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Déci’s Sealed Ability’s, and Weapon Equip!

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Neppy

Neppy
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Déci: Deus
Tier: C-tier
Djinn: Déci
Theme: Dark Magic
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium-Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must point towards their target speaking the words “Deus” .
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:  2 Post
Cost:  20 Magoi | 10 sustain
Description:
    Neph summons his shadow to life taking the height of a 4ft tangible shadow(s) . In a range of 25 meters total, he points at his target and sends a charging shadow from himself, the frontal of the shadow changing into protruding spikes as it grows to 6ft to deal a C-tier piercing spike to skewer his target.


Déci: Setté
Tier: C-tier
Djinn: Déci
Theme: Dark Magic
Type: Offensive
Range: Close-Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Both Neph’s hands must be empty of items and speak the words Setté.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:  2 Post
Cost:  20 Magoi | 10 sustain
Description:
    Directing his shadow to his hands it wraps and spirals from his elbows down to his fingers taking the form of thin razor sharp talons about 115cms on his right hand, and a wide cleaver with shadowy spikes along the back of its blade making it 100cm long, the spikes being  50cm on his left hand. Each blade can extend 10 meters from Neph’s arms in a tangible form to rip/cleave C-tier damage into his intended target.


WEAPON EQUIP!!

Mogi:
Djinn: Déci
Form: Sentient Darklings
Theme: Dark Magic
Chant: “Luminate, Déci”
Cost: 20 Magoi | 10 Per post
Cool-Down: 5 post
Appearance: Déci  laminates darkness through Neph’s body donning him a shadowy cob-webbish hue, and a all black suit.  Tangible twisted creatures of darkness  protruding from him with glowing bright eyes. These creatures are extendable weapons of darkness shaped  Two being ascaled piranha’s from his back, and another being an impish goblin clinging next to his feet(interchangeable once per post).
Passive:

  • The magic manipulates the users shadow into taking form as a dark figure 1m-5m tall. The user is able to give commands to their shadow allowing it to perform complex actions as long as it is verbally communicated. The shadow will otherwise stay close to the user in order to protect them if not given any orders. The shadow defaults as a copy of the user but can take on the form of other objects or creatures according to the users will at the time of summoning and may change its form once per post at the user's command. The shadow is capable of dealing damage equal to the djinn's weapon equip and acts as an ability of the same tier. This shadow is capable of moving up to 50m away from the user and moves at speeds equal to their own(During full djinn equip the shadow also receive A-tier flight.) The user may choose to split the shadow reducing its damage tier in half down to D-tier. Upon being destroyed, the shadows will disperse only to be summed again at the user's side.

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Last edited by Neppy on 28/06/22, 08:23 pm; edited 4 times in total

Zion

Zion
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Djinn Weapon:
- You must choose between the weapon being one of the three types you have described. I understand that you are using the image as a direct inspiration, but you can still do that by having the weapon be the gauntlet and then have back piranha and goblin be abilities. With the way your passive works, you could easily make it into your goblin. You could also go for having the piranha or the goblin be your weapon and then make a glove of darkness spell if that is your preference. It just needs to be narrowed down into one thematic weapon.

Djinn Passive:
-Under staff review. It is staying mostly the same, but there are some vague aspects we wanted to hammer down.

Déci: Deus:
-The requirement suggests you can use this on distant shadows, but the spell description says you cast this on your own shadow. It is fine if you use it on shadows other than your own within a certain range, but please edit your description to better explain how it can be used. You also worded it in a way that makes it seem like the you are growing 6f tall when I'm pretty sure you mean the shadow does.
-A C-tier pierce and C-tier hold is two ability effects in one. You will either have to spit your C-teir into two D-tiers or change the ability so that only one of the two effects is present.
-Breaking free should not be based on djinn durability systems. That is for your weapon only. The abilities that come with it use normal ability rules.


Déci: Setté:
-Can you please elaborate on what it means to move through the shadows vs tangible form? My understanding of Dark magic is that it causes shadows to gather and form life-like constructs. It sounds like this spell allows you to stand there with empty hands while your shadow on the ground forms weapons and attacks the opponent's shadow to cause damage. If so, tangible form only. If it is you moving the shadow weapons into a shadow nearby to emerge from that same or a connected shadow within 10m then this ability is fine in its concept. Just explain the shadow movement a bit more clearly with some slight rewording.

