Fixed Techniques

Name: Tai Technique: Spear Throw
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user takes the spear throwing it 2 meters into the high sky. The user runs on a special timing expecting the opponent to pay attention to charging user. The spear arcs towards the opponent at 10 m/s, and causes D-Tier piercing damage when the opponent is struck.

Name: Drop Dead
Tier: D
Cost: 10
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Attack
Range: 5 Meters
Duration: 2 Post
Cool-Down: 3 Post
Description: The user pretends to attack the target, but with quick speed the spear is moved behind the foot of the opponent. The shoulder is rammed into the target, expected to be tripped. Losing control over the right/left leg for two post.

Name: Spear Throw
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user draws back his spear pulling his shoulder back. He begins to jog and moving his shoulder forward. The spear is released and moves at the speed of 10 m/s at a maximum distance of 5 meters. If hit this can cause D-Tier piercing damage.

Name: Spear Flash
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user slashes their spear towards their opponent 1-5 times at 10 m/s, causing a maximum of D-Tier damage in cuts to the opponent.

Name: Spear Spiral
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 meters
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user takes the spear spinning it over his head like a helicopter at the speed of 10 m/s. Once at max speed the user takes the spear throwing it towards his target at a maximum distance of 5 meters. It begins to spin, striking the opponent 1-5 times and causing a maximum of D-Tier damage in cuts.

Name: Spear Reflex
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 2 Post or sustained+1
Description: The user takes his spear and begins to parry 1-5 attacks from other weapons at 10 m/s. This prevents a combined total of C-Tier damage from abilities. This may be sustained to perform the action again in the next post.

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Name: White Spear Dash
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear
Class: Offensive/supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: 1 Post
Cool-Down: 3 Post
Description: The User takes his spear putting it towards his waist. It is directed to his opponent while he/she leans over as if they are moving. The user leans over completely as if he was in the position of sprinting. Once this happens the user dashes forward by 5 meters at the speed rate of 15 m/s. The user passes the opponent as if nothing happened, but a slash goes to arm of his opponent, dealing D-Tier damage.

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Name: Fuerza Lanza
Tier: B
Cost: 30|15 Magoi/Stamina
Weapon Type: Spear | Magoi Manipulation
Class: Attack
Range: Close
Duration: Sustained
Cool-Down: 10 Posts
Description: Fuerza Lanza known as Strength Spear is a technique used with Magoi Manipulation. Allowing the user to infuse their Magoi into their spear, allowingt hem to inflict B-Tier damage with normal attacks.

For all techs, the Range needs to have meters indicated.

Tai Technique: Spear Throw: This needs to include how high/far the spear travels in the description. A side note, the speed of the ability can either be applied to your charge or to the speed of the spear, not both, just for your clarification.

Spear Throw: Needs to have the distance the spear can travel included in the description.

Spear Flash: Needs to specify if the spear if being used in a jabbing motion or in a slashing motion.

Spear Spiral: Needs to have the distance the spear can travel included in the description.

Spear Center Core!: Paralysis can only be used by lightning magicians or stealth users. You could use the spear to immobilize them by pinning them down. Duration would only be 1 post, as it is the duration of the skill, not the effect, that is being counted there. The duration of the effect would be in the description.

Spear Reflex: Duration should be one post or sustained, if you intend to do this more than one post in a row. Description should read "Takes his spear and deflects up to five incoming attacks at a speed of 10m/s. This ability can parry 1 C-tier ability or 2 D-tier abilities."

White Spear Dash: Needs to include how far they can move while dashing.

Fuerza Lanza:Cost would be 30/15. You can either infuse yourself or the spear. Would also need to indicate what kind of attack this is. Is it a stab, a slash? If this is intended to simply amplify your basic attacks, this needs to be stated.

Tai, I did a majority of the edits here for you if you would like to use them. I would like to mention a couple of things, though:


Spear Center Core!: I didn't know what you wanted to do with this, since Paralysis has been removed from Strength users, so I simply removed it from my list. Feel free to create another technique to replace it.


White Spear Dash: The new ability guidelines have a 1 tier nerf on supplementary/offensive abilities. This means that the effectiveness of the dash (which is based off of scale, not range) will be reduced to D-Tier, as will the damage from the strike.


