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1Shooting arrows  Empty Shooting arrows on 27/04/18, 06:27 pm

Bass Mikiaru

Bass Mikiaru
D-Tier
D-Tier
Double Shot
Tier:C
Class:Ranger
Type: offensive
Range:Long
Requirements/Drawbacks:User must have a line of sight on target and The targets must be within 5 meters of each other.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20/10 sustain
Description: The user's fires two arrows at the same at aiming for two targets at once.

    Using his bow Bass fires 2 arrows at once at 2 different targets. Each Arrow deals at weapon damage while traveling up to 20 meters.  This means there is a single arrow for each target. Ability damage is D.



Last edited by Bass Mikaru on 30/04/18, 04:53 pm; edited 5 times in total


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2Shooting arrows  Empty Re: Shooting arrows on 27/04/18, 11:00 pm

Shah'Jahan Nikator

Shah'Jahan Nikator
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D-Tier
Hi Bass, Im Jahan. I'll be grading you.

For the most part your format is fine, I usually put "0" for my sustain. I also try to separate the original cost of magoi from the sustain cost using a " |". Or parenthesis.

The biggest issue is the spelling errors, Im not sure if its a wip or not. However I still think i understand the ability. Bass shoots two arrows/trick arrows (or other specialty ammo), at two targets; which must be within 5 meters of each other.

I would put the last requirement in the drawbacks as it is a strong requirement. (i.e, "targets must be within 5 meters or each other.)

on the subject of scaling:
Right now you have your ability scaling as damage.

This ability also has 2 hits.

So I understand you are trying to capitalize on the damage by using the scaling. This is fine but also remember you could scale for HITS and multiply the amount of arrows you can fire at two targets.

so instead of firing a singular projectile in theory you can also barrage.

Just something to keep in mind.

Also you dont have to state that he attack will do the damage equal to its tier. Thats just how weapon scaling works.



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3Shooting arrows  Empty Re: Shooting arrows on 27/04/18, 11:37 pm

Bass Mikiaru

Bass Mikiaru
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4Shooting arrows  Empty Re: Shooting arrows on 30/04/18, 10:05 am

Merrze

Merrze
A-Tier
A-Tier
For this it would be ability damage, yes it would do it's weapon damage but your weapon can change. Make sure to include that the ability's base damage would be D-tier for each shot and then everything should be good.


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5Shooting arrows  Empty Re: Shooting arrows on 30/04/18, 04:53 pm

Bass Mikiaru

Bass Mikiaru
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6Shooting arrows  Empty Re: Shooting arrows on 03/05/18, 07:07 pm

Merrze

Merrze
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A-Tier
Approved for training, fixed wording for damage.

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[center][b]Double Shot[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]C
[b]Class:[/b]Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]User must have a line of sight on target and The targets must be within 5 meters of each other.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10 sustain
[b]Description:[/b] The user's fires two arrows at the same at aiming for two targets at once.
[list]
Using his bow Bass fires 2 arrows at once at 2 different targets. Each Arrow deals at weapon damage while traveling up to 20 meters.  This means there is a single arrow for each target. Each arrow does d tier damage.[/list]


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