aseroth new moves

revised/removed:

Tier: C-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must be able to grab his sword from the sheathe.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 post
Cost: 20 stm :: 10 sustain
Description:

Astaroth would send two parries, each parry can reflect D-tier ability damage. Returning his blade to his sheathe unless scaled.  

Tier: C-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must be able to jump into the air with his sword/axe.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 Post
Cost: 20 stm :: 10 sustain
Description:

Astaroth would use his legs to  jump into the air sending down   two diagonal strikes, each dealing D-tier ability damage.

Tier: C-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must use the blunt side of his axe.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 Post
Cost: 20 stm :: 10  sustain
Description:

Astaroth would heavily swing his axe in front of himself 3m smashing the blunt side into his target dealing  d-tier damage. In addition the attacks stuns his targets hit limb, immobilizing said limb 1 post.    

Tier: D-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must be able to wrap his blade & chain in one of his hands.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 stm :: 5 sustain
Description:

Astaroth would spin his chain in front of himself briefly, before wide swiping his blade 10m-20m  in front of himself dealing D-tier caught in his swipe.

Tier: D-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: He must have an open hand to twirl his Axe. If the ax cannot be retrieved or a new weapon/object resembling an ax being used in it's place, this ability cannot be sustained.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stm :: 5 Sustain
Description:

Astaroth would twirl his axe generating a spin, before throwing it horizontally forward 8m dealing D-tier damage upon hitting said target.

Tier: C-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks:He must be able to wrap his blade & chain in one of his hands.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 Post
Cost: 20 stm :: 10 sustain
Description:

Astaroth would spin the chain, casting his blade off his target's  blind side forward 10m dealing C-tier damage.

bump~

before we even begin, why bother listing all of the old abilities? Are these things you already trained and paid for that you are redoing in general? By the way, in requirements, make sure that you say that this ability must be used with X weapon type. Since warriors can't proxy the equipment when you make abilities with all these different weapon types and list em all here, can you at least say in requirements" the person must be using x weapon to use this ability"?

Lucas Style Revised:Sunēkubodi- the wording is confusing, can you revise this? It seems unnecessary when this is a parry, due to it being phrased like you are attacking the attack with the d-tier strike. Can't you just say that you can parry a projectile of C-tier ability and lower? With some of these warrior-based abilities, you have to understand that the concept is not magical in nature with what they are able to protect you from when magoi manipulation isn't involved. With this, i would need you to be a little more specific with them. Your cooldown is 2 posts.

Lucas Style Revised: Tātorusunēku - "two diagonal strikes, each dealing D-tier ability damage.", fixed it for you. As long as the ability is easy to understand, it's golden. your cooldown is 2 posts

Astaroth Moves: Blueberry Blunt - cost should be 20 stamina , the explanation of the attack feels a little rushed. It good to be simple, but can you be a little more descriptive? You can say that it deals D-tier ability damage and in addition to that, the attack stuns the targeted limb, immobilizing it for one post. << See? This way we explained the damage, introduced the status effect, and explained what the status effect did.

Astaroth Moves: Mango Splash- did a little investigating and "pineapple mango" has a 20-meter chain, so this is fair game. That's a good range for a melee. This is good but the requirements I mentioned about the weapon type being mentioned, is one of the reasons why I mentioned it.

Astaroth Move: Orchids Bloom- a little more specific, are you throwing the ax? Is this an ax-throwing ability? you should probably mention it in the drawbacks that you can't sustain this ability if you are unable to retrieve your weapon after throwing it. The cooldown is 1 post, the stamina cost is 10, and the damage scaling is misspelled.

edited

Lucas Style Revised:Sunēkubodi - two parries, each parry can reflect D-tier ability damage projectile . Either that or a single parry that can reflect Ctier ability damage projectile

Astaroth Move: Orchids Bloom - Requirements/Drawbacks: He must have an open hand to twirl his Axe. If the ax cannot be retrieved or a new weapon/object resembling an ax being used in it's place, this ability cannot be sustained.

done

Lucas Style Revised: Sunēkubodi

The range is Medium but this would be a close-ranged attack.

Lucas Style Revised: Tātorusunēku

This as well. The range is Medium but this would be a close-ranged attack.

Aside from those really minor changes, I'll give this my 1/2 now.

done

1/2

2/2

Approved for training.

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[center][b]Lucas Style [strike]Revised[/strike]:Sunēkubodi[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must be able to grab his sword from the sheathe.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stm :: 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Astaroth would send two parries, each parry can reflect D-tier ability damage. Returning his blade to his sheathe unless scaled.  [/list]

[center][b]Lucas Style [strike]Revised[/strike]: Tātorusunēku[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must be able to jump into the air with his sword/axe.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stm :: 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Astaroth would use his legs to  jump into the air sending down   two diagonal strikes, each dealing D-tier ability damage.[/list]

[center][b]Astaroth Moves: Blueberry Blunt[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must use the blunt side of his axe.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stm :: 10  sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Astaroth would heavily swing his axe in front of himself 3m smashing the blunt side into his target dealing  d-tier damage. In addition the attacks stuns his targets hit limb, immobilizing said limb 1 post.    [/list]

[center][b]Astaroth Moves: Mango Splash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must be able to wrap his blade & chain in one of his hands.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stm :: 5 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Astaroth would spin his chain in front of himself briefly, before wide swiping his blade 10m-20m  in front of himself dealing D-tier caught in his swipe. [/list]


[center][b]Astaroth Move: Orchids Bloom[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must have an open hand to twirl his Axe. If the ax cannot be retrieved or a new weapon/object resembling an ax being used in it's place, this ability cannot be sustained.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stm :: 5 Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Astaroth would twirl his axe generating a spin, before throwing it horizontally forward 8m dealing D-tier damage upon hitting said target.[/list]

[center][b]Astaroth Moves: Pineapple Drop[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]He must be able to wrap his blade & chain in one of his hands.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stm :: 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Astaroth would spin the chain, casting his blade off his target's  blind side forward 10m dealing C-tier damage. [/list]

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