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1 New spells on 28/04/18, 01:39 am

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Ledo ant mano riešo
Tier: B-tier
Class: Magician (Ice)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must run two fingers down the stem of his medium, then flick it down rotating the medium to perform the spell.
Scaling: Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Magoi | 15 Magoi
Description:

    After Aseo running two fingers down the stem of any item creating sheet of ice over said item. Forming to the length, and becoming an sharp edge benefiting the item. Giving the item the normal B-tier damage, and item durability as if it was a weapon. The equip lasting 3 post.


Tyla tarp mūsų
Tier: A-tier
Class: Magician (Sound)
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must twirl the medium for casting around casual, ending with him placing it between his armpits. The spell has a safe zone of 85 cm in which the caster stands in.
Scaling: Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 4 Post
Cost: 40 Magoi | 20 Magoi
Description:

    Aseo claps his hands together after placing his staff between his armpits. Creating his own field of silence around himself sort of like the top half of a circular dome. It does not effective him even if he 'leaves' the field. Commanding the sound in the field at a radius of fifteen meters, and five meters above, around Aseo(Its moves with him as he the center of it) to deal C-tier damage to the ears of anyone who is in distance of the radius for 3 post stacking once a post. Causing disorientation for 1 Post, and the field of sound to last 3 Post.


Flight
Tier: D-Ω
Specialization: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must know strength magic.
Scaling: Flight Power
Sustain: -
Cool Down: -
Cost: 10
Description:

    The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.

    • D-tier: The magician has full control over where they fly, however they wobble in the air unsteadily and move at the speed of a leisurely stroll.
    • C-tier: The magician's flight is stable and they have control over their direction. The speed of the flight has increased to rival someone in a dead sprint.
    • B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.
    • A-tier: The magician can now fly at incredible speeds covering even great distances within a short amount of time.




Palaimintas Drakonas
Tier: A-tier
Class: Magician (Water)
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must offer up a drop of blood to provide sufficient means to have a connection to the construct. He would chant the name of the spell, and speak the name given to the water dragon.
Scaling: Rebirth: Giving 15 Stamina, and Magoi. Damage, or destruction the user can add more blood, and magoi to reform the dragon back to its original state while lowering the number of post it remains.
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 4 Post
Cost: 40 Magoi | 20 Magoi
Description:

    Aseo gathers the water in the air spawning a makeshift water dragon, 10-15 meters in length and 1-4 meters in circumference. The dragon takes on a faint bloody water look. It has a thought process, leaving it to deem all to none as its enemy, and it will protect the caster, not hesitate to attack. Being an dragon, it can take flight travelling at speeds equivalent to its caster tier(A-tier Speeds) due to the blood contract. The dragon deals A-tier damage alone with its physical attack, and is able to fly freely up to 30 meters from the caster. The spell last 4 post before evaporating.


Breath Of Dragons
Tier: B-tier
Class: Magician[Ice]
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Palaimintas Drakonas must be activated for this spell to work.
Scaling: Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier)
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 3 Post
Cost: 30 Magoi | 15 Sustain
Description:

    The frost breath travels 10 meters forward, with the size of the ice being 1-4 meters around. The frost breath does B-tier damage upon impact.



Last edited by Aseo Asehi on 16/05/18, 09:21 pm; edited 3 times in total


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2 Re: New spells on 30/04/18, 08:23 pm

Approved for training.


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3 Re: New spells on 03/05/18, 08:18 am

Upon further review there was some things overlooked, thus this is being pulled. Standby for grading


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4 Re: New spells on 03/05/18, 11:50 am

Alrighty Wassup aseo, Im keeping this informal because I'm not a lame.

Anyways here is what I need you to do.

First please include the magic types you are using in all of your ability descriptions. This determines the very nature of your ability.

Ledo ant mano riešo

remember its a spell so you need to wave your wand or something. you cant just touch it and have ice form.

Tyla tarp mūsų

How big is Aseos field of silence? Is anything within his field immune to his ability? Would him leaving the abilities field cancel the ability or damage his ears?

You have to remember that the effects/damage are split within an ability. So at B tier you cant have B tier damage and an effect. You can have C tier damage and an effect however. or You can raise it to A tier and have B tier damage and an effect.

Ištikimas sau

You said this was your borg ability? How does this involve the magicians borg? n

You cant modify hit scaling for triple hits, it wouldnt be effective either. Damage will still be split but it will be awkward to split your A tier damage into triple the amount of hits. It also wouldnt even be effective anymore.

At A tier, you can not get go over the limit of A tier damage. You simply can not have 2 sources of B tier damage, and then D tier burn damage.

Also this ability is light magic, as rukh shots are weak and can not produce such devastating effects. The best way to do this without light magic is Strength magic. You will not be able to cause the burn effect without light or heat magic however. You also can not make an A tier pure Rukh ability, its not how thats works in canon. Though you should note we have thought about adding rukh shots to the system after reading your ability.

Palaimintas Drakonas

first thing that sticks out is that you once again, have too many effects in this ability.

The smartest way to do this would be to make the Dragons frost attack a separate ability. i wont grade the frost breathe into your ability as it is, unless you want the frost breathe to do basic damage and not ability damage. Even so the frost needs to have its own range and dimensions.

