Ani's ability resubmisson

We dont use speed anymore, so please remove them.
As for the command, Hoyo couldnt just see Ani, he needs to be able to hear the command from her to be able to execute a skill.

Lockjaw, Hoyo: The class would be offensive/supplementary

Ghastly Howl & Summer Breeze:Do you get free slot from the mask and the coat? Im not sure if you can use it to create an ability with the magic type from the item, or only for your class-related ability. I will discuss this with another staff member though.

Electrolocation: Will this paralyze the enemies? Or deals damage?

Fixed

Ghastly Howl/Summer Breeze: Yes I do get ability slots

Electrolocation: No it's a sensory ability

Roll over:

Requirements - This should include some kind of physical condition that Hoyo needs to meet such as not being on a slippery surface.

Description - Decrease the roll distance to 3m.

Body Slam:

Requirements - same as above. Being in the middle of running would be fitting.

Scaling - You don't have a range listed in the description to be scaled. Nor do I see how range scaling really applies to this. The ability is how you ram into someone. Not the fact that you are moving a distance. If it were, this would be supplementary/offensive and denied on account of being a D-tier movie that can't be split into two weaker parts.

Description - What part of Hoyo's body is ramming into someone? What kind of damage is dealt? Is it blunt force because Hoyo uses his head? Or is it cutting damage because it uses his back spikes?


Tail Whip:

Requirements - same as above. Having Hoyo coil into a circle in preparation works well here.

Description - Since Hoyo's tail can't stretch, there is no way to scale up the AoE of this move. It shouldn't effect a 3m radius around himself either. It should be limited to the range of his tail. Lastly, knockback should drop to a mere 3m. If you want to knock people back farther with a D-tier, use scaling to do so.


Shake:

Requirements - same as above. Raising Hoyo's tail upwards in preparation would be perfect.

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Since all your abilities generally have the same requirements issues. I'm gonna stop here. Hopefully the edits I've described for your D-tiers helps you understand the fundamental "problem" and you can learn what needs changing for the rest of the abilities through that.

Rework these all based on the feedback on your D-tiers and give em a bump when ready~

Bump, fixed.

General - Remember to add the sustain cost to every abilities cost section. Other then that, all the D-TIer abilities look fine! So onto the C-Tier ones.

Lockjaw, Hoyo - Looks fine as is.

Ghastly Howl - Alright, since you have ability slots for the item, this ability should work. However, as it is now, it’s way too large for a C-TIer ability. Perhaps, make it a 2 meter diameter cone that travels up to 20 meters. Or a 10 meter wave that travels up to 3 meters.

Electrolocation - Looks fine as is.

Summer Breeze - This should be fine as it is, however, if anyone objects to it, it’s completely out of my hands.

Thunderfoot - Originally, I was going to just say no to an ability like this. However, after talking it out with another staff member, I’ll say the concept is fine. You’re going to have to nerf the ability’s range to 5m though. 10 is pretty huge, it’s not like you’re some kind of earthbender :P hehe.

Bump with the changes, then we can get started with B-Tier abilities. ^^

jbump

Voltage Smash - Looks fine as is.

Shoulder Check - Looks fine as is.

Salve Lick - You can remove the healing over three posts and make it an instant B-Tier heal. Then change the scaling to either Damage(aka bumping up the tier of heal) or Projectiles(aka how many times the ability can be used without sustaining)

Add everything below to your vault.~

D-Tier:

C-Tier:

B-Tier:

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Name: Mask of Whispers
Tier: C
Type: Magic Tool
Appearance: A metal mask with intricate markings that is 12cm in height and width, the magic circle is on the forehead.
Function:
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• Faux Whispers - Feeding magoi into the mask causes green rukh to gather around the user's throat briefly. The user then gains full control over all aspects of their voice within a 10m radius of themselves. They can mimic the voice of others perfectly, make their voice sound loud in the ears of all within range, or whisper into the ears of a target within the range. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.
  

Code:

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[b]Name:[/b] Mask of Whispers
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Magic Tool
[b]Appearance:[/b] A metal mask with intricate markings that is 12cm in height and width, the magic circle is on the forehead.
[b]Function:[/b]
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[*][b]Faux Whispers[/b] - Feeding magoi into the mask causes green rukh to gather around the user's throat briefly. The user then gains full control over all aspects of their voice within a 10m radius of themselves. They can mimic the voice of others perfectly, make their voice sound loud in the ears of all within range, or whisper into the ears of a target within the range. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.
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Name: Summers Cloak
Tier: C
Type: Magic item
Magic Type: Dehydration [Heat+Wind]
Appearance: A silk cloak with beautiful marking on it, the cloak is 92cmx92cm and has a large magic circle on the inside
Function:

• Summers Embrace - Feeding magoi into the cloak causes a warm layer of dehydration magic to surround them forming a barrier of sorts that only reaches 5cm off the surface of the wearer's body. This barrier protects the user from liquids, instantly drying out the liquids that come into contact with the barrier. It is possible to overwhelm the tool however by hitting it with a B-tier source of water, or falling into a body of water that reaches up to the wearer's head. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.
  
  

  Code:

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[b]Name:[/b] Summers Cloak
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Magic item
[b]Magic Type:[/b] Dehydration [Heat+Wind]
[b]Appearance:[/b] A silk cloak with beautiful marking on it, the cloak is 92cmx92cm and has a large magic circle on the inside
[b]Function:[/b]
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[*][b]Summers Embrace[/b] - Feeding magoi into the cloak causes a warm layer of dehydration magic to surround them forming a barrier of sorts that only reaches 5cm off the surface of the wearer's body. This barrier protects the user from liquids, instantly drying out the liquids that come into contact with the barrier. It is possible to overwhelm the tool however by hitting it with a B-tier source of water, or falling into a body of water that reaches up to the wearer's head. 10 Magoi to activate | 5 Magoi to sustain.