A-B Magic spells C Warrior Skills

Julius Plageuis · 1 A-B Magic spells C Warrior Skills 27/04/22, 12:24 pm

Julius Plageuis

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(510/510)
Stamina:

(100/100)

A tier:

Strength Borg

Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must chant the name of the spell. Must make a motion of Halt with a hand.
Scaling: Layers: An additional layer of defensive power is added per 10 magoi invested
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost:40/20 magoi
Description:

Julius gathered magoi within any of his bones before pushing it outwards in all directions from himself stretching out in a perfect sphere of 10 meters in diameter. A purple transparent glow of strength magic forms around him and those within 10 meters of him shielding them from damage up to A tier. The spell ends in 4 posts if not broken before then.

Light Array

Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must chant the name of the spell. Must make a motion of pointing with a finger towards the location they wish to cast the spell..
Scaling: Projectiles
Sustain:0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: T40/20 magoi
Description:

The user gathers magoi into one of the bones from their skeletal body and fires a white beam of pure light energy applying A tier damage upon impact to whatever it hits with extreme heat. This can be fired from any of the bones from his body, even ones that are self removed and not removed due to damage. The beam is 10 centimeters in width, 100 meters in length, and 10 centimeters in height.

Shatter Point

Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must chant the name of the spell. Must make swaying back and forth motion with the bone they use to cast the spell in a wagging motion.
Scaling: Shockwaves: For every 10 magoi invested the spell pulses out another wave of sound.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40/20
Description:

Casting the spell from one of their bones, the user lets out a violent series of different wavelength vibrations of sounds meant to disrupt and damage important organs inside the body. This spell emits sounds of 185 dB, the spell reaches out to 80 meters while having a height of 10 meters and a width of 10 meters. Deals A-tier damage.

B Tier:

Total Concealment

Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementry
Range: Self
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must chant the name of the spell. If using this on a person other than themselves they must touch them for cast the spell. For self casting the user must have one of their hands flick.
Scaling: Targets: For every 10 Magoi the user is able to apply this spell to another person within 10 meters.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30/15 magoi
Description:

Gathering their magoi the user commands light magic to absorb all light from the user allowing them to become invisible, in addition, they also use Sound Magic to absorb all sound coming from the feet of those affected by the spell. Both of these effects are C-tier versions of their respected magic types. As stated in the sustain section those who have this spell cast on them may not be further than 10 meters for the effects to remain active.

Echo Detection

Tier: B
Class:Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must chant the name of the spell. Must have the two lowest rib bones tap each other once every second for as long as the spell is used.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30/15 magoi
Description:

Gathering magoi the user cast out a 50-meter diameter square, and a faint pulse is let out every second from the user. This acts as a sonar detection allowing the user to feel vibrations of movements within the field of their spell. The spell is 50 meters tall. The pulse fills this entire 50x50 square.

Volt Shield

Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must chant the name of the spell. Must lift the bone they wish to use to cast the spell in the direction(s) of the attack.
Scaling: Layers: For every 10 Magoi another layer of the spell appears.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:3 post
Cost: 30/15 Magoi
Description:

The User commands the ruhk while one of their bones faces an incoming attack. The user casts a spirling 10x10 meter VOLT STREAM MAGIC shield. The spell is designed to look like a round shield but of swirling water with lightning conducting within. The shield is cast up to 3 meters away from the user. The spell is 1/2 a meter thick. Those who make contact with the shield are affected by the magi's passive which is as follows: Using a combination of Lightning and Water magic, the user is able to conjure water that has lightning being conducted inside. Those struck by it would have one limb paralyzed for 2 posts and their movement speed reduced.

Darkness.

Tier: B
Class:Magician
Type:Supplementry
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must chant the name of the spell. Must make a motion of circling a hand.
Scaling: Blindness: for every 10 magoi paid the Original cast/sustain burns brighter causing those with organic eyes to be blinded for 1 extra post.
Sustain:0
Cool Down:3 post
Cost:30/15
Description:

The user communicates with the ruhk commanding them to absorb all light around the user. White energy of pure light gathers around the caster before booming out in all directions instantly. From command to cast it happens in a second as the light flashes bright enough to burn the retinas of those who even catch a glimpse at the light. The spell can affect those who have seen the light up to 50 meters. The Blindness last 3 posts unless scaled. This spell must have light within 30 meters of the caster.

Life Line

Tier: B
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must have line of sight and Must chant the name of the spell while pointing the bone they used for the spell at the target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:3 post
Description:

From one of their bones the user cast a life spell healing moderate wounds. This spell heals up to B-tier damage from all sources.

C Tier:

Last edited by Julius Plageuis on 02/05/22, 10:45 am; edited 4 times in total

Zion · 2 Re: A-B Magic spells C Warrior Skills 28/04/22, 08:07 am

Zion

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(420/420)
Stamina:

(280/280)

For just about all the spells the requirements/drawbacks should have something more to them. Commanding the rukh is inherent to all spells. You don't HAVE to speak them, and you could argue adding that verbal element is a restriction, but it isn't much of one as it is nigh impossible for an opponent to ever stop a magician from speaking. Please include something specific to the spell and include further limitations or requirements. These can be simple. Actions such as pointing where you wish to aim the spell provide a tell for your opponent which is an important aspect of balancing magicians. To use light array as an example for a drawback specific to the ability, you could state that the beam is unable to be further moved/aimed once it has been fired. Or in the case of Strength Borg it could be that you are unable to pass through your own barrier once it is created.

Shatter Point - Dealing A-tier damage to all metal weapons within 80m without any limiting factors is a bit too strong. Balance aside, the logic doesn't quite check out either as different metals and even different shape/size weapons are going to have different frequencies that hit the sweet spot for causing severe structural damage. I would like for this spell to have to select a target to tune into. As a bit of consolation, this spell shouldn't need to be limited to metal objects which will vastly open up the kinds of targets you can use it on.

Total Concealment - You can keep the movement restriction if you want, but honestly I would suggest removing it. You don't need it and there isn't much logic sense to it making it feel like an arbitrary restriction. Whether you remove it or not, please set a distance you can be from others you have cast the spell on can go before the connection to your magoi is lost and the spell ends. Please also include a description of how you actually cast the spell onto others as right now the method is not clear.

Echo Detection - Just a tiny detail on this one. You forgot to fill in the tier section.

Volt Shield - Please add how thick the wall of Volt Stream magic is. Please include the Volt Stream passive effect as well so others wont have to look it up.

Darkness - Set the scaling to an increase of one post blindness, not two. Please set a range limit that a light source needs to be within to fuel this spell. You will pretty much never be in a location with no light at all.

Saber Parry and Plague Blade both get a 1/2 from me. For the spells I didn't specifically call out, they just need the requirements/drawbacks update mentioned at the top.

Zion · 3 Re: A-B Magic spells C Warrior Skills 29/04/22, 07:47 am

Zion

A-Tier

Character Sheet
Magoi:

(420/420)
Stamina:

(280/280)

Requirements/Drawbacks related edits have not been made. Please update them according to the instruction given above. Looking at your vault, you did make a sincere effort with your past abilities to flesh this section out a bit more. Please give these abilities the same sincere efforts.

Shatter Point: This spell is missing mention of dealing A-tier damage now but is otherwise acceptable once you fix the requirements.

Saber Parry/Plague Blade: I apologize for missing this last time but I must rescind the 1/2 on them as they have the same requirement/drawback problem as all your spells. Simply holding a warrior weapon in hand isn't saying much. There should be a movement prefacing the ability or a stance taken prior to execution listed, listed weak points, something more substantial as an actual limitation.