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1Zadi's Rebirth Empty Zadi's Rebirth 14/05/15, 02:26 am

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Assignment Name: Part 1
Assignment Rank: D
Assignment Location: The Desert of Forgotten Souls
Assignment Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
Profession Prerequisites: Zadi, Detective Skills
Assignment Overview: Having died and mysteriously nabbed by the sands of The Shrouded Isle, Zadi finds himself within the grasp of another land's sands, newly reborn...again. With almost none of his belongings and only his skills as a magician and detective he must venture forth and slowly gather all of his belongings, specifically starting with his wand, sword, and shield, and survive whatever dangers the desert using only his Wildman charm! So pretty much just find Pointed Prism, Rukh Slayer, and Knight's Defender.

Assignment Name: Part 2
Assignment Rank: D
Assignment Location: The Desert of Forgotten Souls
Assignment Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
Profession Prerequisites: Zadi, Detective Skills
Assignment Overview: Heat exhaustion is kicking in as Zadi is to now fight through a horde of illusions that seem nearly invinsible! The only way to defeat them all is for Zadi to figure out if they are legitimate illusions or just covers for underground creatures.

Assignment Name: Part 3
Assignment Rank: D
Assignment Location: The Desert of Forgotten Souls
Assignment Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
Profession Prerequisites: Zadi, Detective Skills
Assignment Overview: Having obtained a good chunk of all his items again, Zadi starts to notice a pattern in their placement. The trail that Zadi has been following in order to get to his belongings' positions has been rather strange. Unfortunately, Zadi does not have the leisure to multitask at the moment and must continue his search. The next item is rather useless at the moment but all the same important, the Potion of Rejuvenation. Zadi must also find Light Bomb and a source of water for he has been trekking far too long in such an arid setting.

Assignment Name: Part 4
Assignment Rank: D
Assignment Location: The Desert of Forgotten Souls
Assignment Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
Profession Prerequisites: Zadi, Detective Skills
Assignment Overview: Zadi found some water and the rest of his belongings but the clues leading up to the water were just as strange as when he was searching for his items. Therefore, Zadi felt as though it was necessary to put all the clues together. Zadi's job is to piece together this mystery by following one last clue that he stumbles upon during his thinking. However, Zadi will continually interrupted by heat induced illusions...again! He must fend off the demons of his past if he wishes to figure out who's been leading him and why!

Assignment Name: Part 5
Assignment Rank: D
Assignment Location: The Desert of Forgotten Souls
Assignment Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
Profession Prerequisites: Zadi, Detective Skills
Assignment Overview: Zadi has found one last trail which has lead him to a something that he once thought was lost forever! A box of ashes with a purple haze though? How could this have been helping the entire time? Perhaps Zadi's current location, the Black Pyramid, might have some answers. Within the walls of the Black Pyramid, Zadi finds carvings on a wall that seem to detail the process of "rebirth". Zadi has gained a certain "curiosity" pertaining to the subject and therefore decides that he must investigate the exact process and perhaps even bring back an old friend. Therefore, Zadi's job is to figure out how the Black Pyramid works.

Assignment Name: Part 6
Assignment Rank: B
Assignment Location: The Desert of Forgotten Souls
Assignment Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
Profession Prerequisites: Learning from his past mistakes with the help of a spirit guide, Zadi decides to continue his research into the black rukh. Taking the box of ashes with him as a form of conviction, Zadi must piece together everything he's learned about the black rukh...and find a way to taint his own rukh black! Eventually Zadi will come to the conclusion that he must destroy things in order to alter the flow of his rukh black. Obviously this won't turn his rukh black, but this is all the knowledge that Zadi possesses. The main objective is for Zadi to destroy the Black Pyramid, or at least attempt to do so. Priests of the temple will show up and try to execute Zadi for his attempted actions and therefore Zadi must defend himself!



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2Zadi's Rebirth Empty Re: Zadi's Rebirth 15/05/15, 07:57 pm

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So, this is a 10 part profession job chain...I'm sure I missed something somewhere. Completion bump~

3Zadi's Rebirth Empty Re: Zadi's Rebirth 15/05/15, 11:40 pm

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So we discussed the job chain here and noted that a lot of these jobs are closely related enough that they should be condensed into a smaller number (much like another chain that was discussed here).

The gathering items jobs should be split into a maximum of 2 profession assignments (Feel free to increase their tier in order to obtain the same/better reward for less word count). For example, the first one is getting half your equipment and the second one being about you finding out that they're in a pattern leading you somewhere.

Your final 5 jobs should be condensed down as well. 6 and 7 should be 1 assignment, 8 is good as-is, and 9/10 should be 1 assignment. If you're going to be doing a resurrection spell or ritual of some sort, please explain it in more detail.

4Zadi's Rebirth Empty Re: Zadi's Rebirth 17/05/15, 08:34 pm

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Edit bump...granted I didn't do exactly as you ask of me, but I didn't want to change the wordcount anymore than I already have. Is this alright?

5Zadi's Rebirth Empty Re: Zadi's Rebirth 17/05/15, 09:33 pm

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So far this is what we have:

Job 1: Find the equipment. (Detective)
Job 2: Determine the foes are illusions. (Detective)
Job 3: Fight the urge to drink illusion water. (???)
Job 4: Find the rest of the equipment and water. (Detective)
Job 5: Fight sand snakes at the water. (Not Detective)
Job 6: Fight poisonous creatures at the water. (Not Detective)
Job 7: Piece together the clues of what he has discovered. (Detective)
Job 8: Determine how to help his 'friend he thought was lost forever'. (Detective)
Job 9: Unsuccessful in the attempt to revive the friend, he must now defend against that friend's attacks. (???)
Job 10: Determine how to turn his Rukh black. (Detective)


3, 5, 6 and 9 don't really seem necessary. 3 should be combined with 4. 5 and 6 don't seem to be detective-type jobs, and 9 should be combined with 10.

