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1Scarlett [Starter Beast] Empty Scarlett [Starter Beast] 09/01/22, 09:41 pm

Alishar

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Name: Scarlett
Tier: D
Type: Normal
Species: Scarf Python
Appearance: A red snake with gold and black patterns. This particular snake was bred to have these patterns, as they are typically brown or green in nature. Scarlett is around 5.5 meters in length, and able to turn flat like a scarf, able to be worn as a fashion accessory while drawing little attention.
Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Flattening Physiology
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Scarf Python
Trait Description: Scarf Pythons are capable of deflating their body like a set of bellows, flattening flush against the ground in order to slither unseen. In this state, their flexibility is exactly akin to cloth, but they retain all mobility and strength they have while they aren't flat. This is part of the digestive process, so it's possible to use even after eating prey. The general manipulation that a Scarf Python has over it's own body is seamless amongst most creatures.
Trait Effect: Scarlett can register abilities that revolve around the manipulation of her body in the same fashion as body manipulation.


Trait Name: Swift Python
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement:
Trait Description: Snakes are noteworthy for their striking speed, Scarf Pythons being no exception. Through training, she has become capable of prolonged movement at such speeds, making Scarlett fast even beyond her kin.
Trait Effect: This beast is capable of D-Tier movement speeds

Trait Name: Snakescale
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Snake
Trait Description: The scales of a snake are somewhat harder than the skin of fleshier species. Without affecting her mobility, Scarlett is a little tougher than a more defenseless creature. Physical attacks pale in comparison against the resistance of a Scarf Python's mighty scales.
Trait Effect: In response to D-tier physical attacks, this creature will only take half damage.



Last edited by Alishar on 10/01/22, 04:06 am; edited 2 times in total

2Scarlett [Starter Beast] Empty Re: Scarlett [Starter Beast] 10/01/22, 02:40 am

Lagi

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Alright my friend, i'd like to think the majority of my experience is with beasts, so I'm gonna help you a bit.

For starters, it's a normal type or otherwise a brute right? So with the special function of this snake, being flat, flattening physiology for the registry can say a bit more..


Trait Name: Flattening Physiology
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Scarf Python
Trait Description: Scarf Pythons are capable of deflating their body like a set of bellows, flattening flush against the ground in order to slither unseen. In this state, their flexibility is exactly akin to cloth, but they retain all mobility and strength they have while they aren't flat. This is part of the digestive process, so it's possible to use even after eating prey. The general manipulation that a Scarf Python has over it's own body is seamless amongst most creatures.
Trait Effect: Scarlett can register abilities that revolve around the manipulation of her body in the same fashion as body manipulation.

*this opens the door for you to make her flat and whatever you want her to do and eliminates space for the last 2 traits. *





Constrictor- Here is the thing, they deal damage equal to their rank, but this caps at A-tier at any point should they reach omega. Right? So even if you bump up the constriction, this is in relation to its regular damage, which will eventually hit its cap.No disrespect at all, but it will become redundant after a while because you will naturally catch up with your basic damage abilities and it'll be a waste of a trait once you hit your ceiling.




Snake scale: Ok, traits usually have a general focus, you would either want defenses or access to something else. Your slashing, don't need because you can just register a beast ability of scarlet going flat and slashing at a target with her flat body that she made razor-sharp. You have options, let's focus on defense for this trait.


Trait Name: Snakescale
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Scarf Python
Trait Description: The scales of a snake are somewhat harder than the skin of fleshier species. Without affecting her mobility, Scarlett is a little tougher than a more defenseless creature. Physical attacks pale in comparison against the resistance of a Scarf Python's mighty scales.
Trait Effect: In response to D-tier physical attacks, this creature will only take half damage.





Tips: It's always good for normal beasts to have strength and speed tiers, those don't carry over and they work well with speed tiers. A beast's natural damage is not a substitute for actual strength tiers, certain creatures can do without them, normal beasts aren't one of them.

3Scarlett [Starter Beast] Empty Re: Scarlett [Starter Beast] 10/01/22, 03:42 am

Alishar

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I've edited Scarlett's traits in accordance with your suggestions.

4Scarlett [Starter Beast] Empty Re: Scarlett [Starter Beast] 10/01/22, 04:06 am

Lagi

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5Scarlett [Starter Beast] Empty Re: Scarlett [Starter Beast] 10/01/22, 08:13 am

Julius Plageuis

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[b]Name:[/b] Scarlett
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Scarf Python
[b]Appearance:[/b] A red snake with gold and black patterns. This particular snake was bred to have these patterns, as they are typically brown or green in nature. Scarlett is around 5.5 meters in length, and able to turn flat like a scarf, able to be worn as a fashion accessory while drawing little attention.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name: [/b]Flattening Physiology
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement: [/b]Scarf Python
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Scarf Pythons are capable of deflating their body like a set of bellows, flattening flush against the ground in order to slither unseen. In this state, their flexibility is exactly akin to cloth, but they retain all mobility and strength they have while they aren't flat. This is part of the digestive process, so it's possible to use even after eating prey. The general manipulation that a Scarf Python has over it's own body is seamless amongst most creatures.
[b]Trait Effect: [/b]Scarlett can register abilities that revolve around the manipulation of her body in the same fashion as body manipulation.


[b]Trait Name:[/b] Swift Python
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] —
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Snakes are noteworthy for their striking speed, Scarf Pythons being no exception. Through training, she has become capable of prolonged movement at such speeds, making Scarlett fast even beyond her kin.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] This beast is capable of D-Tier movement speeds

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Snakescale
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Snake
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The scales of a snake are somewhat harder than the skin of fleshier species. Without affecting her mobility, Scarlett is a little tougher than a more defenseless creature. Physical attacks pale in comparison against the resistance of a Scarf Python's mighty scales.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] In response to D-tier physical attacks, this creature will only take half damage.

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