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Ready To Grade - Tori Kaze [A-Tier Magic Weapon Move Set]

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Trently

Trently
A-Tier
A-Tier
Kaze Tatsumaki
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User has to slash diagonally with his katana to activate the ability.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Scaling: Duration
Cost: 20 Magoi & 20 Magoi To Sustain
Description:

    The user conjures a layer of razor magic around the user's katana that lasts for a total of 4 posts. The layer of razor magic around the user's katana lets the user spawn a 15m tornado long and 15m wide around the blade when performing basic actions or abilities. The tornado can be reshaped to become smaller or skinner but the maximum length and width that the katana can extend up to in length and width is 15m unless scaled. The razor tornado deals A-Tier razor magic damage to whatever it touches. The razor magic tornado deals damage equal to the user's weapon. Things cut with razor magic are unable to be put back together again regardless of healing spells used on them for a minimum of 3 posts. The tornado extends outward from the user to avoid its wind coming into contact with the user. The tornado lasts 4 posts without sustainment or scaling.



Last edited by Trently on 05/03/18, 05:21 pm; edited 11 times in total

Trently

Trently
A-Tier
A-Tier
Done


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Ready To Grade - Tori Kaze [A-Tier Magic Weapon Move Set] 35360610

Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier
Kaze Tatsumaki

  • Requirements/Drawbacks | Do you mind adding a little more detail to this sweeping motion? One solution is to specify which direction the sweeping movement goes (horizontally, vertically, diagonally). Or maybe you need to perform the ability in a particular stance. Or maybe a combination of both ideas. There are surely more ways to add more detail and these are just examples, of course.

  • Description | Don't forget to state how long the tornado lasts. Since it is A-tier, it should be able to last for 4 posts without sustainment or scaling~


Kaze Shirudo

  • Type | Since this is an ability that simply deals damage, I believe it should be Offensive, not Supplementary.

  • Requirement | Like before, I feel you should add a bit more detail to your ability. A few thoughts that I had which might work is to specify that both hands need to be holding it to your chest. Or if you feel that would be too limiting, especially if you also had another weapon with you, maybe you're required to enter into a particular stance to trigger the ability?

  • Description | I'm pretty sure we've already covered this in our Discord chats, but no magic is allowed to be completely invisible. Even though strength magic is almost invisible, it still radiates black light. However, it tends to be much more difficult to see because it often moves extremely fast. I had a few ideas of how this ability would appear. One of them being something that - while the magic itself may be invisible, the surroundings react to the magic by warping around the user. My other thoughts were to have the magic race around the user at high speeds - and while it wouldn't be invisible, it would be difficult to see. Either way though, the edge you wanted when you planned to make it invisible wouldn't be there anyway. Most likely people will just figure out a way to reason they realized the barrier was there and avoid it if they don't want to take hits. On the flip side, if you used the barrier thing at the right moment you could definitely cause some damage they possibly wouldn't be able to avoid.

  • If you want to use this idea and make it less situational, one thought is to instead of making it surround you, make it surround your enemy. Of course, there would have to be some sort of way to break free (e.g, it requires A-Tier damage to break) but either way, it will still limit their mobility and potentially force them to deal A-Tier damage. Although, there would be a far greater chance of them to escape unscathed if you go this route than if you used it in the situation of them in the middle of an attack and unable to revert their course and stuff. But it can still be used less situationally as well as have the added effect of hampering your enemy's mobility.


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Trently

Trently
A-Tier
A-Tier
Took out Shirudo, keeping just Kaze Tatsumaki and fixed it. Thanks for grading, Ariel.

Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier
I don't see anything wrong with it now, so...
Approved for Training!
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[center][b]Kaze Tatsumaki[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User has to slash diagonally with his katana to activate the ability.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi & 10 Magoi To Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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The user conjures a layer of razor magic around the user's katana that lasts for a total of 4 posts. The layer of razor magic around the user's katana lets the user spawn a 15m tornado long and 15m wide around the blade when performing basic actions or abilities. The tornado can be reshaped to become smaller or skinner but the maximum length and width that the katana can extend up to in length and width is 15m unless scaled. The razor tornado deals A-Tier razor magic damage to whatever it touches. The razor magic tornado deals damage equal to the user's weapon. Things cut with razor magic are unable to be put back together again regardless of healing spells used on them for a minimum of 3 posts. The tornado extends outward from the user to avoid its wind coming into contact with the user. The tornado lasts 4 posts without sustainment or scaling.[/list]


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