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1Sheleg [ v.2 ] Empty Sheleg [ v.2 ] on 08/01/18, 02:40 pm

Matthew

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Yes so um hi. Uh... as it turns out I can't think of any new abilities so I'm going to add cool new traits! Yay! 'Warm Breath' is the only new addition.




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Name: Sheleg
Tier: D-Tier
Type: Normal
Species: Panthera Uncia
Appearance: A large, black and white creature of the feline family. 60 centimeters up to his shoulders. Not including his tail, Sheleg is 115 centimeters in length. His tail makes up 100 centimeters itself.
Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Sharpened Claws
Trait Tier: D-Tier
Trait Requirement: Requires claws.
Trait Description: With sharp claws, Sheleg can rip apart his preys' hard skins.
Trait Effect: Allows beast to deal C-Tier damage instead of D-Tier.

Trait Name: Warm Fur
Trait Tier: D-Tier
Trait Requirement: Requires Panthera Uncia.
Trait Description: Panthera Uncias' natural habitats of the cold have, over many generations, fit them with winter-appropriate features such as dense, extra-thick fur.
Trait Effect: Dense fur negates up to C-Tier cold-related abilities.

Trait Name: Warm Breath
Trait Tier: D-Tier
Trait Requirement: Requires Panthera Uncia.
Trait Description: The warm fur of a Panthera Uncia is often is not always enough to warm a Panthera Uncia. Coming from a special line of Panthera Uncia who have developed the ability to warm their breath greatly, Sheleg has inherited these genes.
Trait Effect: The beast may register heat-based breath abilities.



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2Sheleg [ v.2 ] Empty Re: Sheleg [ v.2 ] on 08/01/18, 02:42 pm

You could reword Warm Breath to like...

"... the beast may register heat-based breath abilities."

I think it'd be better that way.


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3Sheleg [ v.2 ] Empty Re: Sheleg [ v.2 ] on 08/01/18, 02:46 pm

Matthew

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yeah, that sounds better lol. much more to the point.


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4Sheleg [ v.2 ] Empty Re: Sheleg [ v.2 ] on 08/01/18, 03:46 pm

Approved. Add to vault.

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[b]Name:[/b] Sheleg
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Panthera Uncia
[b]Appearance:[/b] A large, black and white creature of the feline family. 60 centimeters up to his shoulders. Not including his tail, Sheleg is 115 centimeters in length. His tail makes up 100 centimeters itself.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

<blockquote>[b]Trait Name:[/b] Sharpened Claws
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Requires claws.
Trait Description: With sharp claws, Sheleg can rip apart his preys' hard skins.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Allows beast to deal C-Tier damage instead of D-Tier.</blockquote>

<blockquote>[b]Trait Name:[/b] Warm Fur
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Requires Panthera Uncia.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Panthera Uncias' natural habitats of the cold have, over many generations, fit them with winter-appropriate features such as dense, extra-thick fur.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Dense fur negates up to C-Tier cold-related abilities.</blockquote>

<blockquote>[b]Trait Name:[/b] Warm Breath
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Requires Panthera Uncia.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The warm fur of a Panthera Uncia is often is not always enough to warm a Panthera Uncia. Coming from a special line of Panthera Uncia who have developed the ability to warm their breath greatly, Sheleg has inherited these genes.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The beast may register heat-based breath abilities.</blockquote>


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