Zephyr's Redone Abilities

Name: Shattering Elbow
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Type: Offensive
Class: Warrior
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Elbow must always be cocked or in a nintey degree angle.
Scaling: More Hits
Sustain: 2
Cool-Down: 1 post
Description: Zeraldin uses his innate Strength as a Fanalis to strike his opponent with his elbow, causing enough damage[D-tier Damage] to make them keel over and gasp for breath.


Name: Shattering Fang
Tier: C Tier
Cost: 20 Stamina
Type: Offensive
Class: Warrior
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: claw like formation of the hands
Scaling: More Hits
Sustain: 2
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: Zeraldin forms his hand into a claw like formation and strikes the opponent near the joints of their body, causing their arms or legs to dislocate. Optionally it can be used to damage the muscles in their body. [Does C-tier Damage]

Name: Swift Rush
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Type: Offensive
Class: Warrior
Range: 10 meters
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must start in a crouching position
Scaling: More Hits
Sustain: 2
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Zeraldin crouches and takes a running position before taking off in a full frontal rush at  to either tackle or run over his opponent. [Does D-tier Damage]

Name: Shattering Blow
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Requirements/Drawbacks:  -
Scaling: More Hits
Sustain: 2
Class: Warrior
Range: 10 Meters
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Zeraldin uses his innate strength to deliver a crushing blow to the users body, causing them to fall over and gasp for breath. [Does D-tier Damage]

I'll leave a few general notes here before grading this properly:

-Please remove all number values for speed. We don't use them anymore.
-Please properly fill out the Requirements/Drawback section. "Body" doesn't count, nor does "Use of body" as it's far too vague.
-You are able to add one more D-tier ability as you get 5 starters. 4 D-tiers and 1 C-tier.

Done?

I took the liberty of making some edits to get you approved and back to rping as fast as possible. If you're okay with these edits consider them approved, pm me and I'll lock/move this thread. If you have complaints however, just post em here.

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[b]Name:[/b] Shattering Elbow
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must cock their elbow back in preparation for the ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] More Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]The user drives their elbow into the opponent aiming for the gut. This ability deals D-tier damage.[/list]


[b]Name:[/b] Shattering Fang
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must flex their hands and form a claw-shape prior to using this ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] More Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]Zeraldin forms his hand into a claw like formation and strikes the opponent aiming for a joint. The strike deals C-tier damage.[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Swift Rush
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must start in a crouching position and have solid footing.
[b]Scaling:[/b] More Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]Zeraldin crouches and takes a running position before taking off in a full frontal rush at  to either tackle or run over his opponent dealing D-tier damage.[/list]

[b]Name:[/b] Shattering Blow
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User draws their hand back and clenches it into a fist prior to use.
[b]Scaling:[/b] More Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]Zeraldin throws a punch aiming to deliver a crushing blow to the user's body dealing D-tier damage.[/list]