Zion

Zion
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Here is your new djinn passive:
  • The magic manipulates the users shadow into taking form as a dark figure 1m-5m tall. The user is able to give commands to their shadow allowing it to perform complex actions as long as it is verbally communicated. The shadow will otherwise stay close to the user in order to protect them if not given any orders. The shadow defaults as a copy of the user but can take on the form of other objects or creatures according to the users will at the time of summoning and may change its form once per post at the user's command. The shadow is capable of dealing damage equal to the djinn's weapon equip and acts as an ability of the same tier. This shadow is capable of moving up to 50m away from the user and moves at speeds equal to their own(During full djinn equip the shadow also receive A-tier flight.) The user may choose to split the shadow reducing its damage tier in half down to D-tier. Upon being destroyed, the shadows will disperse only to be summed again at the user's side.

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[list][*]The magic manipulates the users shadow into taking form as a dark figure 1m-5m tall. The user is able to give commands to their shadow allowing it to perform complex actions as long as it is verbally communicated. The shadow will otherwise stay close to the user in order to protect them if not given any orders. The shadow defaults as a copy of the user but can take on the form of other objects or creatures according to the users will at the time of summoning and may change its form once per post at the user's command. The shadow is capable of dealing damage equal to the djinn's weapon equip and acts as an ability of the same tier. This shadow is capable of moving up to 50m away from the user and moves at speeds equal to their own(During full djinn equip the shadow also receive A-tier flight.) The user may choose to split the shadow reducing its damage tier in half down to D-tier. Upon being destroyed, the shadows will disperse only to be summed again at the user's side.[/list]

Neppy

Neppy
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A-Tier

Edited.

Zion

Zion
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A-Tier

1/2 Approved

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[center][b]Déci: Deus[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Djinn:[/b] Déci
[b]Theme:[/b] Dark Magic
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium-Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must point towards their target speaking the words “Deus” .
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]  2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b]  20 Magoi | 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]Neph summons his shadow to life taking the height of a 4ft tangible shadow(s) . In a range of 25 meters total, he points at his target and sends a charging shadow at C-tier speeds from himself, the frontal of the shadow changing into protruding spikes as it grows to 6ft to deal a C-tier piercing spike to skewer his target. [/list]

[center][b]Déci: Setté[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Djinn:[/b] Déci
[b]Theme:[/b] Dark Magic
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close-Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Both Neph’s hands must be empty of items and speak the words Setté.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]  2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b]  20 Magoi | 10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]Directing his shadow to his hands it wraps and spirals from his elbows down to his fingers taking the form of thin razor sharp talons about 115cms on his right hand, and a wide cleaver with shadowy spikes along the back of its blade making it 100cm long, the spikes being  50cm on his left hand. Each blade can extend 10 meters from Neph’s arms in a tangible form to rip/cleave C-tier damage into his intended target.[/list]

WEAPON EQUIP!!

[spoiler=Mogi]
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[b]Djinn:[/b] Déci
[b]Form:[/b] Sentient Darklings
[b]Theme:[/b] Dark Magic
[b]Chant:[/b] “Luminate, Déci”
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi | 10 Per post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 post
[b]Appearance:[/b] Déci  laminates darkness through Neph’s body donning him a shadowy cob-webbish hue, and a all black suit.  Tangible twisted creatures of darkness  protruding from him with glowing bright eyes. These creatures are extendable weapons of darkness shaped  Two being ascaled piranha’s from his back, and another being an impish goblin clinging next to his feet(interchangeable once per post).
[b]Passive:[/b]

[list][*]The magic manipulates the users shadow into taking form as a dark figure 1m-5m tall. The user is able to give commands to their shadow allowing it to perform complex actions as long as it is verbally communicated. The shadow will otherwise stay close to the user in order to protect them if not given any orders. The shadow defaults as a copy of the user but can take on the form of other objects or creatures according to the users will at the time of summoning and may change its form once per post at the user's command. The shadow is capable of dealing damage equal to the djinn's weapon equip and acts as an ability of the same tier. This shadow is capable of moving up to 50m away from the user and moves at speeds equal to their own(During full djinn equip the shadow also receive A-tier flight.) The user may choose to split the shadow reducing its damage tier in half down to D-tier. Upon being destroyed, the shadows will disperse only to be summed again at the user's side.
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Lagi

Lagi
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Ω-Tier

deci deus; remove any mention of speed if its not a dedicated movement technique

Neppy

Neppy
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A-Tier

Edited

Lagi

Lagi
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Ω-Tier

2/2 good to go

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