Jin Hua’s Abilities

Spoiler:

Tier: C Tier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must unfold the fan’s layers, drawing its folds across a metallic object to activate the effect.
Scaling: Stun/Extra post of stun effect for every extra 10 magoi
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 magoi
Description:

A golden sheen washes over the metallic weapon, charging it with lightning magic. This imbues the weapon with an electrified status, stunning an enemy’s limb which has made contact. The charge may affect two limbs and fades after a post, while the stun effect lasts for two post.

Tier: C Tier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must have an electrified weapon or the electromagnetic cloud active and snap the fan shut.
Scaling: Distance/For every ten magoi, the firing distance increases by twenty metres.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 magoi
Description:

A bright gold gathers floating particles in the air into a static runway, upon which either an electrified object or an electromagnetic cloud is aligned. When the fan is waved again, these air particles suddenly become the opposite charge. This results in a violent repulsion between the static runway and its projectile, expelling it at a hundred metres per second. Its range is a hundred metres.

Stunning Show- As a C-tier ability you can paralyze up to two limbs for two posts and the two limbs would be chosen by contact, that way one its drawbacks could be they could prevent too of the paralyzed. Bc generally paralyzes affect two limbs based on the area where or a poison or shock is applied.

Lurid Lightning- 150m seems a bit much for C-tier even if its not an attack, It seems like the intention is to repel electrically charged things?

Updated Stunning Show with the recommended changes and decreased the initial distance to a hundred metres for Lurid Lightning.

Approved for training, Lurid Lightning may need to be tweaked in the future depending on if it shows any issues.

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[b]Name:[/b] Jin Hua
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Fan | Weapon
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Lightning
[b]Appearance:[/b] A fan from a popular dancer and female warrior in Kou. The fan is gold embroidered with flower designs on it. It is made of gold and steel. It is 33cm wide.

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[b]Function:[/b]
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[*][b]Shocking Spectacle[/b] - Upon applying magoi to the fan, it will disperse into a 2m diameter thin electro magnetic cloud of gold up to 5m far and will be charged with electricity. The user can control where the cloud will form. The light cloud of gold will electrocute those inside it for C-Tier lightning damage. The fan disperses fully after two seconds of shock. It returns to the fan at the end of its function. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to
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[center][b]Stunning Show[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must unfold the fan’s layers, drawing its folds across a metallic object to activate the effect.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Stun/Extra post of stun effect for every extra 10 magoi
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A golden sheen washes over the metallic weapon, charging it with lightning magic. This imbues the weapon with an electrified status, stunning an enemy’s limb which has made contact. The charge may affect two limbs and fades after a post, while the stun effect lasts for two post.[/list]

[center][b]Lurid Lightning[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must have an electrified weapon or the electromagnetic cloud active and snap the fan shut.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Distance/For every ten magoi, the firing distance increases by twenty metres.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A bright gold gathers floating particles in the air into a static runway, upon which either an electrified object or an electromagnetic cloud is aligned. When the fan is waved again, these air particles suddenly become the opposite charge. This results in a violent repulsion between the static runway and its projectile, expelling it at a hundred metres per second. Its range is a hundred metres.[/list]

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