tried to have him talk to professionals, but all he would say was “I wasn’t awake to see it” and that, “it’ll heal”. And it seemed to be that way. Over time, Merari pretended to overcome the horrors that befell his actual family. He was careful to always show a smiling facade, and that while he was quiet, he was “happy”. He eventually convinced his surrogate parents to stop with the doctoral visits that he would be fine on his own. They had agreed in hopes of doing him some right and due to the fact of the [i]progress[/i] he seemed to make. But over the past years, Merari’s rage and wrath for the Kuraba only grew and grew. Deep down he continued to change, his inner personality and mind continued to rot.


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Sexuality: Straight and, unfortunately, widowed.
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You didn't really have to specify whether or not he was married or not, especially in the "sexuality" section. Though, it doesn't really hurt to have it in there I suppose. Approved.


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Character Name: Jingyi Hou
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Appearance:

Jingyi is a woman of average height and long hair that reaches past her hips. A fringe covers most of her forehead while long bangs frame her face and hide her ears. Despite not being of Fanalis descent, she has bright scarlet hair and striking red eyes that often gets her mistaken for one. When it comes to her hairstyles, the girl has several that falls in line with military regulations. Her go to style is when her hair is tied off about halfway through before being braided down her back. When her hair isn't worn in such a way, Jingyi will either keep her hair up in a ponytail or in a single, long braid. She has a rather athletic body, toned and muscled from years of training and exercising. She’s not exactly lanky or buff, but Jingyi is certainly far from petite.


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Most often, Jingyi will dress in Bright Armor befitting her rank in Gao’s military. First, she wears a dull maroon colored Tangzhuang that has been padded slightly. Over it is her layer of armor that is made up by a combination of Mirror Armor, Mountain Armor, and Lamellar Armor. Her torso is protected by Mirror Armor, with a silver plate (the “mirror”) set center that protects her heart, surrounded by interlocking iron pieces that is traditional Mountain scale armor. Over the chest plate is a light golden cloth brigandine that covers half of the silver disc, with a red cord tied around it. Mountain armor is also used in her mirrored pauldron and thigh faulds. At the “top” and “bottom” of the pauldrons and thigh plates are golden beast heads fashioned after a lion dog, with the head at the top and its jaw at the bottom. Her vambraces and shin guards are made from lamellar plate armors, with the finishing touch being her a pair of military boots. The boots are protected by greaves along, and the clasps are decorated with the faces of a lion dog. Rivets along with red cords, silk threads, and elaborate tassels tie her armor together and allows it to be easily removed. Her armor is brown in color, with golden interlocking pieces in the mountain armor. The armor’s accents are blue in color, matching the blue waist cushion she wears. The cushions are held in place by her leather brown belt, with the snarling head of a lion dog used as the golden belt “buckle”. Along the belt are notches for Jingyi’s pouches and weapon sheaths. The final piece is a helmet that Jingyi rarely wears. It’s painted golden in color with elaborate cheek guards that had been stylized into the form of jutting gilded wings. The cheek guards reach down to her shoulders, protecting her neck. On the front of the helmet is the face of a lion dog, and out the extending out the top of the helmet is a red plume.

Jingyi has a rather open body language; it’s easy to read her through her movements. She tends to act on instinct, and her body language can be rather simple and straight forwards, as she is with her words. Her emotions are clearly displayed from her body language, from sadness to pure excitement. If she’s about to cry, it’s easy to see her face scrunch up as her eyebrows furrow before the dams open.
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Jingyi is a woman of average height and long hair that reaches past her hips. A fringe covers most of her forehead while long bangs frame her face and hide her ears. Despite not being of Fanalis descent, she has bright scarlet hair and striking red eyes that often gets her mistaken for one. When it comes to her hairstyles, the girl has several that falls in line with military regulations. Her go to style is when her hair is tied off about halfway through before being braided down her back. When her hair isn't worn in such a way, Jingyi will either keep her hair up in a ponytail or in a single, long braid. She has a rather athletic body, toned and muscled from years of training and exercising. She’s not exactly lanky or buff, but Jingyi is certainly far from petite.


