Vavantine's Redone Abilities

Vavatine · 1 Vavantine's Redone Abilities 12/07/16, 03:12 pm

Vavatine

C-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(90/90)
Stamina:

(210/210)

The Following Abilities have been Renamed:

Sword Jab → Crippling Blade
Parry → Knock Away
Double Slash → Lotus Dance
Smash → Lotus Daze
Side Kick → Spinning Lotus
Calculated Punch → Hits of the Nimble Lotus

D-tier Abilities

D-Tier:

C-tier Abilities

C-Tier:

Knock Away

Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a shield and have both feet planted firmly on the ground.
Scaling: Defense - The defensive capabilities of an ability may increase by one Tier for every 10 Stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-Tier)
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20/10 Stamina
Description:

Lotus Dance

Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a bladed weapon.
Scaling: Damage - The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier)
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20/10 Stamina
Description:

Lotus Daze

Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a shield and have solid footing.
Scaling: Status Duration - The duration of the status effect increases by one post for every 10 Magoi/Stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20/10 Stamina
Description:

Spinning Lotus

Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must have both feet planted on the ground with about a foot of space in between. Disorientation due to dizziness will occur if sustained for multiple attacks. The number of sustains equal the amount of posts where the user is disoriented.
Scaling: Hits - The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20/10 Stamina
Description:

Hits of the Nimble Lotus

Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be standing with their feet apart and knees slightly bent with arms tucked in and fists raised to the chin.
Scaling: Hits - The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20/10 Stamina
Description:

Duquin · 2 Re: Vavantine's Redone Abilities 12/07/16, 05:55 pm

Duquin

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Sword Jab
I like this ability. In fact, I want to make it better.

Requirements - Change this to requiring a weapon capable of stabbing. Then this could potentially be used with other weapons you get later too. Name might change a bit as a result though.

Sadly, I must note that anyone with C-tier strength or higher could break free prematurely. Do keep that in mind.

Knock Away:

Requirements - The other abilities I let slide because they were so basic. But here I'd like to ask you to add more than just "have a shield". Rather than needing a certain object, I'd prefer to see abilities require your character fulfill some kind of condition. In the case of this ability, a common example would be "User must have solid footing with their feet planted."

Lotus Dance:

Requirements/Drawbacks - This might make your character a bit dizzy for a post. Or, you might put that they are unable to perform it while dizzy. Or you could come up with something else but please add something other than the standard you've been going with.

Range - You list the range as short. So if the ability includes some kind of step or movement other than spinning please mention it in the description~

Spinning Lotus:

Scaling - This isn't a requirement, just a suggestion. But I think Hits/Amount scaling works better here based on the description you put.

Hits of the Nimble Lotus:

Same suggestion as spinning lotus~

Vavatine · 3 Re: Vavantine's Redone Abilities 12/07/16, 09:25 pm

Vavatine

C-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(90/90)
Stamina:

(210/210)

Bump

Duquin · 4 Re: Vavantine's Redone Abilities 13/07/16, 04:46 pm

Duquin

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(400/400)
Stamina:

(100/100)

Approved:

Code:: [center][u][b][size=13]D-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center] [spoiler=D-Tier] [center][b]Crippling Blade[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a weapon capable of stabbing. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage - The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier) [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post [b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] Using their sword, the user thrusts into their opponent's foot at and leaves it there, immobilizing them for 1 Post.[/list] [center][b]Downward Strike[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a bladed weapon and have feet firmly planted on ground. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage - The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier) [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post [b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user swings their bladed weapon down at an opponent, dealing D-Tier damage to opponent(s) when struck.[/list] [center][b]Horizontal Strike[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a bladed weapon and have feet firmly planted on ground. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage - The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier) [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post [b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user swings their bladed weapon horizontally at their opponent(s), dealing D-Tier damage when struck.[/list] [center][b]Diagonal Strike[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] D [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a bladed weapon and have feet firmly planted on ground. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage - The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier) [b]Sustain:[/b] -. [b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post [b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user swings their bladed weapon diagonally at their opponent(s), dealing D-Tier damage when struck.[/list] [/spoiler] [center][u][b][size=13]C-tier Abilities[/size][/b][/u][/center] [spoiler=C-Tier] [center][b]Knock Away[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Defensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a shield and have both feet planted firmly on the ground. [b]Scaling:[/b] Defense - The defensive capabilities of an ability may increase by one Tier for every 10 Stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-Tier) [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts [b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user uses their shield to knock away a direct attack that deals up to C-Tier damage.[/list] [center][b]Lotus Dance[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a bladed weapon. [b]Scaling:[/b] Damage - The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier) [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts [b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user swings their bladed weapon in a fluid figure-eight formation while spinning. This technique includes two strikes total with each dealing D-Tier damage.[/list] [center][b]Lotus Daze[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Supplementary [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a shield and have solid footing. [b]Scaling:[/b] Status Duration - The duration of the status effect increases by one post for every 10 Magoi/Stamina that is invested. [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts [b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user slams their shield into the opponent’s face, causing disorientation for 2 posts.[/list] [center][b]Spinning Lotus[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must have both feet planted on the ground with about a foot of space in between. Disorientation due to dizziness will occur if sustained for multiple attacks. The number of sustains equal the amount of posts where the user is disoriented. [b]Scaling:[/b] Hits - The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts [b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user jumps into the air and spins while performing a series of kicks at their opponent(s). This technique includes two kicks total, each dealing D-Tier damage.[/list] [center][b]Hits of the Nimble Lotus[/b][/center] [b]Tier:[/b] C [b]Class:[/b] Warrior [b]Type:[/b] Offensive [b]Range:[/b] Close [b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be standing with their feet apart and knees slightly bent with arms tucked in and fists raised to the chin. [b]Scaling:[/b] Hits - The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. [b]Sustain:[/b] - [b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts [b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 Stamina [b]Description:[/b] [list] The user thrusts out one fist at a time toward their opponents in a swift motion and brings them back in before performing another punch. This technique includes two punches total, each dealing D-Tier damage.[/list] [/spoiler]