The Art of Fencing - The Basics (Revamp)

Name: Swarmstrike
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Light Swords
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Stepping in, and even closing in with a few steps, this technique has him stabbing rather quickly at his foe, stabbing quickly enough to confuse the target. His blades moves at 10 m/s t immediately unleash 5 strikes to deal D-tier damage.


Name: Spring Step
Tier: D
Cost: 10/5 Stamina Initial/Sustained
Weapon Type: Body
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Sustain
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain+1
Description: Zachariah has developed a technique which allows him use the full force of his legs' strength to get short bounds of speed beyond that of a normal person. For a single second in each post this is active, he may take two long steps, allowing him to move in two 2.5 meter vectors, at 10 m/s.

Name: Smite
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Light Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: A simple technique in basis, he falls from above the opponent using any other means to achieve that height and attempts to stab them with his sword at 10 m/s on his way down. It deals D-Rank damage.

Name: Speed Break
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Light Sword
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: A quick and merciless pommel strike to the side of his opponent's head, clocking at 10 m/s, and thusly rattling their brain a bit. This deals no real damage to them, however it throws off coordination, leaving the foe dizzy for 2 posts after being hit.

Name: Swallowtail
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Light Swords
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: With a swooping of his arms, he will begin to spin in place before he is now in a fierce pirouette. The grass and dust near him is repelled by the force as he slowly approaches his target who can be up to 5 meters away before he must stop spinning. Once he has reached the apex of speed at he turns all of the built up torque into a slash, slicing into the opponent at 15 m/s with great force, repelling all loose debris and even tierless projectiles, within a 5 meter radius of him. This amazing display of strength and finesse deals C-tier damage upon impact.

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Swarmstrike:Stepping in, and even closing in with a few steps, this technique has him stabbing rather quickly at his foe, stabbing quickly enough to confuse the target. His blades moves at 10 m/s t immediately unleash 5 strikes to deal D-tier damage.

Speed Break: You cannot hav a combination Off/Supp skill at D-tier. So he can either deal damage OR disorient his target, not both.

Swallowtail: You need to indicate how far he is able to move with this ability.

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