Bianca 4 SPELLS N

Name: Route Bombardment
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Bow
Class Supplementary
Range:  30 meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3posts
Description: Bianca fires 10 arrows in quick succession which travel at 20m/s within 30 meters of herself. Each arrow can bind a single limb of an opponent to the ground for 2 posts. If all 10 hit a single target, 2 limbs are pinned for 3 posts.

Name: Delay Shot
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type:Bow
Class Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 post
Description: Bianca shoots an arrow at 20 m/s into the sky in a direction of her choosing, which will come down in the next post within 30 meters of Bianca original position, to deals C-tier damage

Name: Backwards Shooting
Tier: D
Cost: 10 + 5 sustain
Weapon Type:Bow
Class Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Duration: sustain
Cool-Down: 2posts or Sustain + 1
Description: Bianca twists to shoot an arrow behind her at 15m/s to inflict D-tier damage to an opponent within 20 meters. This ability may be sustained to fire off another Backwards Shooting.

Overall, its Supplementary, not supplyment

Route Bombardment: Consider rewording the description as follows:

Bianca fires 10 arrows in quick succession which travel at 20m/s within 30 meters of herself. Each arrow can bind a single limb of an opponent to the ground for 2 posts. If all 10 hit a single target, 2 limbs are pinned for 3 posts.

Grapple Shot: This needs to include the length of the rope, which must follow the scale guidelines (5 meters). You would also not be able to pull yourself at the same speed of 15 m/s. The speed of the ability was applied to the arrow.

Delay Shot: Duration would be one post or instant, as it is the duration it takes to perform the ability. Consider rewording the description as follows:

Bianca shoots an arrow at 20 m/s into the sky in a direction of her choosing, which will come down in the next post within 30 meters of Bianca original position, to deals C-tier damage

Backwards Shooting: Duration would be sustained. Is she shooting BACKWARDS or is she twisting to shoot behind her? (Trying to figure out how to shoot backwards is all). The part about her sprinting is unnecessary and can simply be RPed out.

Bump Fixed all but havented edited the grapple one, since i might just ditch it , since only 5m worth of rope kind of makes the skill useless, since the point is to hit a target, tree, building , in the very rave chance someone leg, then pull the rope, but if the arrows gone 20 meters away, and  the ropes 5 meters, i can't magically pull a rope 15meters away from me.  id need to think on that one.

As far as the shooting backwards is concerned, she would be twisting slightly, Yeh their si the thing if she turned left, she wouldn't be able to hit someones right shoulder [Assuming their facing the same way and directly behind her.  Like she would be limtied to either directly behind her or a bias to the side shes twisted slightly, But i figured that bit diddn't need to go into the skill.

Ariella wrote:Delay Shot: Duration would be one post or instant, as it is the duration it takes to perform the ability.

Backwards Shooting: Consider rewording the description to:

Bianca twists to shoot an arrow behind her at 15m/s to inflict D-tier damage to an opponent within 20 meters. This ability may be sustained to fire off another Backwards Shooting.

Bump , Edited both and deleted the grapple attack

Approved for training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Route Bombardment
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b]  30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3posts
[b]Description:[/b] [size=12]Bianca fires 10 arrows in quick succession which travel at 20m/s within 30 meters of herself. Each arrow can bind a single limb of an opponent to the ground for 2 posts. If all 10 hit a single target, 2 limbs are pinned for 3 posts.[/size]

[b]Name:[/b] Delay Shot
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Bow
[b]Class [/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 post
[b]Description:[/b] Bianca shoots an arrow at 20 m/s into the sky in a direction of her choosing, which will come down in the next post within 30 meters of Bianca original position, to deals C-tier damage

[b]Name:[/b] Backwards Shooting
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 sustain
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Bow
[b]Class[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] [size=12]Bianca twists to shoot an arrow behind her at 15m/s to inflict D-tier damage to an opponent within 20 meters. This ability may be sustained to fire off another Backwards Shooting.[/size]

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t3415-bianca-vs-rufi-colosem-match-training-skills#17019.

Figured if others are doing training like this why can't i

The training is approved, however the match itself is not. Abilities added to vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Route Bombardment
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Bow
[b]Class[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b]  30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3posts
[b]Description:[/b] [size=12]Bianca fires 10 arrows in quick succession which travel at 20m/s within 30 meters of herself. Each arrow can bind a single limb of an opponent to the ground for 2 posts. If all 10 hit a single target, 2 limbs are pinned for 3 posts.[/size]

[b]Name:[/b] Delay Shot
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Bow
[b]Class [/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 post
[b]Description:[/b] Bianca shoots an arrow at 20 m/s into the sky in a direction of her choosing, which will come down in the next post within 30 meters of Bianca original position, to deals C-tier damage

[b]Name:[/b] Backwards Shooting
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 sustain
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Bow
[b]Class[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] sustain
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Bianca twists to shoot an arrow behind her at 15m/s to inflict D-tier damage to an opponent within 20 meters. This ability may be sustained to fire off another Backwards Shooting.