Fuerza Lanza: Since you are an Imuchakk who can already deal a lot of damage with your bare hands, and since your weapon can passively deal damage equal to its tier (and can be brought up to A-Tier), the ability as it is only grants you a small damage buff to opponent's weapons (since Magoi Manipulation treats them as 1 tier lower).

If you want to get the most bang for your Magoi Manipulation buck, I suggest turning this into an attack.


The following should be good to go, if you want to use them:

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[b]Name:[/b] Tai Technique: Spear Throw
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes the spear throwing it 2 meters into the high sky. The user runs on a special timing expecting the opponent to pay attention to charging user. The spear arcs towards the opponent at 10 m/s, and causes D-Tier piercing damage when the opponent is struck.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Throw
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user draws back his spear pulling his shoulder back. He begins to jog and moving his shoulder forward. The spear is released and moves at the speed of 10 m/s at a maximum distance of 5 meters. If hit this can cause D-Tier piercing damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Flash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user slashes their spear towards their opponent 1-5 times at 10 m/s, causing a maximum of D-Tier damage in cuts to the opponent.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Spiral
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes the spear spinning it over his head like a helicopter at the speed of 10 m/s. Once at max speed the user takes the spear throwing it towards his target at a maximum distance of 5 meters. It begins to spin, striking the opponent 1-5 times and causing a maximum of D-Tier damage in cuts.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Reflex
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes his spear and begins to parry 1-5 attacks from other weapons at 10 m/s. This prevents a combined total of C-Tier damage from abilities. This may be sustained to perform the action again in the next post.

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[b]Name:[/b] White Spear Dash
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The User takes his spear putting it towards his waist. It is directed to his opponent while he/she leans over as if they are moving. The user leans over completely as if he was in the position of sprinting. Once this happens the user dashes forward by 5 meters at the speed rate of 15 m/s. The user passes the opponent as if nothing happened, but a slash goes to arm of his opponent, dealing D-Tier damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Fuerza Lanza
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30|15 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear | Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 10 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fuerza Lanza known as Strength Spear is a technique used with Magoi Manipulation. Allowing the user to infuse their Magoi into their spear, allowing them to inflict B-Tier damage with normal attacks.

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[b]Name:[/b] Tai Technique: Spear Throw
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes the spear throwing it 2 meters into the high sky. The user runs on a special timing expecting the opponent to pay attention to charging user. The spear arcs towards the opponent at 10 m/s, and causes D-Tier piercing damage when the opponent is struck.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Throw
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user draws back his spear pulling his shoulder back. He begins to jog and moving his shoulder forward. The spear is released and moves at the speed of 10 m/s at a maximum distance of 5 meters. If hit this can cause D-Tier piercing damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Flash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user slashes their spear towards their opponent 1-5 times at 10 m/s, causing a maximum of D-Tier damage in cuts to the opponent.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Spiral
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 meters
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes the spear spinning it over his head like a helicopter at the speed of 10 m/s. Once at max speed the user takes the spear throwing it towards his target at a maximum distance of 5 meters. It begins to spin, striking the opponent 1-5 times and causing a maximum of D-Tier damage in cuts.

[b]Name:[/b] Spear Reflex
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post or sustained+1
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes his spear and begins to parry 1-5 attacks from other weapons at 10 m/s. This prevents a combined total of C-Tier damage from abilities. This may be sustained to perform the action again in the next post.

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[b]Name:[/b] White Spear Dash
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The User takes his spear putting it towards his waist. It is directed to his opponent while he/she leans over as if they are moving. The user leans over completely as if he was in the position of sprinting. Once this happens the user dashes forward by 5 meters at the speed rate of 15 m/s. The user passes the opponent as if nothing happened, but a slash goes to arm of his opponent, dealing D-Tier damage.

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[b]Name:[/b] Fuerza Lanza
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30|15 Magoi/Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Spear | Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Sustained
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 10 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Fuerza Lanza known as Strength Spear is a technique used with Magoi Manipulation. Allowing the user to infuse their Magoi into their spear, allowing them to inflict B-Tier damage with normal attacks.