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1A King's Ordeals Empty A King's Ordeals 03/10/14, 09:35 pm

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Job Name: Convincing the military  *Lagi-Reserved*
Job Rank: B
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 200 XP, 15,000 Huang
Job Overview: Through these days from sitting on the throne, Lagi el Nagi has made seven promises. To carry them out Lagi will have to go through great ordeals. The remnants of the brotherhood of Ash that hidden themselves within Reim has captured senior officers   of the Reim military. These individuals are well respected, and qualification candidates of Lagi’s military pension plan. Lagi must defeat the remaining members of the Brotherhood of Ash that reside in Reim at their hideout and save these officials, proving his strength and gaining the trust of the Reim soldiers.

Enemy Name: Ash Grunts X6
Rank:D
Needed damage to take down:C
Abilities: May move up to 10 m/s.
-Cutting: Deals D tier damage to an opponent.
Magic tool: Transparent Blades- The ash grunts contain a transparent weapon hats really hard to see.
Fragment of Mars- Each grunt contains a fingerless red gauntlet that can shoot out a c rank fire blast that spreads at the speed of 15 m/s and does C rank damage of second degree burns. IT covers a 10 meter range

Enemy Name: Temo, the Cursed
Rank:B
Needed damage to take down:A
Abilities:  Magic tool: Hammer of the Shadoloo
Demonic Creation Shadoloo- This hammer uses life magic to create a black beast that moves at the speed of 15 m/s and swings a hammer for B rank Damage. The summoner takes D rank internal damage per post as apart of the curse.
Quake Swing- Tempo smashes the hammer into the twice , casing somewhat of a tremor that does c rank aoe damage to those that are floor bound.
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Job Name:Eliminating the slavers *Lagi-Reserved*
Job Rank: B
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 200 XP, 15,000 Huang
Job Overview: For the sake of the seven promises, Lagi must defeat the multiple head of the underground slave trade that being run in reim in order for him to establish his policies. He is currently going after Graft, one of the seven heads. However, the head of the  slavers will not go down without a fight, and he hired some pretty exclusive bodyguards.

Enemy Name: The Dark Hand Member - Punsai
Rank:B
Needed damage to take down:A
Abilities:  Can move at C rank speed Naturally and walk on walls.

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Flash Bushido- The users weapon makes a gleam to temporarily  blind the opponent  for one post as he makes two swipes with his sword at B rank speed for  B rank strength.

Darts- The user throws  darts at the opponent at C rank speed  that does C rank damage and paralyzes two limbs for two posts.

Chain capture. The user uses his signature capture move that he does on slaves,  wrapping his chain around a target a b rank speed and strangling them for C rank strength each turn. Itll take a c rank to break the chain.

Enemy Name: Hired muscle X4
Rank: D
Needed damage to take down: C
Abilities:
May move up to 5 m/s.
-Sword Swipe: Deals D tier damage to an opponent.


Job Name:Stop the rebellion with Mercy *Lagi-Reserved*
Job Rank: B
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 200 XP, 15,000 Huang
Job Overview: There are still some people that are loyal to the king and hate Zou, and they are willing to take out Lagi and cause a rave within the streets of reim. They hope to drag Lagi off of his throne and start a civil war that would throw the entire kingdom into disarray. The reason for this is due to the fact that Philipe is a distant cousin of the King and does not approve of Lagi's relationship with Zou.   Stop the vandalizing resembles and disable them to prove to the citizens of reim that you are their champion. Best Philipe to gain his trust

Enemy Name: Rebels X15
Rank: C
Needed damage to take down: C
Abilities:
May move up to 5 m/s.
Arrow shot- can shoot C rank arrows at c rank speed per rebel.
Sword swipe-, each rebel can swing their sword for at c rank speed for  C rank damage
Buckler- Each rebel has a metal buckler that they can use to block physical damage  up to C rank.

Enemy Name: Philipe Sonato
Rank: C
Needed damage to take down: B
Abilities:
May move up to 15 m/s.
Fencing shot-C- can shoot two C rank attacks at c rank speed

Chesto! Counter Strike.-B- Philipe Dodges  an attack at point blank  range at 20 m/s and make a decisive strike at B rank damage , *enemy must be within 5-10 meters

Phandom Requium- C- Philipe contains a magic tool necklace that can make and afterimage of himself with every movement . The afterimages stay and mimicks Philipe's moves until attacked. Only four can be made at a time. Life sensory techniques can fnd th real one



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2A King's Ordeals Empty Re: A King's Ordeals 03/10/14, 11:15 pm

Duquin

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Convincing the military
-The group you are meaning to refer to is not "The Ash" it is "The Brotherhood of Ash" but more importantly, they have been established in previous plots to have operatives all around the globe, even in Zou. Please alter to wording to fix the name and to specify the remaining brotherhood leaders "in Reim" so it isn't implied you are taking out the entire organization. This is important because they are a useful plot tool players and staff should be able to make use of elsewhere.

Eliminating the slavers
-The underground slavers in Reim aren't the ones Lagi would need to worry about dealing it. It's the officially recognized ones that were a part of its legal slave trade. There would be several of these men and they would be spread out throughout the city.
-The enemies involved in the job should have at least one ability of their own tier. A B-tier enemy with only C-tier attacks isn't much more dangerous than any C-tier enemy.

Stop the rebellion with Mercy
-Please give the rebels a leader.
-These rebels main motivations should probably be listed because simply defeating them would not be enough to win their hearts over. I know you probably intend to do more than that, but without some kind of basis behind why they are so upset to go off of it will be difficult to grade how effective your attempts to pacify them will be.

Good start, just fix these handful of changes an I'll approve.

3A King's Ordeals Empty Re: A King's Ordeals 03/10/14, 11:25 pm

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The Black Hand guy's magic tool should change. The reason being that a mere magic tool would not turn its wielder into some kind of beast. You can, however, say that the tool allows him to create such a beast through life magic.

4A King's Ordeals Empty Re: A King's Ordeals 04/10/14, 12:08 am

Lagi

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Philipe seemed tough so changed it to a B

Hows the missions now?

5A King's Ordeals Empty Re: A King's Ordeals 04/10/14, 12:46 am

Duquin

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Approved~

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