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Most often, Jingyi will dress in Bright Armor befitting her rank in Gao’s military. First, she wears a dull maroon colored Tangzhuang that has been padded slightly. Over it is her layer of armor that is made up by a combination of Mirror Armor, Mountain Armor, and Lamellar Armor. Her torso is protected by Mirror Armor, with a silver plate (the “mirror”) set center that protects her heart, surrounded by interlocking iron pieces that is traditional Mountain scale armor. Over the chest plate is a light golden cloth brigandine that covers half of the silver disc, with a red cord tied around it. Mountain armor is also used in her mirrored pauldron and thigh faulds. At the “top” and “bottom” of the pauldrons and thigh plates are golden beast heads fashioned after a lion dog, with the head at the top and its jaw at the bottom. Her vambraces and shin guards are made from lamellar plate armors, with the finishing touch being her a pair of military boots. The boots are protected by greaves along, and the toes of her boots are decorated with the face of a lion dog. Rivets along with red cords, silk threads, and elaborate tassels tie her armor together and allows it to be easily removed. Her armor is brown in color, with golden interlocking pieces in the mountain armor. The armor’s accents are blue in color, matching the blue waist cushion she wears. The cushions are held in place by her leather brown belt, with the snarling head of a lion dog used as the golden belt “buckle”. Along the belt are notches for Jingyi’s pouches and weapon sheaths. The final piece is a helmet that Jingyi rarely wears. It’s painted golden in color with elaborate cheek guards that had been stylized into the form of jutting gilded wings. The cheek guards reach down to her shoulders, protecting her neck. On the front of the helmet is the face of a lion dog, and out the extending out the top of the helmet is a red plume.

Jingyi has a rather open body language; it’s easy to read her through her movements. She tends to act on instinct, and her body language can be rather simple and straight forwards, as she is with her words. Her emotions are clearly displayed from her body language, from sadness to pure excitement. If she’s about to cry, it’s easy to see her face scrunch up as her eyebrows furrow before the dams open.


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Name: Aseroth De Lucas II

Country Affiliation: Kou Empire

Race: Fanalis • Dominant / Human • Recessive

Tier: D • Novice

Class: Warrior

Age + Birthdate:18 • January 8th

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Hetrosexual

Personality:
Aseroth, hasn’t forgotten the people who has looked down on him. Whether they saw him as a bastard, or a ruthless brute on the battlefield. He had no worries about them. His ‘pride’ was too great for anyone to knock him down. Aseroth, mother had always told him to never let anyone bring him down, and to always prove those who sought to try down. Her words was his backbone to rising up to the occasions and never faltering to anything. It was her death that made him cold however. Through his sour life, she was his light and when she died only a chilling storm took over his inner rage.

Being lost has change quite couple things for Aseroth. He may be a fanalis, but he isn’t dumb. Haven’t grown indecisive, Aseorth finds himself having multiple second thoughts when trying to make a decision. Once he does however, he see through with it being his main attributes, and never having regrets. Aseroth, tone has severely changed though like he was laidback and happy to go along with anything, but now he’s normally serious, and observant. Speaking on matters as he sees fit, and questioning with two questions.

Likes:
Battle;Thirst: His raw thirst for battle, is the reason why he enlisted in the rather than be forced into the Kou Empire Army.

Family/Friends: Aseroth enjoys spending quality time with his friends, and family. When he’s not working, he usually out or home.

Training: Having a thirst for battle, he spends his time honing his ability. Aseroth, is always up for learning something new, or genuine time sparring close friends.

Dislikes:
Snakes: Spending two months in the Jade Dragon Mountains. Aseroth grew to dislike 'giant snakes', not all snakes since he had to run from one for so long.

Abusive People: He can't stand someone who abuses someone else. Aseroth, would completely lose his composure and try to stop a abusive person.

Aspirations:
Aseroth, goal in life has slightly changed. He doesn’t see himself holding his dynasty name any longer, and plans to leave it all to his younger brother. Scratching out the name ‘De Lucas’ seeing in how it’s not very kou’ian, he believes he should set himself free and leave Kou. Aseroth, does however want to explore a dungeon still and experiences the vast lands it holds not concerned about the dungeons power. Whether he can achieve this goal or not, being able to see more then Kou would satisfy him.

