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1Eliza's Starters Empty Eliza's Starters 01/10/14, 08:30 pm

Eliza

Eliza
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Name: Skyreach
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave (1mx1m in size) of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave moves at 10m/s up to 10m away and aims for the stomach of the victim. It will deal D Tier damage like bruises and minor trauma to it.

Name: Zar'ha
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi (5 to sustain)
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or sustain+1
Description: Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave is connected to the orb that is on the end of Archenemy. It's 5 meters long and 12 inches thing and acts like a whip, moving at 10m/s. It deals D Tier damage like  bruises, small cuts and minor trauma upon impact.

Name: Guillotine
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave takes form of a 2 meters long and 0.5 meters wide sickle that will fly up to 10m towards the enemy at 10m/s. It deals D Tier damage like  bruises, small cuts and minor trauma upon impact.


Name: Crowbar
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave takes the form of a large spheric (5x5meters in size) and moves at 10m/s up to 10m away. It will move towards the enemy and rush down at it from above (therefor aiming for the head), pressing the enemy into the ground. It deals D Tier damage like  bruises, small cuts and minor trauma upon impact.

Name: Zerschmetterling
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 20m
Duration: Instantly
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description:  Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave comes in from of a total of 5 "whips" that are 2 meters in length and 12 inches thick, moving at 10m/s. The whips will surround the victim and attack it all together. It deals C Tier damage like major bruises and can easily knock-back opponents upon impact. If hit with one directly a person can suffer from fractured bones. Cuts can cut about halfway through muscle. If less than 5 whips hit the opponent, it will deal only D Tier damage.



Last edited by Eliza on 02/10/14, 10:00 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Eliza's Starters Empty Re: Eliza's Starters 02/10/14, 09:46 pm

Eliza

Eliza
C-Tier
C-Tier

Bump ^_^

3Eliza's Starters Empty Re: Eliza's Starters 02/10/14, 09:53 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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Skyreach: add in "Moves at 10m/s up to 10m away to push the opponent up to 2m in the air." Also, it can either deal damage or push them back, not both.

Zar'ha: Please change duration to "Sustained" and cool down to "2 posts or Sustain+1"

Guillotine: Add in "will fly up to 10m towards the enemy at 10m/s."

Crowbar: Add in "moves at 10m/s up to 10m away"

Zerschmetterling: Please indicate that if less than all 5 "whips" hit the opponent, only D-tier damage would be dealt.

4Eliza's Starters Empty Re: Eliza's Starters 02/10/14, 09:59 pm

Eliza

Eliza
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C-Tier

Bump. ^_^
Eventhough why I don't understand why you state the Range in "Range: 10m" and then have to mention it again in the description...xD

5Eliza's Starters Empty Re: Eliza's Starters 02/10/14, 10:00 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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also, for the last one, total scale can only be ten meters, so each whip would have to be 2m long

6Eliza's Starters Empty Re: Eliza's Starters 02/10/14, 10:01 pm

Eliza

Eliza
C-Tier
C-Tier

bump again

7Eliza's Starters Empty Re: Eliza's Starters 02/10/14, 10:04 pm

Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
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approved~ Add to your vault, please!

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[b]Name:[/b] Skyreach
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave (1mx1m in size) of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave moves at 10m/s up to 10m away and aims for the stomach of the victim. It will deal D Tier damage like bruises and minor trauma to it.

[b]Name:[/b] Zar'ha
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi (5 to sustain)
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave is connected to the orb that is on the end of Archenemy. It's 5 meters long and 12 inches thing and acts like a whip, moving at 10m/s. It deals D Tier damage like  bruises, small cuts and minor trauma upon impact.

[b]Name:[/b] Guillotine
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave takes form of a 2 meters long and 0.5 meters wide sickle that will fly up to 10m towards the enemy at 10m/s. It deals D Tier damage like  bruises, small cuts and minor trauma upon impact.


[b]Name:[/b] Crowbar
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave takes the form of a large spheric (5x5meters in size) and moves at 10m/s up to 10m away. It will move towards the enemy and rush down at it from above (therefor aiming for the head), pressing the enemy into the ground. It deals D Tier damage like  bruises, small cuts and minor trauma upon impact.

[b]Name:[/b] Zerschmetterling
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Duration:[/b] Instantly
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b]  Eliza sways Archenemy at her opponent and releases a shockwave of Strength Magic at them, that is barely visible to those who do not utilize Magic. The shockwave comes in from of a total of 5 "whips" that are 2 meters in length and 12 inches thick, moving at 10m/s. The whips will surround the victim and attack it all together. It deals C Tier damage like major bruises and can easily knock-back opponents upon impact. If hit with one directly a person can suffer from fractured bones. Cuts can cut about halfway through muscle. If less than 5 whips hit the opponent, it will deal only D Tier damage.

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