Alishar Starting Abilities

Tier: D
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements: Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers.
Scaling: Bind - Increase the number of limbs bound by one for every 10 stamina invested.
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

With a snap of Alishar's fingers, Scarlett lashes out from wherever she happens to be, and attacks a target within 15 meters of him by coiling her body around them rapidly, like a length of cloth, restraining one limb, be it a leg or an arm, an immobilizing effect. While the bind doesn't do damage on its own, this is a dangerous position for a constrictor to put its prey in.

Tier: D
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements: Alishar needs a free hand. Scarlett needs to be within close range of Alishar.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Alishar flings Scarlett in a direction and then jumps on her back as she flattens out against the air like a flying snake. This allows Scarlett to glide for a fair distance, around 15 meters, and Alishar alone to ride on her back as she does so. This speed of this Viper is either at D-tier speeds or based on the strength tiers that the user used to throw the creature. This gliding isn't very maneuverable, only able to change directions once. If sustained, the user can fly an additional 15-meters and change directions once again

Tier: D
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements: Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

With a snap of his fingers, Alishar wordlessly orders Scarlett to flatten flush against the ground, slipping beneath the feet of a few enemies in a tight 5-meter cluster, and then inflates himself to full size while rolling, causing all the enemies to topple forcefully onto the ground. They'll take D-tier bashing ability damage upon colliding with the ground, though this is easily countered if noticed, by simply jumping or stepping out of range.

Tier: D
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements: Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers. Scarlett must be near Alishar.
Scaling: Defense
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

With a snap of his fingers, Scarlett will flatten and coil into a plate shape, either in Alishar's hand or somewhere on his body to interpose against attacks. With this stance, her body is able to divert and distribute impact force throughout her body instead of just one area, like the foe is striking a spring, mitigating up to one D Rank of ability-tier damage, or half damage in the face of one C Rank of ability-tier damage. She can only cover one part of his body at a time, around a 45 cm radius circle, at this level. She can also use this stance to defend herself from attacks directed at her alone.

Tier: C
Class: Beast Tamer
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers. Needs surfaces to ricochet off of. Additionally requires a good starting angle from out of sight.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: X
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20
Description:

With a snap of his fingers, Alishar commands Scarlett to shoot out up to 20 meters from wherever she hides, and deliver a slashing attack with the edge of her body. She then ricochets off a nearby wall or object and returns to deliver a second attack even should the first miss, up to two hits for D Rank damage per hit! This takes additional advantage of her flatness by folding with the recoil like paper to maintain her dangerous velocity, contorting at what seems to be an impossible angle to strike again within 20 meters of her ricochet point.

Scarlet's snare: Range should be decreased at D-rank. At this current point in time, 15 meters away seems appropriate for a starter technique. It would mimic the immobility status effect.

Fly Viper: It would be gliding, it won't have the same versatility as flight with wings. Be mindful of this, it would only be able to support your weight alone and no one else. It'll be flying at D-tier speed or aka at a speed that's equivalent to the strength you used to throw it. Your range would be a 15-meter glide, and at this level, you can change directions once. if sustained, you can glide an additional 15 -meters.

Pit viper: just remember that nothing is in absolutes, especially if they have a counter to what you are doing. Make sure that you are saying that it deals D-tier bashing ability damage, due to they crashing into the ground after that fall

Scarlet shield: the way defenses work is that it would be able to block up to D-tier ability damage. a C tier version of this would block 1 c or 2 d ranks of ability tier damage and so on. Be sure to say what its able to do in terms of protecting yourself

scarlet bolt: remove the requirement that causes scarlet to damage herself. Since she hides before striking, requirement in replacement of that could be that scarlet takes cover somewhere first. its d tier ability damage each, not a piece, we just need to fix the wording there a bit. we need a range of how far she can ricochet in order to it her target, 20 meters is good.

I have edited the abilities to your specifications!

alright well, you posted everything twice, I cleaned up a little bit for fly and pit.

For pit, I was like... speaking to you, not for your to put that in the ability. It's just something for you to remember personally

You misunderstood me for scarlet shield, I was giving an example as to how the defensive ability would work on a a c tier version so you would know how to build it yourself in the future.

Anyway, i cleaned up for you a bit and 1/2 but look back to these as an example as to how to build for furute techniques. Take a peak in the other vaults of people as well for examples, even mine.

Speaking of which...you should get your vault set up.

2/2 approved

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[center][b]Scarlett Snare[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements:[/b] Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Bind - Increase the number of limbs bound by one for every 10 stamina invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] X
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
With a snap of Alishar's fingers, Scarlett lashes out from wherever she happens to be, and attacks a target within 15 meters of him by coiling her body around them rapidly, like a length of cloth, restraining one limb, be it a leg or an arm, an immobilizing effect. While the bind doesn't do damage on its own, this is a dangerous position for a constrictor to put its prey in.[/list]


[center][b]Fly Viper[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements:[/b] Alishar needs a free hand. Scarlett needs to be within close range of Alishar.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] X
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Alishar flings Scarlett in a direction and then jumps on her back as she flattens out against the air like a flying snake. This allows Scarlett to glide for a fair distance, around 15 meters, and Alishar alone to ride on her back as she does so. This speed of this Viper is either at D-tier speeds or based on the strength tiers that the user used to throw the creature. This gliding isn't very maneuverable, only able to change directions once. If sustained, the user can fly an additional 15-meters and change directions once again[/list]


[center][b]Pit Viper[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements:[/b] Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] X
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
With a snap of his fingers, Alishar wordlessly orders Scarlett to flatten flush against the ground, slipping beneath the feet of a few enemies in a tight 5-meter cluster, and then inflates himself to full size while rolling, causing all the enemies to topple forcefully onto the ground. They'll take D-tier bashing ability damage upon colliding with the ground, though this is easily countered if noticed, by simply jumping or stepping out of range.[/list]


[center][b]Scarlett Shield[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements:[/b] Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers. Scarlett must be near Alishar.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Defense
[b]Sustain:[/b] X
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
With a snap of his fingers, Scarlett will flatten and coil into a plate shape, either in Alishar's hand or somewhere on his body to interpose against attacks. With this stance, her body is able to divert and distribute impact force throughout her body instead of just one area, like the foe is striking a spring, mitigating up to one D Rank of ability-tier damage, or half damage in the face of one C Rank of ability-tier damage. She can only cover one part of his body at a time, around a 45 cm radius circle, at this level. She can also use this stance to defend herself from attacks directed at her alone.[/list]


[center][b]Scarlett Bolt[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Scarlett must be able to hear his snapping fingers. Needs surfaces to ricochet off of. Additionally requires a good starting angle from out of sight.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] X
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
With a snap of his fingers, Alishar commands Scarlett to shoot out up to 20 meters from wherever she hides, and deliver a slashing attack with the edge of her body. She then ricochets off a nearby wall or object and returns to deliver a second attack even should the first miss, up to two hits for D Rank damage per hit! This takes additional advantage of her flatness by folding with the recoil like paper to maintain her dangerous velocity, contorting at what seems to be an impossible angle to strike again within 20 meters of her ricochet point.[/list]