Phobias/fears:
Aseroth, doesn’t enjoy having the heartache that comes along with love. He has a phobia that if someone loves him, or if he loves someone dearly. It would show a weakness for him, or crush the other person. Seeing in how many don’t care about his bastard background, Aseroth still harbors that emotional scar of not being able to seek a relationship. He can’t seem to find a way to shake this so whenever he’s confronted in a situation such as feelings… he goes mute or rather zoned out.

Face-Claim: Tobirama Senju | Naruto


Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Crimson

Height: 198.12 cm
Weight: 65.31 kg


Appearance:
Before:

Aseroth is a rather large and tall individual, standing at 6’4. He has golden amber eyes, and long black hair - pulled back into a ponytail, majority of the time. His wardrobe consists of a white kataginu, with dark red trimming, and white bandages cut at the fingertips wrapped around his forearms and hands. A gray cloth belt to hold up a pair of black trouser shorts, taped at the knee in bandages as well. Ending his set of clothing with a pair of bamboo made sandles given to him as a parting gift from his mother.

His facial features are really distinctive anyone easily or possibly guessing he a fanalis, by his eyes.  Scars marks his bare chest seen through his kataginu, revealing immense pain taken out on his body throughout years.

Aseroth, has marked his face with three red marking from blood of his enemy, one under each of his eyes and on his chin. His new casual outfit is a blue kimono, with armour underneath. A white haori over the blue kimono, with a large straw hat that rice farmers usually wore. His usually facial appearance is cold, and his eyes are sharp. Aseroth, standing straight up and not all loosy-goosy anymore. His composure has straightened, out and he’s gotten more lean with a cut figure to him.

In combat situation however, or when he goes to do a job. Aseroth attire is completely different except for color scheme. He wears a basic blue armour, with a fur collar over a one piece black suit. He wears a metal forehead protector, with brown sandals. Usually the color scheme is hard to see when he’s wearing it because, Aseroth rampages or slaughters through his opponents. During a mindless rampage in a ‘fanalis rage’, Aseroth eyes tend to be like that of a animal and glowing red.

Rukh Alignment: White

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History:
History 1:

Aseroth,  lived a moderate life, with his late mother, than with his retired abusive stepfather. His early childhood years were quite sustainable with his stepfather, Aseorth de Lucas I, disowning the child and calling him a bastard and his own personal slave. Leaving a rather hated and cold connection between him and his father to later grow out of . Due to his mother, Megan de Lucus, having a affair with one of the household slave named Quin, ending up pregnant with a baby in a 5 month secret affair. When Aseorth I, found out he sought the fanalis slave out and merciless whipped him, not using a regular whip but the metal chains he used to restrain the fanalis.

Violently beating the Quin, to the point to where Megan attempted to stop her husband and him knocking the pregnant women backwards off him. This enraged Quin so much that he grabbed the metal chains, using the super human strength fanalis are known for to fight against the man, ultimately Aseroth  finished off Quin, using a pistols from his coat pocket shooting him directly in the heart while receiving a major damage to his jawline and lower spine. Megan, weeping over the dead body of Quin, as Azeroth collected himself to soon drag his wife by the hair away from the body heading back to the main house leaving the other slaves to clean up the messy situation. 9 months later, Aseroth de Lucas II, was born on January 8, on a cold windy day. Holding strong features to Quin, Aseroth I looked at the child is high disdain, menace, and grim frowns each time he saw him.

Growing up in the household, all the slaves and workers knew of what occur between, Megan and Quin, which brought forth little Aseroth, but keep quiet about the incident. Megan cherished her child, not allowing many to get close to him knowing that her husband planned to send the child into a life of  solitude and possibly slavery for a high price. She did every for up until she started growing ill, around the time of Aseroth 10 birthday. Aseroth I, shortly begun to steal his stepson away during times of night and merciless torture him in pure darkness, for hours on end possibly until dawn. Pushing his limits and battering his body at just 10.  Aseroth, grow a deep hate for his stepfather dispersing his every cell, each time he would get taken away by force at night by the loyal staff to his father and put through several torturing devices nearly passing out to each and everyone seemly always passing out, but still they beat him.

