First Wave of Spells

Name: Rising Sun
Tier: D
Cost: 10, 5 per post
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2 turns
Description: Rising Sun creates a simple ball of light from around his staff before moving into the air five meters above his head at 10 m/s, creating lights falls upon all objects within the area. The strength of the light on the eyes of anyone looking directly at the caster (as that is the direction of the ball of light) causes it to be very difficult to see.

Name: Solar Flare
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Element: Light
Class: Offense
Range: 10 m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: A focused beam of red light shoots out from the epicenter of his staff at 15 m/s, washing over everyone within a radius of 10 meters. Everyone caught in the red wave suffers C rank burning damage.

Solomon's Proxy wrote:*Note: A player may only set up 5 abilities to be approved for training, per topic.

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2486-ability-guidelines-important#11809


Orb of Enlightenment: The orb's listed range is 5 meters, but you state in your spell description that it has a range of 10 meters. Which one is correct?

Mirror Image: The target you are using your spell on should be within 10 meters of you, and therefore your spell should have a range of 10 meters.

Rising Sun: Friendly fire is on, which means you will not be able to have 1 effect on others, but a different effect upon yourself. It is 1 effect, experienced by anyone and everyone in an AOE or just 1 target in a single target. This is, of course, unless you have a spell that can clash against it. Duration is incorrect, as it is either instant, 1 post, or sustain. It may only have 1 effect of supplementary. It cannot both blind and destroy invisibility spells. If you instead had it be a blind, I would be okay with it 'clashing' against an invisibility spell however. How large is the area that this spell affects? Note that I am not asking how large is the ball of light, but how large its influence area is (which should go by scale). You may choose to write in how large the ball of light is, as well, of course (which should not exceed scale).

Light Sheath: Solid Light is a combination magic that requires strength and light. A list of current combination magics can be found here. Light magic cannot be physically tangible. That being said, you are more than welcome to use any offensive ability to clash against another offensive ability. Some supplementary abilities may be able to clash against offensives and other supplementary abilities.

Light Wave: I'm assuming you're directing this light in a particular direction? Like, a wave of energy 10x10x10 meters in size in a direction of your choice?

Bump - Clarified.

And no, light wave is basically a dome of light.

Mirror Image: The way you have it worded, it is a 10 meter diameter scale ability (effects everyone within 10 meters of him), and D-Tier is a 5 meter diameter scale ability. If you instead had it so that the ability simply created 5 clones that could move within 10 meters of Seti, then that would be fine.

Rising Sun: Duration is still incorrect. I am assuming that the light essentially blinds anyone who is close? Your ability won't effect more than 5 meters away, so please remember to put something like 'in a 5 meter diameter from the ball of light' into the ability.

Light Wave: Keep in mind that all AOE spells can harm the user if the user is caught in the blast.

Bump

I have edited the abilities to fit within the guidelines. Add to your vault for use ^^.

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[b]Name:[/b] Rising Sun
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10, 5 per post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns
[b]Description:[/b] Rising Sun creates a simple ball of light from around his staff before moving into the air five meters above his head at 10 m/s, creating lights falls upon all objects within a 5 meter area. The strength of the light on the eyes of anyone looking directly at the caster (as that is the direction of the ball of light) causes it to be very difficult to see within that area.

[b]Name:[/b] Solar Flare
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offense
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A focused beam of red light shoots out from the epicenter of his staff at 15 m/s, washing over everyone within a diameter of 10 meters. Everyone caught in the red wave suffers C rank burning damage.

Because it apparently got deleted at some point, I'm just going to repost Mirror Image here for approval.

Name: Mirror Image
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 turns
Description: Using light energy, Seti implants a visual illusion on anyone within five meters who looks in his direction. This spell creates a series of five mirror images of himself (Hence the name) that are able to move up to 10 meters away from him. However, as these are literally just light and thus incorporeal, they can't actually do any damage, they just reduce the chances of actually hitting Seti to 20%. Each clone lasts until they're hit, either with a technique or with a plain attack.

Okay, looks good... I changed the duration to 1 post, since if the duration was 'instant' that means they would exist for about 1 second before disappearing.

Keep in mind the 20% estimate is simply a mathematically derived number and cannot be enforced via dice roll or other such gimmick unless the other player agrees to that ^^.

Bump if you're good with the spell.

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[b]Name:[/b] Mirror Image
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns
[b]Description:[/b] Using light energy, Seti implants a visual illusion on anyone within five meters of him. This spell creates five mirror images of himself that may move up to 10 meters away from him.

wait, so, this way they only exist for a single post? cos, if so, I have to make an edit.

If you changed the wording in the description, you could have it last for up to 2 posts. That would look like as follows:

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[b]Name:[/b] Mirror Image
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 turns
[b]Description:[/b] Using light energy, Seti implants a visual illusion on anyone within five meters of him. This spell creates five mirror images of himself that may move up to 10 meters away from him. This illusions remains in their sight for 2 posts.

When I edited your ability, I realized your prior ability had a lot of flavor text in it as well. I made edits to my prior post to reflect a cleaner looking spell.

alright, thank you. This topic can be closed, and I'll move these into my vault.