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Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities]

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1Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 16/04/21, 08:36 pm

Angelus

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Linothorax of Reim:

Ares' Lux
Tier: B-Tier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must focus on the initial casting before it is cast.
Scaling: Amount of veils
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 15
Description:

    User casts a veil of white magoi lasting three posts over their body and weapons that will deal A-Tier damage at the will of the caster when forceful contact is made with a target. So, damage may only be spread through a forceful action or ability that is intended to do damage, rather than simply a touch, i.e. punches, slashes, kicks, etc.


Ares' Fragor
Tier: B-Tier
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must stomp on the ground with force.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 15
Description:

    User stomps hard on the ground, creating a shockwave from the stomp of a faint white magoi that travels along the ground surface 0.5m in a 10m diameter to deal A-Tier damage to all that are touched by it.





Aureum Parrius
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must touch the ability or instance being parried. Must concentrate on the hand over the weapon or concentrate on the hand itself.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30
Description:

    User can parry an ability with magoi that coats his weapons and hands. It can redirect an ability or instance of B-Tier or below, the ability or instance parried traveling in whatever direction the user chooses based on what direction he parries the ability or instance.



Last edited by Angelus on 30/04/21, 03:44 pm; edited 10 times in total

2Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 24/04/21, 10:37 pm

Merrze

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Ares' Lux- Currently it feels a little instant, just include a little more to the drawback or the description to detail that you need to spread your magoi over, and simple touch wouldn't do damage. You would still need to swing the weapon and just someone touching you wouldn't hurt them.

Ares' Fragor- 10m far in which direction and shape? is the diameter or does it go so far and so wide in front of the user. Also, the scaling would need to change, while magoi can damage people it needs to be reinforcing an attack or being directly pressed/sent into someone's body, that's how it damages. You could do this in the form of shockwaves such as aftershocks, but you'd be able to hurt yourself if you step inside it.

Ares' Parrius- We had a minor debate over if the first two abilities were in the nature of the item as its about coating or as armor, but direct parrying is a warrior skill and this is just a magoi themed magic item, so in tune with the theme we do not believe you would be able to register a parry with this item. You could certainly make other defensive types of abilities or making other objects into magoi coated shields.

3Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 25/04/21, 12:14 am

Angelus

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Abilities edited. Last Ability changed to Warrior Ability.

4Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 25/04/21, 08:31 am

Julius Plageuis

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You need to remove the 40 meters from the parry. It's a close range attack.

The shockwave lacks height and length

5Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 25/04/21, 04:15 pm

Angelus

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40m is detailing that a parried ability can travel 40m, not that the ability can parry 40m far. How far can the parried ability or instance go?

It is a shockwave, of magoi, meaning it has no height and is traveling through the ground. Its length is detailed within 10m diameter, as a self-explanatory measurement. It is 5m far from the user, in any direction, as per definition of a 10m diameter. That is the length.

6Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 25/04/21, 05:06 pm

Julius Plageuis

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I'm aware of what the parry is doing, I'm telling you it's not going 40 meters.

Shockwave, yes I'm aware of what diameter is, a shockwave would still need a height. If someone jumps or goes underground will it not affect them? This is why the height is needed.

7Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 25/04/21, 05:56 pm

Angelus

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Then can I get an answer to the question? How far? Otherwise it is useless for me.

For the shockwave, I gave it a height if you saw already.

8Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 29/04/21, 08:55 pm

Julius Plageuis

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You can parry it in a direction, that's all. The distance would likely be determined by the ability/Skill used against you in which you are parrying.

Class System wrote:. Any given attack can only be redirected away from the Warrior who is using the ‘parry’ technique. This allows a Warrior to avoid the effects of attacks that require direct impact such as physical blows, magoi manipulation, or spells and projectiles that trigger an AoE on impact.

9Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 29/04/21, 11:18 pm

Angelus

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Edited

10Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 30/04/21, 02:44 pm

Julius Plageuis

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For the parry if you're gunna have it as a magoi manipulation parry, you need to change it to Supplementary/Defensive, add to draw back "Must concentrate while holding a hand over sword"
Then List the Magoi effect are that of a B tier Magoi Manipulation, and the parry can parry B tier or Lower abilities. It will still work on A tier due to Magoi Manipulation rules.

11Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 30/04/21, 03:41 pm

Angelus

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Edited again

12Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 06/05/21, 04:56 pm

Julius Plageuis

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1/2

13Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 06/05/21, 04:59 pm

Lagi

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2/2

14Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 31/05/21, 09:09 pm

Angelus

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15Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 02/06/21, 04:14 pm

Angelus

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Bump, just need these vouchers approved for I can post in the event.

16Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] Empty Re: Lux Alba [B-Tier Abilities] 03/06/21, 06:38 pm

Merrze

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Approved sorry on the wait

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