His mother getting more ill by the day going by, Aseroth shortly begun his plan for revenge at age 13, meaning the torment and torture went on for 3 years his body greatly battered in bruises with a small muscle build but his rib cage was easily visible. In the upcoming years, Aseroth stepfather made him do all the heavy lifting jobs, which benefited him helping build his grand body for later years. Getting closer to his revenge, Aseroth mother passed during one of the nights he was being vigorously beaten by his stepfather, he broke the bind holding him back, his skin red with his muscles bulging out. In the darkness the only thing seen was his Golden Amber eyes piercing through illuminating fear into the old man. Aseroth II hasn't released such amount of enduring pain upon someone like he did that of loyal staff and his old father, reviving scars due to the fierce fighting he endured and bestowed upon them, leaving his father crippled. The loyal staffs were tied up and left inside the dark room, and locked away inside until they eventually kicked the bucket. Aseroth I and II, returned to the regular house, covers in blood, Aseroth II, walking with his unconscious father in his arms into his mother room surround by personal nurses until he shed several tears that night.

His attitude on life changed after this experience placing fear into his stepfather who later secured himself in the wing of the house never really talking again. As for Azeroth, he explore the city and taken interest of music and adventure heavily into his life, while also in the city to cover up his scars he underwent a full upper body back, and arms tattoo. Getting around to the age of 17, Kou officials came to either recruiter Azeroth de Lucas II into the military by force or will not really an option.  He later enrolled into the military and went through the entrance trail, and has served the military for a short amount of time.



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20Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 06/09/17, 10:01 am

Unless you just didn't want one for some reason, using this you won't have a header image for your character. Also, why is your class set to "Manipulation" on this? Aseroth is just a warrior, no?


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23Character Update Requests Empty Re: Character Update Requests on 15/09/17, 12:17 pm

Updating Jahan's History. We derped a bit

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Character Name: Jahanghir Nikator
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Jahangir is a product of a relationship between the High Priestess Nefertiry Baket and a Reiman Soldier Augustus Nikator.  The relationship was taboo and due to the fued between Heliohapt and Reim, certain men that are now in the council, wished for the death of the child and his Father Augustus. The couple planned to escape Heliohapt and flee to Reim once the child was born, yet things had not turned out how they planned.

His father and his military friends whom Jahan would grow to call his "uncles" were ambushed as they prepared to leave Heliohapt. Jahan's father was killed in the battle, his comrades were able to flee with Jahangir to Reim, where the boy lived the rest of his life believing his mother was dead. Jahangir spent some time in and out of orphanages, at firs due to his "uncles" having to go through the adoption process, and later dut to his "uncles" being a tad bit less than "fit" guardians. The mens drinking and violent escapades ultimately led to Jahan having almost no supervision as a child, where he would get in huge trouble, only for his  guardians to be considered unfit and for them to change down the line to another of his fathers comrades.

Unfortunately Jahangir was always...Different. His brown skin made his origins evident, but his insane strength and ability made him monstrous. He didnt have many friends his age to say the least. Any friends he did make were usually made in battle one way or another; rather that had been by saving their asses or impressing them is subjective.

However in Heliohapt his mother the High Priestess of The Central Temple of Ra, whom leads the council is very much alive. She has remarried and had 4 children. Yet the woman has contracted a strange illness and her time left seems to be limited. She spends majority of her time trying to quell any conflicts between Heliohapt and Reim, in hopes that her first born son Jahan is still alive.

The rest is simple history, Jahangir learned swordplay starting from the age of 10 and due to his military connections he had several mentors. He eventually turned to create his own unorthodox fighting style , combing spinning and acrobatic movements  with skill full sword techniques. He left his home to venture on his own at 17 however he still is often in his home country of Reim.

Which was my history here
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 [b]Personality:[/b] Koko is impulsive, meaning she often acts before thinking. This tends to get her into a lot of trouble as it starts alot of fights, causes internal strife, and strenious (but sometimes hilarious) misunderstandings. Although she may come off as a hot blooded troublemaker (which she kinda is), she is actually quite nice when you get to know her. She honors her friends and repays the debts she owes by any means necessary. She'll go as far to pay off a friends debt. To her, friends are like family, since her's is gone.

