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1 Edge of Darkness on 09/06/18, 07:32 pm

Job Name: Dawning Resolution
Job Rank: B Rank
Job Location: Kou Empire
Job Reward: Standard B Rank rewards
Job Prerequisites: Be Lagi or Zubaidah
Job Overview: Having acquired the location of the mysterious perpetrator of the death of Zubaidah’s family and the upheaval of Pathevia’s capital, Zubaidah has used her newfound information network formed of former slaves now under her command to procure the needed connections to access the compound where their target has hidden themselves. If only matters would be as simple as that, but somehow word of this knowledge has been leaked to the enemy who has sent an elite band of assassins to eliminate these connections - who happen to be of the Dark Hand, further wrapping Lagi into Zub’s personal business.


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Enemy Name: Expert Assassins [2]
Enemy Tier: B Tier
Damage Required to Defeat: B Tier
Description: A pair of assassins sent by the target to remove the group’s connection.

Abilities:

    Ability Name: Lightning Step
    Ability Tier: B Tier
    Ability Range: Near/Two metres
    Description: An instantaneous movement ability which, combined with a quick strike, presents almost unavoidable B tier damage.

    Ability Name: Thunder Strike
    Ability Tier: B Tier
    Ability Range: Medium/Three metres
    Description: A quick leap forwards that propels them towards the target so that they can aim for the neck, to deal B tier damage.

    Ability Name: Storming Force
    Ability Tier: B Tier
    Ability Range: Close
    Description: A heavy kick to the legs dealing C tier damage followed up by a cut to the back as the target is left dazed on the ground.


Job Name: Shining Courage
Job Rank: B Rank
Job Location: Kou Empire
Job Reward: Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
Job Prerequisites: Be Lagi or Zubaidah
Job Overview: With the successful rescue of their connection, Zubaidah and Lagi plan to infiltrate the hideout of the target - no easy feat, of course - a place under a tight guard due to the leaked knowledge of their arrival. However, with Lagi’s strength and guiles and with Zubaidah’s skill and tactics, no wall is impenetrable, but piercing through will take some time, and time gives the enemy a chance to muster evermore strength.



Spoiler:

Enemy Name: Hired Guards [5]
Enemy Tier: C Tier
Damage Required to Defeat: C
Tier
Description: Mercenaries hired by the informant, Biming, who have no coordination with each other but are individually relatively strong.

Abilities:

    Ability Name: Brute Force
    Ability Tier: C Tier
    Ability Range: Close
    Description: The user raises their weapon high above their head, leaving their chest vulnerable to attacks, before plunging it downwards with all of their might, dealing C tier damage.

    Ability Name: Sideways Slash
    Ability Tier: C Tier
    Ability Range: Near/Two metres
    Description: The user swipes their weapon across in a horizontal plane, stopping only when it reaches the other side of their body, dealing C tier damage.

    Ability Name: Sheer Slice
    Ability Tier: C Tier
    Ability Range: Near/Two metres
    Description: The user cuts down the target’s torso, from the top downwards, with no pause until the blade lodged itself into the target - or the ground beneath them, dealing C tier damage.


Job Name: Setting Revenge**
Job Rank: B Rank
Job Location: Kou Empire
Job Reward: Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
Job Prerequisites: Be Lagi or Zubaidah
Job Overview: At long last, Lagi and Zubaidah have broken down the wall that was set forth before them and opened the route to their target. Confronting past fears and overcoming them with the help of sage advice, Zubaidah duels her unveiled antagonist of Teleres in single combat - but whoever said that there will not be any consequences.

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Enemy Name:Teleres
Enemy Tier: A tier
Damage Required to Defeat: A tier
Description: A cold and calculating man who holds his hand firmly clasped around all of the connections within the Kou underground, no information escapes this net without him wishing it to do so. He has begun to crush signs of resistance from other organisations similar to his own with disinterest, utilising his ability to manipulate any group to his own agenda that led to him instigating the events which that caused Zubaidah and Lagi to track him down, in the most part due to him attempting to destroy the Dark Hand’s grasp over the Kou black market. In the past, it was he who was the one responsible for inciting the rebellion that killed her family in order to prevent any rebellion from Parthevia that may ruin trading partnerships over there, however it is evident that this is merely a cover for some much more sinister purpose - for he has no trading partners in Parthevia.

