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Yurei Ransurotto's Starter Abilities

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D-Tier
D-Tier

Name: Tsume no Hayabusa (Talon of the Peregrine Falcon)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: A slash/chop that can be up, down, across, or diagonal at 10 m/s which deals D-Tier damage.

Name: Pekku no Hayabusa (Peck of the Peregrine Falcon)  
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: A stab that can be up, down, across, or diagonal at 10 m/s, which deals D-Tier damage.

Name: Hane no Hayabusa (Feather of the Peregrine Falcon)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: A slice that can be up, down, across, or diagonal at 10 m/s, which deals D-Tier damage.

Name: Tsubasa no Hayabusa (Wing of the Peregrine Falcon)
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user parries C-Tier damage at 10 m/s.

Name: Kōtō Hayabusa (Soaring Peregrine Falcon)
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The slipping backwards (or turning) rotates the body slightly at 15 m/s so that an incoming attack passes by harmlessly. As the opponent's attack arrives, the user sharply rotates the hips and shoulders.



Last edited by Pretty on 09/02/15, 09:13 pm; edited 2 times in total

Pretty

Pretty
D-Tier
D-Tier

Bump

Vardreth

Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

For your abilities, all abilities should have a speed placed in the description if there is any movement required to perform it.

Any offensive techniques must have the 'tier' of damage that it deals, instead of a description of the effects of the damage. (If you use an ability that deals B-Tier damage, but they block it with something that defends against C-Tier, you are no longer crushing a limb/cutting into the bone of a person. You are cutting into a muscle, or causing blunt trauma etc. etc.)

As mentioned in chatbox, the C-Tier technique is supplementary.

You did a good job with your abilities, so I went ahead and fixed up the minor things. If you're good with this, then these abilities are ready to go~


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[b]Name:[/b] Tsume no Hayabusa (Talon of the Peregrine Falcon)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class: [/b]Offensive
[b]Range: [/b]Close
[b]Duration: [/b]1 Post
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]2 Post
[b]Description: [/b]A slash/chop that can be up, down, across, or diagonal at 10 m/s which deals D-Tier damage.
 
[b]Name:[/b] Pekku no Hayabusa (Peck of the Peregrine Falcon)  
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class: [/b]Offensive
[b]Range: [/b]Close
[b]Duration: [/b]1 post
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]2 Post
[b]Description: [/b]A stab that can be up, down, across, or diagonal at 10 m/s, which deals D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Hane no Hayabusa (Feather of the Peregrine Falcon)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword 
[b]Class: [/b]Offensive
[b]Range: [/b]Close
[b]Duration: [/b]1 post
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]2 Post
[b]Description: [/b]A slice that can be up, down, across, or diagonal at 10 m/s, which deals D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Tsubasa no Hayabusa (Wing of the Peregrine Falcon)
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword 
[b]Class: [/b]Defensive
[b]Range: [/b]Close
[b]Duration: [/b]1 post
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]2 Post
[b]Description: [/b]The user parries C-Tier damage at 10 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Kōtō Hayabusa (Soaring Peregrine Falcon)
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword 
[b]Class: [/b]Supplementary
[b]Range: [/b]Close
[b]Duration: [/b]1 post
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]2 Post
[b]Description: [/b]The slipping (or turning) rotates the body slightly at 15 m/s so that an incoming attack passes by harmlessly. As the opponent's attack arrives, the boxer sharply rotates the hips and shoulders.

Pretty

Pretty
D-Tier
D-Tier

poke

Vardreth

Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

I'm assuming that is a 'yes', so we are good to go.

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