Hikotori [C-Tier Set]

Tier: C
Specialization: Warrior
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be able to swing a blade with enough space. This will not work if the user is tightly surrounded and or is arms are being restrained.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain:  0
Cost: 20 Stamina / 10 Stamina to Sustain
Description:

With Trently's blade sheathed and or out, he puts his hand on the hilt. In a split second he then swipes the blade in a vertical or horizontal motion. Trently's wielded blade smacks the target's weapon out of their hand five meters away, disarming the target. Afterward, Trently's blade of choice strikes out at the opponent; dealing D-Tier damage. It does not function against targets with a higher tier than the ability. Targets whom are struck by this ability are required to retrieve their weapon if they wish to wield it.

Tier: C
Specialization: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be able to swing a blade with enough space. This will not work if the user is tightly surrounded and or is arms are being restrained.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain:  0
Cost: 20 Stamina / 10 Stamina to Sustain
Description:

With Trently's blade sheathed and or out, he puts his hand on it's hilt and motions the blade in a swift 360 cutting spin that cuts anything within it's radius. Delivering D-Tier wounds to anything caught within the radius of this attack. At the end of the 360 spin in which Trently finishes, Trently strikes his blade into the air to complete the Dansu Toru; dealing D-Tier Damage to anyone caught by the blade's dance.

You would need this sword to be a wind magic weapon to register abilities like these. In the magi-universe, normal human warriors aren't able to performing cutting blades of wind like swordsman of one piece or bleach.

The most you can do with wind as a normal warrior is produce a strong enough gust to blow away gas clouds.

Edited.

As a C-rank warrior, you can't use magoi manipulation yet. Aslo, magoi manipulation is limited to imbuing things you have physical contact with. You can't fire it out in waves or make barriers in the air with it.

The second ability is fine as it is right now though.

Edited Again.

General - In cost, make sure to put the sustain cost as well.

Yoroi Kame - Everything looks fine now that you’ve worded it better, the only thing you need to put is that the enemy has to actually go and retrieve their disarmed weapon to get it back. I know that part should be self-explanatory, but not everyone understands that.

Dansu Toru - You would have to split the damage into D-Tier, not C-Tier on this ability. So, that would mean the 360 spin would deal D-Tier damage, and then the finishing strike would also deal D-Tier damage.

I have to say, I'm not 100% sure if Yoroi Kame has to be restricted on weapon-tier disarmed, but I'll say it doesn't for now. If someone has an issue with it, feel free to correct it. However, for now I'm going to give these abilities my seal of approval to be trained!

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[center][b]Yoroi Kame[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Specialization:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be able to swing a blade with enough space. This will not work if the user is tightly surrounded and or is arms are being restrained.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina / 10 Stamina to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
With Trently's blade sheathed and or out, he puts his hand on the hilt. In a split second he then swipes the blade in a vertical or horizontal motion. Trently's wielded blade smacks the target's weapon out of their hand five meters away, disarming the target. Afterward, Trently's blade of choice strikes out at the opponent; dealing D-Tier damage. It does not function against targets with a higher tier than the ability. Targets whom are struck by this ability are required to retrieve their weapon if they wish to wield it. [/list]


[center][b]Dansu Toru[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Specialization:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be able to swing a blade with enough space. This will not work if the user is tightly surrounded and or is arms are being restrained.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b]  0
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina / 10 Stamina to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
With Trently's blade sheathed and or out, he puts his hand on it's hilt and motions the blade in a swift 360 cutting spin that cuts anything within it's radius. Delivering D-Tier wounds to anything caught within the radius of this attack. At the end of the 360 spin in which Trently finishes, Trently strikes his blade into the air to complete the Dansu Toru; dealing D-Tier Damage to anyone caught by the blade's dance.[/list]

Trained - https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p225-ability-vouchers?nid=206#44703

Approved