Spoiler:

Abilities:
To be compiled by the plotting mod who deals with this.


Job Name: Darkened Mind**
Job Rank: B Rank*
Job Location: The Jade Dragon Mountains
Job Reward: Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
Job Prerequisites: Be Zubaidah
Job Overview: Having been dealt a severe injury, had her moral dignity mocked and had her mental confidence broken, Zubaidah is given no time to gather any sense of victory in defeating Teleres as she is soon knocked out and transported to an unknown location where she spends a two week period being kept at the brink of death by her captors, all the while having her mental stability gradually broken down and having her fall into depravity become ever closer.

*Zubaidah will have reached B rank by this time.

Spoiler:

Enemy Name: Hired Guards [5]
Enemy Tier: C Tier
Damage Required to Defeat: C
Tier
Description: Sadistic guards who keep the patrol of Zubaidah’s cell, torturing her with some perverse love, but never ever bringing her over the brink of permanent damage, leaving her to heal each day before starting this again.

Abilities:

    Ability Name: Pommel Strike
    Ability Tier: C Tier
    Ability Range: Close
    Description: The user raises their weapon high above their head, leaving their chest vulnerable to attacks, before plunging it downwards with all of their might, dealing C tier damage.

    Ability Name: Blunt Edge
    Ability Tier: C Tier
    Ability Range: Near/Two metres
    Description: The user swipes their weapon across in a horizontal plane, stopping only when it reaches the other side of their body, dealing C tier damage.

    Ability Name: Flat Blade
    Ability Tier: C Tier
    Ability Range: Near/Two metres
    Description: The user cuts down the target’s torso, from the top downwards, with no pause until it hits the ground beneath them, dealing C tier damage.


Job Name: Dawning Resolution
Job Rank: B Rank
Job Location: Kou Empire
Job Reward: Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
Job Prerequisites: Be Zub or Jaja
Job Overview: Still in her prison deep within the mountains, Zubaidah despairs for her fate. However, she is given new hope when a new face appears beyond the cruel walls and breaks through the rockface that separates her from the free world outside. Starving and exhausted, she is saved by this Jahangir and together they brave the wilderness of the jungles high atop this mountain range and work their way back to society so that Zubaidah may finally be able to rest.

Spoiler:

Enemy Name: Suquan Snake [2]
Rank: B Tier
Needed damage to take down: B Tier
Description: These anaconda hide in the murky waters and snap at unsuspecting prey, before encircling them and crushing their bodies.

Abilities: Each snake can deal C Tier crushing damage.
Abilities:

    Ability Name: Twinning Fangs
    Ability Tier: B+ Tier
    Ability Range: Medium/Three metres
    Description: The two snakes intertwine with one another and slowly crush the target for C Tier crushing damage, before biting them for B Tier damage.

    Ability Name: Ripping Edge
    Ability Tier: B Tier
    Ability Range: Far/Five metres
    Description: The snake tears its sharpened tail across the target’s torso, wounding them heavily and causing B Tier damage.

    Ability Name: Piercing Fangs
    Ability Tier: B Tier
    Ability Range: Far/Four metres
    Description: The snake launches itself towards the target and bites their leg to deal B tier damage.



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2 Re: Edge of Darkness on 10/06/18, 04:32 am

This is all finished, and ready for review now! I’ve also put a plot request for the two quests marked with ‘**’.


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3 Re: Edge of Darkness on 12/06/18, 01:03 am

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Currently discussing this among the staff team, will post a response after some deliberation.


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4 Re: Edge of Darkness on 19/06/18, 01:40 pm

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Alright so, looks good for the most part, just need to fix up your enemies. For example, NPC abilities should still include range and how much damage they do in their description. Also, they should generally have no less than 3 abilities, it's not required but you'll need more than one ability at least.

If you needed help to make the enemies that are fine, feel free to ask or look at other jobs for help.


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5 Re: Edge of Darkness on 21/06/18, 06:47 pm

Updated it all! Bump!


