New bag of fun

Name: Twist Reality
Tier: B - Tier
Cost: 30 magoi (15 sustained)
Element: (Strength and Light) Solid Illusions
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 30 meters
Duration: 5 posts
Cool-Down: 6 posts
Description: Manipulates Light and Strength Magic to create Solid Illusions with a thirty meter range from the caster. The caster can use this to disguise up to five people, covering them in a solid illusion, or to create up to five illusions within the radius. The combined illusions can not be greater than fifteen meters in scale. The illusions can move up to 20 m/s and can deal up to B-Tier damage once per post. If a person is disguised, they move normally with the illusion, but the caster can move the illusion from them at 20 m/s. If any of the illusions are struck with B-tier or lower damage they all dissolve. Streams of magoi float to a location at 20 m/s to form the illusions. If sustained, the caster can reform the illusions once per post.

Name: Clear
Tier: B-Tier
Cost: 30 magoi
Element: Strength
Class: Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Duration: 1-4 post
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The caster creates a film of force around themselves that pulsates outwards in the shape of a dome at 20 m/s.  This pushes anything around the caster back up to 15 meters away. When the force hits something it deals B-tier damage or reaches 15 meters it comes back to cover the caster once again. If sustained, once per post another pulsation from the filmy substance will expand outward again.

Name: Makihige
Tier: B-Tier
Cost: 30 magoi (15 sustained)
Element: Light + Strength (Shadow Magic)
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 meters
Duration: 4 posts
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The caster uses his staff to create two seven meter shadow constructs around him. The constructs deal C-Tier damage each per post, and can deflect up to one C-Tier attack or two D-Tier attacks before being destroyed. If sustained, the shadow constructs will reform. The constructs move at twenty meters per second.

Name: Gravity Lift, Stage 1
Tier: C
Cost: 20 on cast; 10 sustain
Element: Gravity
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 3 posts
Description: A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

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Name: Phantasm's Redirection
Tier: C - Tier
Cost: 20 Magoi (10 Sustained)
Element: Light + Strength (Solid Illusions)
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 1-5 Posts
Cool-Down: 3-6 Posts
Description: Azix creates an illusion by issuing commands to the Ruhk. The magoi streams from the caster's staff within 20 meters at 15 m/s² to form the illusions.The illusion is solid and can take any form up to 10³ meters, but creates no sounds and moves up to 15 m/s². Azix uses this ability for misdirection and deception. The illusion will be shattered if hit with a higher Tier ability. If sustained, the caster can reshape the illusion once per post. The illusion can deal C-Tier damage once per post.

Clear
-The size of this should be based off scale, not range, making it only extend to 15m as opposed to 30m.

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[b]Name:[/b] Twist Reality
[b]Tier:[/b] B - Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi (15 sustained)
[b]Element:[/b] (Strength and Light) Solid Illusions
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 6 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Manipulates Light and Strength Magic to create Solid Illusions with a thirty meter range from the caster. The caster can use this to disguise up to five people, covering them in a solid illusion, or to create up to five illusions within the radius. The combined illusions can not be greater than fifteen meters in scale. The illusions can move up to 20 m/s and can deal up to B-Tier damage once per post. If a person is disguised, they move normally with the illusion, but the caster can move the illusion from them at 20 m/s. If any of the illusions are struck with B-tier or lower damage they all dissolve. Streams of magoi float to a location at 20 m/s to form the illusions. If sustained, the caster can reform the illusions once per post.

[b]Name:[/b] Makihige
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi (15 sustained)
[b]Element:[/b] Light + Strength (Shadow Magic)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster uses his staff to create two seven meter shadow constructs around him. The constructs deal C-Tier damage each per post, and can deflect up to one C-Tier attack or two D-Tier attacks before being destroyed. If sustained, the shadow constructs will reform. The constructs move at twenty meters per second.

[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 1
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 on cast; 10 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 5m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.

[b]Name:[/b] Gravity Lift, Stage 2
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 on cast; 15 sustain
[b]Element:[/b] Gravity
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Description:[/b] A magician lowers the influence of gravity around their body. This gives them the ability to lift off, hover, and soar through the sky at a maximum speed of 10m/s. They can control the force of gravity around their body at any given moment, able to slow down, speed up, or stop flying completely.



[spoiler="Retraining]Name: Phantasm's Redirection
Tier: D - Tier
Cost: 10 Magoi (5 Sustained)
Element: Light
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters
Duration: 1-5 Posts
Cool-Down: 2-6 Posts
Description: Azix creates an illusion by issuing commands to the Ruhk. The illusion looks like him, but creates no sounds and moves at 10 m/s. Azix uses this ability for misdirection and deception. The illusion will be shattered if hit with a higher Tier ability.[/spoiler]

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Name: Phantasm's Redirection
Tier: C - Tier
Cost: 20 Magoi (10 Sustained)
Element: Light + Strength (Solid Illusions)
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 1-5 Posts
Cool-Down: 3-6 Posts
Description: Azix creates an illusion by issuing commands to the Ruhk. The magoi streams from the caster's staff within 20 meters at 15 m/s² to form the illusions.The illusion is solid and can take any form up to 10³ meters, but creates no sounds and moves up to 15 m/s². Azix uses this ability for misdirection and deception. The illusion will be shattered if hit with a higher Tier ability. If sustained, the caster can reshape the illusion once per post. The illusion can deal C-Tier damage once per post.

