Something Here from somewhere else [NoM/Job/Chain]

Job Name:Something Here From Somewhere Else: Part 1 A New Hope
Job Rank:D
Job Location: Reim
Job Reward: 5% /3,000
Job Prerequisites:White Rukh
Job Overview: It would be only a matter of time before Ghost and his knights enter the faye. As they tried to lay low. They would run across this small child no more then 5 years of age. Who is she and where did she come from is a big mystery. As all she could say was monsters. As the trio looked up they were surrounded by beast. They must slay the beast and protect the girl at all cost.

Enemy Name: Vicious Sno-phers (x6)
Rank: D
Needed damage to take down: D
Abilities: These snow-happy gophers move at 10m/s and deal D-tier damage.




Job Name:Something Here From Somewhere Else: Part 2 Return Of The Hero
Job Rank: C
Job Location: Reim
Job Reward: 5%/5,000
Job Prerequisites:White Rukh
Job Overview: Now with the beast dealt with things seem to be calming down. As the group talks to the girl. Although young she was a wise one for her age and tells them of what had happened to her and more about what's been going on around her village. The group must go to her village and ride them of the pesty pirates. Who captain is stopping at nothing to find her. But the question is why? Well the village most of them seen to have fallen. But the young girl remains with the white ruhk. It is up to our heroes to free them from such a fate.


Enemy Name: Pirate Lackey 10
Rank: D
Needed damage to take down: C
Abilities:
May move up to 9 m/s.
Sword Swipe: Deals D tier damage to an opponent.


Enemy Name: Pirate Captain Lucky BamBam
Rank: B
Needed damage to take down: A
Abilities:
May move at 9m/s
Acrobatic Sea legs: Feats of acrobatics on a ship are n small feat. While on a ship, any jumps or climbing which utilize the the ship's structure are done at 15 m/s.
Trusty Blade: Pirate Captain attacks twice with his sword, each swipe dealing C tier damage.
Rustic Shot: Pirate Captain has a magic tool which can fire a 1 meter ball of fire at 20 m/s for B tier damage.




Job Name:Something Here From Somewhere Else: Part 3 Wishing For A Hero
Job Rank:A
Job Location: Reim
Job Reward:5%/ B rank Npc/15,000
Job Prerequisites:White Rukh
Job Overview: With the information beat out of the pirates. Ghost and co must now go to a small cave hidden by them. With in it they will find thier true threat. Lilith his mother and her beast she is trying to create. It's unlike anything from before. All that could be said about it is. That it is something from some where else.Still what does all this a have to do with a young girl? Has Lilith explains to them that she is behind this just to increase the livily hood of the black ruhk in the area. For a unknown propose. Now Ghost must comfort his mother but solomon knowns he is far from ready to do such a thing. But he can not let the village stay under her control. It is up to him and his knights to free them and give them hope again.

Enemy Name: Chimera x 2
Rank: B
Needed damage to take down: B
Abilities: Move at 10 m/s and deal B-tier damage. They are 5 meters in size.
Worm Whip - One of the worms that cover the body of the monster extends to 10 meters long and whips at 20 m/s to deal B-tier damage.
Flesh Block - The monster grows extra flesh to block up to B-tier damage
Heightened Senses - Having the genes of different animals, this monster contains a heightened survival instinct that can detect any kind of supplementary ability that disrupts its 5 senses which are B-tier or lower.
Tough Skin – D-tier damage is subtracted from all damage done to this creature.
Screech - The beast screams as loud as it possibly can, causing deafness for 2 posts and sending a 20 meter shockwave at 20 m/s that blows that pushes an opponent up to 20 meters away. There is prior warning to when it’s about to scream, as the monster takes a deep breath.

Enemy Name: Chimera x 2
Rank: B
Needed damage to take down: B
Abilities: Move at 10 m/s and deal B-tier damage. They are 5 meters in size.
Worm Whip - One of the worms that cover the body of the monster extends to 10 meters long and whips at 20 m/s to deal B-tier damage.
Flesh Block - The monster grows extra flesh to block up to B-tier damage
Heightened Senses - Having the genes of different animals, this monster contains a heightened survival instinct that can detect any kind of supplementary ability that disrupts its 5 senses which are B-tier or lower.
Tough Skin – D-tier damage is subtracted from all damage done to this creature.
Screech - The beast screams as loud as it possibly can, causing deafness for 2 posts and sending a 20 meter shockwave at 20 m/s that blows that pushes an opponent up to 20 meters away. There is prior warning to when it’s about to scream, as the monster takes a deep breath.

So this chain seems to be mostly about a village, that's fine but there doesn't seem to be a concrete plot to it. I would say there needs to be a specific threat or group such as making the pirates seem more like a continuous threat that needs to wipe out because maybe their exploiting resources. The reason for this is for NoM it needs to be something that would shift people's mindsets or inspire them. In this case protecting them from pirates who have caused them to lose faith in order to restore faith would be a great example.

Ok I added more of a story element to it.