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1 Adrastos Thanatos' Starting Spells on 09/02/15, 10:06 pm

Name: Aqua Fluctus (Water Wave)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 magoi
Element: Water
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The user waves their staff in a certain direction, sending a 5m wave in a 10m radius of the caster with a speed of 10 m/s

Name: Aqua Bulla (Water Bubbles)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 magoi
Element: Water
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 posts
Description: The caster waves his staff in a direction while speaking the incantation to create a total of 5 1m in diameter bubbles to go toward the foe as 10 m/s.

Name: Glacies Spica (Ice Spikes)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 magoi, 5 sustained
Element: Ice
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts after sustain ends
Description: The caster hits the end of his staff on the ground while speaking the incantation, resulting in a total of five ice shards at least 3m in diameter at the base that point into a cone at the top.

Name: Aqua Canno (Water Cannon)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 magoi
Element: Water
Class: Offensive
Range: 10
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 post
Description: The castor merely points in a specified location while speaking the incantation. A horizontal pillar of high pressured water about 1-2m in diameter will be launched toward the castor's foe at a speed of 10 m/s.

Name: Congelo Cado (Freeze Fall)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 magoi, 10 sustained
Element: Ice
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20m
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 4 posts after the sustain ends
Description: The castor spins the staff in the air while speaking the incantation. The water in the air is then frozen and begins to fall 20 m/s within a 20m radius around the castor, freezing two limbs, particularly the arms since they are the highest limbs on a body.


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Done. x.x Now someone can look at this choppy work.


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Aqua Fluctus (Water Wave): Very very close on this one, you need to include the amount of damage done and the way the range was worded was awkward. Consider rewording the description to say:
The user sends a wave of water 5 meters wide at 10 m/s that may travel up to 10 meters away, inflicting D-tier damage to anything it hits.

Aqua Bulla (Water Bubbles): Same thing as above, needs damage and the wording is a bit awkward. Consider saying:
The caster creates a total of 5 1m in diameter bubbles moving at 10 m/s towards a target to inflict D-tier damage.

Glacies Spica (Ice Spikes): Duration would be "2 posts or Sustain+1". Same as above, needs to include damage dealt if it offensive. Also needs the speed at which the ice is formed/moves and if it is being formed in a place of the casters choosing or immediately surrounding them. Consider:
The caster forms 5 ice shards 3 meters in diameter that emerge from the ground at 10m/s to inflict up to D-tier damage.

Aqua Canno (Water Cannon): Needs damage ad range. Consider:
The castor forms a horizontal pillar of high pressured water about 1-2m in diameter that can be launched toward an opponent within 10 meters at 10 m/s to inflict D-tier damage.

Congelo Cado (Freeze Fall): Duration would be "3 posts or Sustain+1" Need to include amount of ice that falls (how many ice pieces fall and how large are they?) Also needs to include how long a limb is frozen for. Consider:
The caster freezes the water in the air, forming ten ice shards 1 meter in diameter that fall at 20 m/s within 20 meters of the caster. If any ice shard hits an opponent, a single limb is frozen for 2 posts and if all ice shards strike, two limbs are frozen for 3 posts.

You may, of course, take or leave the suggested rewordings, as long as all necessary information is included (Speed, range, scale, damage, etc)

Also, just a note, please refrain from including how the caster performs these abilities, as that is something you would simply RP out. The ability description is a bare-bones breakdown of what the spell does, not how the caster chooses to execute it.


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The rewording is fine. I was half dead when I wrote the descriptions and such last night. X.x Sorry about the awkward wording originally.


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if the following is fine, please bump~

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[b]Name:[/b] Aqua Fluctus (Water Wave)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Water
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user sends a wave of water 5 meters wide at 10 m/s that may travel up to 10 meters away, inflicting D-tier damage to anything it hits.

[b]Name:[/b] Aqua Bulla (Water Bubbles)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Water
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates a total of 5 1m in diameter bubbles moving at 10 m/s towards a target to inflict D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Glacies Spica (Ice Spikes)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi, 5 sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Ice
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The caster forms 5 ice shards 3 meters in diameter that emerge from the ground at 10m/s to inflict up to D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Aqua Canno (Water Cannon)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Water
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Description:[/b] The castor forms a horizontal pillar of high pressured water about 1-2m in diameter that can be launched toward an opponent within 10 meters at 10 m/s to inflict D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Congelo Cado (Freeze Fall)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi, 10 sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Ice
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The caster freezes the water in the air, forming ten ice shards 1 meter in diameter that fall at 20 m/s within 20 meters of the caster. If any ice shard hits an opponent, a single limb is frozen for 2 posts and if all ice shards strike, two limbs are frozen for 3 posts.


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Bump.


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approved and added to your vault~


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I noticed the speed was wrong for Congelo Cado in the Mr. Couch training thread. It should be 15m/s not 20m/s. I have edited it below, please update in your vault.

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[b]Name:[/b] Congelo Cado (Freeze Fall)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi, 10 sustained
[b]Element:[/b] Ice
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The caster freezes the water in the air, forming ten ice shards 1 meter in diameter that fall at 15 m/s within 20 meters of the caster. If any ice shard hits an opponent, a single limb is frozen for 2 posts and if all ice shards strike, two limbs are frozen for 3 posts.


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