Clear
-This is the only one I still have reservations over. They way it's worded you aren't really sustaining the spell. Instead it's more like you are re-casting. If it were sustained then wouldn't it make more sense for this spell to be constantly releasing force rather than making pulses? This is less of a required change and more of an open discussion so you're free to make the edit or debate the issue.

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[b]Name:[/b] Clear
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1-4 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates a film of force around themselves that pulsates outwards in the shape of a dome at 20 m/s.  This pushes anything around the caster back up to 15 meters away. When the force hits something it deals B-tier damage or reaches 15 meters it comes back to cover the caster once again. If sustained, once per post another pulsation from the filmy substance will expand outward again.

Phantasm's Redirection: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t1824-a-personal-favor-solo-train#7999

Makihige: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t1824-a-personal-favor-solo-train#8001

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[b]Name:[/b] Makihige
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi (15 sustained)
[b]Element:[/b] Light + Strength (Shadow Magic)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster uses his staff to create two seven meter shadow constructs around him. The constructs deal C-Tier damage each per post, and can deflect up to one C-Tier attack or two D-Tier attacks before being destroyed. If sustained, the shadow constructs will reform. The constructs move at twenty meters per second.

Name: Phantasm's Redirection
Tier: C - Tier
Cost: 20 Magoi (10 Sustained)
Element: Light + Strength (Solid Illusions)
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Duration: 1-5 Posts
Cool-Down: 3-6 Posts
Description: Azix creates an illusion by issuing commands to the Ruhk. The magoi streams from the caster's staff within 20 meters at 15 m/s² to form the illusions.The illusion is solid and can take any form up to 10³ meters, but creates no sounds and moves up to 15 m/s². Azix uses this ability for misdirection and deception. The illusion will be shattered if hit with a higher Tier ability. If sustained, the caster can reshape the illusion once per post. The illusion can deal C-Tier damage once per post.

Editing:

Name: Twist Reality
Tier: B - Tier
Cost: 30 magoi (15 sustained)
Element: (Strength and Light) Solid Illusions
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 30 meters
Duration: 5 posts
Cool-Down: 6 posts
Description: Manipulates Light and Strength Magic to create Solid Illusions with a thirty meter range from the caster. The caster can use this to disguise up to five people, covering them in a solid illusion, or to create up to five illusions within the radius. The combined illusions can not be greater than fifteen meters in scale. The illusions can move up to 20 m/s and can deal up to B-Tier damage once per post. If a person is disguised, they move normally with the illusion, but the caster can move the illusion from them at 20 m/s. If any of the illusions are struck with B-tier or lower damage they all dissolve. Streams of magoi float to a location at 20 m/s to form the illusions. If sustained, the caster can reform the illusions once per post.

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Name: Twist Reality
Tier: B - Tier
Cost: 30 magoi (15 sustained)
Element: (Strength and Light) Solid Illusions
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: 30 meters
Duration: 1-5 posts
Cool-Down: 5-6 posts
Description: Manipulates Light and Strength Magic to create Solid Illusions with a thirty meter range from the caster. The caster can use this to create up to five solid illusions within the range. The combined illusions can not be greater than fifteen meters in scale. The illusions can cover up to five people to disguise them. The illusions can move up to 20 m/s and can deal up to B-Tier damage  once per post, if all of them hit the same target. They deal D-Tier damage by themselves. If a person is disguised, they move normally with the illusion, but the caster can move the illusion from them at 20 m/s. If an illusion is struck with D-Tier damage, that illusion is shattered. Streams of magoi float to a location at 20 m/s to form the illusions. If sustained, the caster can reform the illusions once per post.

Changed the wording a little.

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[b]Name:[/b] Twist Reality
[b]Tier:[/b] B - Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi (15 sustained)
[b]Element:[/b] (Strength and Light) Solid Illusions
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1-5 posts
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5-6 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Manipulates Light and Strength Magic to create Solid Illusions with a thirty meter range from the caster. The caster can use this to create up to five solid illusions within the range. The combined illusions can not be greater than fifteen meters in scale. The illusions can cover up to five people to disguise them. The illusions can move up to 20 m/s and can deal up to B-Tier damage  once per post, if all of them hit the same target. They deal D-Tier damage by themselves. If a person is disguised, they move normally with the illusion, but the caster can move the illusion from them at 20 m/s. If an illusion is struck with D-Tier damage, that illusion is shattered. Streams of magoi float to a location at 20 m/s to form the illusions. If sustained, the caster can reform the illusions once per post.

Training Approved!

Clear: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t1970-a-personal-favor-iii-the-second-name-solo-job#8829

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[b]Name:[/b] Clear
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 magoi
[b]Element:[/b] Strength
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 30 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1-4 post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates a film of force around themselves that pulsates outwards in the shape of a dome at 20 m/s.  This pushes anything around the caster back up to 15 meters away. When the force hits something it deals B-tier damage or reaches 15 meters it comes back to cover the caster once again. If sustained, once per post another pulsation from the filmy substance will expand outward again.

Removed Gravity Lift Stage 2 from list. Bump for completion.

Completion acknowledged~