Torvald Starting Abilities

Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: This stance must be maintained between sustains – Other abilities which require a different stance will end this move even if it has sustains remaining. Moving does not count.
Scaling: Hit
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

A stance taught to him by his tribe in his youth, the very core of his style. The haft looms overhead, while the spearhead nearly touches the earth. While in this stance, he strikes like lightning with every stroke, albeit largely diminished from his prime. He deals D Tier Damage with a lightning-fast strike, and with extra effort is capable of using a two-tap method of thrusting, using the front hand followed by the back hand to strike multiple times like a sewing machine in the blink of an eye.

Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Requirements: Requires his good leg to be his back foot to initiate. Causes D Tier pain as recoil to sustain back-to-back, or when used to launch upwards.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

A technique he learned from one of the royal dragoons of a now-fallen kingdom in the heat of battle. Originally it was a constant high speed movement technique, meant to blitz enemies with sheer rapidity, but nowadays he can only get one good burst of speed, due to his injury. Using his good leg as his launching leg, he lurches forward and propels himself like an arrow, this burst of speed like a momentary blur appearing 5 meters in any direction a split second later.

Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive (Parry)
Range: Close
Requirements: Cannot move his legs while in use.
Scaling: Defense
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

A defensive measure he developed to part the ceaseless onslaught fighting method of the Ten Rivers Tribe. Unfortunately, he can no-longer use it to its full potential, as it requires his one good foot to bear his weight, preventing him from moving. Using slight alterations to his spear's orientation, he corrects the angle of strikes towards him by 10-20° causing them to part around him like flowing water, protecting him from one D Tier Ability's worth of damage, though with effort he can deflect far more.

Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Requires a hand free in order to use.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

A move he learned from the Yambala tribe during an excursion, meant to be a basic magoi manipulation technique — and thusly diminished from his inability to manipulate his magoi. Reeling one hand back behind his shoulders and stepping into full-reaching palm strike, that draws a straight line from his back foot to his striking limb. He puts a great deal of physical power behind his blow, causing even full grown adults to stagger backwards up to 5 meters after taking D Tier Striking Damage.

Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: For every use of Scaling, add one post charge up time required before use. The stance must be held while charging and if it is interrupted, the charge up time resets. Stamina Cost is not paid until successfully used and an attack is actually launched.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

A technique learned from an old friend in the Imuchakk Tribe, albeit heavily degraded since losing his ability to manipulate magoi. He takes a stance where his spear is pulled back and begins focusing his energy into his spear, before unleashing a powerful throw or thrust, dealing at least C Tier Damage. If thrown, it is accurate within 20 meters.

Lightning Striking Twice: So I would either recommend that this be turned into your C tier ability and have each strike Deal D tier damage and Scale hits, or reword it to being a single Strike for D tier Ability damage and again scaling Hits.

Drawing the Dragon: This is a 2 function ability, either take out the attack in it or word it where its a lunge attack in a single direction, the wording implies a dash in any direction while also dealing Damage.

I've edited those two techniques to be more D Rank.

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