Koko used to regret her birth deformity. She was born small and never grew to the height of the normal Immuchakk. She stayed the size of a human, although she was a pure bred. With time though she learned to accept it as a part of her, and a way to fit in with the humans a lot better. Koko's life wasn't terrible but she didn't have the best life. She was branded a freak of nature and exiled from her village due to her size. During this time, the driving force in her life, was her father. Together they found a new home for themselves within the tundra of Immuchakk. During this time Koko was taught by her father that love is a very volatile emotion and that it can cloud judgement. He however only asked for her to at least try and keep her emotions in check as a female. She was also taught the basics of survival. She'd taken up hobbies and learned talents from the ever rare traveler they acquired. She fell in love with Singing and for the first time in a long time she was feeling... truly happy.

When Koko's father died, it took a hard hit on her. She didn't cry at all, she was just... mortified. She was learned in Totomamoru that crying was a weakness and weakness could be extorted. So instead of shedding tears, she simply trained in her home for years at a time with her fathers spear. Her Father, was the only person she had left in the world and she lost him. She feels pain whenever she hears about a dungeon. However afraid she is though, Koko would never back down from a challenge. What was worse, was that they never found his body...only his weapon and his ripped black shirt which Koko fashioned into a jacket that she wears all the time. There was never any solace. She however decided to give up hope after a month of nothing showing up. She didn't want to give up but it would hurt a lot less if she did. In the end her father's body was never found and she moved on with life, pushing through the pain like always. but this time... alone. When things got rough she could no longer rely on her father, she needed to learn it all her own. This memory was like a fresh begining. It was her first step into adulthood. A step she was forced to take. She has a bad habit of bottling up her probles. She'd rather shoulder the entire burden and make it sound as if everything is fine when really it's not. She's secretly breaking inside. Eventually there will become a point where she'll explode.
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  [b]Likes:[/b]
   Honor: She always keeps her word.
   
   Challenges: If it's a fight she thinks she can win, she'll never back down, other wise she'll listen to what her gut tells her. So far she's never backed down from a challenge.

   Families: They're always heartwarming to see. Seeing as how she no longer has a family, she looks upon and over these famalies because they remind her of the family she once had when it was just her and her father.

   Camping: She's very good at surviving in the wild. She's done it the majority of her life. It reminds koko of her dad.

   Singing: She learned this from a traveler that stayed with them for a bit. Eventually as the years passed and her singing practice proved fruitful. She was graced with a beautiful voice that could lull babies to sleep, change someones day from terrible to great, and even calm the angry. (power of music is no joke)

   Her Father: This man was the most influential person in her life. He couldn't teach her about everything, so she wasn't a girly girl but she knew how to handle her basic needs and the needs of others. He went into the Plague Dungeon and eye witness accounts say that his group was ambushed and left for dead.

   Training: She has to find some way to relieve stress. It also helped her get over her fathers death.

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      Cheating: Cheating is a very dishonerable thing to do. You not only disrespect the sport for the rules and regulations set in place for a reason but you also disrespect your oppenent and yourself.

     Being talked down to: Koko see's everyone as equal, and will only talk down to you as a joke or to rile you up.

   Dungeons: Her father went missing (or was most likely killed) in one of these. She would of course have her reservations about going into one of these. However she isn't afraid to go in and show her enemies who's boss.

   Disrespect to/by a parent to/from a child: Respect is a 2 way street and she doesn't stand for abuse. She believes in the wholesome family love. She believes that life's too short to live hating each other.

 
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 [b]Aspirations:[/b] "The one thing I Aspire to have the most is a family I guess. Currently I'm sort of lacking in that department and i'd like to know how it feels to be surrounded by family... sorry... it's just... bad memories. My mom passed away during child birth and left me with my dad. Sadly my father died after going to traverse the dungeon in Immuchakk. I miss him dearly and he was all I had left... I really just yearn for that family setting right now. I want to be surrounded by friends and family because friends are family."