You also have A tier flight on this thing, which i guess is a smart hack. Though, since when do water dragons even fly... wouldnt they be in the water, swimming lol. Id say you should give it flight based on Aseos strength magic. You need to clarify the distance it can move from you Aseo. Id say 40 meters because its A tier. Id say the dragon does B tier natural damage through striking.


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5 Re: New spells on 07/05/18, 12:16 am

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Edited.


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6 Re: New spells on 11/05/18, 04:12 pm

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Tyla tarp mūsų

You should make it Offensive/Supp

Why create the field of silence if it wont affect whether or not the spell effects aseo? Also if the spell works by manipulating sound waves, it will be effective on anything that hears it logically.(with the exception of those in the safe zone) Can you put how big the safe spot would be?

Also Because your ability has a duration of 3 posts its currently overpowered. So you have some options, you can lower the damage rating to C, or you can clarify that the ability does not stack damage/eff. (as it is now you get a B tier weapon for 3 turns, and an effect). Disorientation can not stack(but for the 3 turns it will still be effective on new targets.

Palaimintas Drakonas

Honestly, the frost breathe should be an entirely other ability, forming the dragon itself is an ability, especially considering it gets flight and physical damage in that ability. The ice should be a whole other ability


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7 Re: New spells on 15/05/18, 01:29 am

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8 Re: New spells on 16/05/18, 01:12 am

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For Palimantes I would put a limit of how far the dragon can freely fly, about up to 30m away from you at the most since it's freelt moving.


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9 Re: New spells on 16/05/18, 09:21 pm

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10 Re: New spells on 17/05/18, 02:39 pm

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Everything is good to go, edited some wording to help ya out a little. With the blood contract, remember that this is mostly flavor text and isn't something you can do in magic do buff spells. Approved

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[center][b]Ledo ant mano riešo[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician (Ice)
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must run two fingers down the stem of his medium, then flick it down rotating the medium to perform the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi | 15 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
After Aseo running two fingers down the stem of any item creating sheet of ice over said item. Forming to the length, and becoming an sharp edge benefiting the item. Giving the item the normal B-tier damage, and item durability as if it was a weapon. The equip lasting 3 post. [/list]

[center][b]Tyla tarp mūsų[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician (Sound)
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must twirl the medium for casting around casual, ending with him placing it between his armpits. The spell has a safe zone of 85 cm in which the caster stands in.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 4 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Magoi | 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aseo claps his hands together after placing his staff between his armpits. Creating his own field of silence around himself sort of like the top half of a circular dome. It does not effective him even if he 'leaves' the field. Commanding the sound in the field at a radius of fifteen meters, and five meters above, around Aseo(Its moves with him as he the center of it) to deal C-tier damage to the ears of anyone who is in distance of the radius for 3 post stacking once a post. Causing disorientation for 1 Post, and the field of sound to last 3 Post. [/list]

[center][b]Flight[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Ω
[b]Specialization:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must know strength magic.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Flight Power
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] -
[b]Cost:[/b] 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The magician commands gravity type rukh into manipulating the space around a target giving it flight under the magician's control. This can be used to achieve varying degrees of flight.[list]
[*]D-tier: The magician has full control over where they fly, however they wobble in the air unsteadily and move at the speed of a leisurely stroll.
[*]C-tier: The magician's flight is stable and they have control over their direction. The speed of the flight has increased to rival someone in a dead sprint.
[*]B-tier: The speed of the flight has increased further, exceeding normal human limitations to provide supernatural speed.
[*]A-tier: The magician can now fly at incredible speeds covering even great distances within a short amount of time.
[/list]
[/list]


[center][b]Palaimintas Drakonas[/b][/center]
[b]Tier[/b]: A-tier
[b]Class[/b]: Magician (Water)
[b]Type[/b]: Offensive
[b]Range[/b]: Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks[/b]: He must offer up a drop of blood to provide sufficient means to have a connection to the construct. He would chant the name of the spell, and speak the name given to the water dragon.
[b]Scaling[/b]: Rebirth: Giving 15 Stamina, and Magoi. Damage, or destruction the user can add more blood, and magoi to reform the dragon back to its original state while lowering the number of post it remains.
[b]Sustain[/b]: 0
[b]Cooldown[/b]: 4 Post
[b]Cost[/b]: 40 Magoi | 20 Magoi
[b]Description[/b]:
[list]
Aseo gathers the water in the air spawning a makeshift water dragon, 10-15 meters in length and 1-4 meters in circumference. The dragon takes on a faint bloody water look. It has a thought process, leaving it to deem all to none as its enemy, and it will protect the caster, not hesitate to attack. Being an dragon, it can take flight travelling at speeds equivalent to its caster tier(A-tier Speeds) due to the blood contract. The dragon deals A-tier damage alone with its physical attack, and is able to fly freely up to 30 meters from the caster. The spell last 4 post before evaporating. [/list]

[center][b]Breath Of Dragons[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician[Ice]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Palaimintas Drakonas must be activated for this spell to work.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. (Caps at A-tier)
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi | 15 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The frost breath travels 10 meters forward, with the size of the ice being 1-4 meters around. The frost breath does B-tier damage upon impact, in the form of freezing damage. [/list]


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