Imjad's Starter Traits

Trait Name: Imuchukk’s Breath
Trait Tier: D-Tier
Trait Requirement: Trained by Imuchukk & Have Imuchukk Blood.
Trait Description: Being of Imuchukk blood, and having trained to expand they’re lung capacity and strength, to increase the flow of oxygen within they’re body.
Trait Effect: The user gains (Swims fast as fish), and can last three posts underwater. (Is disabled if the user takes a blow to the lungs.)

Trait Name: Exceptional Strength
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Must be Human or a Magician with a secondary combat class.
Trait Description: Through extensive training, the character has exceeded the traditional limits of strength for their race.
Trait Effect: The character can now lift their own body weight with ease.

Imuchukk’s Breath - While there isn't anything inherently wrong with the concept, I don't think we allow any traits (besides the default one) to give stamina/magoi. Another thing, I'm not exactly sure how we stand on a halfling sort of trait like that. I know it sounds kind of dumb, but usually we don't allow halflings to receive any sort of bonus, as they're mainly cosmetic. Though, I WILL look into this for ya.

Enhanced Durability - This one is just a big no-no. I know for some beasts, you're allowed to negate a FORM of damage, but that's usually due to a thick layer of fur or something. I don't think we're gonna be able to make this one work.

Thank you! I'll edit it right away! I'll leave the first trait alone for now since our looking into it, and thanks for that.

Approved with edits. I just removed the faster swimming as you don't have any strength or speed traits to really back it up.

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[b]Trait Name:[/b] Imuchakk’s Breath
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Trained by Imuchakk & Have Imuchakk Blood.
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Being of Imuchakk blood, and having trained to expand they’re lung capacity and strength, to increase the flow of oxygen within they’re body.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The user can last three posts underwater. (Is disabled if the user takes a blow to the lungs.)

Apologies for the double post. I completely forgot the second trait. Uhm...

While I'm not sure if it's acceptable due to it possibly allowing some form of metagaming, we have allowed a trait before that was similar.

It basically gave the user a feeling that something was in their general vicinity but they wouldn't be able to pinpoint the location. If you did use something like that, it could be a larger range like 10m.

Ty for your input! I'll ask a bit more on discord before revising it!

bududubump

You don't have any solid reasoning why your character has black ink breath. Denied. u ___u

bump 4 trump

XD. Here ya go!

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[b]Trait Name:[/b] Exceptional Strength
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Must be Human or a Magician with a secondary combat class.  
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Through extensive training, the character has exceeded the traditional limits of strength for their race.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The character can now lift their own body weight with ease.