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6 Re: Edge of Darkness on 26/06/18, 10:25 am

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Job Approved, will be up posting soon


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[b]Job Name:[/b] Dawning Resolution
[b]Job Rank:[/b] B Rank
[b]Job Location:[/b] Kou Empire
[b]Job Reward:[/b] Standard B Rank rewards
[b]Job Prerequisites:[/b] Be Lagi or Zubaidah
[b]Job Overview:[/b] Having acquired the location of the mysterious perpetrator of the death of Zubaidah’s family and the upheaval of Pathevia’s capital, Zubaidah has used her newfound information network formed of former slaves now under her command to procure the needed connections to access the compound where their target has hidden themselves. If only matters would be as simple as that, but somehow word of this knowledge has been leaked to the enemy who has sent an elite band of assassins to eliminate these connections - who happen to be of the Dark Hand, further wrapping Lagi into Zub’s personal business.


[spoiler]
[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Expert Assassins [2]
[b]Enemy Tier:[/b] B Tier
[b]Damage Required to Defeat:[/b] B Tier
[b]Description:[/b] A pair of assassins sent by the target to remove the group’s connection.

[b]Abilities:[/b]
[list]
Ability Name: Lightning StepAbility Tier: B TierAbility Range: Near/Two metresDescription: An instantaneous movement ability which, combined with a quick strike, presents almost unavoidable B tier damage.Ability Name: Thunder StrikeAbility Tier: B TierAbility Range: Medium/Three metresDescription: A quick leap forwards that propels them towards the target so that they can aim for the neck, to deal B tier damage.Ability Name: Storming ForceAbility Tier: B TierAbility Range: CloseDescription: A heavy kick to the legs dealing C tier damage followed up by a cut to the back as the target is left dazed on the ground.[/list]
[/spoiler]

[b]Job Name:[/b] Shining Courage
[b]Job Rank:[/b] B Rank
[b]Job Location:[/b] Kou Empire
[b]Job Reward:[/b] Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
[b]Job Prerequisites:[/b] Be Lagi or Zubaidah
[b]Job Overview:[/b] With the successful rescue of their connection, Zubaidah and Lagi plan to infiltrate the hideout of the target - no easy feat, of course - a place under a tight guard due to the leaked knowledge of their arrival. However, with Lagi’s strength and guiles and with Zubaidah’s skill and tactics, no wall is impenetrable, but piercing through will take some time, and time gives the enemy a chance to muster evermore strength.



[spoiler]
[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Hired Guards [5]
 [b]Enemy Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Damage Required to Defeat:[/b] C
Tier
[b]Description:[/b] Mercenaries hired by the informant, Biming, who have no coordination with each other but are individually relatively strong.

[b]Abilities:[/b]
[list]
Ability Name: Brute ForceAbility Tier: C TierAbility Range: CloseDescription: The user raises their weapon high above their head, leaving their chest vulnerable to attacks, before plunging it downwards with all of their might, dealing C tier damage.Ability Name: Sideways SlashAbility Tier: C TierAbility Range: Near/Two metresDescription: The user swipes their weapon across in a horizontal plane, stopping only when it reaches the other side of their body, dealing C tier damage.Ability Name: Sheer SliceAbility Tier: C TierAbility Range: Near/Two metresDescription: The user cuts down the target’s torso, from the top downwards, with no pause until the blade lodged itself into the target - or the ground beneath them, dealing C tier damage.[/list]
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[b]Job Name:[/b] Setting Revenge**
[b]Job Rank:[/b] B Rank
[b]Job Location:[/b] Kou Empire
[b]Job Reward:[/b] Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
[b]Job Prerequisites:[/b] Be Lagi or Zubaidah
[b]Job Overview:[/b] At long last, Lagi and Zubaidah have broken down the wall that was set forth before them and opened the route to their target. Confronting past fears and overcoming them with the help of sage advice, Zubaidah duels her unveiled antagonist of Teleres in single combat - but whoever said that there will not be any consequences.

