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1Whalefall. Empty Whalefall. 17/08/16, 11:42 pm

Farid Issah

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Whalefall Charter

Assignment Name: Meeting Father's Friends
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
Profession Prerequisites: Merchant
Assignment Overview: Farid Issah's father was the right-hand man to the former King. To find out and meet the politician who had disbanded the cabinet of Balbaad, Farid goes to meet his fathers old contacts for help.

This contact is the essence of the old king. Corrupt to the core and full of greed. Establish a deal and you can go on your way.

Assignment Name: Meeting the Dissenter
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
Profession Prerequisites: Merchant
Assignment Overview: Through his father's old connections, he has met the one who is responsible for emptying out the cabinet from under Mirah Al-jabiri's nose. He sees the potential in your eyes, but you must at the very least acquire the necessary goods before you can even have a chance to prove yourself.

The dissenter demands your allegiance in the form of a promise, before you move forward. That in the future, you will remove Mirah Al-Jabiri from her office.

Assignment Name:Hiring Shiphands I
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
2 D-tier Human Melee Shiphands
2 D-tier Human Ranged Shiphands
Profession Prerequisites:Merchant
Assignment Overview: Farid heads to the ports of Balbaad and begins recruiting some shiphands to keep the basics of the ship and its maintenance in shape. However, the ship hands decide they can kidnap and steal from a new merchant with no experience and make some quick cash. Time to show them whose boss and maybe earn some respect.

Enemy Name: Bandit x10
Rank: D
Needed damage to take down: D
Abilities: The Bandit may sprint up to 9m/s.
The Bandit has a short sword us

Assignment Name: Hiring Shiphands II
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
1 C-tier Magician First Mate
1 C-tier Imuchakk Melee Second Mate.
Profession Prerequisites: Merchant
Assignment Overview: Farid had found the frame of a crew, but now he would need to assign people to hold the fort if he wasn't available, people with more experience and fighting finesse.

Farid decides to visit other trading companies to recruit some bettered talent. The Western Balbaad Trading Company offers an exchange program. They offer their lower ranking officers better positions as part of other crews for better training but also as an information gathering system, but there is one more condition. Show you are capable of protecting their crewmen.

Name: Rampaging Chimercorn
Rank: A-Tier
Needed damage to take down: Ω-Tier Damage
Description: The Rampaging Chimeracorn is 10 meters long and 3 meters wide. It’s tail takes up 3 meters of its length. Rampaging Chimeracorn can swim at 20m/s and move on land at 10m/s. The fangs can deal B-tier damage. The Rampaging Chimeracorn features hardened skin along the sides and back of the creature which reduces damage by one tier tiers. The underbelly of the creature is sensitive and takes damage normally.
Abilities:
Thrash: The Rampaging Chimeracorn swats its tail in any direction. This causes a wave of wind about 10 meters tall to surge forward at a pace of 15m/s. It causes B-Tier damage and can push a target back by about 20 meters.
Charge: The Rampaging Chimeracorn charges in a direction at 25 m/s over 30 meters to pierce a target with its fangs dealing A-Tier damage.
Fireblast: The Rampaging Chimeracorn sends at ten to fifteen meter long projectile of fire at a target to deal A-tier damage.

Assignment Name: Getting A Ship
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
1 Clipper
Profession Prerequisites: Merchant
Assignment Overview: Talking to your father's old connection, they seem to take pity on you. They offer you an old ship, you must take your time to get it repaired and help repair a few of their other shis as well, which helps you also get familiar with the ship.

Assignment Name: Proving Yourself
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
Dissenters Support
Profession Prerequisites: Merchant, "
Assignment Overview: You've been called in to prove yourself. The Dissenter is willing to see if it's worth putting his name behind yours to help you establish yourself, but before anything, you have to carry some slaves from the mainland of Balbaad to one of its islands. When you accomplish this, he will now put his favor behind you, but this is precious cargo... You might have to defend it.

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[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Pirate Lackey x4
[b]Rank: [/b]D
[b]Needed damage to take down: [/b]C
[b]Abilities:[/b]
May move up to 9 m/s.
[u]Sword Swipe: [/u]Deals D tier damage to an opponent.

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[b]Enemy Name: [/b]Pirate Captain
[b]Rank: [/b]B
[b]Needed damage to take down: [/b]A
[b]Abilities:[/b]
May move at 9m/s
[u]Acrobatic Sea legs: [/u]Feats of acrobatics on a ship are n small feat. While on a ship, any jumps or climbing which utilize the the ship's structure are done at 15 m/s.
[u]Trusty Blade: [/u]Pirate Captain attacks twice with his sword, each swipe dealing C tier damage.
[u]Rustic Shot: [/u]Pirate Captain has a magic tool which can fire a 1 meter ball of fire at 20 m/s for B tier damage.

Assignment Name: Whalefall
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: Balbaad
Assignment Rewards: 150 XP 15000 Huang
Assignment Chain Rewards: Whalefall Charter + 20 Copies + Wax Seal of Balbaad + A Metal Badge of Balbaad.
Profession Prerequisites: Merchant
Assignment Overview: Reveal the crew and ship to Minister Al-Jabiri, and now support from the public, thanks to the Dissenter. You must now spend time to convince Mirah you are worth having this charter, stating your influence, your ability and your resources, while defending your questionable past and connections. She will explain this charter is only temporary, three years, but will give him a chance to trade with other nations on Balbaads behalf.



Last edited by Farid Issah on 27/08/16, 04:13 pm; edited 6 times in total

2Whalefall. Empty Re: Whalefall. 24/08/16, 09:16 pm

Duquin

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Te jobs are too generic. One size fits all is no good. Also, researching markets doesnt get the trust of a country for merchant expeditions.

I'd like to see tis chain more focused with different job tiers appropriate for the rewards. Get the ship in one job, obtain a product in another job. Get men in a job then with a ship, goods, and manpower getting a charter could be another job where you impress or indebt some politician to get the charter.

And no copy paste job descriptions. Describe the juicy job details. What is the goal and HOW will it be achieved?

3Whalefall. Empty Re: Whalefall. 25/08/16, 11:59 am

Farid Issah

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Bump

4Whalefall. Empty Re: Whalefall. 25/08/16, 08:55 pm

Duquin

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-You mention becoming a cabinet member early on in the chain. You would need an entire chain this big dedicated towards earning a cabinet spot. It's not so simple~

-Your Shiphand and First/Second mate jobs Assignment Overview sections aren't complete.

-A monopoly on trade with Balbadd is a bit extreme considering what you're offering Balbadd in return. Tax/Tariff exemptions are more reasonable.

5Whalefall. Empty Re: Whalefall. 26/08/16, 04:16 pm

Farid Issah

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Bump.

6Whalefall. Empty Re: Whalefall. 27/08/16, 01:44 pm

Farid Issah

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I am expecting this will be the final bump. Creating this was more work than finishing it but I would like to thank the people who helped me flesh out this quest and all other sorts of guidance along the way.

Here comes a new challenger.

7Whalefall. Empty Re: Whalefall. 27/08/16, 08:24 pm

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