El Drago- Omega Tier Move

Name: Shock Throne Galling
Tier: Ω
Cost: 50 Stamina
Role: Legend
Range: 50 Meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: Once Per Thread
Description: El Drago can fire out 30 small 1.5 meter cubes of Lightning magic that's formed and fired at 30 m/s, and travels as far as 50 meters in any direction in a barrage or all at once in the form of a burst. El Drago can control the sum amount of cubes fired in each direction. 1-3 cubes do D rank damage, 4-7 Cubes do C rank damage, 8-14 cubes do B rank damage, 15-29 cubes do A rank damage, the full 30 cubes do omega tier damage.

you have the damage divided incorrectly...
30 cubes - Omega
15-29 cubes - A
8-14 cubes - B
4-7 cubs - C
1-3 cubes - D

Everything just keeps getting split in half.

Edited

approved for training~

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Name: Shock Throne Galling
Tier: Ω
Cost: 50 Stamina
Role: Legend
Range: 50 Meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: Once Per Thread
Description: El Drago can fire out 30 small 1.5 meter cubes of Lightning magic that's formed and fired at 30 m/s, and travels as far as 50 meters in any direction in a barrage or all at once in the form of a burst. El Drago can control the sum amount of cubes fired in each direction. 1-3 cubes do D rank damage, 4-7 Cubes do C rank damage, 8-14  cubes do B rank damage, 15-29 cubes do A rank damage, the full 30 cubes do omega tier damage.

Training Approved:

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Name: Shock Throne Galling
Tier: Ω
Cost: 50 Stamina
Role: Legend
Range: 50 Meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: Once Per Thread
Description: El Drago can fire out 30 small 1.5 meter cubes of Lightning magic that's formed and fired at 30 m/s, and travels as far as 50 meters in any direction in a barrage or all at once in the form of a burst. El Drago can control the sum amount of cubes fired in each direction. 1-3 cubes do D rank damage, 4-7 Cubes do C rank damage, 8-14  cubes do B rank damage, 15 cubes do A rank damage, 16-18 do 1 A rank and 1 D rank damage, 19-22 do 1 A rank and 1 C rank damage, 23-26 deal 1 A rank and 1 B rank damage, 27-29 do 1 A rank as well as 1 B rank and 1 D rank damage, and the full 30 cubes do Omega tier damage.

After discussing the amount rules with Ari, we are reverting it back to her original approval.

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Name: Shock Throne Galling
Tier: Ω
Cost: 50 Stamina
Role: Legend
Range: 50 Meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: Once Per Thread
Description: El Drago can fire out 30 small 1.5 meter cubes of Lightning magic that's formed and fired at 30 m/s, and travels as far as 50 meters in any direction in a barrage or all at once in the form of a burst. El Drago can control the sum amount of cubes fired in each direction. 1-3 cubes do D rank damage, 4-7 Cubes do C rank damage, 8-14  cubes do B rank damage, 15-29 cubes do A rank damage, the full 30 cubes do omega tier damage.