[spoiler]
[b]Enemy Name:[/b]Teleres
[b]Enemy Tier:[/b] A tier
[b]Damage Required to Defeat:[/b] A tier
[b]Description:[/b] A cold and calculating man who holds his hand firmly clasped around all of the connections within the Kou underground, no information escapes this net without him wishing it to do so. He has begun to crush signs of resistance from other organisations similar to his own with disinterest, utilising his ability to manipulate any group to his own agenda that led to him instigating the events which that caused Zubaidah and Lagi to track him down, in the most part due to him attempting to destroy the Dark Hand’s grasp over the Kou black market. In the past, it was he who was the one responsible for inciting the rebellion that killed her family in order to prevent any rebellion from Parthevia that may ruin trading partnerships over there, however it is evident that this is merely a cover for some much more sinister purpose - for he has no trading partners in Parthevia.

[spoiler]
[b]Abilities:[/b]
To be compiled by the plotting mod who deals with this.

[/spoiler]

[b]Job Name:[/b] Darkened Mind**
[b]Job Rank:[/b] B Rank*
[b]Job Location:[/b] The Jade Dragon Mountains
[b]Job Reward:[/b] Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
[b]Job Prerequisites:[/b] Be Zubaidah
[b]Job Overview:[/b] Having been dealt a severe injury, had her moral dignity mocked and had her mental confidence broken, Zubaidah is given no time to gather any sense of victory in defeating Teleres as she is soon knocked out and transported to an unknown location where she spends a two week period being kept at the brink of death by her captors, all the while having her mental stability gradually broken down and having her fall into depravity become ever closer.

*Zubaidah will have reached B rank by this time.

[spoiler]
[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Hired Guards [5]
 [b]Enemy Tier:[/b] C Tier
[b]Damage Required to Defeat:[/b] C
Tier
[b]Description:[/b] Sadistic guards who keep the patrol of Zubaidah’s cell, torturing her with some perverse love, but never ever bringing her over the brink of permanent damage, leaving her to heal each day before starting this again.

[b]Abilities:[/b]
[list]
Ability Name: Pommel StrikeAbility Tier: C TierAbility Range: CloseDescription: The user raises their weapon high above their head, leaving their chest vulnerable to attacks, before plunging it downwards with all of their might, dealing C tier damage.Ability Name: Blunt EdgeAbility Tier: C TierAbility Range: Near/Two metresDescription: The user swipes their weapon across in a horizontal plane, stopping only when it reaches the other side of their body, dealing C tier damage.Ability Name: Flat BladeAbility Tier: C TierAbility Range: Near/Two metresDescription: The user cuts down the target’s torso, from the top downwards, with no pause until it hits the ground beneath them, dealing C tier damage.[/list]
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[b]Job Name:[/b] Dawning Resolution
[b]Job Rank:[/b] B Rank
[b]Job Location:[/b] Kou Empire
[b]Job Reward:[/b] Standard B Rank rewards and extra Chain rewards
[b]Job Prerequisites:[/b] Be Zub or Jaja
[b]Job Overview:[/b] Still in her prison deep within the mountains, Zubaidah despairs for her fate. However, she is given new hope when a new face appears beyond the cruel walls and breaks through the rockface that separates her from the free world outside. Starving and exhausted, she is saved by this Jahangir and together they brave the wilderness of the jungles high atop this mountain range and work their way back to society so that Zubaidah may finally be able to rest.

[spoiler]
[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Suquan Snake [2]
[b]Rank:[/b] B Tier
[b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] B Tier
[b]Description:[/b] These anaconda hide in the murky waters and snap at unsuspecting prey, before encircling them and crushing their bodies.

[b]Abilities:[/b] Each snake can deal C Tier crushing damage.
[b]Abilities:[/b]
[list]
Ability Name: Twinning FangsAbility Tier: B+ TierAbility Range: Medium/Three metresDescription: The two snakes intertwine with one another and slowly crush the target for C Tier crushing damage, before biting them for B Tier damage.Ability Name: Ripping EdgeAbility Tier: B TierAbility Range: Far/Five metresDescription: The snake tears its sharpened tail across the target’s torso, wounding them heavily and causing B Tier damage.Ability Name: Piercing FangsAbility Tier: B TierAbility Range: Far/Four metresDescription: The snake launches itself towards the target and bites their leg to deal B tier damage.[/list]


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