Rashid starter abilities

Tier: D
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks:  The user can perform a thrust/punching movement for the initial stretch.
Scaling: Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. Sustaining is an option

Sustain: 1
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Rashid can do the simple action of extending any one of his arms in an outstretched manner  for the sake of an attack.  The arm can be stretched up to 3 meters long and  the retracting speed is just as fast as the attack itself  Each punch deals D rank damage

Tier: D
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Defensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Use of one arm
Scaling: Damage Mutigation : The tier of damage dealt will decrease by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested prior to contact of a defensive ability

Sustain: 1
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Rashid can do the simple action of extending any one of his arms in an outstretched manner, hardening it in order to temporarily maintain a stone like function  as some sort of defense ability that can block up to  3  D ranks.  

Tier: D
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Vision must be unimpaired
Scaling: Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. Sustaining is an option


Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Utilizing body manipulation that kind of focuses on his eyes, Rashid is able to basically turn one of his eyes into a pair of goggles, able to  see far away and in high definition up to 30 meters. This sight is not adjustable and Rashid ould want to keep one eye closed that's not using the goggle function during use.  This is the simple style of improving his eyesight to see at further distances.   

Tier: D
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Hearing must not be impaired. Sound based magic does 1 rank higher damage to Rashid while he uses this ability
Scaling: Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. Sustaining is an option


Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Utilizing body manipulation that kind of focuses on his ears, Rashid is able to basically turn one of his ears into  a pair of  hearing aids, able to  hear  far away and in high definition up to 20 meters in addition to his own natural hearing. It is the simple style of improving his hearing to hear at further distances.   

Tier: C
Class: Body Manipulator
Type:Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Use of both arms
Scaling: Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.


Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

Utilizing body manipulation that kind of focuses on his arms, Rashid bulks up the muscle  in both of his arms to be able to hit for  c rank ability damage  with each sort of physical attack.  This one of the most useful abilities in his arsenal 

I realize this is labeled as a WIP, but there are some issues I'd like to note now before you go any further:

Zoom Punch:
D-tier abilities are very basic in their complexity. That being said, you wouldn't be able to both stretch your arm AND harden it. As D-tier abilities, those would need to be two separate abilities.

Giant Gand(Hand?):
Consider for a moment the nature of the character tier and the tier of the ability. The character is a "Novice" and the ability is a "basic" one. Now imagine that you go to a manipulator class of some sorts where the teacher looks at a novice and tells them, "Okay, we'll start with the basics. Make your hand grow 10m in length and width while hardening it at the same time." Doesn't that sound just a little bit crazy?

Pick either hand enlargement or hand hardening to focus on with this ability. If you go with enlargement, 0.5-1m is probably the best you can hope for. Remember, 1m is 3 feet. That's already a huge change in body mass/shape.

One last thing about this ability. Defensive abilities no longer gain the 1 tier bonus. So this D-tier would not be able to block C-tier in a direct clash.

k 4 d's and 1 c

Finished

Zoom Punch:
-Drop the range in the description from 3-10m to just 3m.

-This is a D-tier ability. Unless it has a drawback like being unable to move the arm you used while the ability is on cooldown, it shouldn't be doing C-tier damage.

-You need to put something for the Requirements too. For this ability I would suggest simply requiring that you can perform a thrust/punching movement for the initial stretch.


Arm Guard:
-Use the official "Damage" scaling. It'll be more efficient.
-Replace "steel" with "stone".


Micro Eyes:
-Rather than "use of head" the requirements should be, "Vision must be unimpaired" or something along those lines. Just a bit more specific.

-Nerf the function of the ability a bit. Like only having one set zoom level rather than being adjustable. 20m is fine for the distance though. I'd even allow 30m. Just keep in mind that when you zoom in, seeing things up close to you would become very difficult since you can't have the adjustable feature.


Hearing Aids:
-Pretty much the same stuff as Micro Eyes. Although, I will say that this really deserves a drawback of having loud sound based attacks affecting you 1 tier higher than normal while this is active.


Muscle Strength:
-If this is a one time attack then it can deal ability damage. But if it's a buff, it will only increase basic attack damage OR the damage of other abilities while its active. For example, if you used Zoom Punch on top of Muscle Strength, you would deal C-tier damage instead of D-tier damage.

edited and finished

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[center][b]Zoom Punch[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]  The user must perform a thrust/punching movement for the initial stretch.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. Sustaining is an option

[b]Sustain:[/b] 1
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Rashid can do the simple action of extending any one of his arms in an outstretched manner  for the sake of an attack.  The arm can be stretched up to 3 meters long and  the retracting speed is just as fast as the attack itself  Each punch deals D rank damage[/list]


[center][b]Arm Guard 1[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Can't move arm while hardened.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage Mutigation : The tier of damage dealt will decrease by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested prior to contact of a defensive ability

[b]Sustain:[/b] 1
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Rashid can do the simple action of extending any one of his arms in an outstretched manner, hardening it in order to temporarily maintain a stone like function  as some sort of defense ability that can block up to  3  D ranks.  [/list]

[center][b]Micro Eyes[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Vision must be unimpaired
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. Sustaining is an option


[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Utilizing body manipulation that kind of focuses on his eyes, Rashid is able to basically turn one of his eyes into a pair of goggles, able to  see far away and in high definition up to 30 meters. This sight is not adjustable and Rashid ould want to keep one eye closed that's not using the goggle function during use.  This is the simple style of improving his eyesight to see at further distances.   [/list]

[center][b]Hearing Aids[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Hearing must not be impaired. Sound based attacls does 1 rank higher damage to Rashid while he uses this ability
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested. Sustaining is an option


[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Utilizing body manipulation that kind of focuses on his ears, Rashid is able to basically turn one of his ears into  a pair of  hearing aids, able to  hear  far away and in high definition up to 20 meters in addition to his own natural hearing. It is the simple style of improving his hearing to hear at further distances.   [/list]

[center][b]Muscle strength[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b]Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Use of both arms
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.


[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Utilizing body manipulation that kind of focuses on his arms, Rashid bulks up the muscle  in both of his arms to be able to hit for  c rank ability damage  with each sort of physical attack.  This one of the most useful abilities in his arsenal [/list]