Is there something I missed with 5 and 6? 3 and 9 are more of a 'not quite detective-based, and close enough to its neighboring job to be a part of it' kind of thing.

6Zadi's Rebirth Empty Re: Zadi's Rebirth 18/05/15, 07:32 pm

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Six jobs it is~

7Zadi's Rebirth Empty Re: Zadi's Rebirth 18/05/15, 08:49 pm

Vardreth

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Looks great ^_^. I'll make sure to post it up right away. Let me know if you need any staff interaction for The Organization members to reach you in the last job part~


Code:
[b]Assignment Name:[/b] Part 1
[b]Assignment Rank:[/b] D
[b]Assignment Location:[/b] The Desert of Forgotten Souls
[b]Assignment Rewards:[/b] 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Profession Prerequisites:[/b] Zadi, Detective Skills
[b]Assignment Overview:[/b] Having died and mysteriously nabbed by the sands of The Shrouded Isle, Zadi finds himself within the grasp of another land's sands, newly reborn...again. With almost none of his belongings and only his skills as a magician and detective he must venture forth and slowly gather all of his belongings, specifically starting with his wand, sword, and shield, and survive whatever dangers the desert using only his Wildman charm! So pretty much just find Pointed Prism, Rukh Slayer, and Knight's Defender.

[b]Assignment Name:[/b] Part 2
[b]Assignment Rank:[/b] D
[b]Assignment Location:[/b] The Desert of Forgotten Souls
[b]Assignment Rewards:[/b] 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Profession Prerequisites:[/b] Zadi, Detective Skills
[b]Assignment Overview:[/b] Heat exhaustion is kicking in as Zadi is to now fight through a horde of illusions that seem nearly invinsible! The only way to defeat them all is for Zadi to figure out if they are legitimate illusions or just covers for underground creatures.

[b]Assignment Name:[/b] Part 3
[b]Assignment Rank:[/b] D
[b]Assignment Location:[/b] The Desert of Forgotten Souls
[b]Assignment Rewards:[/b] 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Profession Prerequisites:[/b] Zadi, Detective Skills
[b]Assignment Overview:[/b] Having obtained a good chunk of all his items again, Zadi starts to notice a pattern in their placement. The trail that Zadi has been following in order to get to his belongings' positions has been rather strange. Unfortunately, Zadi does not have the leisure to multitask at the moment and must continue his search. The next item is rather useless at the moment but all the same important, the Potion of Rejuvenation. Zadi must also find Light Bomb and a source of water for he has been trekking far too long in such an arid setting.

[b]Assignment Name:[/b] Part 4
[b]Assignment Rank:[/b] D
[b]Assignment Location:[/b] The Desert of Forgotten Souls
[b]Assignment Rewards:[/b] 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Profession Prerequisites:[/b] Zadi, Detective Skills
[b]Assignment Overview:[/b] Zadi found some water and the rest of his belongings but the clues leading up to the water were just as strange as when he was searching for his items. Therefore, Zadi felt as though it was necessary to put all the clues together. Zadi's job is to piece together this mystery by following one last clue that he stumbles upon during his thinking. However, Zadi will continually interrupted by heat induced illusions...again! He must fend off the demons of his past if he wishes to figure out who's been leading him and why!

[b]Assignment Name:[/b] Part 5
[b]Assignment Rank:[/b] D
[b]Assignment Location:[/b] The Desert of Forgotten Souls
[b]Assignment Rewards:[/b] 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Profession Prerequisites:[/b] Zadi, Detective Skills
[b]Assignment Overview:[/b] Zadi has found one last trail which has lead him to a something that he once thought was lost forever! A box of ashes with a purple haze though? How could this have been helping the entire time? Perhaps Zadi's current location, the Black Pyramid, might have some answers. Within the walls of the Black Pyramid, Zadi finds carvings on a wall that seem to detail the process of "rebirth". Zadi has gained a certain "curiosity" pertaining to the subject and therefore decides that he must investigate the exact process and perhaps even bring back an old friend. Therefore, Zadi's job is to figure out how the Black Pyramid works.

[b]Assignment Name:[/b] Part 6
[b]Assignment Rank:[/b] B
[b]Assignment Location:[/b] The Desert of Forgotten Souls
[b]Assignment Rewards:[/b] 3,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Chain rewards:[/b] 8,000 Huang & 50 exp
[b]Profession Prerequisites:[/b] Learning from his past mistakes with the help of a spirit guide, Zadi decides to continue his research into the black rukh. Taking the box of ashes with him as a form of conviction, Zadi must piece together everything he's learned about the black rukh...and find a way to taint his own rukh black! Eventually Zadi will come to the conclusion that he must destroy things in order to alter the flow of his rukh black. Obviously this won't turn his rukh black, but this is all the knowledge that Zadi possesses. The main objective is for Zadi to destroy the Black Pyramid, or at least attempt to do so. Priests of the temple will show up and try to execute Zadi for his attempted actions and therefore Zadi must defend himself!

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