Kai's Starting Spells

Name: Èmó qīpiàn (Devilish Deception)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 + 5 per sustained post
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
Description: Kai creates an illusory clone of himself at 10 m/s within 10 meters of himself, that is able to move at the normal speeds of a human (2.5 m/s jogging, 6 m/s running and 9 m/s sprinting) and appears to interact with the environment under Kai's control. When touched, when it leaves 10m of Kai, or when the duration expires, the clone will explode in a flash of bright but otherwise harmless light.

Name: Ránshāo de dēng (Burning Light)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 + 10 per sustained post
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 Posts or Sustain + 1
Description: A massive quantity of light is channeled as a spiral, which meets at a single point of 5 cm diameter at 15 m/s. The air around this point appears to be heavily distorted, and the particles in the point become very hot, capable of inflicting C-rank burns. He can remotely control the speed at up to 15 m/s in all directions within a 20 meter radius of himself.

Name: Tiānshî de Lùjìng (Angels' Path)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 + 5 per sustained post
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
Description: As he or an illusory clone moves, Kai distorts light to create a trail of 1-3 illusory afterimages behind them, at 10 m/s. The oldest afterimage fades once a fourth image is created. These can be sent in a straight line at 10m/s in any direction up to maximum range. The afterimages explode in bright but otherwise harmless light when they expire.

Name: Mèng jiěsàn (Dreams Dissolve)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 + 5 per sustained post
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
Description: Kai creates a sparkling sphere of light with up to a 10 cm radius at 10 m/s. When touched by anything other than Kai, it flares in a 2m radius blinding flash of light and mild heat only capable of inflicting very light burns (D rank) to those at the center of the blast (within a .5 m radius of the center). Kai is able to direct the ball without causing it to detonate at up to 10 m/s. This spell may be sustained to create a second instance of the heat wave detonation, inflicting a new instance of damage in the next post.

Name: Fǔbài de huànxiǎng (Corrupt Fantasy)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 + 5 per sustained post
Element: Light
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
Description: Kai generates a floating sphere with up to a 10 cm radius at 10 m/s. The sphere absorbs all light which touches it into itself, causing it appear to be devoid of light on the exterior, but bright and hot enough to inflict minor burns (D rank) on the interior. The ball can be directed by Kai to move around at 10m/s.

(Devilish Deception):If this is sustained, please put duration as "Sustained" and change Cool-Down to "2 posts or Sustain+1" and add a sustain cost to Magoi/Stamina. Please include the speed at which the illusion is generated and the distance it can be cast/manipulated within.

(Burning Light):If this is sustained, please put duration as "Sustained" and change Cool-Down to "3 posts or Sustain+1" and add a sustain cost to Magoi/Stamina.

Angels' Path:If this is sustained, please put duration as "Sustained" and change Cool-Down to "2 posts or Sustain+1" and add a sustain cost to Magoi/Stamina.

Dreams Dissolve:If this is sustained, please put duration as "Sustained" and change Cool-Down to "2 posts or Sustain+1" and add a sustain cost to Magoi/Stamina. It is also important to note that as it is heat damage, Kai would not be immune to the effects of "holding" the intangible ball.

(Corrupt Fantasy):If this is sustained, please put duration as "Sustained" and change Cool-Down to "2 posts or Sustain+1" and add a sustain cost to Magoi/Stamina. It is also important to note that as it is heat damage, Kai would not be immune to the effects of "holding" the intangible ball.

Fixed

Èmó qīpiàn (Devilish Deception):
I changed it so that it follows the guidelines a bit closer. Spells are required to begin from the caster, so if you intend on creating a clone of illusionary light, you will be required to wait for your spell's commands to first travel to the destination, and then form. D-Tier movement speed on that would be 10 m/s, as per the guidelines.



Ránshāo de dēng (Burning Light):
You must quantify the dimensions of offensive abilities. Otherwise, if it is unclear, then it could be potentially a large range of things. In order to avoid any conflicts when clashing, especially offensive techs, we require very clear dimensions. Of course, the dimensions can vary within reason, but it has to be clear cut. I changed the speed down to C-Tier guidelines.


Tiānshî de Lùjìng (Angels' Path):
Changed the wording slightly, as the spell lists how long it lasts in seconds. Since a post doesn't have a defined time frame, I removed that because that means your spell could potentially last 10+ posts.


Mèng jiěsàn (Dreams Dissolve):
How large is the blast? Write the tier of damage it deals in the description, as well as the size of the blast that does the damage.


Fǔbài de huànxiǎng (Corrupt Fantasy):
Spells have friendly fire on this forum. You'll have to change the wording, because you would be unable to create a ball of light that is tangible to you but intangible to others. Also, to make tangible light you would have to use a combination of Light and Strength magic.


Spells I have fixed up a bit and are ready, unless you would like to make further edits:

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[b]Name:[/b] Èmó qīpiàn (Devilish Deception)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai creates an illusory clone of himself at 10 m/s within 10 meters of himself, that is intangible but able to move at the normal speeds of a human (2.5 m/s jogging, 6 m/s running and 9 m/s sprinting) and appears to interact with the environment under Kai's control. When touched, when it leaves 10m of Kai, or when the duration expires, the clone will explode in a flash of bright but otherwise harmless light.

[b]Name:[/b] Ránshāo de dēng (Burning Light)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 + 10 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] A massive quantity of light is channeled as a spiral, which meets at a single point of 5 cm diameter at 15 m/s. The air around this point appears to be heavily distorted, and the particles in the point become very hot, capable of inflicting C-rank burns. He can remotely control the speed at up to 15 m/s in all directions within a 20 meter radius of himself.

