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1"???" Empty "???" on 11/05/18, 04:28 pm

Emperor JaJa

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Name:???
Tier: C
Type:SYMBIOTE
Species:UNKNOWN
Appearance: "???" is MICROSCOPIC. It sometimes manifests visibly as several coma shaped inky black marks which feather about Jahangirs body.
Beast Traits:"???" Is an unknown organism that affects beneath 0.01% of the worlds population. It is an unkown species which lives within the hosts cells, as the species grows stronger it mutates learning how to infect new cells.
Drawbacks:If Jahan takes a certain amount of damage that would reasonably cause blood-loss, then using this beast will deal Jahan half that damage, due to its parasitic blood nature.

Trait Name:Bloodletter
Trait Tier:D
Trait Requirement:Bloodstream must be infected
Trait Description:"???" has invaded Jahanghir's bloodstream and weaponized it. Through cellular mutation Jahanghir's blood has become Hemolytic, and when introduced into a foreign body will cause its cells to rupture.
Trait Effect:Jahanghirs blood has become a D tier weapon. Which deals D tier damage to enemies whose bodies are introduced to his blood.

Trait Name:Healing Factor
Trait Tier:D
Trait Requirement:???
Trait Description:"???" Will do anything to keep its hosts body functioning. When an infected organism releases chemicals related to stress, "???" jumps into action. The organism accelerates its host healing process by rapidly burning its metabolism. The energy is then used by "???" to fuel cells in their regenerative process.
Trait Effect: Can register healing abilities.

Trait Name:ALLIGATOR BLOOD
Trait Tier:D
Trait Requirement:Must be infected by ???
Trait Description:Jahanghirs infected bloodstream has evolved his immune system passed the normal limits.His bodies immune system is effective on most diseases and toxins, including poisons and venoms. His body breaksdown the toxins into their chemical elements and he either sweats or pisses them out.  
Trait Effect:Jahanghir is immune to D tier or lower toxins

Trait Name:Iron skin
Trait Tier:D
Trait Requirement:???
Trait Description:??? has infected Jahanghir's skin and mutated its cells adding both durability and softness.
Trait Effect: Jahanghir's skin subtracts D tier damage from physical attacks inflicted upon his skin.

Trait Name:Infrared Vision
Trait Tier:D
Trait Requirement:???
Trait Description:??? has infected the eyes of Jahanghir and has mutated his cells, giving him a new microscopic membrane within his eyes able to detect infrared radiation up to 10 meters away in a similar fashion as a snake.
Trait Effect:Jahanghir has 10 meters of infrared Vision



Last edited by Emperor JaJa on 31/07/18, 11:13 am; edited 2 times in total

2"???" Empty Re: "???" on 22/05/18, 10:52 pm

Adrastos Thanatos

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Before we actually go in and hammer out the details of these traits, "???" is exceeding the allowable traits points. Being a C-Tier parasitic beast, "???" only has 5 trait points to spend. You must either remove some traits or decrease the C-Tier traits to D-Tier and adjust the strength of the traits accordingly.

Also, for clarification, will you be naming "???" in the future or will it always be "???"? When you refer this creature as an "alien species", what exactly do you mean? Is it from outer space or it it simply an unknown creature undiscovered until now in the Magi World? If it is an alien from outer space, I must interject and warn you that such a creature can not exist in this universe and will not be allowed, even if it is only fluff.


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"???" AmCJaPN "???" Ltg0RVb "???" VjD0Py3

Trait Points: 4/11 | SoS: 1

3"???" Empty Re: "???" on 02/07/18, 01:31 am

Emperor JaJa

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1. Edited
2. It will always be ???
3. "alien" is just used as a way of dramatizing how foreign it is


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4"???" Empty Re: "???" on 18/07/18, 12:55 pm

Adrastos Thanatos

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There's just one thing missing: a drawback for the parasite/symbiote. The drawback for a beast of this nature should be along the lines of bloodloss. If Jaja takes a certain amount of damage that would reasonably cause blood-loss, then using his beast will only further hurt him due to its parasitic blood nature.

Also... Infrared Vision should state 10 meters in trait description and the effect. It says 15 in the description. Please change that.


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"???" 7kZv0Du
"???" AmCJaPN "???" Ltg0RVb "???" VjD0Py3

Trait Points: 4/11 | SoS: 1

5"???" Empty Re: "???" on 05/08/18, 01:22 pm

Adrastos Thanatos

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[b]Name:[/b]???
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b]SYMBIOTE
[b]Species:[/b]UNKNOWN
[b]Appearance:[/b] "???" is MICROSCOPIC. It sometimes manifests visibly as several coma shaped inky black marks which feather about Jahangirs body.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b]"???" Is an unknown organism that affects beneath 0.01% of the worlds population. It is an unkown species which lives within the hosts cells, as the species grows stronger it mutates learning how to infect new cells.
[b]Drawbacks:[/b]If Jahan takes a certain amount of damage that would reasonably cause blood-loss, then using this beast will deal Jahan half that damage, due to its parasitic blood nature.

[b]Trait Name:[/b]Bloodletter
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]Bloodstream must be infected
[b]Trait Description:[/b]"???" has invaded Jahanghir's bloodstream and weaponized it. Through cellular mutation Jahanghir's blood has become Hemolytic, and when introduced into a foreign body will cause its cells to rupture.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]Jahanghirs blood has become a D tier weapon. Which deals D tier damage to enemies whose bodies are introduced to his blood.

[b]Trait Name:[/b]Healing Factor
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]???
[b]Trait Description:[/b]"???" Will do anything to keep its hosts body functioning. When an infected organism releases chemicals related to stress, "???" jumps into action. The organism accelerates its host healing process by rapidly burning its metabolism. The energy is then used by "???" to fuel cells in their regenerative process.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Can register healing abilities.

[b]Trait Name:[/b]ALLIGATOR BLOOD
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]Must be infected by ???
[b]Trait Description:[/b]Jahanghirs infected bloodstream has evolved his immune system passed the normal limits.His bodies immune system is effective on most diseases and toxins, including poisons and venoms. His body breaksdown the toxins into their chemical elements and he either sweats or pisses them out.  
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]Jahanghir is immune to D tier or lower toxins

[b]Trait Name:[/b]Iron skin
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]???
[b]Trait Description:[/b]??? has infected Jahanghir's skin and mutated its cells adding both durability and softness.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Jahanghir's skin subtracts D tier damage from physical attacks inflicted upon his skin.

[b]Trait Name:[/b]Infrared Vision
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]???
[b]Trait Description:[/b]??? has infected the eyes of Jahanghir and has mutated his cells, giving him a new microscopic membrane within his eyes able to detect infrared radiation up to 10 meters away in a similar fashion as a snake.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]Jahanghir has 10 meters of infrared Vision


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"???" 3oCk1sb

"???" 7kZv0Du
"???" AmCJaPN "???" Ltg0RVb "???" VjD0Py3

Trait Points: 4/11 | SoS: 1

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