You are not connected. Please login or register

Nessa's starting abilities

5 posters

Go down  Message [Page 1 of 1]

1Nessa's starting abilities Empty Nessa's starting abilities 09/12/15, 04:41 pm

NessaArkwright

NessaArkwright
D-Tier
D-Tier

Name: Blitz Thrust
Tier: D
Cost: 10/5 stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts/sustained + 1
Description: Nessa  thrusts her spear forward, piercing and cutting whatever is hit. The ability inflicts D-Tier damage, moves at 10 m/s.

Name: Sweep Edge
Tier: D
Cost: 10/5 Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts/sustained + 1
Description: Nessa lashes out with her spear, making a horizontal or diagonal slash, meant to cut the target from side to side. The ability moves at 10 m/s and if it connects it deals D-Tier damage. It has a scale of 3 meters from one side to the other, with its range being the reach of the weapon itself.

Name: Shaft Strike
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: Nessa swings her spear in an arc, intending to hit her target with the blunt shaft. The ability moves at 10 m/s and if it makes contact the target is disoriented for 1 post.

Name: Spear Parry
Tier: D
Cost: 10/5 Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 posts/sustained + 1
Description: Nessa uses the tip or the shaft of her spear to redirect incoming attacks and avoid damage. The ability has a speed of 10 m/s and can redirect attacks up to C-Tier.

Name: Lance Dive
Tier: C
Cost: 20 stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: With this ability Nessa uses her spear as a pole to jump up into the air, covering a distance of up to 5 meters. From there she can slash her target or descend upon them to directly pierce them with the spear. The ability inflicts D-Tier damage if it connects and has a speed of 10 m/s.



Last edited by NessaArkwright on 10/12/15, 11:52 am; edited 3 times in total

2Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 09/12/15, 08:46 pm

Hohotaro

Hohotaro
A-Tier
A-Tier

Blitz Thrust: You do not have to write down the scale of the attack since it will use the weapon's length. It will be bad for you happen to acquire a longer weapon and you only have 3m as your maximum reach.

Sweep Edge: Same as above :D

Shaft Strike: Paralysis status effect is strictly for stealth and lightning magic. You can do immobilization though.

Spear Parry: This one is good to go ^O_O^

Lance Dive: This looks like a movement skill and an attack skill. So as to the Supplement/Offensive rule you have to tone down the effects to 1 Tier below(D-Tier).

I'm just an intern though wait for an actual staff before doing the changes. Nessa's starting abilities QJjQ6cX

3Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 09/12/15, 10:11 pm

Merrze

Merrze
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Blitz Thrust: Based of the wording for this ability you would need to be dashing in order to use it first. So it would be a condition you'd have to meet. Besides this the only other necessary edits are the ones Hoho has pointed out.

4Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 10/12/15, 11:24 am

NessaArkwright

NessaArkwright
D-Tier
D-Tier

Made the edits. I clarified the cone thing in the sweep edge to clarifying that the 3 meters are for scale and not for range. Replaced paralysis with disorientation.

5Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 10/12/15, 11:39 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Shaft Strike : You are missing the speed, you need to add 10m/s for it. So it will be like :
Nessa swings her spear in an arc, intending to hit her target with the blunt shaft at 10m/s. If the ability makes contact the target is disoriented for 1 post.

Lance Dive : The scale should be in D-tier since it is Off/Sup ability, so instead of 10 meters, it should be 5 meters.

Everything else looks good for me, so please bump after you make the edit ^^

6Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 10/12/15, 11:53 am

NessaArkwright

NessaArkwright
D-Tier
D-Tier

Oh, right. Forgot that range is also restricted to D.

Well edited it now.

7Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 10/12/15, 12:13 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Looks good ^^

Nessa's starting abilities Pre-approval_zps0phvqans

8Nessa's starting abilities Empty Re: Nessa's starting abilities 10/12/15, 12:47 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

abilities approved, add to vault~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Blitz Thrust
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts/sustained + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Nessa  thrusts her spear forward, piercing and cutting whatever is hit. The ability inflicts D-Tier damage, moves at 10 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Sweep Edge
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts/sustained + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Nessa lashes out with her spear, making a horizontal or diagonal slash, meant to cut the target from side to side. The ability moves at 10 m/s and if it connects it deals D-Tier damage. It has a scale of 3 meters from one side to the other, with its range being the reach of the weapon itself.

[b]Name:[/b] Shaft Strike
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Nessa swings her spear in an arc, intending to hit her target with the blunt shaft. The ability moves at 10 m/s and if it makes contact the target is disoriented for 1 post.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Parry
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts/sustained + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Nessa uses the tip or the shaft of her spear to redirect incoming attacks and avoid damage. The ability has a speed of 10 m/s and can redirect attacks up to C-Tier.

[b]Name:[/b] Lance Dive
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] With this ability Nessa uses her spear as a pole to jump up into the air, covering a distance of up to 5 meters. From there she can slash her target or descend upon them to directly pierce them with the spear. The ability inflicts D-Tier damage if it connects and has a speed of 10 m/s.

Sponsored content



Back to top  Message [Page 1 of 1]

Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum