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Kids At Play [B-tier/Lexiara]

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1Kids At Play [B-tier/Lexiara] Empty Kids At Play [B-tier/Lexiara] 18/08/14, 04:59 pm

Lexiara

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Job Name: Kids At Play (Part 1)
Job Rank: B
Job Location: Heliohapt
Job Rewards: 200 XP/15,000 Huang
Job Overview: Shelby the Butcher is distraught. Her two nieces and her nephew have wandered off to an oasis and have not returned. She fears some of the local wildlife may have hurt them. Find the children and free them from danger before returning them home!

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Job Name: Kids At Play (Part 2)
Job Rank: B
Job Location: Heliohapt
Job Rewards: 200 XP/15,000 Huang
Job Overview: Shelby’s nieces and nephews have wandered off again, determined to become adventurers after their previous rescue. This time, they went to explore some caves. Once again, find the children and free them from danger before returning them home.

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Last edited by Lexiara on 18/08/14, 08:41 pm; edited 2 times in total

Duquin

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Kids At Play (Part 1)
-The crows altogether don't seem to present enough danger for a B-tier mission. While there are five of them, their abilities aren't all too much of a threat since anyone B-tier should have abilities to one shot the crows making this follow up attack fairly useless.
-My suggestion is to drop one of the crows for a total of 4 and then add a B-tier creature. Maybe a bigger crow or a crocodile in the oasis waters.

Kids At Play (Part 2)
-These B-tier enemies should have at least a few actual abilities. What you have for them right now are basically just passive effects. But they need to have some executable abilities otherwise they are powerless even against D-tier abilities. Only abilities can counter abilities making it vital that high tier job NPCs have them.

Lexiara

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Bump for edit ^_^

Duquin

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Can you separate the abilities instead of squishing them all into one paragraph?

Also, some of the abilities are lacking movement speeds.

Lexiara

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bumped again, think i got everything.

Duquin

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Approved!

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