   [b]Phobias/fears:[/b] "Well to be honest I'm known for my fearlessness because there is no challenge that I can't face... at least... that's what i'd have said before if my father was still alive. To be honest my fear is actually a quite recent creation. I'm afraid of Dungeons, after all one of those... those... THINGS! took away the only family I had left in this world. No matter how afraid I am I'll step up to the challenge if the need arises, unless i'm forced to. after all I have nothing to lose."
 
 
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 [b]Appearance:[/b]Koko is a very special Immuchakk she stands at 162.56 cm. She is actually extremely short for the race as an immuchakk however it is a birth defect. She however is very fit despite her size. She is mostly muscle still and can do everything a normal Immuchakk can do. She has very long blue hair that she ties up in a ponytail. Around her shoulders she wears her fathers leather skin shirt. Yes her father was 3x larger than she was, maybe more, but in the end she fasioned it into a nice jacket. She used some material to wrap her hair in a ponytail. She was also able to make black boots out of them as well. Strapped on her back is her father's old spear. Wulfric.  It was his hunting spear. He had memories with it and kept in very good condition. Now Wulfric was in Koko's hands.

  Rukh Alignment: White
  Special Traits: Aside from being small for an Immuchakk... no.
 
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 [b]History:[/b] Koko's mother died giving birth, however she ended up becoming the splitting image ofthe woman. As a baby, Koko was abnormally small especially for immuchakk children. This wasn't seen as a problem though in the village of Totomamoru. After all as a baby it was too early to tell if she'd gain a sudden growth spurt. After all she was only but a child. However the notion of growth was thrown out the window as she got older. The Elders of Totomamoru only accepted pure bred Immuchakks and exiled any others that had any differences within their bloodline.

The older the girl got, the more apparent her problem became. As the girl aged, her peers had begun to tower over her while she stayed the size of a regular human female. It was hard to deal with the disapproval of her elders. She could do everything that her peers did if not better. However they would never approve of the child being around the others. Eventually they began ostracizing Koko, and when she finally became of age and stopped growing, her size stayed that of the average adult Female. At this point the Elders had waited long enough and exiled the girl from Totomamoru. Contact with her was to be ceased immediately. The elders said "We can no longer tolerate this ...blemish... this... FREAK OF NATURE within our borders. Either she is to leave or be killed." In the End Koko had decided to leave and never come back. Her father came with her, because, he couldn't leave his baby girl all alone.

They made their home in the tundra surviving for the longest time. While there, Koko was lonely but she had her father there and that was all that mattered. A dungeon would soon spawn in immuchakk and technically as a member of the village of Totomamoru the village elders chose Koko's father to go  with a chosen band of warriors to conquer it. Sadly they failed and Koko's dad was never seen again. What happened to him was a mystery but all that was left behind was his Spear and his torn shirt. These were delivered to Koko, who shed no tears. She simply look horrified and hid herself away from soceity for years at a time. During that time she turned her fathers coat into a jacket for herself seeing as how it was more than twice her size. With her final thoughts and memories she Left her Small Tundra home and left her past behind, her father's spear in hand.


 
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   "Come on, step it up!" She said resting her arms upon the spear that rested upon her shoulders. Koko's opponent. Was face first in the snow covered mud with a murderous scowl on his visage. He was bleeding from several spots that infused with the snow and mud below. Her eyes carefully kept watch over their target. Scanning for any fight left in the immuchakk behemoth. The brute growled and grabbed his club and flailed it about wildly. Koko simply used her spear to vault in the air and jab the point into the Immuchakks head. The roar emanated through the area, echoing off the sea of white snow and nearby caves. The Brute grabbed at it's head trying to get Koko and the spear out.

Koko hopped off the spear and up into the air. "I think you need to take a Nap!" She said coming down. She landed on the behemoth's head fist first. A loud crack sounded out loud. as a smile cracked upon Koko's face. The Immuchakk fell to his knees and then back face first into the muddy snow. "Serves you right for attacking me out of the blue." She said turning away from the large Immuchakk. as she began to walk into the sheets of white she grumbled under her breath.

"Stupid, Immuchakk! I apologized for stepping on his territory. I mean I was all for leaving, he didn't have to attack me." Koko said as she traversed through the sea of white flakes.  


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