[b]Name:[/b] Tiānshî de Lùjìng (Angels' Path)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] As he or an illusory clone moves, Kai distorts light to create a trail of 1-3 illusory afterimages behind them, at 10 m/s. The oldest afterimage fades once a fourth image is created. These can be sent in a straight line at 10m/s in any direction up to maximum range. The afterimages explode in bright but otherwise harmless light when they expire.


fixed all mentioned issues

I changed your Dreams Dissolve slightly. You can freely control the ball, no worries. I'm not sure what you're trying to accomplish by having the sentence say 'it is intangible'. Any clashing will go according to the ability guidelines.

Light is not able to make something cold, unfortunately. I applaud your creativity, but we're keeping light to simple light things. You can create beams of energy like a focused laser, or other such things, but you are unable to cause a cool exterior and hot interior from such a thing.


I took out the flavor text from everything stating that they float around you, or that you 'look' like you're carrying them. That can be RPed directly in your posts.


if you would like any changes, please post them accordingly in this thread after my post. If everything looks good, give the a-okay to send these to your vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Èmó qīpiàn (Devilish Deception)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai creates an illusory clone of himself at 10 m/s within 10 meters of himself, that is able to move at the normal speeds of a human (2.5 m/s jogging, 6 m/s running and 9 m/s sprinting) and appears to interact with the environment under Kai's control. When touched, when it leaves 10m of Kai, or when the duration expires, the clone will explode in a flash of bright but otherwise harmless light.

[b]Name:[/b] Ránshāo de dēng (Burning Light)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 + 10 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] A massive quantity of light is channeled as a spiral, which meets at a single point of 5 cm diameter at 15 m/s. The air around this point appears to be heavily distorted, and the particles in the point become very hot, capable of inflicting C-rank burns. He can remotely control the speed at up to 15 m/s in all directions within a 20 meter radius of himself.

[b]Name:[/b] Tiānshî de Lùjìng (Angels' Path)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] As he or an illusory clone moves, Kai distorts light to create a trail of 1-3 illusory afterimages behind them, at 10 m/s. The oldest afterimage fades once a fourth image is created. These can be sent in a straight line at 10m/s in any direction up to maximum range. The afterimages explode in bright but otherwise harmless light when they expire.

[b]Name:[/b] Mèng jiěsàn (Dreams Dissolve)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai creates a sparkling sphere of light with up to a 10 cm radius at 10 m/s. When touched by anything other than Kai, it flares in a 2m radius blinding flash of light and mild heat only capable of inflicting very light burns (D rank) to those at the center of the blast (within a .5 m radius of the center). Kai is able to direct the ball without causing it to detonate at up to 10 m/s. This spell may be sustained to create a second instance of the heat wave detonation, inflicting a new instance of damage in the next post.

[b]Name:[/b] Fǔbài de huànxiǎng (Corrupt Fantasy)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai generates a floating sphere with up to a 10 cm radius at 10 m/s. The sphere absorbs all light which touches it into itself, causing it appear to be devoid of light on the exterior, but bright and hot enough to inflict minor burns (D rank) on the interior. The ball can be directed by Kai to move around at 10m/s.

Fixed and done
The result is fine by me

Ah, sorry, you didn't have to edit. If the staff edits your abilities and posts the code, and they ask if you're fine with them, then all you have to do is say 'yup, they're good', and we'll add them ^_^


Approoooved~

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Èmó qīpiàn (Devilish Deception)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai creates an illusory clone of himself at 10 m/s within 10 meters of himself, that is able to move at the normal speeds of a human (2.5 m/s jogging, 6 m/s running and 9 m/s sprinting) and appears to interact with the environment under Kai's control. When touched, when it leaves 10m of Kai, or when the duration expires, the clone will explode in a flash of bright but otherwise harmless light.

[b]Name:[/b] Ránshāo de dēng (Burning Light)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 + 10 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] A massive quantity of light is channeled as a spiral, which meets at a single point of 5 cm diameter at 15 m/s. The air around this point appears to be heavily distorted, and the particles in the point become very hot, capable of inflicting C-rank burns. He can remotely control the speed at up to 15 m/s in all directions within a 20 meter radius of himself.

[b]Name:[/b] Tiānshî de Lùjìng (Angels' Path)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] As he or an illusory clone moves, Kai distorts light to create a trail of 1-3 illusory afterimages behind them, at 10 m/s. The oldest afterimage fades once a fourth image is created. These can be sent in a straight line at 10m/s in any direction up to maximum range. The afterimages explode in bright but otherwise harmless light when they expire.

[b]Name:[/b] Mèng jiěsàn (Dreams Dissolve)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai creates a sparkling sphere of light with up to a 10 cm radius at 10 m/s. When touched by anything other than Kai, it flares in a 2m radius blinding flash of light and mild heat only capable of inflicting very light burns (D rank) to those at the center of the blast (within a .5 m radius of the center). Kai is able to direct the ball without causing it to detonate at up to 10 m/s. This spell may be sustained to create a second instance of the heat wave detonation, inflicting a new instance of damage in the next post.

[b]Name:[/b] Fǔbài de huànxiǎng (Corrupt Fantasy)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 + 5 per sustained post
[b]Element:[/b] Light
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Kai generates a floating sphere with up to a 10 cm radius at 10 m/s. The sphere absorbs all light which touches it into itself, causing it appear to be devoid of light on the exterior, but bright and hot enough to inflict minor burns (D rank) on the interior. The ball can be directed by Kai to move around at 10m/s.